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1、 2 写作之中写作之中 .开门见山，紧扣主题开门见山，紧扣主题 。 参观农场的日记：Last Sunday we visited West Hill Farm. . 正确使用标点符号、语言正确使用标点符号、语言, 规范地道。规范地道。 句型、结构，避免中国式英语。 I spent 10 yuan buy the book. He by bike to school. .重短轻长重短轻长, 就易避难。就易避难。以写正确、通顺 为最基本要求。 .过渡自然过渡自然, 表达流畅。表达流畅。正确使用连词，保 持行文的流畅。不重复使用可置换的词。 .适当评论适当评论, 发表己见。发表己见。 How fri

2、endly they are! We can learn from them. They enjoyed themselves very much. What a happy family! 3.成文之后成文之后 . 一般语法项目的检查一般语法项目的检查 人称: Mr. Green works hard, she is the best worker in their office. 时态: One day, they are going to the island. 主谓一致: Everyone in our class work hard. 习惯用法: He helps me in my

3、English. . 注意语序注意语序 (感叹句，疑问句，宾语从句感叹句，疑问句，宾语从句) Jim works very hard. So do I.(前后主语非一人) A: Jim works very hard. B: So he does.(前后主语为一人) He didnt know where the bookshop was. The boys want to know how they should do it. . 符合习惯符合习惯 My work is very busy. ( F ) Im very busy with my work. I very much like

4、it. ( F ) I like it very much. 规范、认真抄写规范、认真抄写 写作的策略：写作的策略：收集信息,列出提纲 开门 见山,抓住主题 描写细节 发表己 见，画龙点睛、结尾有力 仔细检查， 认真抄写 好段落的三个标准：1. 段落的统一性：围 绕一个中心; 2. 段落的完整性：有主题句， 有发展句。发展句均要围绕着主题展开。 写出的文章才会显得内容丰富; 3. 段落的连 贯性：形连，使用过渡词过渡句；意连， 内容上的连贯。 记叙文(尤其是故事性的) 的五个要素五个 “W”，即： When时间 Where 地点 Who人物 What事件 Why 原因 2011中考的书面表达，

5、 I Am Not a Child Any More 提示：在阳光雨露里，我已长高、长壮！ 但这还不是全部，长大还包括什么？是关 心、帮助同学？是体贴、理解父母？是感 恩、回报亲朋师长？还是成长的点点滴 滴。久久不能忘记。请以“I Am Not a Child Any More”为题记叙你在学习、生活中经历 过的一、两件事，表明你已不再是一个小 孩。 要求： 1. 请根据所给题目，用英语写一篇短文， 词数不少于60词。 2. 语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁。 3. 文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否 则以零分计。 4. 短文必须写在答题卷上，如在本卷上作 答，一律不得分。 I Am Not a

6、Child Any More I am a 16-year-old girl now. I have changed a lot. I used to be weak and short. But now, I am stronger and as tall as my mother. Its the most important thing for me to learn to understand and care about others. It was a Monday evening. When I went back home , no one was in. So I cooke

7、d supper. I didnt know my mother was ill until my parents came back from the hospital.They said the meal was very nice, though it tasted salty. After dinner, I found they were tired, I got hot water for them. When my mother put her feet into the water,with tears in her eyes she said: “My dear,you have grown up!” That day, I was a little tired, but I was very happy when I heard my mothers w