人教版八年级英语写作课课件 Unit1(共26张PPT)

1、 My Weekend What do you usually do on weekends? exercise, eat breakfast do homework go shopping play basketball watch TV read books go to bed Activities: 1. 写作第一步：写作第一步： 审题审题，找出文章要表达，找出文章要表达 的中心、使用的主要时态，人称。的中心、使用的主要时态，人称。 My Weekend 一般现在时一般现在时 人称：人称：I 2. 写作第二步：写作第二步：列要点列要点。用简单的句子。用简单的句子 列出文章的要点。列出文章

2、的要点。 My Weekend I exercise. I eat breakfast. I do my homework. I go shopping. I play basketball. I watch TV . I read a book. I go to bed. 1. I exercise. 2. I eat breakfast. 3. I do homework. 4. I go shopping. 5. I play basketball. 6. I watch TV. 7. I read books. 8. I go to bed. 列出短文要点列出短文要点 3. 写作第三步

3、：写作第三步：加细节加细节。给简单的句子穿。给简单的句子穿 上衣服（加入时间、地点、人物、方式上衣服（加入时间、地点、人物、方式 等。）等。） In most countries, people usually eat traditional food on special holidays. I go shopping. On Saturday afternoon, I usually go shopping. On Saturday afternoon, I usually go shopping in the supermarket. On Saturday afternoon, I u

4、sually go shopping with my mother in the supermarket. I usually go shopping. 1. On Saturday morning, I often exercise for an hour. 2. I eat breakfast at 8 oclock. 3. I do my homework alone at home. 4. On Saturday afternoon, I usually go shopping with my mother. 5. On Sunday morning, I play basketbal

5、l with my friends in my school. 6. I watch TV for an hour in the afternoon. 7. In the evening I always read some story books. 8. I go to bed at ten oclock. 加细节加细节 On Saturday morning, I often exercise for an hour. Then I eat breakfast at 8. After that, I do my homework alone at home. On Saturday aft

6、ernoon, I usually go shopping with my mother. My weekend is very colorful. I usually do lots of interesting things on weekend. I usually have a busy weekend. What about you? a nice head a nice tail a nice body 4. 写作第四步：写作第四步：巧相连巧相连。恰当使用关联词。恰当使用关联词 句，使文章清晰，上下衔接自然。句，使文章清晰，上下衔接自然。 1.表并列或递进表并列或递进: and 2

7、.表转折表转折: but, however, although 3.表因果表因果: because, so, 4.表条件表条件: if , 5.表解释表解释: for example, such as, 6.表顺序表顺序: firstly, secondly, next, then, after that, finally, in the end; 7.表强调表强调: also, too, either 8.表结论表结论: in a word, all in all On Saturday morning, I often exercise for an hour. Then I eat br

8、eakfast at 8 oclock. After that, I do my homework alone at home. On Saturday afternoon, I usually go shopping with my mother. On Sunday morning, I play basketball with my friends in my school. I watch TV for an hour in the afternoon. In the evening I always read some story books such as The Old Man

9、and The Sea. And I go to bed at ten oclock. 巧相连巧相连 5. 写作第五步：写作第五步：美化短文美化短文。选择好的句型、。选择好的句型、 词句，给短文化化妆，戴上首饰。词句，给短文化化妆，戴上首饰。 On Saturday morning, I often exercise for an hour, 2. I do my homework alone at home. 3. In the evening I always read some story books. because I think it is good for my health.

10、My parents have to work on weekends. So I can learn something new from them. 书面表达写作技巧书面表达写作技巧(writing skills) 列列加加连连美美 审题审题列要点列要点加细节加细节巧相连巧相连美化美化 My weekend is very colorful. I do lots of interesting things on weekend. On Saturday morning, I often exercise for an hour, because I think it is good for

11、 my health. Then I eat breakfast at 8 oclock. After that, I do my homework alone at home. On Saturday afternoon, I usually go shopping with my mother. On Sunday morning, I play basketball with my friends in my school. I watch TV for an hour in the afternoon. In the evening I always read some story b

12、ooks such as The Old Man and The Sea. I can learn something new from them. And I go to bed at ten oclock. I usually have a busy weekend. What about you? 范文展示范文展示 My Last Weekend 一般过去时一般过去时 人称：人称：I 1. 起床起床 2. 帮妈妈做家务帮妈妈做家务 3. 做作业做作业 4. 去看电影去看电影 5. 拜访祖母拜访祖母 6. 打篮球打篮球 7. 读书读书 8. 看电视看电视 1. get up 2. help

13、 mom do housework 3. do my homework 4. go to a movie 5. visit my grandma 6. play basketball 7. read a book 8. watch TV Last weekend, I _ up. I _ mom do housework. I _ my homework. I _ to a movie. I _ my grandma. I _ basketball. I _ a book. I _ TV. 列要点列要点 got helped did went visited played read watch

14、ed 加细节加细节(时间、地点、人物、方式等时间、地点、人物、方式等) 1. I got up _. 2. _, I helped mom do housework. 3. I did my homework _. 4. I went to a movie _. 5. _, I visited my grandma _. 6. I played basketball _. 7. _, I read a book _. 8. I watched TV _. early on Saturday After breakfast in the afternoon with my best friend

15、 in the evening. On Sunday morning with my parents in the afternoon In the eveningabout future for an hour 加细节加细节(首尾首尾) I got up early on Saturday. After breakfast, I helped mom do housework. I did my homework in the afternoon. I went to a movie with my best friend in the evening. On Sunday morning,

16、 I visited my grandma with my parents. I played basketball in the afternoon. In the evening, I read a book about future. I watched TV for an hour. I had a busy weekend. I really had a good time last weekend. I had a busy weekend. On Saturday, I got up early. After breakfast, I helped mom do housewor

17、k. _ I _ did my homework _ in the afternoon. _ I went to a movie with my best friend in the evening. On Sunday morning, I visited my grandma with my parents. _ _ I played basketball in the afternoon. In the evening, I read a book about future. _ I watched TV for an hour. _ I really had a good time l

18、ast weekend. 巧相连和美化巧相连和美化 carefullyalso I was tired but happy. After that Because that day was her birthday. Then And In a word, I had a busy weekend. On Saturday, I got up early. After breakfast, I helped mom do housework. I was tired but happy. I also did my homework carefully in the afternoon. Af

19、ter that I went to a movie with my best friend in the evening. On Sunday morning, I visited my grandma with my parents, because that day was her birthday. I played basketball in the afternoon. In the evening, I read a book about future. And I watched TV for an hour. In a word, I really had a good ti

20、me last weekend. 范文展示范文展示 周末就要来了，你有什么打算吗？请根据表格提周末就要来了，你有什么打算吗？请根据表格提 示，以示，以“My weekend plan” 为题，写一篇短文。为题，写一篇短文。 SaturdaySunday 上午上午下午下午晚上晚上上午上午下午下午晚上晚上 做作业做作业 去书店去书店 买书买书 上英语上英语 课课 去图书去图书 馆馆 看书看书 陪妈妈陪妈妈 购物购物 看电视看电视 My Weekend Plan 提示一：一般将来时提示一：一般将来时 be going to 人称：人称：I 提示二：提示二：do my homework go to t

21、he bookstore buy books take an English lesson go to the library read books go shopping watch TV Saturday Sunday Example my weekend plan 写好英语书面表达，应注意哪些问题？写好英语书面表达，应注意哪些问题？ 1、认真审题，紧扣提示内容、认真审题，紧扣提示内容 准确理解题意是成功写好作文的第一步，然后把要点一一写清，不能丢三落准确理解题意是成功写好作文的第一步，然后把要点一一写清，不能丢三落 四，一般情况下，写清要点后，要适当发挥，但必须紧扣主题，适可而止。四，一

22、般情况下，写清要点后，要适当发挥，但必须紧扣主题，适可而止。 2、做到语言基本无误。、做到语言基本无误。 要点确定了，就可以构思文章的写作框架，先写什么，后写什么，尽量不要要点确定了，就可以构思文章的写作框架，先写什么，后写什么，尽量不要 出现语法错误。出现语法错误。eg：名词的复数、所有格、代词的数与格，数词的基数与序数、：名词的复数、所有格、代词的数与格，数词的基数与序数、 形容词的等级、动词的各种形式、句子的结构语序、标点等都要准确。形容词的等级、动词的各种形式、句子的结构语序、标点等都要准确。 3、文章要通顺连贯。、文章要通顺连贯。 条理要清晰，句与句之间联系要紧密，连接词使用要恰当。不能东一笔，西条理要清晰，句与句之间联系要紧密，连接词使用要恰当。不能东一笔，西 一笔，让人看了不知所云。一笔，让人看了不知所云。 4、尽可能表达清楚，发挥想象力和创造力。、尽可能表达清楚，发挥想象力和创造力。 每个要点、句子都尽可能表达清楚明白，根据提示，选用自己最熟悉、最有每个要点、句子都尽可能表达清楚明白，根据提示，选用自己最熟悉、最有 把握的词组、句型来写每一句话，最好多用简单句，适当运用并列句、复合句，把握的词组、句型来写每一句话，最好多用简单句，适当运用并列句、复合句， 切记不用自己没把握的、不熟悉的句式，以免写