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1、四级真题范文(3套看图作文)2013年6月英语四级写作分析以及例文(3套看图作文)第一套The importance of doing small thingsbefore undertaking something big对白 子:Dad, Im a bit worried about disposing of nuclear waste(处理核废料) 父:If you can empty the dustbin(垃圾筒) here, you can do anything范文:We can see from the illustration there is a father talkin
2、g to his son. Having heard his sons words “Dad, I am a bit worried about disposing of nuclear weapons”, the father replies, “If you can empty the dustbin here, you can do anything”, pointing the garbage can beside him.Funny and common as the conversation sounds, father intends to advise his son to d
3、o small things before undertaking the big. With out any doubt, doing small things is the first step of success and will lay root for doing something big. By doing something small, we are enabled to accumulate experience, master skills and train ourselves to be more patient. In other word, we can be
4、well prepared for further challenges in the course of fulfilling small things. By contrast, those who set out to do something big will be constantly haunted by disappointment, frustrations or even failures. As when opportunity “something big” appears, they can hardly seize them because of the lack o
5、f experience and confidence stems from doing small things. Taking the picture presented above as a case in point, how can the little boy succeed in disposing of nuclear weapons if he even doesnt know how to empty the dustbin? From my perspective, under no circumstances should we undervalue the power
6、 of doing small things. Instead, we should regard small things as the source of experience, skills and the prerequisite of success. “Great achievement only belongs to those who can do small things perfectly.” Aristotle once said.第一部分:考试分析一:形式1. 有图片,图片要点为:一对父子就一个问题展开讨论;2,英文提示:a 简要描述图片;b 给出有关于主题“the i
7、mportance of doing small things before undertaking something big”的观点二写作应对1. 简要描述图片:简要描述,即,描述图中主题,并引出相关的主题即可,使用描述句式如下:A:简单型As we can see from the picture,there are two persons, debating about the importance of doing small things before undertaking something big, who are a father and his son.B:复杂型As i
8、s vividly depicted in the picture, two men ,who are a father and his son,are talking about what should be done firstly,the small thing or the big ones. Simple as it is, what the picture conveys to us is thought-provoking.2. 判断写作类型:题干中有明显的两种观点,即先做小事,或者大事,只不过,出题人要求学生写的是关于先做小事的重要的意义,故可以使用两种观点对立的“观点分型”写
9、作模板带入如下:第一段:说明现象第二段:观点讨论第三段:观点总结3. 主题该主题,可以被分为三个部分,即:A:the importance of doing small things before undertaking something bigB:doing small thingsC: doing something big以上三个内容在每段中确保出现1-2次,该作文便不跑题。第二部分:例文写作与模板对比第一段:描述图片+说明现象As we can see from the picture,there are two persons, debating about the importa
10、nce of doing small things before undertaking something big, who are a father and his son. Recently, the issue of the importance of doing small things has aroused wide concern among the public. Especially the young generation living in the big cities, they tend to do the big ones firstly, paying no a
11、ttention to the fact that this behavior may pose underlying threat to their precious life and may even endanger others.(原有模板)Nowadays/recently, the phenomenon/ issue of has arouse wide concern among the public. Especially the young generation living in the big cities/metropolis, they tend to do sth,
12、 ignoring/paying no attention to the fact that this behavior may pose underlying threat to their precious life and may even endanger others.第二段:观点讨论Does anyone claim the same attitude towards this issue? Definitely not,actually, opinions vary from person to person. Some maintain that the doing some
13、big is beneficial to students. However, quite a few people hold the opposite opinion that the doing some big is detrimental to the youngsters, and they think that the merits of students doing some small things far outweigh its demerits. To my way of thinking, we should know the the importance that w
14、hy we must do small things before we undertake something big. If we know the significance, we will choice the right way and do the right things.(原有模板)Does anyone maintain/claim the same attitude towards this issue/phenomenon? Definitely not,actually/in fact,opinions vary from person to person. Some
15、maintain/argue/hold/claim that something is beneficial to sth. However,quite a few people hold the opposite opinion that something is detrimental to sth .The demerits/disadvantages of sth. far outweigh its merits/advantages.第三段:观点总结the problem of doing big things firstly mentioned above will bound t
16、o generate severe consequences if measures should be adopted before the thing get worse. What we should do is to encourage the merits and diminish the demerits to the least extent. It is high time that all of us ,parents, educators,and the authorities, make combined efforts to let young men know the
17、 importance of doing small things before undertaking something big .With these measures taken, it is reasonable for us to believe that this problem can be perfectly solved in the near future(原有模板)To my way of thinkingFrom my perspective, The problem mentioned above will bound to generate severe cons
18、equences if we keep turning a blind eye and deaf ear to it.Measures should be adopted before things get worse. What we should do is to encourage the merits and diminish the demerits to the least extent. It is high time that all of us ,parents,educators,and the authorities, make combined efforts to p
19、ut an end to this situation. We should appeal to the relevant administration departments to strengthen supervision over. With these measures taken, it is reasonable for us to believe that this problem can be perfectly solved in the near future总结:改作文中,第二段落内容容易较为单薄,故建议同学们将原模板的第三段内容中,我的观点写到第二段的结尾处,已调整三
20、段之间比例。The picture shows us a dialogue between a father and a son. The son told his father, “Dad, Im a bit worried about disposing of nuclear waste”. While his father told him, “If you can empty the dustbin here you can do anything”. It reveals the importance of doing small things well before underta
21、king something big. There is also an old Chinese saying to go with this that a person cant sweep the world before he can sweep his own room.I agree on the point that it is of great importance for a person to do small things well before undertaking something big. First of all, doing small things well
22、 entail the qualities that needed in doing great things such as patience and ability of controlling time. For example, when we sweep our room, we need to manage our time and energy reasonably. Accordingly, if we sweep a bigger room, for example, a classroom with our classmates, we should learn how t
23、o cooperate and allot assignments as well. And a big advantage is that we can draw useful lessons from the failure of performing well because they didnt cost a lot.In another word, though these things seem trivial, they reinforce our manipulative ability and thus our understanding to the world. Ther
24、efore, we should not ignore the small things.On Doing Small Things图画的内容和构图不难:父亲和男孩子的对话,孩子说“ Dad,I am a bit worried about disposing of nuclear weapon. (爸爸,我有点担心清除核武器这个问题)”,父亲则回答“ If you can empty the dustbin, you can do anything. (如果你能把垃圾桶倒掉,你就能坐好任何事情)” ,说话间,手指着垃圾桶。这幅图画和2012年6月的六级漫画作文非常相似,当时的图中,也是两人对
25、话,女儿和父亲。父亲问女儿:“ Hi, sweetie, how was your school today ? (嘿,小甜心,你在今天在学校过得怎么样?)” 女儿非常冷漠的回答:“Dad, you can read all about it on my blogs. (爹哋,你自己可以在我的博客上读到所有内容)”,然后呢,女儿拔腿出门,留下父亲一脸惊愕。作文的第一段,要进行简单描绘图画内容,这是必须的,也是题目中强制要求的(a brief description of the picture)。描述的时候,只要把父子两的对话移植到第一段,然后把父亲手指垃圾桶的动作描绘一下就可以了,非常简单。
26、作文的第二段,进行主旨提炼并且论述。这幅图画很容易看出主题,那就是做大事之前,要先做小事(一屋不扫,何以扫天下),而且题目中其实早就已经透露了主题了 (express your views on the importance of doing small things before undertaking something big.)因此,第二段通篇论述小事做起的重要性就可以了。属于我在课堂上讲过的作文三大分类之“积极主题,论述意义”作文第三段,总结,启发。这一段再次强调小事做起的意义,我们不能低估他的威力。文章最后可以以名人名言作为结尾。请看范文:We can see from the i
27、llustration there is a father talking to his son. Having heard his sons words “Dad, I am a bit worried about disposing of nuclear weapons”, the father replies, “If you can empty the dustbin here, you can do anything”, pointing the garbage can beside him.Funny and common as the conversation sounds, i
28、t reflects that the father intends to advise his son to do small things before undertaking the big. Unquestionably, doing small things is the first step of success and will lay root for doing something big. By doing something small, we are enabled to accumulate experience, master skills and train ou
29、rselves to be more patient. In other words, we can be well prepared for further challenges in the course of fulfilling small things. By contrast, those who set out to do something big will be constantly haunted by disappointment, frustrations or even failures. As when opportunity “something big” app
30、ears, they can hardly seize them because of the lack of experience and confidence stems from doing small things. Taking the picture presented above as a case in point, how can the little boy succeed in disposing of nuclear weapons if he even doesnt know how to empty the dustbin?From my perspective,
31、under no circumstances should we undervalue the power of doing small things. Instead, we should regard small things as the source of experience, skills and the prerequisite of success. “Great achievement only belongs to those who can do small things perfectly.” Aristotle once said.如果是图画作文,一,不要忘记描绘图画
32、的内容;二,提炼出图画里面的主旨,要么积极的向上的好事,需要我们领悟和执行;要么是消极的负面的坏事,需要我们理性分析看待,最后给出一些看法建议。不难,别怕。主题,如果是正面文章,可以关注下 taking actions (采取行动的意义)the consciousness of innovation ( 创新意识) 等等;如果是图表作文,一、第一段描绘图表内容,不难;二,提炼主旨和论述,这个和图画作文一样。三,提出个人观点,预测图表趋势,友善建议提醒都可以。如果是引语作文,关键是要看出引语内含的主旨,并进行论述就可以。The importance of doing small thingsFr
33、om the carton, we can clearly see that the boy is worried about disposing of nuclear waste, while his father tells him to empty the dustbin first. This carton reminds me of a Chinese saying: If you dont clean the room(solve your problems), then how can you control the world. However, most people alw
34、ays attach great importance to something big, but neglect small things.In my opinion, it is necessary and important to do small things. On the one hand, doing small things well helps us to develop good habits, which set a good foundation for our future development. There is no doubt that one of the
35、greatest differences between success and failure is the importance placed on little things. On the other hand, the big is the little. If something needs to be done, it is big. No matter what kinds of task, if it is worth doing, it can be big.Taking all these into account, we can easily notice that i
36、t is reasonable to do small things before big ones. So before doing important things, lets empty our dustbin first!The Big is the LittleNothing can be done except little by little, the French poet Baudelaire Charles once said. Most people, however, often ignore such a truth. So does the little boy s
37、hown in the picture. He expresses his worries to his father about disposing of nuclear waste, but is told that he can achieve nothing if he doesnt empty the dustbin first.Every single little thing you can do today matters. The truth has been tested for ages, and thousands of great people have set go
38、od examples for us. For instance, Leonardo da Vinci, the world-renowned master in painting, starts his career with repeated egg-drawing. Lu Xun, the great man of letters, reminded himself to get up early by inscribing the character “morning” on his desk.As university students, in my opinion, we shou
39、ld aim high, but at the same time, we shall never measure a task by its size. All in all, only those who have the patience to do simple things perfectly will acquire the skill to do difficult things easily. 第二套范文The importance of reading literatureThedrawingportraysaclassroomsceneinwhichateacheriste
40、llingastudenttoreadapieceofliteraryworks.Undoubtedly,thepictureaimsathighlightingthemagnitudeofreadingclassicsforyoungstudents,whichisworthdiscussingamonggeneralpublicforthetimebeing.As we all know, the classical literature is the representation of the outstanding art of our nation. Some familiar ch
41、aracters such as Monkey King express the good wishes of our common people. There is no doubt that young people will benefit a lot from reading classics .For one thing, classics will help broaden their horizons from them. While observing characters in classic novels going through ups and downs in the
42、ir life, youngsters also can definitely learn essential life ethics. For another, with condensed beauty of arts, they will enhance readers aesthetic taste.Therefore, we should start reading the treasuries our ancestors left and absorbing the essence of them. We should also advocate to the public the
43、 importance so that more general people can enjoy the pleasure of reading.第二套The importance of reading literatureThedrawingportraysaclassroomsceneinwhichateacheristellingastudenttoreadapieceofliteraryworks.Undoubtedly,thepictureaimsathighlightingthemagnitudeofreadingclassicsforyoungstudents,whichisw
44、orthdiscussingamonggeneralpublicforthetimebeing.As we all know, the classical literature is the representation of the outstanding art of our nation. Some familiar characters such as Monkey King express the good wishes of our common people. There is no doubt that young people will benefit a lot from
45、reading classics. For one thing, classics will help broaden their horizons from them. While observing characters in classic novels going through ups and downs in their life, youngsters also can definitely learn essential life ethics. For another, with condensed beauty of arts, they will enhance read
46、ers aesthetic taste.Therefore, we should start reading the treasuries our ancestors left and absorbing the essence of them. We should also advocate to the public the importance so that more general people can enjoy the pleasure of reading.范文:The picture shows us a dialogue between a father and a son
47、. The son told his father, “Dad, Im a bit worried about disposing of nuclear waste”. While his father told him, “If you can empty the dustbin here you can do anything”. It reveals the importance of doing small things well before undertaking something big. There is also an old Chinese saying to go wi
48、th this that a person cant sweep the world before he can sweep his own room.Unquestionably, doing small things is the first step of success and will lay root for doing something big. By doing something small, we are enabled to accumulate experience, master skills and train ourselves to be more patie
49、nt. In other word, we can be well prepared for further challenges in the course of fulfilling small things. By contrast, those who set out to do something big will be constantly haunted by disappointment, frustrations or even failures. As when opportunity “something big” appears, they can hardly sei
50、ze them because of the lack of experience and confidence stems from doing small things. Taking the picture presented above as a case in point, how can the little boy succeed in disposing of nuclear weapons if he even doesnt know how to empty the dustbin? From my perspective, under nocircumstances should we undervalue the power of doing small things. Instead, weshould regard small things as the source of e
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