高考英语书面表达-书信倡议书

1、1 / 4 高考英语话题作文指导与训练倡议书（proposal ）一、题型特点倡议书可以是针对某项公益事业向公众发出的倡导，倡议大家一起做某事，或提出合理化意见、建议，也可以是针对某个人或某个特定群体向公众发出的求助。倡议书的主要内容：1. 介绍情况，发出倡议；2. 倡议的理由或意义；3. 倡议的具体内容写作注意事项 : 1. 一定要写清楚提倡议的理由是什么，也就是为什么倡议，但是理由不要太多，抓住一两点具体说清楚就可以了。2. 提出的倡议不要面面俱到，要有针对性地抓住主要问题提建议，而与此无关的或关系不大的其他方面，就不必赘述。3. 要充分考虑到倡议的可行性和具体条件。提出的倡议必须是别人能

2、够做到的或有条件做到的，而不能凭空想象，不着边际。许多同学在倡议中喜欢喊口号，这种做法虽然没有什么不妥，但总是给人一种夸夸其谈、华而不实的感觉，自然也就很难获得高分了。二、答题要求一篇得分较高的书面表达应该具备以下特点：1) 覆盖所有 内容要点 ；2 )有效地使用了 语句间的连接成分 ，使全文结构紧凑，过渡自然；3) 语句有简有繁，应用了 较多的语法结构和词汇；4) 语法结构正确 ，具备较强的语言运用能力； 5) 语言地道流畅 ，书写规范三、答题步骤1. 审题：细读提示，弄清题材、体裁与格式，确定人称、时态。2. 抓点：用重点句型和短语列出文章的内容要点。3. 造句：将要点扩写成句，注意中英文

3、在语言表达方式上的差异。4. 成文：连句成文。正确使用 语句间的连接成分 ，使行文流畅，并注意段与段的衔接，做到逻辑正确、条理清楚。5. 润色 : 尽量使用常用词汇与句型，但对有把握的高级词汇和复杂句式也要大胆运用。在覆盖文章要点的基础上，可以适当发挥，但扩展的内容一定要紧扣主题，不要写与主题无关的内容。总之，要做到不漏写、不错写、不多写、不乱写 。6. 复查：整篇文章所用的人称 是否一致；动词 时态、语态 是否一致、恰当；格式是否适当； 冠词、名词单复数 及单词大小写、标点 及所有的 拼写是否2 / 4 准确无误； 词数是否符合要求； 分段是否合理等。7. 誊写：修改无误后，认真规范地誊写在

4、规定的地方。卷面要整洁美观，尽量不出现涂改痕迹；字的大小与倾斜度，行距、字距，都要适当，以免难以辨认。四、满分作文满分模板in order to _,_(开门见山地提出倡议的目的，即写 出主题 句)/nowadays/today_/as is known to all,_/it is obvious that_(另一种开头方式，简单地陈述某一现象及其可能带来的结果，陈述提出倡议的起因) therefore, we should_. second, let s _finally, i call on all to _(其次，罗列具体的倡议内容，注意句式的变化) if we can do as m

5、entioned above, there can be no doubt(that)_（最后提出行动可能带来的结果，即结论句）高考满分作文展示【例题展示 one】假设你是李晓平，是“江苏中学”的学生。请你围绕“建设和谐社会”的主题，根据下面所给出的要点提示，用英语给全省中学生写一封倡议书。要点提示：1. 人与社会：祖国、家乡、学校，热爱关心2. 人与人：家人、师长、同学，诚信互助3. 人与自然：能源、环境、动植物，爱惜保护4. 你的态度： (内容由考生自己拟定 ) 注意： 1. 词数： 100 左右。倡议书的开头、结尾以及提示句已为你写好，不计人词数。2. 内容可适当发挥，注意行文连贯。a

6、letter to high school students in jiangsu dear fellow students, our government is aiming to build a “harmonious society”. i think it is every citizens duty to work hard to achieve this goal. as high school students, what should we do? first of all, we should love our motherland. let s take a great i

7、nterest in the development of our hometowns and take an active part in our school activities. secondly, lets fill the world with love. we should show our respect for old people, our parents and our teachers. we should also care for each other and help those who are in need. most importantly of all,

8、all of us must be faithful and honest in our 3 / 4 daily life. finally, let s work together to save energy and protect our natural environment, including animals, trees, flowers and grass. as for myself, i will study even harder and try my best to do all the above. dear fellow students, lets start r

9、ight now and spare no effort to do a little bit every day, every hour, and every minute! li xiaoping from jiangsu high school 【例题展示 two】北京某中学讨论是否应该骑车上学。假如你是该校学生会主席，请你用英语写一封倡议书，号召同学们骑自行车上学。内容需包括：1.建议骑自行车上学；2.自行车是学生常用交通工具；3.骑自行车的一些好处；4.骑自行车需注意的问题。注意： 1. 词数 100左右，信的开头和结束语已为你写好 （不计入总词数） 2. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节

10、，使行文连贯。 dear schoolmates, recently, a debate concerning whether we should cycle to school or not has appeared in our school._ _ the students union july 13, 2011 【范文展示】dear schoolmates, recently, a debate concerning whether we should cycle to school or not has appeared in our school. as far as i am c

11、oncerned, we should ride to and from school. firstly, riding a bicycle to and from school is very common among the students, for buying or repairing a bicycle doesnt cost a lot. next, riding a bicycle is easy and convenient in our school, no matter how busy the traffic could be. actually, bicycle-ri

12、ding is also a practical way to do exercise and protect the environment. what you should do carefully is just to keep an appropriate speed while riding and lock it after you are off it. in this way, youll feel it simple and relaxing to ride a bicycle while you are here. dont hesitate, everybody. let

13、 s ride to school. the students union june 13, 2011 4 / 4 【习作点评】短文较全面地反应了作者的语言组织能力、书面表达能力，以及思维能力。文中注意了上下文的连贯性，能有效地使用语句间的连接成份，使全文结构紧凑；同时文中也运用了较高级的词汇及语言结构，增强了文章的可读性。firstly；next；actually also ；in this way 让文章浑然一体。as far as i am concerned就我个人而言；for buying or repairing a bicycle doesnt cost a lot中 for 用

14、做并列连词表示“ 原因” ； no matter how busy the traffic could be 中 no matter how 引导让步状语从句； what you should do carefully 中 what 引导主语从句，以上从句的灵活运用，表现作者的语言功底。省略句while riding 以及 it 做做形式定语，进一步丰富了文章的语言结构。 同时，文中也正确地运用了一些好词汇及短语，如：convenient, practical, appropriate, hesitate 等。【实战演练】为了有一个美好的校园环境， 请你代表学生会向全校发出倡议。要求内容包括以

15、下要点并阐述你的理由。1. 别乱扔垃圾，爱护花草树木；2. 不得高声喧哗；3. 循环使用资料；4.保持教室整洁。注意： 1.词数 120 左右； 2. 注意文章连贯性。【经典例句】1. please dont smoke, spit or litter in public places. 2. let s make a good network environment. let s be civilized netizen. 3. hopefully you will join in the action and extend warm help to those needy persons.

16、 4. we all want to grow up happily and healthily, and for this goal we must do several things. 5. what i want to stress is that each of us should listen more to others. 6. we students should listen more to our classmates, thus we will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed. 7. it is a good idea for us senior 3 students to have da