（全国用）高考英语二轮复习与增分策略 专题六 书面表达 第二节 方法运用于命题课件

1、1第二节方法运用于命题专题六书面表达2栏目索引一、提纲类作文二、画图类作文三、图表类作文四、(半)开放式作文3 (2017全国全国)假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括：知下次上课的计划。内容包括：1.时间和地点；时间和地点；2.内容：学习唐诗；内容：学习唐诗；3.课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。注意：注意：1.词数词数100左右；左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 一、提纲类作文典例4法宝法宝1“五审五审”定调子

2、定调子(1)体裁：告知信类应用文，应注意告知信格式；体裁：告知信类应用文，应注意告知信格式；(2)人称：以第一人称为主；人称：以第一人称为主；(3)时态：以一般现在时和一般将来时为主；时态：以一般现在时和一般将来时为主；(4)要点：告知上课时间、地点、内容及课前准备；要点：告知上课时间、地点、内容及课前准备；(5)层次：分为三段：第一段问候并告知上课时间及地点；第二段告知上层次：分为三段：第一段问候并告知上课时间及地点；第二段告知上课内容及课前准备；第三段为结束语。课内容及课前准备；第三段为结束语。 法宝法宝2“韵色韵色”得高分得高分该文除简单句外，还可使用并列句、省略句及复合句该文除简单句外

3、，还可使用并列句、省略句及复合句(定语从句、名词性定语从句、名词性从句、状语从句从句、状语从句)，做到句式多样。，做到句式多样。5法宝法宝3黄金黄金“三步曲三步曲”1.遣词遣词next Chinese lesson/meet at/as usual/participate in/sporting activity/make it/as you know/in order to/acquire a good knowledge of/introduce.to./be of great help/advise sb.to do/learn about/in advance/look forward

4、 to/hear from62.造句造句(1)How are you?(2)Im writing to tell you about your next Chinese lesson.(3)Well still meet at my school，but not on Saturday as usual.(4)Ill have to participate in a sporting activity that day.(5)Lets make it three oclock on Sunday afternoon.(6)In order to acquire a good knowledge

5、 of Chinese，you should learn more about Chinese culture and history.(7)This time I will introduce Tang poetry to you，which is of great help in learning Chinese.7(8)I advise you to learn about the brief history of the Tang Dynasty in advance.(9)It will surely help you in learning the poems.(10)Lookin

6、g forward to hearing from you soon.83.成篇成篇Dear Leslie，How are you？Im writing to tell you about your next Chinese lesson.Well still meet at my school，but not on Saturday as usual，since Ill have to participate in a sporting activity that day.So lets make it three oclock on Sunday afternoon.As you know

7、，in order to acquire a good knowledge of Chinese，you should learn more about Chinese culture and history.Therefore，this time I will introduce Tang poetry to you，which is of great help in learning Chinese.I advise you to learn about the brief history of the Tang Dynasty in advance.It will surely help

8、 you in learning the poems.9Looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours，Li Hua10 (2016天津天津)假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津。一批来自英国的高中生与你校学假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津。一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期两周的交流活动。生开展了为期两周的交流活动。现在，他们即将回国，你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据以下提示写一篇发现在，他们即将回国，你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。言稿。1.回顾双方的交流活动回顾双方的交流活动(如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面如学习、生活、体育、文艺

9、等方面)；2.谈谈收获或感想；谈谈收获或感想；3.表达祝愿与期望。表达祝愿与期望。跟踪训练11注意：注意：1.词数不少于词数不少于100；2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear friends，How time flies！_Thank you.参考范文12Dear friends，How time flies！Two weeks went by，and our exchange activities ended.On behalf of my school，I would

10、like to express my feelings.As scheduled，we participated in several instructive activities.We learnt many Chinese characters and took plenty of exercise together.We went to the restaurant to taste the Chinese traditional food.The food was very delicious.While visiting the art exhibition，we discussed

11、 the great artists works.13In my opinion，everyone here is a member of our big family and we learn a lot from each other.And at last I sincerely wish you a pleasant trip back to your country.I hope well get together again next year.Thank you.14 (2017北京北京)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请根

12、据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记录毕业前夕你们制作以写一篇英文周记，记录毕业前夕你们制作以“感恩母校感恩母校”为主题的毕业为主题的毕业纪念视频的全过程。纪念视频的全过程。 二、画图类作文典例注意：词数不少于注意：词数不少于60。提示词：视频提示词：视频video15法宝法宝1“五审五审”定调子定调子(1)体裁：本文属于图画类作文；体裁：本文属于图画类作文；(2)人称：以第一人称为主；人称：以第一人称为主；(3)时态：以一般过去时为主；时态：以一般过去时为主；(4)要点：制作以要点：制作以“感恩母校感恩母校”为主题的毕业纪念视频的全过程；为主题的毕业纪念视频的全过程；(5)层次：分为两

13、段：第一段描写毕业临近，决定制作毕业纪念视频；第层次：分为两段：第一段描写毕业临近，决定制作毕业纪念视频；第二段写制作毕业纪念视频的过程及最后达到的结果。二段写制作毕业纪念视频的过程及最后达到的结果。 法宝法宝2“韵色韵色”得高分得高分该文除简单句外，还可使用非谓语动词、并列句、复合句该文除简单句外，还可使用非谓语动词、并列句、复合句(宾语从句、状宾语从句、状语从句语从句)，做到句式多样丰富。，做到句式多样丰富。16法宝法宝3黄金黄金“三步曲三步曲”1.遣词遣词graduation come/a heated discussion/agree on/make a video/material

14、collecting/interview teachers/take pictures/every aspect of school life/tough/debate over/compromise/unavoidable/turn out perfect/the graduation ceremony/be well received/a great sense of achievement 172.造句造句(1)Graduation finally came.(2)My classmates and I decided to do something.(3)We agreed on ma

15、king a video to record our experiences at school. (4)Material collecting took us a whole week.(5)During this time we interviewed our teachers and took pictures of every aspect of school life.(6)The editing part after that was tough.(7)We debated over what to put into the video.(8)Some compromises we

16、re unavoidable.18(9)The video turned out perfect.(10)Several days later，when the video was played on the graduation ceremony，it was well received.(11)The students and teachers shared a great time. (12)That surely gave us a great sense of achievement. 193.成篇成篇Graduation finally came.My classmates and

17、 I decided to do something.After a heated discussion，we agreed on making a video to record our experiences at school.Material collecting took us a whole week，during which we interviewed our teachers and took pictures of every aspect of school life.The editing part after that was tough.We debated ove

18、r what to put into the video.Some compromises were unavoidable，but the video turned out perfect.Several days later，when the video was played on the graduation ceremony，it was well received.The students and teachers shared a great time.That surely gave us a great sense of achievement.20(2016北京北京)假设你是

19、红星中学高三一班的学生李华。你班同学参加了学校的假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华。你班同学参加了学校的“地球日地球日”系列活动。请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序，以系列活动。请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序，以“Actions for a Greener Earth”为题，给校刊为题，给校刊“英语角英语角”写一篇英文稿件，介绍活动写一篇英文稿件，介绍活动的全过程。的全过程。注意：词数不少于注意：词数不少于60。提示词：地球日提示词：地球日Earth Day 参考范文 跟踪训练21A week before Earth Day，posters were put up around our school，c

20、alling upon us to join in the actions for a greener earth.Our class came up with the idea to make better use of used materials.We brought to our classroom worn-out clothes，pieces of cardboard and empty plastic bottles，and turned those into dolls，handbags，tissue boxes and small vases.That weekend，we

21、went to a nearby neighborhood and gave them away to the people there.All were very happy with those unexpected gifts，especially little kids and elderly people.We did so well that we were invited to share our idea and experience with all the students of our school.22We are very proud of ourselves and

22、 believe we can do more for a better world.23 (2017江苏江苏)请认真阅读请认真阅读右右面有关我国电影票房面有关我国电影票房收入收入(box-office income)的柱状图及相关的柱状图及相关文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左词左右的文章。右的文章。 三、图表类作文典例24Saturday Afternoon.In a Shopping Centre.Li Jiang：Hi，Su Hua.Which movie shall we see?Su Hua：Whatever.Weve got so many cho

23、ices，Kung Fu Yoga，Journey to the West.Each sounds great!Li Jiang：Yeah！And some movie stars are fantastic.Su Hua：And the high-tech！.Li Jiang：Perfect！Lets get some food first.We only have 20 minutes left.Su Hua：No hurry.The cinema is on the same floor.25One Day in 2016.At Home. Son：Mum，shall we go and

24、 see a film tonight?Mother：Why bother？We can stay at home and watch films online.Its convenient with our new and faster network. Son：But it feels good in a cinema.Mother：And the price.We have to pay 50 yuan a ticket. Son：Only 10 yuan more than last year.Mother：But still we cannot get the moneys wort

25、h.Some films are just boring. 26写作内容1.用约用约30个单词概述柱状图信息的主要内容；个单词概述柱状图信息的主要内容；2.我国电影票房收入变化的原因有哪些，简要谈谈你的看法我国电影票房收入变化的原因有哪些，简要谈谈你的看法(上述对话仅上述对话仅供参考，原因不少于两点供参考，原因不少于两点)；3.谈谈你对我国电影票房收入走向的看法，并简要说明理由。谈谈你对我国电影票房收入走向的看法，并简要说明理由。 写作要求1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3.不必写标题。

26、不必写标题。评分标准内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。. . . . .27法宝法宝1“五审五审”定调子定调子(1)体裁：图表类作文；体裁：图表类作文；(2)人称：以第三人称为主；人称：以第三人称为主；(3)时态：以一般过去时为主；时态：以一般过去时为主；(4)要点：概述短文内容；分析票房收入变化的原因并给出自己的看法；要点：概述短文内容；分析票房收入变化的原因并给出自己的看法；(5)层次：分为三段：第一段总结归纳柱状图所含信息；第二段分析票房层次：分为三段：第一段总结归纳柱状图所含信息；第二段分析票房收入变化的原因；第三段提出自己的看法并给出理由

27、。收入变化的原因；第三段提出自己的看法并给出理由。 法宝法宝2“韵色韵色”得高分得高分该文可多种句式并用，如并列句、复合句该文可多种句式并用，如并列句、复合句(定语从句、名词性从句、状语定语从句、名词性从句、状语从句从句)，做到句式丰富多样。，做到句式丰富多样。28法宝法宝3黄金黄金“三步曲三步曲”1.遣词遣词box-office income/witness/a constant increase/slow down/various/economic development/powerful engine/application/appeal/account for/consequently

28、/turn away from/lead to/at a medium speed/movie industry/enjoy a slight increase292.造句造句(1)The box-office income of Chinese movies witnessed a constant increase from about 17 billion yuan in 2012 to over 40 billion in 2015.(2)That increase slowed down in 2016.(3)The reasons behind this are various.(

29、4)The fast economic development before 2016 was probably the most powerful engine driving the constant growth in the box-office income.(5)The application of new technologies and the wide appeal of movie stars could also account for the increase.(6)China saw a decline in its economic growth rate last

30、 year.30(7)The Internet increased options for movie lovers.(8)Some viewers began to turn away from cinemas，leading to a slower growth. (9)Chinas economy is expected to grow at a medium speed in the coming years.(10)An increase is possible in the investment in the movie industry and the number of qua

31、lity movies.(11)Its box-office income will probably enjoy a slight increase. 313.成篇成篇As is indicated in the graph，the box-office income of Chinese movies witnessed a constant increase from about 17 billion yuan in 2012 to over 40 billion in 2015.However，that increase slowed down in 2016.The reasons

32、behind this are various.The fast economic development before 2016 was probably the most powerful engine driving the constant growth in the box-office income.The application of new technologies and the wide appeal of movie stars could also account for the increase.However，China saw a decline in its e

33、conomic growth rate last year.And the Internet increased options for movie lovers.Consequently，some viewers began to turn away from cinemas，leading to a slower growth. 32Chinas economy is expected to grow at a medium speed in the coming years，so an increase is possible in the investment in the movie

34、 industry and the number of quality movies.Therefore，its box-office income will probably enjoy a slight increase.33(2017陕西咸阳二模陕西咸阳二模)仔细观察下图，根据要求，以仔细观察下图，根据要求，以“Health Changes in Developing Countries”为题，用英语写一篇为题，用英语写一篇100词左右的短文。词左右的短文。1.以下图为依据描述发展中国家的预期寿命以下图为依据描述发展中国家的预期寿命(life expectancy)和婴儿死亡率和婴儿死亡

35、率(infant mortality rate)的变化情况；的变化情况；2.说明引起变化的各种原因，如生活条件的改善、医学的进步、环境保护说明引起变化的各种原因，如生活条件的改善、医学的进步、环境保护的认识等。的认识等。 参考范文 跟踪训练34Health Changes in Developing CountriesAs is described in the chart，in developing countries great changes have taken place in life expectancy and infant mortality rate between 196

36、0 and 2011.The life expectancy in 1960 was about 40 years old，while it increased to about 60 years old in 2011.At the same time，the infant mortality rate dropped from 200 per 1,000 births in 1960 to 100 per 1,000 births in 2011.35There are many reasons for the changes，I think.First，peoples living co

37、nditions have improved，so it is natural that they live longer than before.Second，thanks to the development in science and medicine，people are receiving better medical care than they used to.Third，developing countries are now better aware of environmental protection and they take more measures to sol

38、ve the problem，which also does good.In short，peoples health condition in developing countries is becoming better and better.36(2017全国全国)假定你是李华。你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你的留假定你是李华。你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你的留学生朋友学生朋友Eric写封邮件邀请他加入，内容包括：写封邮件邀请他加入，内容包括：1.球队活动；球队活动；2.报名方式及截止日期。报名方式及截止日期。注意：注意：1.词数词数100左右；左右；2.可以适当增加细

39、节，以使行文连贯。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 四、(半)开放式作文 典例37法宝法宝1“五审五审”定调子定调子(1)体裁：书信类应用文，应注意书信格式；体裁：书信类应用文，应注意书信格式；(2)人称：以第一人称为主；人称：以第一人称为主；(3)时态：以一般现在时和一般将来时为主；时态：以一般现在时和一般将来时为主；(4)要点：写信目的；球队活动；报名方式和截止日期；要点：写信目的；球队活动；报名方式和截止日期；(5)层次：分为四段：第一段自我介绍并交待写信目的层次：分为四段：第一段自我介绍并交待写信目的邀请邀请Eric加入加入球队；第二段介绍打乒乓球的好处及球队活动；第三段告知球队；第二

40、段介绍打乒乓球的好处及球队活动；第三段告知Eric报名方报名方式及截止日期；第四段结束语。式及截止日期；第四段结束语。 法宝法宝2“韵色韵色”得高分得高分除了使用简单句外，该文还可使用非谓语动词作状语、并列句及复合句除了使用简单句外，该文还可使用非谓语动词作状语、并列句及复合句(宾语从句、定语从句、状语从句宾语从句、定语从句、状语从句)，做到句式多样。，做到句式多样。 38法宝法宝3黄金黄金“三步曲三步曲”1.遣词遣词invite/join/table tennis team/it is known that/benefit from/prevent.from./keep sb.physica

41、lly healthy/as to/experienced player/give training to/at the same time/o./be interested/sign up/look forward to392.造句造句(1)I am writing to invite you to join the table tennis team in our school.(2)We can benefit a lot from playing table tennis.(3)It can prevent us from getting shortsighted.

42、(4)It can keep us physically healthy.(5)We plan to invite experienced players to give training to us every Friday afternoon.(6)We will divide the members into several groups to practice at 5：00 pm after school.(7)If you are interested，sign up on our school website before August 10.(8)Im looking forward to your