云南省中考英语复习 第三部分 重难题型精讲 题型六 书面表达课件

1、1 2 “审审”即审题。具体包括以下四方面：即审题。具体包括以下四方面：1. 审文体。审清题干要求用什么文体，审文体。审清题干要求用什么文体， 是说是说明文、记叙文还是议论文。明文、记叙文还是议论文。2. 审要求。认真阅读题干所提供的信息、词审要求。认真阅读题干所提供的信息、词汇和要求。如：信息包括哪些内容要点、文汇和要求。如：信息包括哪些内容要点、文章的词数、是否要隐瞒个人信息等。章的词数、是否要隐瞒个人信息等。3. 审人称。要弄清楚书面表达要求用何种人审人称。要弄清楚书面表达要求用何种人称，称， 是第一人称、第二人称还是第三人称。是第一人称、第二人称还是第三人称。解题方法与技解题方法与技巧

2、巧一、一、审审34. 定时态。一般来说，定时态。一般来说， 故事性文章用过去故事性文章用过去时，时， 其中表达感受时可用现在时；说明性其中表达感受时可用现在时；说明性或议论性文章一般用现在时；谈论理想和或议论性文章一般用现在时；谈论理想和未来打算的文章用将来时。未来打算的文章用将来时。4 “列列”即列提纲。根据题目所提供的信息即列提纲。根据题目所提供的信息， 用简单的句子或短语列出文章要点，用简单的句子或短语列出文章要点， 来确定文章的框架，来确定文章的框架， 但须确保要点无遗漏但须确保要点无遗漏。二、二、列列5 “扩扩”即扩写句子。它是在主干的基础即扩写句子。它是在主干的基础上添枝加叶，上添

3、枝加叶， 也就是说，也就是说， 根据表达的需根据表达的需要添加上定语、状语、补语等修饰及说要添加上定语、状语、补语等修饰及说明成分；也可适当使用复合句，明成分；也可适当使用复合句， 如：宾如：宾语从句、定语从句及状语从句等语从句、定语从句及状语从句等,使句子使句子的意思更具体形象、的意思更具体形象、 充实丰满。充实丰满。三、扩三、扩6 “连连”即连句成文。为了使句子或段落语即连句成文。为了使句子或段落语义连贯，义连贯， 表达合理准确，表达合理准确， 可以适当加入可以适当加入一些连接词。一些连接词。常用的连接词有常用的连接词有:表示并列或递进：表示并列或递进：bothand, whats mor

4、e, not only but also表示转折：表示转折：but, however, otherwise, yet, while表示因果表示因果:because, as a result, because of表示条件：表示条件：if, unless四、四、连连7表示对比：表示对比：on one handon the other hand.表示解释：表示解释：for instance, such as, in other words 表示顺序：表示顺序：to begin with, first of all, finally, in the end表示强调表示强调: actually, af

5、ter all, in fact表示结论表示结论: all in all, in a word, in my opinion8 “美美”即美化文章。为了使文章优美，我们即美化文章。为了使文章优美，我们可以这样：可以这样：1. 正确使用修饰词、连接词、高级词汇或正确使用修饰词、连接词、高级词汇或12个复合句，如：定语从句、宾语从句、状语个复合句，如：定语从句、宾语从句、状语从句等。对于连接词，相较于常见的从句等。对于连接词，相较于常见的first, second, third等，等， 使用使用to begin with, whats more, at last, finally等高级词汇和短语，

6、往往等高级词汇和短语，往往会提高作文的档次，赢得阅卷老师的青睐。会提高作文的档次，赢得阅卷老师的青睐。五、美五、美92. 不同程度的考生应有不同的写作要求。不同程度的考生应有不同的写作要求。基础较薄弱的考生，多用一些课本上的基基础较薄弱的考生，多用一些课本上的基本句型；而对于基础比较好的考生，则可本句型；而对于基础比较好的考生，则可使用比较复杂的句型或常见谚语、俗语等使用比较复杂的句型或常见谚语、俗语等，这样可以达到锦上添花的效果。，这样可以达到锦上添花的效果。3. 检查语法、单词拼写及大小写是否正确检查语法、单词拼写及大小写是否正确，表达是否地道，表达是否地道， 篇章是否连贯，标点符篇章是否

7、连贯，标点符号是否使用正确。号是否使用正确。10 书写要工整、美观、规范，书写要工整、美观、规范， 并且卷面须并且卷面须整洁，整洁， 尽量不做任何涂改。书写英文单词时尽量不做任何涂改。书写英文单词时，英文字母不要压到答题线。，英文字母不要压到答题线。六、六、抄抄11类型一类型一写人叙写人叙事事类别剖类别剖析析12话题剖析话题剖析 写人叙事是近写人叙事是近5年云南中考书面表达的高频命题点，共考年云南中考书面表达的高频命题点，共考查了查了9次，其中省卷考查了次，其中省卷考查了4次，昆明考查了次，昆明考查了4次，曲靖考查次，曲靖考查了了1次。昆明的设题形式为二选一，云南和曲靖每年各设题次。昆明的设题

8、形式为二选一，云南和曲靖每年各设题1道，考查角度包括叙述自己特别的一天、初中的学习生活、道，考查角度包括叙述自己特别的一天、初中的学习生活、与某人一起成长、自己的谈话交流、快乐时光等等。文章大与某人一起成长、自己的谈话交流、快乐时光等等。文章大多以一般过去时和第一人称为主。一般会给出一段中文背景多以一般过去时和第一人称为主。一般会给出一段中文背景提示和提示和2点写作要求。点写作要求。131. At the age of six, he/she began to.2. I will never forget.3. I still remember the day.4. The most inte

9、resting thing is that.5. What I admire most about her is.6. My/His/Her name is .147. He/She is +基数词基数词+years old. He/She was born in/on+时间时间/地点地点.8. He/She comes/is from+地点名词地点名词.9. He/She is 1.70 meters tall and weighs 52 kilos.10. He/She has long/black.(修饰词修饰词)+hair(外貌特征外貌特征).11. He/She is outgoin

10、g/friendly(性格特征性格特征). 12. He/She likes/loves/prefers/is interested in/is good at playing basketball.(兴趣爱好兴趣爱好).1513. You cant imagine how happy I am!14. I kept practicing and never gave up.15. What an unforgettable thing it is in my life!16. Thank you very much for everything youve done for me.17. I

11、 have never expressed my thanks and respect to you. 18. I think we should do our best to help people who need help.16典例剖析典例剖析A True Self提示：英语课上，同学们以提示：英语课上，同学们以“真实的自我真实的自我”为主题展开了激为主题展开了激 烈的讨论。每个人都有两面性，能在不同的场合表现出烈的讨论。每个人都有两面性，能在不同的场合表现出 不同的状态。请以不同的状态。请以“A True Self”为题，用英语写一篇短为题，用英语写一篇短 文，介绍你自己。文，介绍你自

12、己。要求：要求：1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；个； 2.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。（2017河北改编）河北改编）171. 文体：本文要求介绍自己，文体为说明文；文体：本文要求介绍自己，文体为说明文；2. 时态：文章要求介绍自己的相关信息，主要用一般时态：文章要求介绍自己的相关信息，主要用一般现在时，若涉及将来的相关信息，则应用一般将来现在时，若涉及将来的相关信息，则应用一般将来时；若涉及过去的相关信息，应用一般过去时，注时；若涉及过去的相关信息，应用一般过去时，注意时态的交错

13、转换；意时态的交错转换；3. 人称：本文要求写一篇自我介绍，应用第一人称；人称：本文要求写一篇自我介绍，应用第一人称；4. 写作要点：写作要点：开门见山介绍自己；开门见山介绍自己；介绍如何提高介绍如何提高自己；自己；介绍自己的优点；介绍自己的优点；5. 词数：不少于词数：不少于60词，不得出现真实姓名、校名。词，不得出现真实姓名、校名。审题指导18A True Self Im a kind and helpful person. When I think back what Ive done before, I should help my parents do more housework.

14、 It is good for my future life by doing housework.When I meet something difficult, I like to think about the ways to solve them. I always help others. I can sing and dance well and I often give performances at our school party. I like to make friends and share something good with others. Reading and

15、 taking exercise are my favorite. Do you want to make friends with me?普通习作191. It is good for my future life by doing housework. (用动名词短语作主语改写句子）用动名词短语作主语改写句子）_句子升格Doing housework is good for my future life.202. When I meet something difficult, I like to think about the ways to solve them. （用（用face w

16、ith改写句子）改写句子）_3. I can sing and dance well and I often give performances at our school party. (用用sothat改写句子）改写句子）_When I face with something difficult, I like to think about the ways to solve them.I can sing and dance so well that I often giveperformances at our school party.21范文升格A True Self Im a k

17、ind and helpful person. When I think back what Ive done before, I should help my parents do more housework. Doing housework is good for my future life. Faced with something difficult, I like to think about the ways to solve them. I always help others. I can sing and dance well so that I often give p

18、erformances at our school party. I like to make friends and share something good with others. Reading and taking exercise are my favorite. Do you want to make friends with me?22_Is Always with Me提示：在我们日渐变化的生活中，总有某个人或某个东西一直提示：在我们日渐变化的生活中，总有某个人或某个东西一直 陪在我们身边，埋藏在我们心里，在我们需要的时候及时出陪在我们身边，埋藏在我们心里，在我们需要的时候及

19、时出现，陪伴着我们一起成长。请以现，陪伴着我们一起成长。请以“ Is Always with Me”为题为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈这个人或者东西陪伴你的经历，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈这个人或者东西陪伴你的经历，分享一下你的想法和感受。分享一下你的想法和感受。要求：要求：1. 请把题目补充完整；请把题目补充完整； 2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；个； 3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。写作练兵写作练兵23My Mom Is Always with Me My mom loves me

20、 very much. She is the best mother in my heart because shes always with me whenever I need help.I once took part in an English speech contest and prepared a lot for it. Unfortunately, when I gave my speech on the stage, I was too nervous to speak fluently. I felt really upset after the contest. My m

21、om told me not to lose heart and encouraged me to practice harder. Now my English has improved a lot. And I can speak English with great confidence. My mom always supports me and Ill love her forever.24类型二类型二做法建做法建议议25话题剖析话题剖析 近近5年云南中考考查了年云南中考考查了4次做法建议。如：次做法建议。如：2016年昆年昆明明“Do Small Things Well”，2014

22、年昆明年昆明“Let Me Tell You”2015年曲靖年曲靖“Lets ”，2014年曲靖年曲靖“How I Relax Myself”。261. There are some suggestions that.2. If you follow these ways, I believe you can.3. There is some useful advice about.274. In my opinion, we should.5. Youd better.6. You arent supposed to.7. Lets do.8. I suggest that you have

23、 a rest.9. I totally agree with you.10. Im afraid you cant give it up.2811. I believe we can .12. I wish you can obey the traffic rules.13. Please take action!29典例剖析典例剖析How to Encourage Students to Read More提示：现在很多中学生只注重文化课的学习，而忽略通过课外提示：现在很多中学生只注重文化课的学习，而忽略通过课外阅读去提高自己的文学素养。请以阅读去提高自己的文学素养。请以“How to E

24、ncourage Students to Read More”为题写一篇短文，谈谈应当如何鼓励中学生多读为题写一篇短文，谈谈应当如何鼓励中学生多读书。书。要求：要求：1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；个； 2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。301. 文体：本文是要求介绍如何鼓励中学生多读文体：本文是要求介绍如何鼓励中学生多读书，文体属于说明文；书，文体属于说明文；2. 时态：写作时主要使用一般现在时；时态：写作时主要使用一般现在时；3. 人称：介绍学生们的读书现状用第三人称，人称

25、：介绍学生们的读书现状用第三人称，介绍建议时用第一人称；介绍建议时用第一人称；4. 写作要点：写作要点：介绍学生们的读书现状；介绍学生们的读书现状；给给出读书的建议；出读书的建议；总结作者观点。总结作者观点。5. 词数：不少于词数：不少于60词，不得出现真实人名、校词，不得出现真实人名、校名。名。审题指导31How to Encourage Students to Read More Today, many students only focus on their grades. They usually spend little time on out-of-class reading. I

26、n my opinion, its necessary for students to read books after class. And in order to encourage students to do more reading, here is some advice. First, I think students should make good use of their time at school so that they can have time for reading. Second, reading e-books or second-hand books ca

27、n save their costs. Last but not least, get into a habit of doing one-hour reading every day. All in all, I believe these tips will help a lot if students follow them.普通习作321. They usually spend little time on out-of-class reading.（用（用sparefor改写句子）改写句子）_句子升格They usually spare little time for out-of-

28、class reading.332. Its necessary for students to read books after class.（用不定（用不定式做主语改写句子）式做主语改写句子） _3. I believe these tips will help a lot if students follow them.（用（用make a difference改写句子）改写句子）_To read books after class is necessary for students.I believe these trip will make a difference a lot if

29、 the students follow them.34How to Encourage Students to Read More Today, many students only focus on their grades.They usually spend little time on out-of-class reading. In my opinion, reading books after class is necessary for students.And in order to encourage students to do more reading, here is

30、 some advice. First, I think students should make good use of their time at school so that they can have time for reading. Second, reading e-books or second-hand books can save their costs. Last but not least, get into a habit of doing one-hour reading every day. I believe these tips will make a dif

31、ference if students follow them.范文升格35Save Water提示：水对人类至关重要，但现在水污染变得越来越严重，提示：水对人类至关重要，但现在水污染变得越来越严重，工厂随意把污水排入河流、湖泊中，滥砍滥伐导致森林面积工厂随意把污水排入河流、湖泊中，滥砍滥伐导致森林面积减少，水土流失严重，进一步加重了水资源的短缺，作为中减少，水土流失严重，进一步加重了水资源的短缺，作为中学生的我们，应该怎么办？请以学生的我们，应该怎么办？请以“Save Water”为题写一篇短为题写一篇短文，谈谈你的看法。文，谈谈你的看法。要求：要求：1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不

32、少于语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；个； 2.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。写作练兵写作练兵36Save Water Water is very important to us. But many factories pour polluted water into rivers and lakes. Its bad for the environment. People cut down so many trees that soil and water become less and less. What should

33、we do? Firstly, we should take a shower quickly and turn off the tap in time so that we can save much water. Secondly, we should learn to recycle water as much as possible, for example, after washing our faces, we can use the water to sweep the floor. Finally, we can hold some events or give speeche

34、s to let people know the importance of saving water. Its everyones duty to save water. 37类型三类型三梦想计划梦想计划38 近近5年云南中考针对梦想计划类作文共考查年云南中考针对梦想计划类作文共考查2次，考次，考查角度包括：查角度包括：2014省卷省卷 “My Plan for the Coming School Year”，2016曲靖曲靖“If I Am a(an)_ ”。都是对未来的畅想，要求学生根据自己的想法写一篇都是对未来的畅想，要求学生根据自己的想法写一篇计划类的作文。计划类的作文。话题剖析话题

35、剖析391. I believe my life in future will be.2. He/She wants to be .when he/she grows up.3. If you want to make your dream come true, you should.404. First,.second,.finally,.5. We should/ are supposed to.6. Everyone can .7. intend/plan to do8. be going to do9. decide to do10. determine to do11. determ

36、ine to do12. make up ones mind to do13. How time flies!14. If we can do it as the rules, our dream will come true sooner or later.4115. When I grow up, I want to .16. Im looking forward to .17. I hope we can .18. Where theres a will, theres a way.42典例剖析典例剖析A Plan for How to Achieve My Dream提示：难忘的初中三

37、年生活即将结束，开学后同学们将进入人提示：难忘的初中三年生活即将结束，开学后同学们将进入人生的另一个阶段生的另一个阶段,踏入梦想开始的地方踏入梦想开始的地方高中，相信大家都已高中，相信大家都已经提前制定好了学习计划，为实现目标和理想而奋斗，请以经提前制定好了学习计划，为实现目标和理想而奋斗，请以“A Plan for How to Achieve My Dream”为题，写一篇英文短文。为题，写一篇英文短文。要求：要求：1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；个； 2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，

38、否则以零分计。431. 文体：根据提示内容可知本文要求介绍实现梦想的计划，文体：根据提示内容可知本文要求介绍实现梦想的计划，因此文章为说明文；因此文章为说明文；2. 时态：以一般将来时态为主；时态：以一般将来时态为主；3. 人称：全文都会写我的梦想相关内容，人称应该为第一人人称：全文都会写我的梦想相关内容，人称应该为第一人称；称；4. 写作要点：本文适合三段式写法，写作要点：本文适合三段式写法，介绍自己的目标和理介绍自己的目标和理想是什么；想是什么；介绍如何实现这个目标或者理想；介绍如何实现这个目标或者理想；总结；总结；5. 词数：不少于词数：不少于60词，不得出现真实姓名、校名。词，不得出现

39、真实姓名、校名。审题指导44A Plan for How to Achieve My Dream Soon I will say goodbye to my middle school life and become a high school student. My dream is to enter a famous university. So I have made a plan for my future. First, I will work hard at all my subjects. Second, I will try my best to help my classma

40、tes. I think I can get on well with all of them. Third, I will take part in different kinds of activities and take more exercise to keep healthy. I am sure I will make greater progress in high school. Where theres a will, theres a way. As long as I stick to my dream, I will achieve it one day.普通习作45

41、1. Second, I will try my best to help my classmates.（用（用as much as possible改写句子）改写句子）_句子升格Second, I will help my classmates as much as possible.462. As long as I stick to my dream, I will achieve it one day. （用（用be sure和和come true改写句子）改写句子）_As long as I stick to my dream, it is sure to cometrue one

42、day._47 A plan for How to Achieve My Dream Soon I will say goodbye to my middle school life and become a high school student. My dream is to enter a famous university. So I have made a plan for my future. First, I will work hard at all my subjects. Second, I will help my classmates as much as possib

43、le. I think I can get on well with all of them. Third, I will take part in different kinds of activities and take more exercise to keep healthy. I am sure I will make greater progress in high school. Where theres a will, theres a way. As long as I stick to my dream, it is sure to come true one day.范

44、文升格48My Weekend Plan 周末是我们在繁忙的学习后放松的时间，一次野营，或是一次周末是我们在繁忙的学习后放松的时间，一次野营，或是一次聚会聚会这些都会让我们感到惬意，忘掉周内的疲惫。请你以这些都会让我们感到惬意，忘掉周内的疲惫。请你以“My Weekend Plan”为题写一篇英语短文，与同学们分享自己的为题写一篇英语短文，与同学们分享自己的周末计划。周末计划。要求：要求：1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；个； 2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。写作练兵写作练兵4

45、9My Weekend Plan The weekend is coming. Heres my plan for the weekend. On Saturday morning, Im going to watch TV to relax myself after a long weeks study. I like watching comedies and cartoons. On Saturday afternoon, Im going to a bookstore to buy some books. Reading is one of my hobbies. On Sunday,

46、 Im going to visit my grandparents because I miss them very much. Ill help them do some housework. After I come back, Ill do my homework to get ready for the next week. I am sure that I will have a wonderful weekend with this plan.50类型四类型四说明介绍说明介绍51 近近5年云南中考针对说明介绍类作文考查了年云南中考针对说明介绍类作文考查了2次，考次，考查角度包括：

47、查角度包括：2016昆明昆明“I Love ”和和2015昆明昆明“A Wonderful” ,昆明都是以半命题的形式来考查，学生可选择自己擅长的题昆明都是以半命题的形式来考查，学生可选择自己擅长的题材来写。材来写。话题剖析话题剖析521. As far as I know, it .2. Studies show that.3. I used to .4. Nowadays, more and more people pay more attention to.5. Id like to tell you something about.6. Everything has two sides

48、.It has both advantages and disadvantages.537. Nowadays, it is generally/commonly believed that., but I wonder that.8. My favorite season is.9. Let me introduce. 10. One of the most important things is.11. Man is now facing a big problem. which is becoming more and more serious.5412. People used to.

49、however, things are quite different today.13. In short, we must work hard to make the world a better place.55典例剖析典例剖析My Friends Like the Different Music提示：音乐是沟通的桥梁，是心灵的纽带和梦想的承载，因此提示：音乐是沟通的桥梁，是心灵的纽带和梦想的承载，因此很多人都喜欢听音乐，但是不同的人喜爱的音乐风格和种类也很多人都喜欢听音乐，但是不同的人喜爱的音乐风格和种类也不尽相同。介绍你的几个朋友喜欢的音乐种类及理由。请以不尽相同。介绍你的几个朋友喜

50、欢的音乐种类及理由。请以“My Friends Like the Different Music”为题写一篇文章。为题写一篇文章。要求：要求：1. 语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁，词数不少于语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；个； 2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。561.文体：本文要求介绍朋友喜欢的音乐，故文体为说明文；文体：本文要求介绍朋友喜欢的音乐，故文体为说明文；2. 时态：介绍朋友喜欢的音乐时，叙述现在的事情时用一般现时态：介绍朋友喜欢的音乐时，叙述现在的事情时用一般现在时，叙述过去的事情时用一般过去时；在时，叙述过去

51、的事情时用一般过去时；3. 人称：文中介绍几位朋友喜欢的音乐，以第三人称为主；人称：文中介绍几位朋友喜欢的音乐，以第三人称为主；4. 写作要求：写作要求：点明主题不同的人喜欢的不同音乐；点明主题不同的人喜欢的不同音乐；介绍几介绍几位朋友喜欢不同的音乐；位朋友喜欢不同的音乐；总结。总结。5. 词数：不少于词数：不少于60词，不得出现真实姓名、校名。词，不得出现真实姓名、校名。审题指导57My Friends Like Different Music Music is important in our life. And different people enjoy different music

52、. Now I will introduce some of my friends and their favorite music. Li Hua likes music that she can dance to, so she likes pop music very much. And Wang Lihong is her favorite singer. Zhang Ming likes jazz music, because he thinks it is a kind of music that is very cool. Tang Shan is an outgoing gir

53、l. She likes rock music because it is very exciting. 普通习作58Her favorite singer is Wang Feng, because she likes singers who write their own songs. His wonderful lyrics often make her think a lot. Zhao Tian is a quiet girl. She likes listening to soft music that can make her relaxed. In a word, music

54、really makes our life beautiful.591. Music is important in our life.（用（用play.part改写句子）改写句子）_句子升格Music plays an important part in our life.602. His wonderful lyrics often makes her think a lot.（用定语从（用定语从句改写句子）句改写句子） _3. In a word, music really makes our life beautiful.（用（用enrich改改写句子）写句子）_The wonderful lyrics that he wrote of