外研社 Module 3my first ride on a train 写作PowerPoint 演示文稿

1、.1Writing 写作五步骤写作五步骤 1. 审清主题审清主题 看题目中涉及到了哪些看题目中涉及到了哪些关键点，这些点要全部包含其中关键点，这些点要全部包含其中 2. 搜集素材搜集素材 素材的收集 一定要在已经将关键点包含其中的基础上，在头脑中进行相关的内容相关的内容串联。 3. 编写句子编写句子： 句子的编写过程中要主要句子成分句子成分一定要完整；具体的语法语法使用一定要正确 （主谓一致，主格，宾格，固定短语等）；省略掉累赘不必要的句子省略掉累赘不必要的句子。 4. 提示技巧提示技巧 回忆自己曾经记忆过的好的句型，将简单句适当转换为回忆自己曾经记忆过的好的句型，将简单句适当转换为高级高级句

2、子。句子。 5.Write a ParagraphParagraphs 连句成文连句成文 Firstly , First, First of all, Secondly, Then, After this/that, Finally, Last, Lastly, and, however, therefore.4Brainstorming:试着描述一次你的旅行，写出试着描述一次你的旅行，写出相关的可能涉及到的要点：相关的可能涉及到的要点：.5ITEMSDETAILStimeplacespersonstransportWhat to doWeather;climateHow we feel.6I

3、TEMSDETAILStimeLast summer holidayOn the National DayAt the age of twelveLast SundayplaceThe _ MountainThe Summer Palace（颐和（颐和园）园）The museumthe Forest Park（森林公（森林公园）园）personsWith my cousinsWith my parentsWith my aunts With myfriendstransportBy trainBy busBy subwayBy bikeWhat to doClimb mountain, See

4、 foreigners,Talk, Learn from each other Go boating, Have a picnic, Be caught with a heavy rain Tired, expensive,Too many visitors, enjoy themselves, want to visit once moreWeather;ClimateSnowy; Winter. Cold Cloudy;Summer hotSunny;Autumn/fall coolRainy;SpringwarmHow we feel excited Enjoyed ourselvesu

5、nforgettableMemorable（难忘的，值得（难忘的，值得纪念的）纪念的）.7August 14th,it was cloudy. My colleges and I had a visit to the Great Ocean Road （大洋路）（大洋路）in Australia.（时间，天气，人物，目的地）.8 We started from Melbourne. We drove along the freeway through the desert and forests. (旅程 以及交通工具）.9We saw some kangaroos and koalas al

6、ong the road. （见闻）（见闻）.10.11Finally, four hours later, we arrived at the Great Ocean Road. （注意写作中连词的运用（注意写作中连词的运用）.12At this moment it began to rain cats and dogs.猛烈的大雨猛烈的大雨（旅途中的天（旅途中的天气变化）气变化）.13In the rain, the waves ,rocks and winds looked splendid(壮观壮观). (旅途中的景色）旅途中的景色）.14I took a lot of picture

7、s there.(我的活动）我的活动） .15After a while, the rain stopped and the rainbow appeared.（天气变化）（天气变化）In the sun, the sea was deep blue and the rocks were golden.16Its very beautiful. This is a memorable trip.(结束语：多为对上文写作内容的结束语：多为对上文写作内容的总结，可表达自己的感受等）总结，可表达自己的感受等） .17 August 14, it was a cloudy winter in Aust

8、ralia. My colleges and I had a visit to the Great Ocean Road. We started from Melbourne. We drove along the freeway through the desert and forests. We saw some kangaroos and koalas by the road. Finally, four hours later, we arrived at the Great Ocean Road. At this moment it began to rain cats and do

9、gs. In the heavy rain, the waves , winds and rocks looked splendid(壮观).I took a lot of pictures there. After a while, the rain stopped and the rainbow appeared. In the sun, the sea was deep blue and the rocks were golden. Its very attractive. I enjoyed myself very much.18 在作文中用到第一人称第一人称用来描述真实的或者想想类的

10、发生在自己身上的事件Instructions.19 2. 可能用到的时态可能用到的时态（参考时态）（参考时态） 一般过去时态：一般过去时态： e.g. My colleges and I had a visit to the Great Ocean Road in Australia. 过去进行时过去进行时 e.g. It was raining for about half an hour. 过去完成时过去完成时 e.g. The train had already left by the time we got to the station. .20 作业：根据你自己写出的要点，结作业：根据你自己写出的要点，结