2015考研英语基础班写作辅导讲义

1、the building of grassroots organizations of the party has in place comprehensive and excellent decision, unbalanced development of grass-roots party organizations in schools, fully equipped with strong party branch secretaries, standardized branch of the construction, the party controls the party, s

2、trictly administering the party system deficiencies. Although outdated, lack of specificity, seriousness and restraint system regulations for patch perfect, but failed to form a system, and construction of inner-party regulations needed to further enhance scientific and systematization and standardi

3、zation level. 6, in the implementation of a gang two sittings, to be honest and work the same layout, but sometimes there is too much emphasis on important issues, and one-sided pursuit of tasks implementation issues. (V) space cleanup, housing car description and salary transfers and other aspects

4、of the relationship between school adjustment cleaning office spaces 6326 sqm 143, vacated office room, to repel illegal standard with 5 cars. At present, school leaders and official cars were within the Office space standards. Not illegal part-time wage and transfer related to members of the leadin

5、g group and individual family housing also has personal issues to report truthfully. All school leaders had no full-time Secretary. Second, the analysis of the cause of the problem (a) ideal beliefs are weakened, as transactional work, learning time arrangements are insufficient, received insufficie

6、nt education of ideal and belief. Meanwhile, from the effects of invasion and the thought of social reality, fluctuations, combined with the lack of theoretical learning and mastery, weakened somewhat to communist ideals and beliefs. Ideal and faith is the root of party members and cadres, pulse of

7、country, soul, has no roots, no pulse, no soul, it will be a big problem. Second, weakening of spiritual pursuit, as not enough energy. Society in General light work light ideal demands, interests and belief choices the influence, eroded our spiritual pursuits, relaxing our self, team loyalty, aware

8、ness, situation awareness, professionalism has weakened, as inadequate. (B) the party spirit has . , Practice area, peoples achievement in perspective, time correction performance oriented, unable to stick to seeking truth from facts, scientific attitudes, pragmatic style, and interests of the peopl

9、e as the starting point and the end point for all the work, establish stand the test of practice, history, and the peoples performance. Third, to benefit, the ability to resist temptation. Not always adhere to the party and the peoples interests above everything else. Personal interests conflict wit

10、h the interests of the party and the people, when fear of sacrifice. On the relationship of give and take, not completely content to the poor and selfless dedication; on dealing with rights and obligations cannot be self-disciplined and law-abiding. In General, there are many reasons, both issues no

11、t strict with themselves, there is vulnerability, external constraint is not strong because of institutional mechanisms. But read between the lines, or personal ideals and beliefs on the root causes landslides, professionalism, responsibility is not strong, four winds problem rectification is not co

12、mplete, no real issues of world Outlook, Outlook on life and Outlook on the master switch problem. All not false questions, if you do not attach great importance to solve, great harm. Part provincial University leaders disciplinary illegal case lessons told we, on personal, self2015考研英语基础班写作辅导讲义语言的力

13、量 Language is power.（考研英语写作）舌尖上的英语，笔尖上的考试主讲人：王泉课程内容：1. 作文的评分方法2. 如何取悦阅卷人3. 作文分类与布局谋篇4. 遣词造句与语法准备1.作文的评分标准八字评分原则：总体给分，综合评判五级评分制：本题所占卷面总分值比重：小作文占 10% 大作文占 20%阅卷标准分为五等：小作文：以 2 为首项，公差为 2 的等差数列。公式为 An=A1+(n-1)22 分，4 分，6 分，8 分，10 分大作文：以 4 为首项，公差为 4 的等差数列。公式为 An=A1+(n-1)44 分，8 分，12 分，16 分，和 20 分。怎么能得高分： 1）

14、内容要点 2）高级词汇 3）复杂句式 4）过渡衔接第五档：A 节（9-10 分）B 节（17-20 分）（大纲要求）很好地完成了试题规定的任务。包含所有内容要点；使用丰富的语法结构和词汇；语言自然流畅，语法错误极少；1relax, easy thought landslide, and behavior fall, once brake not car, years of efforts struggle, and self constraints a night clear zero; on party, we of cadres problem, corrupt style politic

15、al wind, damage party masses, deterioration political ecological, over time will weakened party of public letter force, against party of ruling based; on I school, not strict not real of style is we officer venture of predators, Directly impact our school of education development and harmonious cons

16、truction of the whole school, and ultimately hurt the workers vital interests and fundamental interests. To these questions, we will be highly vigilant, do some soul-searching and a warning. Third, future directions and key reform measures (a) theory, belief and faith. First, implementing the requir

17、ements of strictly administering the party, effort to take effective measures to firmly seize the firm ideal and faith as a fundamental pillar, implementing good anchoring our fundamentals, setting the soul Ki vitality works. In a serious political life as the magic weapon of the party, adhere to st

18、rict political baptism of the life of the party, promote the party given the political maturity, remains a political youth. Adhere to the system of inner-party life, carrying out activities in accordance with the regulations, focus on improving the quality of life within the party, fundamentally sol

19、ve the partys fighting Fort and the exemplary vanguard role of party members question. Second, individual party members and cadres theoretical study shortage, poor results and so on. Strictly from the requirements, promoting construction of study-oriented party organizations, party cadres conscienti

20、ously carry forward the spirit of the nail, 8 hour, finding time to learn scientific theories, and really, really understand, really, really work hard on seeking practical results. To improve the system of cadres training and theoretical learning center group, give full play to its main role of theo

21、retical study. Organize lectures counseling, effective exchange, guide cadres in theory as a guide in their practical work. Third, strict examination. On party theory study and democracy itself to examination and appraisal every year, do not read, do not read . Leader: must hold defence interests pa

22、rticularly sobering. Avoid misunderstanding to the corrupt minefield, from the cancer in the destruction of human life, clear the soul of cancer, advance guard against position risks, control strict standards and real requirements, tempering party spirit, stick to clean the bottom line, strengthen t

23、he cadre of honest. Leadership in accordance with the Constitution and the guidelines and the requirements of the regulations, leading implementation of the Central eight, and ten provincial rules, strictly implement the provisions of self-discipline, not trapped by self-interest, not to be overrule

24、d by the temptations is truly upright and uncorrupted, a dignified life, the right to clean, Frank swing and keep the clean nature of the Communist Party. (C) right to use self-restraint, and create a good political environment. One is a complete system. To continue to pay special attention to insti

25、tutional establishment and revision of work, pay special attention to implementation of the system of, really with the people in charge of the system. Grasp party political life system construction, formed party democratic and supervision restricted mechanism, enhanced party political life of politi

26、cal sex, and principle, and fighting sex, serious party2015考研英语基础班写作辅导讲义有效地采用了多种衔接手法，文字连贯，层次清晰；格式和语域恰当贴切。对目标读者完全产生了预期的效果。攻略： 在文章中，最关键的地方要埋伏着亮点，切忌犯愚蠢的错误。关键的地方包括：开头；结尾；段落首句A: 愚蠢无比的错误光芒四射的亮点516 分B: 光芒四射的亮点愚蠢无比的错误18117 分C : 愚蠢无比的错误愚蠢无比的错误514 分2.如何取悦阅卷人2.1 文章脉络清晰；2.2 段落衔接畅顺；2.3 用词造句经典；2.4 书写优雅美观2.1 文章脉络清

27、晰1）观点鲜明的开头；2）紧扣主题的结尾；3）衔接顺畅的中间段例子：写一篇 500 字的武侠小说。2.2 段落衔接畅顺1）关联词 （and, but, so, or）2）重复词南北战争前，美国称邦联； 南北战争后，美国称联邦。Before the civil war, the United States are; after the civil war, the United States is.3）序数词 （原因如下，1,2,3，我的观点）例子：当前环境污染很糟糕，怎么糟糕？ 1、2、3 我的观点。2.3 用词造句经典1) A gentleman is rather than does.2)

28、 To the world, you are just one person; but to me, you are the whole world.The Canteen Service on CampusTo the world, our school may be just one school, but to us, our school may be the whole world.Student Use of Computers2015考研英语基础班写作辅导讲义To the world, computers may be computers, but to some student

29、s, computers may be the wholeworld.The Day My Classmate Fell ILLTo the world, my classmate may be one person, but to me, friendship may be the whole world.3) 同位语形容词最高级：Helen is a beautiful girl.Helen is a very beautiful girl.Helen is a very very beautiful girl.Helen is the most beautiful girl.Helen

30、is one of the most beautiful girls.Helen is one of the most beautiful girls that I have ever seen in my life.造句：王泉是个好老师。4) 定语从句Topic = Key wordAsk one question: What is the Key word?The Key word is , which Topic : Love around Us= Key wordAsk one question: What is the Love?Love is , which 爱心是情感的力量，不论

31、我们周围的世界多么黑暗，爱心都能支撑我们。Love is a kind of emotional strength, which can support us no matter how dark the world aroundus becomes.Love and dedication is a kind of emotional strength, which can support us no matter how darkthe world around us becomes.Family affection is a kind of emotional strength, whic

32、h can support us no matter how dark theworld around us becomes.Strong confidence is a kind of emotional strength, which can support us no matter how dark theworld around us becomes.The spirit of cooperation is a kind of emotional strength, which can support us no matter howdark the world around us b

33、ecomes.32015考研英语基础班写作辅导讲义A positive attitude towards life is a kind of emotional strength, which can support us no matterhow dark the world around us becomes.Friendship is a kind of emotional strength, which can support us no matter how dark the worldaround us becomes.Knowledge is power, which can s

34、upport us no matter how dark the world around us becomes.Honesty is a kind of emotional strength, which can support us no matter how dark the worldaround us becomes.5) 仿写表示很重要，英语咋说？Be important=Be essential= play an important part= matter= be what really matters箴言仿写：Cultivation is to the mind what f

35、ood is to the body. - M T CiceroA is to B what C is to D.2012 年考研作文人生态度乐观与悲观A positive attitude is to life what the sun is to the earth.2005 年考研作文赡养父母家庭Family is to the people what life is to the individual.The Importance of Reading Classics阅读对于思想，好比运动对于身体一样。Reading is to the mind what exercise is t

36、o the body.It Pays to Be Honest诚信对于人来说，好比生命对于人一样。Honesty is to the people what life is to the creature.A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus清洁对于食堂来说，好比名誉对于人一样。Cleanness is to the canteen what reputation is to the people.2.4 书写美观奖励分 （3 分）基准分（5 分）1. 书法笔迹 2. 大字 VS 小字

37、3. 笔的选择 4. 正确正规可读 5. 非正规标记：&, Vs, etc.6. 简写的问题：WTO？World Trade Organization (WTO) 7. _ 共 200 字！3. 作文分类与布局谋篇2015考研英语基础班写作辅导讲义八股文：破题、承题、起讲、入手、起股、中股、后股、束股高分标准：1.内容要点 2.词汇语法 3.过渡衔接1.内容要点我画你猜考察能力：1.描述能力2.挖掘能力3.总说能力考研写作列纲1) Describe the drawing briefly2) explain its intended meaning and3) give your commen

38、ts第一段：描述第二段：意图/现象/寓意第三段：己见2012 年第一段：描述 (分析碎片)1.如图所示2.面对打翻的瓶子，两个人有着截然不同的反应。3.一个绝望，全完了；一个赶忙去扶起瓶子，微笑，庆幸还剩点。词汇语法From the picture, we can see that It can be shown from the picture thatAs is vividly shown in the picture,第一句Two men have different reaction to the bottle knocked onto the ground.Different peo

39、ple have different attitude to the same thing.As is vividly shown in the picture, two men have different reaction to the bottle knocked onto theground.52015考研英语基础班写作辅导讲义As is vividly shown in the picture, different people have different attitude to the same thing.2007 年第二句：The drink spills out.One p

40、erson falls into despair.All screwed up.The other person hurries to lift up the bottle.The other person smiles.The other person feels so lucky still to have something left in the bottle.Seeing the drink spills out, one person falls into despair, sighing All screwed up, while theother person hurries

41、to lift up the bottle, smiling as he feels so lucky still to have something left inthe bottle.图表作文观点类作文社会热点分析类1. 描述图表引述主题2. 分析原因3. 总结陈词2015考研英语基础班写作辅导讲义2006 年第一段：描述图表：1.这是一副非常有趣而且发人深省的图片。This is a tremendously interesting and thoughtprovoking picture.2.如图所示，XXX 的问题变得越来越严重了，并已经引起全社会的广泛关注。As is vividl

42、y shown by the picture, the issue of/that has become a major concern around oursociety, which is increasingly serious. : of+名词； that+从句2011 年72015考研英语基础班写作辅导讲义2000 年2009 年2005 年2015考研英语基础班写作辅导讲义2003 年About/on=Concerning; regarding; as to; in relation to; in point to; with regard to3.引出主题Should the U

43、niversity Campus Be Open to Tourists?关于大学是否应该向游客开放一直存在热门的争论。There is a heated argument in point to whether the university should be open to tourists.3.引出分论点：“一些人认为”咋说？Some people think that词汇升级： Think =Hold the attitude that ；Be under the impression that“但是”英语咋说？ But; However = While Whereas Neverth

44、eless“不同的”英语咋说？ Different = Opposite一些人认为,但是另外一些人持有不同观点，他们坚信Some people are under the impression that , whereas others take an opposite side, firmly holdingthe attitude that“我认为”英语怎么说？From my part, From my point of view, In my opinion, In my eyes, In my own perspective4.表明立场In my own perspective, it

45、 is more reasonable to support the former/latter opinion than thelatter/former one for the following reasons.92015考研英语基础班写作辅导讲义第二段：意图/现象/寓意1）The picture is attempting to convey a thought-provoking message.2）Problem can divide people into the pessimistic and the optimistic.注意？ Pay attention toPour at

46、tention toFocus ones attention on第一个人关注的是事物的黑暗面，第二个人关注的是阳光的一面。正能量，负能量Positive energy, negative energy转折关系 But, However, while, whereas, nonetheless, nevertheless, on the contrary, in contrast省略3) The former focus their attention on the dark side of things, whereas the latter (focus theirattention) o

47、n the bright （of things）.导致？Lead to; Result in; give rise to; contribute to; be responsible for; generate;4) These contrasting attitudes give rise to opposite results.因为？Because As Owing to the fact that Due to the fact that Thanks to the fact that悲观者，乐观者？ Pessimists; optimists5) As pessimists are o

48、bsessed with what they lose, they do not think about making any attemptbefore surrendering to misfortune.6) On the contrary, optimists, concentrating on what may be possible, can create opportunities oftheir difficulties.第三段：己见我认为？ In my opinion,From my point of viewFrom my perspective,1) From my pe

49、rspective, we should learn from the positive and optimistic man.无论？However=no matter howWhatever=no matter what2015考研英语基础班写作辅导讲义2) No matter what difficulties we meet in life, we should use a positive and optimistic attitude toface.3) We can be successful in this way. =Only in this way can we be suc

50、cessful.4）It is our attitude that has changed everything in our life.2011 年大作文Write an essay of 160200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) explain its intended meaning, and3) give your comments.Your should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.

51、(20 points)布局谋篇：第一段：描述图画第二段：图画反映的现象第三段：提出解决办法第一段：描述图画第一句As you can see in the drawing above, two people are taking in the scenery on a boat floatingsmoothly on surface of the lake, reading newspaper and enjoying their picnic.第二句However, when you look at the lower part of the drawing, you will see an

52、other picture whichstands in marked contrast to the upper part: a lot of rubbish.第三句Furthermore, there is an ironic caption under the drawing, which reads the remains of thejourney.第二段：图画反映的现象第一句112015考研英语基础班写作辅导讲义What this thought-provoking drawing mirrors is the phenomenon that the environment of

53、touristareas is polluted by tourists.第二句The problem of tourist pollution has been known for years.第三句Many tourist areas suffer from a litter problem.第四句Litter in tourist area spoils the view, pollutes the environment, and takes time and money to cleanup.第五句Moreover, the problem also effects many tou

54、rist attractions.第六句Some tourists carve the characters like someone has visited this place. On the wall or statues,this causes damaged, irremediable in some cases, to the cultural relics and historic sites.第三段：提出解决办法第一句In view of all the harmful influences of tourist pollution, I think it is high ti

55、me that we tookmeasures to tackle the problem.第二句：To begin with, we should raise public awareness of tourism environmental protection.第三句In addition, the administration of the tourist locations should take legal measures to fine thosevisitors who damage cultural relics, as only in this way can we solve the problem of touristpollution and leave the beautiful sights to other visitors.总结全文表达方式：；By way of summary/conclus