广东高考读写任务英语作文训练Word版

1、如何写好“读写任务”第二部分写作（学案）I. 如何写出吸引改卷老师眼球的好句？1. I followed your advice. I went to the supermarket. There I found four chairs. They were in good shape. They were reasonably priced.使用分词和定语从句合并上述句子：_ your advice, I went to the supermarket _.2. The cat walked slowly through the grass. The cat was watching the

2、 mouse the whole time.使用现在分词合并：_, the cat walked slowly through the grass. 3. The gold was hidden under the ground. It was safe for many years.使用过去分词合并：_, the gold was safe for many years.练习：1.Tom was waiting in the queue for half an hour. He suddenly realized that he had left his wallet at home._2.

3、The two students were lost in the mountains for a week. They were finally saved by the local police. _4. 使用定语从句或形容词修饰名词或代词。1）The house has been turned into an apartment. I was born in the house._2）You will have a room in my house. The room is very comfortable. In this room, you will find many things

4、. The things are quite necessary for daily life.方法一(使用2个定语从句)：You will have a room in my house, _and _ you can find many things that are necessary for daily life.方法二：（用形容词代替其中一个定语从句，让句子简练）You will have a _ room in my house, _you can find all the necessary things for daily life.5. 使用介词短语合并（with +O; w

5、ith+O+OC）The fire is burning, so I feel warm. _, I feel warm.I lost my bike, so I had to walk home. _, I had to walk home.2 / 12II. 如何写漂亮读写任务第二部分写作？牢记：好的段落是well-connected, clear, economical, tight。1. 平时训练要求1) 书写卷面训练：卷面书写给评卷老师的第一印象非常重要，也是作文能拿到高分的第一道门槛，所谓 “印象分”。在高考作文备考过程中，要特别注意书写训练,切忌书写不清、涂涂抹抹。具体要求如下：

6、（1）用纯黑色或颜色均匀的签字笔或钢笔；（2）贴底线书写，保持字母大小基本一致，字母主体部分占行线约一半大小为宜；（3）保持单词间距基本一致，一般为两个字母的位置；（4）错词只用一条横线或斜线划掉，尽量不重复涂写同一字母或单词；（5）每段前空格约4个字母的位置。（3个或5个字母）2） 避开抄袭陷阱：高水平的“抄袭”其实不是抄袭而是改写，是利用原文的信息内容、词汇和句子结构，通过词汇替换和句型转换等手段进行改写。这也正是“读写任务”这种题型所要考查考生是否掌握的写作技能。3） 整篇作文是一个整体，内容要合理安排，语义要连贯，各段之间过渡、衔接要自然，避免对内容要点一问一答式的写作。2.各段之间过

7、渡、衔接常用句型：What a touching story, which reminds me of多么感人的故事呀，该故事使我想起例如：Sams experience reminds me of my similar experience happening four years ago when I was admitted to senior high school. Sam的经历让我想起了四年前我上高中时发生的类似经历。I was deeply touched when I read your letter. Its the first time that I have realiz

8、ed your deepest love for me. 读完您的信后，我很感动，我第一次感受到你对我深深的爱。But in the meantime, I am looking forward to my new life in the college.但同时，我又期盼着大学生活。However, life is like a box of chocolate and youll never know whats inside until you open it. 然而人生就像一盒巧克力，直到你打开时，才知道里面是什么口味。I will be absolutely able to adjus

9、t the differences in a short time. 我绝对能够很快适应两者的不同。解题指导：近6年的读写任务第二部分写作都是三个内容要点，三个要点内在的逻辑顺序已经安排好，无须考生重新组织。而且，写作内容要点明确，有时候相当于三个问答题，把三个问题回答好就完成任务了。每一段写一个内容要点，这样让评卷老师清清楚楚地知道你已经完成了三个写作内容任务。每一段都由一个主题句（a topic sentence）和2句或3句拓展句组成。 3.主题句的6种常用写法: 1.直接回答要点。写作要点是询问考生的看法时，对提问直接作出回答。假如你处在那些动物的处境,你会有什么反应？ （2009广东

10、高考读写任务要点2）If I were an animal in the wildlife park, I could feel annoyed when people keep photographing me.练习：你理想中的大学生活是什么样的？（2008年广东高考读写任务要点2）_常用词语：In my opinion /in my eyes / as for me / as far as I am concerned/ It is my personal belief that2.表明立场。 明确表示对某观点支持、赞同或反对。你认为是否应该禁止游客和动物拍照。 (2009年广东高考读写任

11、务要点3) I believe that taking photos with animals should be banned.练习：你对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的看法。 (2010年广东高考读写任务要点1) _表示支持或赞同的常用句型：I agree with the statement that ； I am in favor of ； I appreciate that.; I approve of the idea that; I believe that ; I agree with what the writer said/says.表示反对或不赞同的句型：I disagree wit

12、h the idea that; I am opposed to the idea that ; I disapprove of the idea that; In some way, I agree with but; What the writer said sounds reasonable, but I 3.重述要点。不直接回答写作要点，而是翻译要点作为段落主题句。中学生活和大学生活的差别，以及你打算如何适应。.（2008年广东高考读写任务要点3） As we all know, college is widely different from middle school. 想家给学习

13、和生活带来的影响。（2011年广东高考读写任务要点2）Owing to feeling homesick too much, I couldnt get accustomed to the school life and couldnt pay attention to my study. 练习：在生活中谅解他人有何重要意义。_常用词语：play an important role/part in在中 扮演重要角色; do harm to = be harmful to 对有害；Its beneficial / vital/ necessary for sb. to do sth. 对某人来说

14、做某事很有帮助/重要/必要have a bad/good influence/effect = affect negatively/positively 影响不好/好; have a close relation /connection with.= be associated with closely= be connected withclosely和有密切联系set a wonderful example to sb. 给某人树立一个好榜样cultivated my interest in培养我对的兴趣；show more and more enthusiasm in对表现出越来越多的兴

15、趣= show a keen interest in4.总述原因 你支持青少年的秘密应该与父母分享的理由是什么？I insist that teenagers secrets should be shared with their parents for reasons as follows. 练习：使我们生活发生变化有哪些原因？ _常用句型：There are several reasons that contribute to的原因有多种= Reasons for this are varied.The reasons for this are obvious的原因显而易见 for rea

16、sons as follows的原因如下The reason why is that5.引出建议、方法、措施、步骤等如何才能获得快乐？We should find some effective ways to make ourselves happy.你（或你朋友）是如何应对日常生活中的冲突的？（2013佛山一模）It is very important not to respond to anger with anger in our daily life.你认为怎样才能更好地鼓励孩子学习。（2010年广东高考读写任务要点3）In my opinion, schools and parent

17、s are supposed to educate their kids through teaching them to study for their family and their motherland rather than giving them money.练习：说说人们对环境保护所采取的措施。 _常用句型：We are supposed to take some effective measures.We should try our best to overcome/conquer the difficulties.We are inquired to solve the p

18、roblems that we are faced with.It is necessary that proper actions/ steps should be taken to end the phenomenon.6.引出经历。用来引出记叙文的具体事例。简述你经历过的一次困难或考验。It reminds me of my own experience when 讲述一次你（或你朋友）发生冲突的时间、地点和起因（2013佛山一模）I had once 曾经 experienced an embarrassing conflict with my classmate last year.

19、 It was raining heavily outside and the classroom was a bit crowded. 常用句型：It reminds me of the time whenIt reminds me of an accident which happened several days ago.After reading the story above, I recall the experience of my friend whoThe story above reminds me of one of my experiencesWhat a touchi

20、ng story, which reminds me ofSams experience reminds me of my similar experience happening four years ago when I was admitted to senior high school.4.拓展句的四种常用写法：1）列举：12点如：列举学校里的浪费现象 We could see such kind of small things around us every day. (主题句) 要点：教室时；吃饭时；吃完时For example, when we leave the classro

21、om, we just ignore the lights and computers and leave them on; when we have dinners, we often use the throwaway chopsticks and plastic bags; when we finish some drinks and food, we throw the leftover very casually. (拓展句) 如：作为中学生，我们应该如何配合老师批改作业？（8校联考卷）Whats more, teachers check over our assignments e

22、very day, which is a good bridge for us to communicate with each other.（主题句）要点：在错误中学习；得到鼓励从而取得进步；要尊重老师的劳动成果。 In this case we can learn from our errors, get encouragement and make progress in our study. So we will respect our teachers hard work, no matter whether they use red pens or not.2). 递进：not o

23、nly.but also.moreover 如：就“互联网给人们生活带来的影响”发表自己的观点 Surfing the Internet brings people more benefits. (主题句) 要点：提供最新信息；改变交流方式；网上购物，方便快捷。The Internet not only provides people with amounts of latest information, but also changes the way people communicate with each other. Besides, the Internet enables peop

24、le to go shopping at home easily and conveniently. (拓展句)3). 对比：for one thing正面原因；for another反面原因 如：你是否支持该校长暂停表现不好的学生上学。 I believe the headmaster is right to suspend those misbehaving students class. (主题句) 要点：一方面，他们待在教室会；另一方面，不待在教室会For one thing, if these misbehaving students are allowed to stay in c

25、lass, they will negatively affect other students learning. For another, if they are removed from the class, not only the others can learn in peace, but they also can have time to learn their lessons and then behave better when they return.(拓展句)如：简述老师用红笔批改学生作业的利与弊；（八校联考卷）Generally speaking, most teac

26、hers mark corrections or grade students papers in red pens. （主题句）要点：有人认为用红笔会；但是，也有人认为用红笔可以Some people think it may make students anxious thus blaming their teachers. However some people think it can attract students attention. 4. 类似故事或经历故事归纳 如：就“如何看待外貌”的主题发表看法 What makes a person beautiful is his at

27、tractive personality rather than his physical appearance.(主题句) 要点：举例：某某同学In one of my previous classes, there was a beautiful girl named Lucy who had almost a perfect face and slim figure. She treated her beauty in a matter-of-fact way and she was nice to everyone. Her personality was mostly accepte

28、d by others and it made her an outstanding beauty. (拓展句)要写好举例论证文章的例子，需注意两点：抓住要素，突出要素1.引述事例时要突出能够证明中心论点的部位,可用一定笔墨进行渲染(如: She treated her beauty in a matter-of-fact wayHer personality was mostly accepted by others)2. 除必要的交代外，删去与论证无关或关系不大的内容.确定事例的建议步骤：1、确定例子前先确定论点；2、抓住论点的要素；3、寻找与论点有共同要素的例子；4、确定例子。下面有三篇

29、均以海伦.凯勒故事为中心的例子，如果你要写一篇论点为“Efforts are the most important thing to help you achieve success.”的文章，你会选择哪个例子呢？为什么？1） The example of Helen Keller best supports the view. Helen Keller was born deaf and blind before she learned to speak. She had little real understanding of the world around her. Fortunate

30、ly, she had a good teacher and her teacher helped her speak. At last, she could speak normally and gave her help to people who liked her. 2） The example of Helen Keller best supports the view. Helen Keller was born deaf and blind before she learned to speak. She had little real understanding of the

31、world around her. Nevertheless, she made every effort to learn to speak and write. With a great deal of persistence, she finally became a writer and lecturer, who also became an inspiration to all.3) The example of Helen Keller best supports the view. Helen Keller was born deaf and blind before she

32、learned to speak. She had little real understanding of the world around her, certainly nothing to give her self-confidence. Nevertheless, she believed she could conquer all the difficulties. With this faith, she finally became a writer and lecturer, also an inspiration to all.小试牛刀：2013年广东省高考英语读写任务第二

33、节 读写任务（共1小题；满分25分）阅读下面短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文 To many people even the word “work” sounds unpleasant ,not necessarily because they are lazy. The same man, who dislikes his job in the factory or even in the office, may work hard at the weekend, painting the house or digging the garden. What is the rea

34、son ,then？In most cases, it is because these people simply do not enjoy the job they are doing. It does not give them any real satisfaction. It may be quite easy, like making up wooden boxes, but it is very boring. Very often they are doing a job which is just a small part of a much larger one, such as attaching a door handle to a car.