CE写作评分标准+各类模板+模仿训练

1、CET 4 写作部分一、 写作部分的要求：根据2004年1月试行大学英语课程教学要求：一般要求的书面表达能力较高要求的书面表达能力更高要求的书面表达能力二、 评分方法及标准1 正确表达思想；2。 意义连贯3. 无重大语法错误。 评分原则：“总体评分，综合评判”总体评分：就总的印象给出奖励分，而不按语言点的错误树木扣分；综合评判：作文是否切题， 是否充分表达思想，英语是否清楚确切的表达了思想。评分标准：2分条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误；5分基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性查，有较多的严重语言错误；8分基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯； 但

2、语言错误较多，其中有一些是严重错误。11分切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。14分切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好。基本无语言错误，仅有个别小错。白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或者有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想，给0分。词数不足扣分。CET 累计词数90-9980-8970-7960-6950-59< 49扣分123579百分制作文分151413121110987654321得分率100948780746760544740342720147作文最低基本分为零分。倒扣分原则：1） 作文分为0分，则最后成绩一律计为59分；2） 作文分为1-6分者，最后得分=出作文外统计总分-

3、6+ 加作文实得分。三、常见作文模式：1 段首句作文：这是一种控制性作文（Guided Writing）， 旨在控制考生的写作范围，它也是目前比较流行的一种命题形式，即给出每一个段落的第一句或第一句的开始部分，要求考生在此基础上续写成一篇短文。段首句一般为主题句，称为提示句。 例：Women in the Modern WorldWomen are palying an increasing important part in the society today._Part Writing (30 minutes) Directions:For this part,you are allowe

4、d 30 minutes to write a c omposition on the topic:Sounds in three paragraphs You have been given the first sentence of each paragraph.You should write at least 120 words. Sounds 1)The world is filled with many sounds_ 2)Some sounds are useful_ 3)But some sounds are harmful_2. 提纲式作文（训练重点）最常见的题型。 提纲可能

5、是汉语，可能是英语的。例：PartI Writing (30 minutes)Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter in reply to a friend's inquiry about applying for admission to your college or university. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese: 1建议报考的专业及

6、理由 2报考该专业的基本条件 3应当如何备考PartI Writing (30 minutes)Directions:For this part ,you are allowed 30minute to write a short essay on the topic of students selecting their fectures.You should write at least 120 words following the outline when bellow: 1.有些大学允许学生自由选择某些课程的任课教师 2.学生选择教师时所考虑的主要因素 3.学生自选任课教师的益处和可

7、能产生的问题On Students Selecting Lecturers3 图表式作文Writing (30 minutes) （2002） Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Student Use of Computers. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the chart and the outline given below: 1.

8、上图所示为1990年、1995年、2002年某校大学生使用计算机的情况，请描述其变化； 2. 请说明发生这些变化的原因（可从计算机的用途、价格或社会发展等方面加以说明）； 3. 你认为目前大学生在计算机使用中有什么困难或问题。 Student Use of Computers4 规定情景作文例：Writing (30 minutes) Directions For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition entitled A Brief Introduction to a Tourist Attraction.

9、You should write at least 120 words acc, ording to the following guidelines Your role a tour guide Your audience a group of foreign tourists Your introduction should include some welcoming words the schedule for the day a description of the place the tourists will be visiting (e.g. a scenic spot or

10、a historical site, etc.) You should make the introduction interesting and the arrangements for the day clear to everybody.5书信式作文Part V Writing (20 munutes) Directions: For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a letter.Suppose you are Zhang Ying.Write a letter to Xial Wang,a schoolmate o

11、f yours who is going to visit you during the week-long holiday.You should write at least 100 words according to the suggestions given below in Chinese. 1.表示欢迎 2.提出过度假安排的建议 3. 提醒应注意的事项 范文 A Letter to a Schoolmate英语四级作文四类题型：现象解释型、应用文、记叙文、和图表文章四种题型。这四种题型既是对四级作文的科学分类，又是对四级作文考点的高度概括。 A现象段落模仿练习：当前校园中存在许多作

12、弊的现象. Currently, college students in growing numbers are seeking to cheat in exams. According to a recent survey made by Mary Wang, head editor of the 21st Century, there are about 38.6% who had some cheating behaviors at college, even in College English Test. Such an phenomenon has caused wide publ

13、ic concern. 主题句 1. Recent years, become more and more .Its estimated that . 2. Currently, people have to face the problem of . 3. Nowadays more and more people are beginning to realize that . For example, . B对比段落模仿练习： 1. 有些人决定毕业后读研. 2. 有些人决定毕业后工作. 3. 我的看法. “Should college students go to work immedia

14、tely or pursue their post graduate study after graduation? ” When it comes to such a question, people opinion varies widely from person to person. Some people consider . In their eyes, . Besides, is also an important factor for However, some other hold that . According to them, . And, . Personally,

15、I am in favor of the former/later idea. For one thing, . For another, . Therefore, as mentioned above, will be my choice. 主题句 1. Currently, college students in growing numbers are seeking to cheat in exams, and peoples opinions/attitudes/views are mixed/divided on this point. 2. Different people hav

16、e different views on 3. There is no complete agreement among people as to C原因段落模仿练习: 许多大学生毕业后找不到工作这一现象的原因是. . . After careful consideration, we can find three possible reasons to account for this trend. First of all, the expansion and amalgamation of universities provide chances for more students to

17、 receive higher education, but the job market cannot develop at the same speed. Whats more, the situation is even worse with those students who unanimously chose the “hot” majors such as economics and accounting. In the third place, many students think too highly of themselvesthey choose not to work

18、 at all if they are not satisfied with the job. They may think the pay is not satisfactory or the job is not decent at all. 模仿练习: Video Games 1.许多学生沉迷于电子游戏/网络聊天. 2.这一现象的原因是 3.解决办法是 主题句 1. Three reasons, in my mind, can account for this social phenomenon. 2. Several reasons can account for this pheno

19、menon, 3. In my mind, the reasons why the Internet surfers are on the rise are as follows. 4. Have you ever thought of the famous proverb “A man is known by the company he keeps”? To me, it is meaningful and significant in three respects. 句式联系法 Firstly,Secondly,Thirdly, For one thing,For another,Fin

20、ally, In the first place,In the second place,Finally, On one hand,On the other hand, First of all,In addition,Consequently, To begin with, whats more, last but not the least, F图表作文模仿练习： 1. 电影观众越来越少 2. 电视观众越来越多, 因为. . . 3. 然而还是有人喜欢看电影，因为. . . During the period between 1975 and 1985, film-goers declin

21、ed abruptly from 85,000 to about 12,000, while TV-watchers increased sharply from 5,000 to more than 100,000. Several reasons can account for this phenomenon, Compared with a film, TV is much cheaper and more convenient-you dont have to leave your house at all. Apart from that, you have many choices

22、 while watching TV, but film concentrates on a certain topic. However, there are still a number of people who enjoy going to the cinema, generally for two reasons. On the one hand, the audiovisual effect of a cinema is much better. On the other hand, in quiet and comfortable place such as a cinema,

23、you can concentrate on what you are watching and get the most of the film. 开头段主题句 1. From / According to the above picture /table/ chart/ diagram/ graph, we can see that/ it can be learned/ estimated/ predicted that 2. As can be seen from the above picture /table/ chart/ diagram/ graph, great / dram

24、atic changes have taken place in in/from to . 3. As demonstrated/ shown / illustrated / described / seen from the chart / table / graph, we can see that . G作文预测 四级以应用文为主准备，其次是现象解释型。 1. 应用文：你一个正读大学的好朋友给你来信说他想放弃四级考试，请你给他写一封信，劝说他不要放弃。 2. 应用文：因为学生证丢失，申请补办，并说明其对你的重要性 3. 现象解释：自行车丢失现象很严重；其原因是；如何解决。 4. 记叙文：

25、The experience of my first job 5. 祝贺信：祝贺你的同学李明得到奖学金 1、劝说信：不要放弃四级考试。 Dear Mary, Thank you for your letter dated June 2 which I reached me today. In the letter you said you wanted to give up the CET4 exam, and I am writing in the hope that you could hold up your spirit to take the exam and eventually

26、pass it. As you mentioned, English listening is your terrible dream. You can try the tape I sent to you with this letter. The tape was made by our college English teacher, which helped me a lot. You can also do some listening in the morning everyday. As for your vocabulary, you need to remember the

27、words with sentences. Thirdly, you need to read at least 2 passages every day for the reason that reading takes much marks in the CET 4, and it can enlarge your vocabulary at the same time. I wish you can take my advice and pursue your English study. May you get a high mark in the coming CET 4. If t

28、here is anything I can help, please let me know. Sincerely yours, Li Ming 2. 应用文：因为学生证丢失，申请补办，并说明其对你的重要性 Dear Sir or Madame, My name is Li Ming, a student of Business Department at our university. I am writing to re-question a new student identification card. A thief stole my wallet where I put it y

29、esterday. I have made every efforts to seek it back. However my dear card just simply disappeared with the thief. As you know, the student identification card is extremely useful for us. First of all, the CET 4 is drawing near, and I need it to enter the national test, which is held only two times a

30、 year. Besides, the student identification card is also required in the library and it is a “must” for me to withdraw money from the bank. Please inform me when you have come to a decision. I am looking for your earlier reply. My telephone number is 54567xx. If further materials are required, I am only too willing to