托福作文写作错误

1、托福作文写作错误 Academic Writing 7类常见错误类常见错误 托福作文写作错误 1. 省略省略 托福作文写作错误 Wealthy parents shouldnt spoil their children. 托福作文写作错误 Shouldnt Im Cant Hes 托福作文写作错误 Shouldnt should not Im I am Cant cannot Hes he is / he has he was 托福作文写作错误 2. Informal language 托福作文写作错误 Today, newspapers report lots of crimes in ho

2、rrible details. 托福作文写作错误 lots of a host of a vast number of numerous a great deal of a great amount of 可数可数 不可数不可数 托福作文写作错误 3. Spelling 托福作文写作错误 英美词汇差异英美词汇差异 The impact of tourism on these traditional neighbourhoods must be analysed. The impact of tourism on these traditional neighborhoods must be a

3、nalyzed. 托福作文写作错误 英式英式 美式美式 se ze/ ce analyse analyze civilise civilize practise practice globalise globalize v. 托福作文写作错误 英式英式 美式美式 our or colour color neighbour neighbor favourite favorite n. 托福作文写作错误 英式英式 美式美式 长长 短短 storey story dialogue dialog archaeology archeology jewellry jewelry traveller tra

4、veler 词汇长短词汇长短 托福作文写作错误 4. 词汇没有特色词汇没有特色 托福作文写作错误 例句例句1 Serious crimes harm peoples lives. 托福作文写作错误 severe offense / criminal act damage / destroy undermine / jeopardize individuals / man / mankind serious crime harm people 托福作文写作错误 例句例句2 The advantages of space research are more than its Disadvantag

5、es. 托福作文写作错误 例句例句2 The advantages of space research are more than its Disadvantages. 托福作文写作错误 be more than outweigh 托福作文写作错误 例句例句3 Our world is becoming more and more reliant on modern Technology. 托福作文写作错误 more and more increasingly + adj on a rise 托福作文写作错误 5. 句子无衔接句子无衔接 托福作文写作错误 1. The environment

6、is becoming worse. We must work together to deal with this situation. 托福作文写作错误 分析句间关系分析句间关系 加衔接词加衔接词 托福作文写作错误 The environment is becoming worse ; therefore, we must work together to deal with this situation. 托福作文写作错误 2. Opinions from different people will help us finish our work better and faster, t

7、heir opinions can serve as a sound information channel, which leads to a better solution to a problem. 托福作文写作错误 2. Opinions from different people will help us finish our works better and faster, because their opinions can serve as a sound information channel, which leads to a better solution to a problem. 托福作文写作错误 6. 感情色彩过于强烈感情色彩过于强烈 love letter 式写作式写作 托福作文写作错误 So , we should make sure that globalization does not harm our own traditional culture! 托福作文写作错误 ! 改。 So不要和should 连用，感 情强烈。 therefore 托福作文写作错误 7. 宗教作为引言宗教作为引言 托福作文写作错误 We must be friendly to others because the Bible say