关于书面表达的探讨

1、2 2015015高考备考书面表达高考备考书面表达【考纲解读考纲解读】 书面表达是一个高度综合性的题目，旨在书面表达是一个高度综合性的题目，旨在考查考生的英语表达能力，看其是否能够运用考查考生的英语表达能力，看其是否能够运用所学的英语知识和掌握的技能进行思想交流。所学的英语知识和掌握的技能进行思想交流。该题要求考生根据所给图表、提纲等，应用所该题要求考生根据所给图表、提纲等，应用所学知识将所提示的信息组成行文连贯、文理畅学知识将所提示的信息组成行文连贯、文理畅通、语言得体的文章。它不但要求考生有丰富通、语言得体的文章。它不但要求考生有丰富的的语言语法知识语言语法知识，而且要有，而且要有较强的语

2、言表较强的语言表达能力和逻辑思维能力达能力和逻辑思维能力，是一种复合型的题，是一种复合型的题型。型。 今年全国新课标今年全国新课标I卷高考英语作文的题目为：卷高考英语作文的题目为： 假定你是李华，你校英文报假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化外国文化”栏目拟栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿。给美国朋友彼得写信约稿。 一、要点如下：一、要点如下： 1、栏目介绍；、栏目介绍； 2、稿件内容、稿件内容 3、稿件长度：约、稿件长度：约400字字 4、交稿日期：、交稿日期：6月月28日前日前 Dear Peter, How a

3、re you doing? Recently, our school newspaper will start a column about western life and culture in order to develop our interests, broaden our horizons and enrich our afterschool life. As a result, I am writing to ask you to write an article on it. Here are some details about it. To begin with, you

4、may talk about your life in your middle school, so that we Chinese students can know more about you. Besides, you can introduce a western festival, such as the Christmas Day, the New Year or the Thanksgiving Day, which must be not only meaningful but also interesting. Whats more, your article should

5、 be at least 400 words. Finally, I hope you would be so kind as to send it to be before June 28th, so that it can be published in time. Hopefully, you could do me the favor. I have the confidence that everyone will like your article. Im looking forward to your reply and your article. Best wishes, Yo

6、urs, LiHua Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper. The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. Would you please write something about th

7、e culture in your part of the United States? And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant so long as its interesting and informative. 400 words would be fine. Could we h

8、ave your article before June 28? Im looking forward to hearing from you.假定你是李华，计划暑假间去英国学习英语，为期六周。下面的广告引假定你是李华，计划暑假间去英国学习英语，为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意，请给该校写封信，询问有关情况（箭头所指内容）起了你的注意，请给该校写封信，询问有关情况（箭头所指内容） Dear Sir/ Madam, I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the v

9、acation. Ive seen your ad, and Id like to know something more about your six-week English course. First when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week? Besides, I wish there would not be too many students in a class. Id also like to know how much I have to pay for the course

10、and whether accommodation is included. Would there be host family or university dormitory? I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours faithfully, Li Hua 2013年高考英语书面表达真题及范文：新课标全国卷年高考英语书面表达真题及范文：新课标全国卷1 第二节书面表达(满分25分) 假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信,告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会，带去他想要的那幅中国画，同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明: 李明：高个子，戴

11、眼镜 航班号：CA985 到达：8月6日上午11:30 注意：1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯; 3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。 Dear Peter, How are you doing? Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【范文赏读】 Dear Peter, How are you doing? Im writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a conference, and Ive asked him to bri

12、ng you the Chinese painting youve asked for before. Also, Id like you to do me a favor. Would you please meet my uncle at the airport and take him to his hotel since this is his first visit to the U.S? Thank you in advance! His flight number is CA985, and it will arrive at 11:30 am, August 6. My unc

13、le is tall and he is wearing glasses. And he will be in a blue jacket. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 2013年高考英语书面表达真题及范文：新课标全国卷年高考英语书面表达真题及范文：新课标全国卷2 来源：天星 更新日期：2013-07-09 点击： 1034 第二节书面表达(满分25分) 假定你是李华,自制了一些中国结(Chinese knot)。给开网店的美国朋友Tom写封信,请他代卖,要点包括: 1.外观(尺寸、颜色、材料) 2.象征意义象征意义 3.价格 注意

14、:1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.开头语已为你写好。 Dear Tom, How are you doing? Li Hua 【范文赏读范文赏读】 Dear Tom, How are you doing? I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me. I made them myself with red still threads, cloths and other materials. They look really beautiful in the shape of a diamond, ab

15、out 5 inches long and 4 inches wide. In China, these knots stand for friendship, love and good luck. People can either give them as gifts to friends or hang them in their houses. They are only 12.99 US dollars each. If anyone wants to know more about the knots, let them write to me. Also, do let me

16、know if you need further information. Thank you! 2012课标卷书面表达课标卷书面表达(满分满分25分分) 假定你是李华，从互联网上得知一个国际中学假定你是李华，从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营，欢举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。 内容主要包括内容主要包括: I.自我介绍自我介绍(包括英语能力包括英语能力); 2.参加意图参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家介绍中国、了解其他国家); 3.希望获准希望获准. 注意注意: 1.词数

17、词数100左右左右: 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯; 3.邮件开头和结尾已为你写好。邮件开头和结尾已为你写好。 Dear Sir or Madam, Im Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it. I know that you welcome students from different count

18、ries and Id like to take part in it. Ive been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English. What is more, IlI be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well. I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp. Looking forward to

19、your reply! Regards, Li Hua 2011全国一卷书面表达（满分全国一卷书面表达（满分25分）分） 假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心（Learning Center）的帮助。根据学校规定，）的帮助。根据学校规定，你须书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信：你须书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信： 1.本人简介；本人简介； 2.求助内容；求助内容； 3.约定时间；约定时间； 4.你的联系方式你的联系方式（Email:;Phone:12345678） 注意：注意：1

20、.词数词数100左右；左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；使行文连贯； 3.结束语以为你写好结束语以为你写好 Dear Sir/Madam, Im LiHua, a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university. Im writing to ask for help. I came here last month and found my courses interesting. But I have some difficulties with note-taking and I have no i

21、dea of how to use the library. I was told the Learning Center provides help for students and Im anxious to get help from you. I have no class on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons. Please let me know which day is OK with you. You may email or phone me. Here are my email address and phone number:

22、 ;12345678. Look forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 2010年高考英语真题之书面表达（全国卷年高考英语真题之书面表达（全国卷1） 假如你是育才中学学生会主席李华。你校将举办假如你是育才中学学生会主席李华。你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛（一次英语演讲比赛（speech contest），希望附），希望附近某大学的外籍教师近某大学的外籍教师Smith女士来做评委。请参照女士来做评委。请参照以下比赛通知给她写一封信。以下比赛通知给她写一封信。 英语演讲比赛英语演讲比赛 主题：人与自然主题：人与自然 时间：时间：6月月15日下午日下午2：005：00

23、 地点：地点：501教室教室 参赛选手：参赛选手：10名学生名学生 联系人：李华（电话联系人：李华（电话44876655） 欢迎大家光临欢迎大家光临 注意：词数注意：词数100左右。左右。 Dear Mrs. Smith, Im Li Hua, Chairman of the Student Union of YuCai Middle School, which is close to your university. Im writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest to be held in our s

24、chool on June 15. It will start at 2；00 pm and last for about three hours. Ten students will deliver their speeches on the given topic “Man and Nature”. We hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you. Please call me at 44876655 if you have any questions. I am looking forward

25、 to your reply. With best wishes Li Hua 2009全国卷全国卷1书面表达书面表达 假定你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训，住在假定你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训，住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东一户英国人家里。今天你的房东Mrs Wilson 不在不在家，你准备外出，请给家，你准备外出，请给Mrs Wilson 写一留言条，写一留言条，内容包括：内容包括： 1.外出购物外出购物 2.题房东还书题房东还书 3.Tracy 来信留言：来信留言：1）咖啡屋（）咖啡屋（Bolton Coffee）见面取消见面取消 2）此事已告知）此事已告知Susan 3）尽快回电尽快

26、回电 注意：注意：1 词数词数100左右；左右； 2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Mrs. Wilson, Im going out shopping, and wont be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 oclock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldnt meet you at Bolt

27、on Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change. 2008全国全国1书面表达（满分书面表达（满分25分）分） 假定

28、你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫（假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫（panda）,一直一直通过有关网站通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭哥关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳苏琳”和她的母亲和她的母亲“白白云云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信：物园工作人员写一封信： 自我介绍；自我介绍； 祝贺苏琳生日；祝贺苏琳生日； 感谢工作人员感谢工作人员； 索取苏琳三岁生日照索取苏琳三岁生日照。 注意：注意：1、词数、词数100左右；左右； 2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

29、； 3、开头语已为你写好。、开头语已为你写好。 Dear Sir/ Madam, Greetings from China! Im Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. Ive been a panda lover since I was a child. About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and Ive been watching her grow on your website. Now shes going to be

30、 there. Id like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US. By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance. Yours truly, L

31、i Hua Dear Sir/ Madam, Greetings from China! Im Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. Ive been a panda lover since my childhood. In the past three years I have been paying close attention to Baiyun and her daughter Sulin who was born in America on your website. Now Sulins third birthday is approaching, and

32、Id like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for taking good care of them. But for you, Sulin and her mother wouldnt be living such a happy and healthy life in the US. By the way, could you do me a favor to send me a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very

33、much in advance. Yours truly, Li Hua 2007全国全国1 书面表达（满分书面表达（满分25分）分） 假定你是李华，希望通过外籍教师假定你是李华，希望通过外籍教师Peter找到找到一位英语笔友。请写一封短信，描述一下你理想一位英语笔友。请写一封短信，描述一下你理想中笔友的条件，并说明为什么选这样的笔友。具中笔友的条件，并说明为什么选这样的笔友。具体条件包括：体条件包括： 1年龄；年龄； 2性别；性别； 3爱好（旅游、运动、宠物等）。爱好（旅游、运动、宠物等）。 注意：注意：1词数词数100左右；左右； 2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连可以适当增加细节，以使行文连

34、贯；贯； 3开头语已为你写好。开头语已为你写好。 Dear Peter I am writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor I want to have a pen friend, hopefully a girl in her early twenties, and with interests similar to mineIn my mind, she is someone who is interested in traveling, swimming, and playing table tennisBesides, i

35、t would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have kept one at home for some timeWith such a pen friend, I hope I can share with her our experience in traveling, taking care of pets, or whatever we have in commonAnd I believe I will improve my English by doing so and learn more about her country

36、I look forward to hearing from you soon Best regards, Li Hua学生习作 Dear Peter I am writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor Id like to ask you to help me find a pen friend of my age, who shares the same interest with me ,such as traveling, playing football and tennis. Besides, it would be

37、better if he loves keeping pets, as I have been keeping a pet dog for 3 years. Once we become pen friends, we will be able to write to each other regularly, talking about our common interest and exchanging our experiences of traveling and keeping pets. More importantly, my English will also improve

38、in this way. Best wishes. Li Hua 2006全国全国1书面表达：书面表达： 假定你是李华。应英国朋友假定你是李华。应英国朋友Bob的要求，的要求，写一封短信介绍你校图书馆的基本情况。写一封短信介绍你校图书馆的基本情况。内容须包括下面两幅图中的相关信息。内容须包括下面两幅图中的相关信息。 假定你是李华。应英国朋友假定你是李华。应英国朋友Bob的要求，的要求，写一封短信介绍你校图书馆的基本情况。写一封短信介绍你校图书馆的基本情况。内容须包括下面两幅图中的相关信息。内容须包括下面两幅图中的相关信息。借阅规则：借阅规则：每人每次借阅每人每次借阅5 5本，借期本，借期101

39、0天。天。开馆时间：开馆时间：周一至周五上午周一至周五上午9 9点到下午点到下午7 7点。点。 分析近分析近8年的高考试题，可以看出高考书面表达有如年的高考试题，可以看出高考书面表达有如下特点：下特点： 1命题理念命题理念 “源于生活，高于生活源于生活，高于生活”是英语书面表达近年来始是英语书面表达近年来始终保持的主旋律。近终保持的主旋律。近8年高考书面表达题年高考书面表达题贴近学生实贴近学生实际生活，写作话题真实，学生有话可写际生活，写作话题真实，学生有话可写。书面表达。书面表达情景情景实用性实用性程度高，每一份试卷都符合学生的程度高，每一份试卷都符合学生的认知认知水平和日常生活经历水平和日

40、常生活经历； 题目设计关注学生成长，注题目设计关注学生成长，注意培养学生良好的道德品质和健全的人格；意培养学生良好的道德品质和健全的人格； 另外，另外，所涉及话题关注社会，富有新时代特色，能唤起学所涉及话题关注社会，富有新时代特色，能唤起学生强烈的主人翁意识和责任感。生强烈的主人翁意识和责任感。 这种这种贴近生活、立足基础、发扬个性、关注环境贴近生活、立足基础、发扬个性、关注环境的的设题理念仍将是未来几年高考书面表达的基本思路。设题理念仍将是未来几年高考书面表达的基本思路。 2命题方式命题方式 试题设置均为试题设置均为半开放式半开放式，给考生一定提示的同，给考生一定提示的同时，也给考生提供了更

41、为宽广的思维空间，使考生时，也给考生提供了更为宽广的思维空间，使考生留有很大的自由发挥的余地，这样更能全面和客观留有很大的自由发挥的余地，这样更能全面和客观地考查考生的语言组织和书面表达的能力。要写出地考查考生的语言组织和书面表达的能力。要写出一篇好的文章，考生不仅要精炼地表达所给信息，一篇好的文章，考生不仅要精炼地表达所给信息，更加重要的是在自由发挥部分，要有自己独到的见更加重要的是在自由发挥部分，要有自己独到的见解，要言之有物，言之有理，充分体现出思维的广解，要言之有物，言之有理，充分体现出思维的广度和深度。度和深度。 3文章体裁文章体裁 主要的体裁有记叙文、应用文、说明主要的体裁有记叙文

42、、应用文、说明文和议论文，尤以文和议论文，尤以应用文应用文独占鳌头。历年独占鳌头。历年的高考书面表达处处体现了新课改对高考的高考书面表达处处体现了新课改对高考“体现英语教学的体现英语教学的交际性、实用性和应用交际性、实用性和应用性性，提高考生的综合语言运用能力，提高考生的综合语言运用能力”的要的要求。依然沿袭以往的风格，强调写作的目求。依然沿袭以往的风格，强调写作的目的性和实用性。的性和实用性。 试题特征试题特征 提纲式作文分为短文（进来出现提纲式作文分为短文（进来出现英语短文英语短文）提）提示、要点提示和表格提示。第一种是用汉语给出一示、要点提示和表格提示。第一种是用汉语给出一段短文提示，要

43、求根据提示写一篇段短文提示，要求根据提示写一篇100词左右的短词左右的短文，所考查的形式灵活多样，如人物介绍、地点介文，所考查的形式灵活多样，如人物介绍、地点介绍等。第二种是要点提示，这是比较常见的一种写绍等。第二种是要点提示，这是比较常见的一种写作方式，此类题目用汉语提纲列举几个要点，提出作方式，此类题目用汉语提纲列举几个要点，提出写作要求。写作时要首先根据要点确定文章的中心写作要求。写作时要首先根据要点确定文章的中心思想，然后围绕中心思想和要点展开合理和适当的思想，然后围绕中心思想和要点展开合理和适当的联想。第三种是表格提示，出题人用表格的形式给联想。第三种是表格提示，出题人用表格的形式给

44、出要点，写作时我们首先要将表格中的要点扩展成出要点，写作时我们首先要将表格中的要点扩展成一个个完整的句子，然后根据文章的中心话题和要一个个完整的句子，然后根据文章的中心话题和要求，把这些要点连句成文。求，把这些要点连句成文。 提纲式书面表达一般都只给出提纲式书面表达一般都只给出只言片语只言片语的提示，的提示，而不是完整的表达。此时我们就必须在大脑中将而不是完整的表达。此时我们就必须在大脑中将各信息点补充完整，适时使用一些短语和句型，各信息点补充完整，适时使用一些短语和句型，以及各种从句。此时要记住，以及各种从句。此时要记住，“有话好好说，有有话好好说，有话慢慢说话慢慢说”，不要想着一蹴而就。我

45、们有这样的，不要想着一蹴而就。我们有这样的体验：体验：提纲式书面表达的写作中，我们还没写几提纲式书面表达的写作中，我们还没写几句，就感觉所有要点都已经表达完了句，就感觉所有要点都已经表达完了。我们需要。我们需要依据要点，紧扣要点，用自己最熟悉、最有把握依据要点，紧扣要点，用自己最熟悉、最有把握的词汇、句型，适当增加细节，扩充要点，运用的词汇、句型，适当增加细节，扩充要点，运用合理的过渡句，短语，过渡词，使文章连贯。最合理的过渡句，短语，过渡词，使文章连贯。最后，加上言简意赅的结尾。后，加上言简意赅的结尾。最忌讳自己创造句子最忌讳自己创造句子。 注意：注意：英汉两种语言差距很大，有时看似很难的英

46、汉两种语言差距很大，有时看似很难的汉语译成英语其实很简单汉语译成英语其实很简单。例如：。例如： 父母之恩永难忘，含辛茹苦把儿养； 如今二老年岁长，儿女适时当报偿。 Our gratitude should first go to our parents, for it is they who have taken great trouble to bring us up. Now they are aging, and it is time for us to take good care of them and do something for them. 恋雨却怕绣衣湿，喜日偏向树下倚。恋

47、雨却怕绣衣湿，喜日偏向树下倚。 欲风总把绮窗关，叫奴如何心付伊。欲风总把绮窗关，叫奴如何心付伊。 You say that you love rain, but you open your umbrella when it rains. You say that you love the sun, but you find a shadow spot when the sun shines. You say that you love the wind, but you close your windows when wind blows. This is why I am afraid; Y

48、ou say that you love me too.当今写作教学的现状当今写作教学的现状 （一孔之见）（一孔之见） 1.教师对高考考纲及考试说明研究不到位；教师对高考考纲及考试说明研究不到位； 2.对所教学生应得分档次定位不准，对所教学生应得分档次定位不准， 3.写作教学不知从何开始，如何训练，仍在沿袭把写作教学不知从何开始，如何训练，仍在沿袭把重点放在写作技巧的讲练上，如：练习书写，翻译重点放在写作技巧的讲练上，如：练习书写，翻译句子，如何写出高级句式，如何使用高级词汇，如句子，如何写出高级句式，如何使用高级词汇，如何使用过渡词等等，讲了很多，但学生仍然无话可何使用过渡词等等，讲了很多，

49、但学生仍然无话可说，整篇文章几乎没有可读的句子。说，整篇文章几乎没有可读的句子。 4.现行的高考提示越来越少，之所以无话可说，是现行的高考提示越来越少，之所以无话可说，是因为学生脑子中无素材，脑海中已有的点滴英语词因为学生脑子中无素材，脑海中已有的点滴英语词汇句型写作时出现汇句型写作时出现“打架忘把式打架忘把式”，所以书面表达，所以书面表达的训练重点应放在让学生有话可说，什么场景说什的训练重点应放在让学生有话可说，什么场景说什么话么话既话题训练。既话题训练。个人建议：仅供拍砖个人建议：仅供拍砖 1. 背诵范文，朗读产生语感 2. 平时积累，词，句，短语，句型 3.教师替学生总结 4.把近几年的

50、高考题让学生重写 5.每次练习学生写，教师也要写 6.一定要选择与高考类似的形式，题材，体裁，根据学生实际，不要拿来就写 7.不仅要归纳整理学生好的句子，表达方式，更重要的是好的思路，以开阔其他学生的思维 8.分主题训练，分主题训练，A（21个话题训练）个话题训练） 1）如何预约）如何预约 2) 如何给别人提建议如何给别人提建议 3）如何征求意见，）如何征求意见， 4）如何告知开会的时间地点）如何告知开会的时间地点 5）如何对别人提出要求）如何对别人提出要求 6）如何表达空间地理位置）如何表达空间地理位置 7）如何问班容量，如何问课程设置）如何问班容量，如何问课程设置 8）如何表达感谢，如何道

51、歉）如何表达感谢，如何道歉 9）如何表达祝福祝愿）如何表达祝福祝愿 10）如何谈论天气）如何谈论天气 11）如何表达同意，赞成或不赞成）如何表达同意，赞成或不赞成 12）如何表达批评，不满意，失望）如何表达批评，不满意，失望 13）如何表达同情，满意，遗憾）如何表达同情，满意，遗憾 14）如何表达愿望，打算）如何表达愿望，打算 15）如何表达喜爱偏爱，优先选择）如何表达喜爱偏爱，优先选择 16）如何表达邀请，聘请）如何表达邀请，聘请 17）如何表达劝告，提醒注意）如何表达劝告，提醒注意 18. 如何描述人物性格特征如何描述人物性格特征 19）如何号召人们行动起来做某事）如何号召人们行动起来做某

52、事 20）热门话题）热门话题1： 学校生活学校生活 21）热门话题）热门话题2：环境保护：环境保护 一一,如何表达预约：如何表达预约： 1.I have no class on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons. Please let me know which day is OK with you. 2.I have no classes on Saturday afternoon. Are you available/free then? (will it be convenient to you then?) 3.May I make an a

53、ppointment for sometime early this afternoon? 4.Could we make it Friday afternoon? 5. Can we meet sometime next week? Ill be free after the exam. 二，如何给别人提建议 1. It is important/ necesary for you to take a Chinese learning course. 2. It is also a good idea to learn to sing Chinese songs. 3. Making fri

54、ends with Chinese is very helpful to you. 4.You may as well turn to your teacher for help. 5.You should/are supposed to/ought to travel by bike or on foot. 6. I suggest we have more English activities, such as English contests and festivals. 7.We should be given more good advice on how to memorize n

55、ew words. 8.Another suggestion is to give us more chances to practice speaking. 9.To change the situation, I will give the following advice. 10. In my opinion, youd better first have a heart-to-heart talk with them after class. 11. Sharing happiness and sadness with them is also very important. 12.

56、And I also think its better for you to take part in all kinds of activities with your classmates, such as birthday parties. 13.Here I d like to put forward some suggestions. To students, it is important for them to choose what interests and suits them. To the school, we would appreciate it if our te

57、achers could assign less homework so that we can have more time to take part in after-class activities. In Addition, I suggest an English corner be set up to make sure that English lovers can have more chances to practice speaking English. 14. Here are my suggestions on how to solve this problem. 15

58、. I think it is very important to keep a balanced diet in our daily life. For example, eating enough vegetables and fruit every day is a good idea. Whats more, doing sports at least one hour a day plays a very important role in helping you lose weight as well. 16. Spending too much time playing onli

59、ne games is not only a waste of time, but also a damage to your health. I think youd better quit it as soon as possible. You can develop other good habits, such as reading or stamp collecting. You love sports. Why not join some sports club? There are so many ways for you to enrich your life. What do

60、 you think about my suggestions? 三，如何征求意见 1. Ill be glad to follow it if you have any better advice on the arrangements. 2. Could you give me some advice on? 3.How do you like your new English teacher? 4. What do you think of our plan? 5. I wonder how you find our arrangements? 6. Could you make som