闪光词句的使用

1、2021-8-7Lecture1 写作的用词和造句 2021-8-7Lecture2 用词的标准用词的标准 1)忌用口语词 e.g. “You know”, “Well”, “gonna” 2）忌用生僻词 2021-8-7Lecture3 闪光词的基本标准闪光词的基本标准 1）准确 Context(上下文) e.g. commit crime Connotation(内涵) e.g. 30%discount Collocation(搭配) e.g. apply to/for Culture(文化) e.g. dog 2021-8-7Lecture4 闪光词的基本标准闪光词的基本标准 2）多样

2、e.g. a big/great/sharp increase 2021-8-7Lecture5 准确、多样准确、多样 E.g. a good man: kind, honest, generous, brave, warm-hearted, sympathetic, selfless good food: tasty, nourishing, rich, fresh, appetizing, abundant, delicious 2021-8-7Lecture6 词汇选择词汇选择-Tips 1)考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think, people,

3、 opinion 等等。 2)一定要学会换词，用形象，具体的词替换太宽 泛的。 2021-8-7Lecture7 用词造句用词造句-多样化多样化 (1) The goats grazed peacefully in the farm and were unaware of the approaching hunter. (并列分句1+2) (2) Grazing peacefully, the goats in the farm were unaware of the approaching hunter. (现在分语短语+简单句) (3) In the farm, the goats gra

4、zed peacefully and were unaware of the approaching hunter. (副词短语+并列 分句(1)-(2) ) (4) There were goats grazing peacefully in the farm, unaware of the approaching hunter. (简单句+形容语 短语) (5) As the goats grazed peacefully in the farm, they were unaware of the approaching hunter. (原因副词从句+ 主句) 2021-8-7Lectu

5、re8 用词造句用词造句-多样化多样化 (1) The young pilot was on his first overseas training. (2) He felt very uneasy. (a) The young pilot on his first overseas training felt very uneasy. (b) The young pilot felt very uneasy during his first overseas training. (c) The young pilots first overseas training made him fee

6、l very uneasy. (d) Extreme uneasiness seized the young pilot on his first overseas training. (e) The young pilot was on his first overseas training, feeling very uneasy. (f) It being his first overseas training, the young pilot felt very uneasy. 2021-8-7Lecture9 用词造句用词造句-多样化多样化 (g) Being on his firs

7、t overseas training, the young pilot felt very uneasy. (h) The young pilot was on his first overseas training and felt very uneasy. (i) The young pilot, who was on his first overseas training, felt very uneasy. (j) When the young pilot was on his/first overseas training, he felt very uneasy. (k) As

8、the young pilot was on his first overseas training, he felt very uneasy. (l) The young pilot was on his first overseas training, so that he felt very uneasy. 2021-8-7Lecture10 闪光句之基本句型闪光句之基本句型 l简单句 l并列句 l主从复合句 2021-8-7Lecture11 主语从句主语从句 E.g. E.g. 1) They need more help in English. 2) That is quite o

9、bvious. 可改为：可改为： It It is quite obvious they need more help in English. 2021-8-7Lecture12 同位语从句同位语从句 E.g. E.g. 1) He works hard. 2）The fact does not necessarily mean that he is a competent leader. 可改为：可改为： The fact that he works hard does not necessarily mean that he is a competent leader. 2021-8-7L

10、ecture13 定语从句定语从句 E.g. E.g. 1) He sent her a letter. 2）In the letter he said that he was sorry for what he had done to her. 可改为：可改为： He sent her a letter，in which he said that he was sorry for what he had done to her. 2021-8-7Lecture14 复杂的简单句复杂的简单句-with结构结构 E.g. E.g. As the pace of change is quicken

11、ing, more and more scientists find it hard to keep up with the latest developments even in their own disciplines. 2021-8-7Lecture15 复杂的简单句复杂的简单句-with结构结构 可改为：可改为： With the pace of change quickening, more and more scientists find it hard to keep up with the latest developments even in their own disci

12、plines. 2021-8-7Lecture16 复杂的简单句复杂的简单句-分词结构分词结构 E.g.E.g. Teenagers are pressured by school work. They are also encouraged by their peers. Under such circumstances, they resort to smoking. 2021-8-7Lecture17 复杂的简单句复杂的简单句-分词结构分词结构 可改为：可改为： Pressured by school work and encouraged by their peers, teenage

13、rs resort to smoking. 2021-8-7Lecture18 倒装句倒装句 否定词位于句首时否定词位于句首时 e.g. I have never been to Europe. 可改为：可改为： Never have I been to Europe. 2021-8-7Lecture19 倒装句倒装句 only引出的状语位于句首时引出的状语位于句首时 e.g. The doctor realized that only when his patient needed surgery. 可改为：可改为： Only when his patient needed surgery

14、did the doctor realize that. 2021-8-7Lecture20 被动句被动句 e.g. We should take effective measures to stop various forms of pollution. 可改为：可改为：Effective measures should be taken to stop various forms of pollution. 2021-8-7Lecture21 强调句强调句 e.g. Ah Fu saved my sister.(一般句式一般句式) 可改为：可改为： It was Ah Fu who saved my sister.(强调句式强调句式) 2021-8-7Lecture22 Assignment Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a