英语观点对比类作文写作分析

1、 观点对比类作文观点对比类作文 写作技巧写作技巧 高三英语写作高三英语写作-How to write -How to write an argumentationan argumentation（议论文）（议论文）词汇词汇,句型句型 , 语法多样化语法多样化 1.覆盖了所有的覆盖了所有的要点要点 2. 应用了较多的语法结构应用了较多的语法结构和词汇和词汇 3. 有效地使用了语句间的有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑连接成分，使全文结构紧凑要要点点全全连连接接词词1.(因为因为)_ his help, I finished the work at last.Thanks toAs a

2、result ofOwing to Due to 因为因为Because of /with2.More roads will have to be built with more cars, _（所以）（所以）well have less field to grow rice. thereforeSo as a result/consequence thus 结果结果3.The rent is reasonable, _, the location is perfect. 房租很合理，另外，位置也很好。房租很合理，另外，位置也很好。whats moremoreover/furthermorei

3、n addition besides 另外另外(递进）递进）4. The young man didnt enjoy his old job. _(相反相反 ) he finds the new job very interesting. On the contrary,However,转折转折But/yet/while5. _(总之总之), we should make good use of computer.In generalIn a word/all in all总结总结In short/briefGenerally speaking6._( (我认为我认为) ) , student

4、s had better not buy a cellphone.we should spend time and money on other more important things.As far as Im concernedIn my opinion/its my opinion that个人个人观点观点I think/believe the structure of the article topic sentence for the opinion against the opinionending sentence 介绍讨论的主题介绍讨论的主题(开头句开头句)：1.我们举行了一

5、场讨论我们举行了一场讨论/调查，讨论内容是调查，讨论内容是Recently we had a heated discussion on/aboutWe had a discussion/survey onAccroding to a recent survey, There is much discussion today about2. 当说到当说到 时时When it comes to ，3. 问题引起了越来越多的关注问题引起了越来越多的关注The topic of is becoming more and more popular recently.There is a widespre

6、ad concern over the issue thatnOpinions are divided on this issue.nOpinions are mainly divided into two groups.nDifferent people, however, hold/have different opinions on this matter. nDifferent people, however, think quite differently on this matter. nPeople, however, differ in their opinions on th

7、is matter.nPeople, have taken/adopted different attitudes towards this matter.过渡句过渡句介绍正方观点：介绍正方观点：nSome people agree with/approve/support the opinion/decision/idea/view thatnSome of them hold the opinion/view thatnMost of then are in favor of the idea thatnPeople who are for the idea think thatnThos

8、e who support it think thatnSixty percent of the students are for the idea.nSupporters think/believe that介绍反方观点介绍反方观点nHowever/But/On the contrary/In contrast/ On contrast/On the other hand/, others are opposed to /are against/disagree with the opinion.nPeople who are against it dont think so.nHoweve

9、r, of them hold a different view.nDifferent from those, people thinkn of the students think thatnHowever, others have different opinions.nOthers argue that idea, in their opinion, they think/believe that.进一步介绍进一步介绍 观点观点nWhats morenFurthermore/moreover,.nMeanwhile,nWhats worsenIn addition, nBesides,

10、nPlus, nFirst, Second, Third, 总结句总结句(未达成一致未达成一致)nIn short, no agreement has been reached yet.nSo far, no agreement has been reached. nIn short, the students have not arrived at any agreement yet. 本人观点：本人观点：As far as I am concerned, In my opinion, From my point of view,Personally,For me,Its my opinio

11、n that, because/the reason is that/for one thing,. for another thing,.I think.I firmly supportthe view that Im for the first/second view.对比类写作对比类写作 实战模版实战模版 过渡句过渡句观点一观点一论据一论据一论据二论据二论据三论据三观点二观点二论据一论据一论据二论据二总结总结可以看出，这类文章的写作，首先要提出问题，可以看出，这类文章的写作，首先要提出问题，即双方讨论的问题。接下来提出即双方讨论的问题。接下来提出观点一观点一(支持支持)，并用一系列并用一

12、系列论据论据进行阐明。说明完观点一之后，进行阐明。说明完观点一之后，再提出再提出观点二（反对）观点二（反对），继续用论据进行说明。，继续用论据进行说明。最后总结自己的观点。最后总结自己的观点。你班同学组织了一场讨论。主题是：城市是否你班同学组织了一场讨论。主题是：城市是否可以养宠物。请根据以下信息，介绍讨论情况可以养宠物。请根据以下信息，介绍讨论情况，并说明自己的观点和建议。，并说明自己的观点和建议。Recently we had a heated discussion on whether people should keep pets at home in cities._支持饲养宠物支持

13、饲养宠物反对饲养宠物反对饲养宠物1. 安慰孤寡老人安慰孤寡老人2. 人与动物和谐相处，增添生人与动物和谐相处，增添生活情趣活情趣3. 促进体育锻炼，提供人与人促进体育锻炼，提供人与人交流的机会交流的机会1. 造成环境污染造成环境污染2. 吵闹声，甚至伤人吵闹声，甚至伤人3. 花钱花钱赞成：赞成： 安慰孤寡老人安慰孤寡老人和谐相处，增添生活乐趣和谐相处，增添生活乐趣促进锻炼，提供交流机会促进锻炼，提供交流机会反对：反对：环境污染环境污染噪音，伤人噪音，伤人花费大花费大 my opinionbe bad for environmentmake too much noiseattack people

14、cost a lot of moneyget comfort from pets/get along get on well with animals/make life interesting/keep fit/ communicate with others1. have different views on sth 2. react to sth in different ways.3. differ in their attitudes towards sth.Recently we had a heated discussion on whether people should ke

15、ep pets at home in cities.BeginningconclusionRecently we had a heated discussion on whether people should keep pets at home in cities.nOpinions are divided on this issue. Some of the students think it is a good idea to keep pets because many old people who live alone at home can get more comfort fro

16、m pets. Whats more, getting along well with animals will make our life interesting. People who own pets will have more chances to walk, thus giving them a time to communicate with others.n On the other hand, the other students are against the idea. In their opinions, if too many people keep pets at

17、home, it is bad for the environment. Whats worse, pets may make too much noise and even attack people. In addition, it costs lots of money to keep pets.n In short, they have not arrived at any agreement yet.过渡句过渡句观点一观点一论据一论据一论据二论据二论据三论据三观点二观点二论据一论据一论据二论据二论据三论据三In my opinion, I like animals, so I don

18、t think it is bad to keep pets at home. But we must takesome measures to prevent them from pollutingour environment.总结总结 作文模板作文模板1n _ had a discussion about whether_. Opinions are divided on this issue. _of the students think _ _. Whats more, _. n On the other hand, _ of the students think _. Whats

19、worse, _.n In short, _ have not arrived at any agreement yet.本人观点：本人观点：As far as I am concerned ./(In my opinion, .; Its my opinion that), For one reason,. For another reason In a word,. 模板模板2We had a heated discussion about/on_.Studentsviews/ideas/opinions on it vary/differ from person to person. S

20、ome students say / think / believe that ,However, others hold the view thatAs far as I am concerned, I am in favor of the first/second view/ I would like to ./The reasons are as follows.Firstly, Secondly, In conclusion / In a word ,n模板模板3n There is a widespread concern over the issue that （作文题目）（作文题

21、目）But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. nA majority of people think that _ 观观点一点一_. In their views there are two factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place,原因原因一一.Furthermore, in the second place, 原原因二因二. So it goes wi

22、thout saying that观观点一点一. People,however,differintheiropinionsonthismatter.Somepeoplehold the idea that观点二观点二. In their point of view, for one thing，原因一，原因一. For another thing,原因二原因二. Therefore, thereis nodoubtthat观点二观点二_. As far as I am concerned, Ifirmlysupporttheviewthat观点一或二观点一或二.Itis not only be

23、cause _, but also because _. n对比观点题型 n（1） 要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。1 有一些人认为.2 另一些人认为.3 我的看法. The topic of _（主题）is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say _ （观点一）. They hold their view for the reason that _ （支持的理由一）What is more, _理由二). Moreover, _

24、(理由三). n While others think that _(观点二） in the following three reasons. Firstly, _(支持的理由一). Secondly (besides), _ （理由二）. Thirdly (finally), _(理由三). n From my point of view, I think _ （我的观点）. The reason is that _(原因). The topic of using cell phones in school is becoming more and more popular recently

25、. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say cell phones can do good to us students. They hold their view for the reason that cell phones can be used to help us keep in touch with others.What is more, they can help us when we are in danger. n While others think that cell phones can do

26、 harm to us students in the following reasons. Firstly, we would spend too much time on them and affect our study. Secondly, they can destroy our body health. n From my point of view, I think we should not use cell phones in school. The reason is that as students, we should pay more attention to stu

27、dy. 最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票？请你根据下表提供讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票？请你根据下表提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。注意：注意：1、信的开头已为你写好。、信的开头已为你写好。 2、词数：、词数：100左右。左右。 3、参考词汇：门票：、参考词汇：门票：entrance feeDear Editor,Im writing to tell you about the discussion weve had about whether

28、 an entrance fee should be charged for parks.60%的同学认为的同学认为40%的同学认为的同学认为1、不应收门票、不应收门票2、公园是公众休闲的地方、公园是公众休闲的地方3、如收票，需建大门、围墙，、如收票，需建大门、围墙， 会影响城市形象会影响城市形象1、应收门票，但票价不宜高、应收门票，但票价不宜高2、支付园林工人工资、支付园林工人工资3、购新花木、购新花木2002年高考题范文年高考题范文Dear Editor, Im writing to tell you about the discussion weve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks(提出问题提出问题). Opinions are divided on the question. 60of the students are against the idea of entrance fee. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People n