【公开课】初中英语作文指导公开课

1、Read the following phrases:Review:drink enough waterhave meals regularlyeat a healthy breakfasteat healthy meateat fruit and vegetablesEat less in the eveningWhat good eating habits do you have?For example:S1: I drink enough water every day .S2: I have meals regularly. I never go to school without b

2、reakfast .S3: - - -1.Write a good title for the passage._2.Find out the beginning and ending part and underline them .3.Find out the topic sentence（中心句） of Paragraph2-4.P2_P3_P4_Healthy EatingThe topic sentenceexpresses the main idea of a paragraph.We need to have enough food, never too much or too

3、little.Its very important for us to have different kinds of foods.We should eat regularly.Read the passage and complete the following tasks. Healthy eating is important for us. What and how should we eat to be healthy? In short, we should not only eat enough good, healthy food but also eat it regula

4、rly. Beginning(开头) Body(正文)Ending(结尾) Healthy Eating-开门见山，引出话题引出话题 -围绕围绕话题，详细叙说-画龙点睛，首尾呼应首尾呼应 Healthy eating is important for us.What and how should we eat to be healthy?1. Have enough food. 2.Have different kinds of foods.3. Eat regularly. In short, we should not only eat enough good, healthy food

5、but also eat it regularly.1.Number the sentences in a right way. 2.Divide them into three parts.(划分为三段)1. Second , we should keep quiet in the library.2.First , we have to wear our uniforms to go to school, though most of us dont like them at all.3.Every school has its own rules for students. We hav

6、e many school rules to follow in our daily life.4.Whats more, we ought to return books on time.5.Our school rules are good for us, I will try my best to follow them.6.Third , we must do lots of homework.3 2 1 4 6 5 Group workBeginning开门见山，引出话题引出话题 Body围绕围绕话题，详细叙说Ending画龙点睛，首尾呼应首尾呼应 Every school has

7、its own rules for students. We have many school rules to follow in our daily life.Our school rules are good for us, I will try my best to follow them.Read for structure(文章结构)First , we have to wear our uniforms to go to school.Second , we should keep quiet in the library.Whats more, we ought to retu

8、rn books on time.Third , we must do lots of homework. Structure 谋篇布局谋篇布局-写好篇章结构写好篇章结构 Three-step structure. (Beginning-body-ending)注意时态和人称How to design a complete composition ?Beginning(开头) -开门见山，引出话题引出话题 Body(正文) -围绕围绕话题，详细叙说Ending(结尾) -画龙点睛，首尾呼应首尾呼应Beginning(开头) -开门见山，引出话题引出话题 Good beginning is ha

9、lf done.1.仔细审题，提炼和归纳主题句2. 开头经典句型：1.- - - is important for us. What should we do to - - -?2. Many people say that - - -. But I dont think so.3.As we know, - - -becomes more and more - - -. As we know, - is a good / bad habit. As we know, - is good / bad for our health.4.I want to be a -.What should I

10、 do to be a -? - - -Make a topic sentence1. Keep Healthy2.Smoking3. To be a good studentIn a word,- - -In short,- - -Lets try our best - - -I believe if we can - - - ,- - -will be-Ending(结尾) -画龙点睛，首尾呼应首尾呼应1.与开头呼应，再次重申自己的观点，注意避免重复句式。2.结尾经典词组、句型：Make a concluding sentence1. Keeping healthy2. Smoking3.

11、 To be a good studentWriting practice 为参与我市当前开展的为参与我市当前开展的“与祖国共成长与祖国共成长,争当四好少年争当四好少年”活动活动,你校英语报你校英语报“School Times” 举办举办 “How to be a good student ?”英语征文比赛英语征文比赛,请你用英语写一篇小短文。请你用英语写一篇小短文。 要求：要求：1.根据以下提示，适当发挥。根据以下提示，适当发挥。 2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名。文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名。 3. 词数词数80左右。左右。 work hardStudy - politeBeh

12、avior- sportsOthers- Lets have a try.Prepare the materials. 准备素材 How to be a good student ?Study - word hard，-Behavior - polite， -Others - sports，- Body(正文)Pre-writingfinish our homework on time, listen to the teacher carefully,write down the notes in class,review the lessons after class, preview th

13、e lessons before class, -obey the rules, help each other, never throw rubbish here and there,keep quiet in public, get along well with classmates, -keep healthy,take part in the outdoor activities-为参与我市当前开展的为参与我市当前开展的“与祖国共成长，争当四好少年与祖国共成长，争当四好少年”活动，你校英语报活动，你校英语报“School Times” 举办举办 “How to be a good s

14、tudent ?”英语征文比赛，请你用英语写一篇小短文。英语征文比赛，请你用英语写一篇小短文。要求：要求：1.根据以下提示，适当发挥。根据以下提示，适当发挥。 2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名。文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名。 3. 词数词数80左右。左右。How to be a good student ?Beginning: _Body: _Ending: _Writing practice Structure 谋篇布局谋篇布局-写好篇章结构写好篇章结构 Three-step structure. (Beginning-body-ending)注意时态和人称How to design a complete composition ?Beginning(开头) -开门见山，引出话题引出话题 Body(正文) -围绕围绕话题，详细叙说Ending(结尾) -画龙点睛，首尾呼应首尾呼应Write a passage about How to Deal with Difficulties in Learning 书面表达: