good高中英语基础写作—学会用复合句和非谓语动词

1、提高句子档次的小结：提高句子档次的小结：1. 1. 用高级结构和词汇用高级结构和词汇 2. 2. 用分词用分词短语短语合并句子合并句子 用用介词短语介词短语合并句子合并句子 用用独立主格结构独立主格结构合并句子合并句子 用连接词连接句子用连接词连接句子3. 3. 用用定语从句、主语从句、强调句、倒装句定语从句、主语从句、强调句、倒装句4. 4. 用不同结构和词汇用不同结构和词汇5. 5. 合适的过渡性词汇合适的过渡性词汇学会运用复合句和非谓语动词学会运用复合句和非谓语动词 kate is a new student. she comes from a northern province. sh

2、e speaks a dialect. we find it hard to understand her dialect. kate, a new student from a northern province, speaks a dialect which we find hard to understand.用一句话表达用一句话表达不是人人都能学好英语，小学生同时不是人人都能学好英语，小学生同时学汉语和英语反而会影响汉语学习。学汉语和英语反而会影响汉语学习。学会运用复合句和非谓语动词学会运用复合句和非谓语动词第一步：拆分成几个简单句第一步：拆分成几个简单句不是人人都能学好英语。不是人人

3、都能学好英语。小学生同时学汉语和英语。小学生同时学汉语和英语。这会影响汉语学习。这会影响汉语学习。第二步：分别翻译这几个简单句第二步：分别翻译这几个简单句 not everyone is good at learning english. children from primary school learn english and chinese at the same time. this will affect their chinese study. not everyone is good at learning english. children from primary schoo

4、l start to learn english and chinese at the same time. this will affect their chinese study.第三步：合并句子第三步：合并句子 that children from primary school start to learn english and chinese at the same time will affect their chinese study because not everyone is good at learning english. not everyone is good at

5、 learning english. children from primary school start to learn english and chinese at the same time. this will affect their chinese study.第三步：合并句子第三步：合并句子 if children from primary school start to learn english and chinese at the same time, this will affect their chinese study方法方法2 2： because not eve

6、ryone is good at learning english.学会使用复合句和非谓语动词学会使用复合句和非谓语动词你来试试你来试试现象现象学生作文中出现很多错别字学生作文中出现很多错别字原因原因1.上网聊天时经常使用网络语言。上网聊天时经常使用网络语言。2.每天有很多作业做，没有记住生字。每天有很多作业做，没有记住生字。参考词汇：参考词汇：错别字错别字: : wrongly-written characters网络语言：网络语言：web language要求：要求：1. 1. 用用两句话两句话表达表格内容表达表格内容 2. 2. 两句话要有两句话要有连贯性连贯性第一句（两个信息点）：第一

7、句（两个信息点）： 1. 1. 学生作文中出现很多错别字学生作文中出现很多错别字 2.2.（他们）上网聊天时经常使用网络语言。（他们）上网聊天时经常使用网络语言。 there are many wrongly-written characters in students compositions. the reason why there are many wrongly-written characters in students composition is that they often use web languages when chatting on line.合并句子：合并句子：

8、 they often use web languages when chatting on line. 1. they have so much homework to do every day that they fail to memorize the new characters第二句第二句:1. 1. 每天有很多作业做每天有很多作业做 2. 2. 没有记住生字没有记住生字。 they have much homework to do every day.2. with so much homework to do, they fail to memorize the new char

9、acters.3. because they have so much homework to do, they fail to memorize the new characters.合并句子：合并句子： they fail to memorize the new characters. 连接两句话：连接两句话： the reason why there are many wrongly-written characters in students composition is that they often use web languages when chatting on line.

10、moreover, they have so much homework to do every day that they fail to memorize the new characters. 1. i used to like reading and writing poems at middle school.2. suddenly i thought of a good idea.3.you can find my house easily. i used to be fond of reading and writing poems at middle school.all of

11、 a sudden, a good idea occurred to me.a good idea suddenly struck me.you have no trouble/difficulty in finding my house .you can find my house without any difficulty .一一. advanced vocabulary较高级的词汇、短语较高级的词汇、短语 4.because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable. 5.the old photo made me think

12、of my happy childhood.thanks to the good weather , our journey was comfortable.the old photo reminded me of my happy childhood.6.his invention will be good for people greatly. his invention will ( ) people. his invention will ( )people. his invention will ( ) people. people will ( )his invention. hi

13、s invention will( ). his invention will ( )people.be of great benefit tobring a lot of benefits tobe greatly beneficial to benefit greatly frombenefit people greatlydo much good to 1. when she heard he had died, she went pale with sorrow. 2. i was walking along park road towards the east. at that ti

14、me, an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street.二二.varied grammatical structure丰富的语法结构丰富的语法结构 on hearing the bad news of his death, she went pale with sorrow. i was walking along park road towards the east when an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the stre

15、et. 3. the flat is in a building on beijing road. it is not far from our school. 4. he is surprised that the little girl knows so many things. the flat is in a building on beijing road, which is not far from our school. to his surprise , the little girl knows so many things. what surprises him is th

16、at the little girl knows so many things. 5. we can achieve our goal only in this way. 6.he did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper. only in this way can we achieve our goal . it was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened. not

17、 until he had read the news in the newspaper did he know what had happened. 7.the teacher required all the students to hand in their compositions after class. ( 复合宾语复合宾语)all the students were required to hand in their compositions after class.the teacher required that all the students should hand in

18、 their compositions after class.it was required by the teacher that all the students should hand in their compositions after class.the teachers requirement was that all the students should hand in their compositions after class.（被动语态）（被动语态）（宾语从句）（宾语从句）（主语从句）（主语从句）（表语从句）（表语从句）1.1.恰当使用关联词恰当使用关联词, , 如如

19、:but, when:but, when，soso，ifif，becausebecause，so thatso that等。等。1) people have found mobile phones very convenient _they can get in touch with each other whenever and wherever they like.2) this village used to be very small and poor _it has changed a lot since 1978 . becausebut三三. proper linking wor

20、ds or sentences使用恰使用恰当的连接词当的连接词2.2.巧妙使用意思有联系的词或语句巧妙使用意思有联系的词或语句 如如:first, second, third, soon, most excitingly, :first, second, third, soon, most excitingly, whats more, whats worse, as a result whats more, whats worse, as a result等。等。1)all the school-age children can study here._, they enjoy free e

21、ducation in it.2)the birds dodo were killed for food on a large number. _, they died out at last.3)eating sugar is bad for our teeth. _, it may make us fat.as a resultwhats worsewhats more3.3.适当使用过渡性语句适当使用过渡性语句 如如:the reasons are as follows.:the reasons are as follows. every coin has two sides. ever

22、y coin has two sides. all roads lead to rome. all roads lead to rome. as the result/survey shows. as the result/survey shows. we can draw an conclusion. we can draw an conclusion.等等now in the country areas, there are many children out of school. _. first，most families are too poor to send their chil

23、dren to school . second, some parents think there is no need for their daughters to go to school. third, the reasons are as followstelevision is not only a convenient source of entertainment, but also a comparatively cheap one. but_, television also has disadvantages, such as its effects on young pe

24、ople. every coin has two sides4.4.适当使用过渡性语句适当使用过渡性语句 如如:the reasons are as follows.:the reasons are as follows. every coin has two sides. every coin has two sides. all roads lead to rome. all roads lead to rome. as the result/survey shows. as the result/survey shows. we can draw an conclusion. we ca

25、n draw an conclusion.等等练习一练习一：众所周知，词汇就像建造大楼的砖块：众所周知，词汇就像建造大楼的砖块，是语言的重要组成部分。，是语言的重要组成部分。 (2010 江苏江苏) a.as everybody knows, vocabulary is an important part of language, just like bricks in a building .b.it is well known that vocabulary is an important part of language, just like bricks in a building .

26、c.what is known to all is that vocabulary is an important part of language, just like bricks in a building .1.鼠标是一个有用的装置。人们用它来和电鼠标是一个有用的装置。人们用它来和电脑进行对话。脑进行对话。 (2009 江苏江苏) a. the mouse is a most effective device. it is used by people to communicate with a computer.b. the mouse is a most effective dev

27、ice used by people to communicate with a computer. (过去分词短语作定语过去分词短语作定语)3我站在讲台上，很窘迫，不知该怎么做。我站在讲台上，很窘迫，不知该怎么做。 (2009湖南湖南) a. i stood on the platform, feeling embarrassed and not knowing what to do. b. i stood on the platform, felt embarrassed and didnt know what to do.c. i stood on the platform, and i

28、 felt so embarrassed that i didnt know what to do.2我认为，仅仅送给父母贵重的礼物是不对的我认为，仅仅送给父母贵重的礼物是不对的。(2006江西江西)a. i dont think it good only to provide our parents with expensive gifts. b. in my opinion, it is not good only to provide our parents with expensive gifts.c. we only provide our parents with expensiv

29、e gifts, which is not good. now students in china celebrate their birthdays in many ways. usually, a party is held. best friends and relatives will come to the party. they usually buy a gift. they show their best wishes. sometimes, people send short messages too and it is becoming very popular. but

30、i think that its better to help other people. we know that its important to learn to help other people. helping other people can do us a lot of good. people will help you because youve helped them and youll be happyimprove this composition, try!improve this composition, try! ( 1) now students in chi

31、na celebrate their birthdays in many ways. usually, a party is held. best friends and relatives will come to the party.（用（用where定语从句）定语从句）(2) they usually buy a gift. they show their best wishes.（合并句子）（合并句子）(3)sometimes, people send short messages too and it is becoming very popular （用（用which定语从句）定语

32、从句）. (4) but (替换）替换） i think （替换）（替换） that its better to help other people.(5) we know that its important to learn to help others. helping other people can do us a lot of good. (6) people will help you in return and youll be happy （用（用for one thing, for another 替换）替换）.nowadays students in china celebrate their birthdays in various ways.usually, a party is held where best friends as well as relatives can get together and have fun.they usually buy a small gift with which to express the