概要写作No1PPT课件

1、12021/7/23Summary 写作思路写作思路 1、 对所给文本对所给文本内容要点内容要点和和结构的精确结构的精确解读解读； 2、对所写文本、对所写文本行文措辞行文措辞和和逻辑的衔接逻辑的衔接归整归整。 A. 理解文章，概括大意理解文章，概括大意 主题句直接归纳法主题句直接归纳法 关键词整合归纳法关键词整合归纳法22021/7/23概要写作概要写作No 1 A typical lion tamer(驯兽师) in peoples mind is an entertainer holding a whip and a chair. The whip get all of the atten

2、tion, but its mostly for show. In reality, its the chair that does the important work .When a lion tamer holds a chair in front of the lions face, the lion tries to focus on all four legs of the chair at the same time .With its focus divided, the lion becomes confused and is unsure about what to do

3、next. When faced with so many options, the lion chooses to freeze and wait instead of attacking the man holding the chair.32021/7/23概要写作概要写作No 1 A typical lion tamer(驯兽师) in peoples mind is an entertainer holding a whip and a chair. The whip get all of the attention, but its mostly for show. In real

4、ity, its the chair that does the important work .When a lion tamer holds a chair in front of the lions face, the lion tries to focus on all four legs of the chair at the same time .With its focus divided, the lion becomes confused and is unsure about what to do next. When faced with so many options,

5、 the lion chooses to freeze and wait instead of attacking the man holding the chair. When faced with the four legs of a waving chair, a lion is unable to focus, feels confused and freezes.42021/7/23 How often do you find yourself in the same position as the lion? How often do you have something you

6、want to achiever (e,g. lose weight , start a business , travel more ) -only to end up confused by all of the options in front of you and never make progress ? 52021/7/23 How often do you find yourself in the same position as the lion? How often do you have something you want to achiever (e,g. lose w

7、eight , start a business , travel more ) -only to end up confused by all of the options in front of you and never make progress ? When people are in the same position as the lion, they feel confused and make no progress. 62021/7/23 This upsets me to no end because while all the experts are busy deba

8、ting about which option is best, the people who want to improve their lives are left confused by all of the conflicting information .The end result is that we feel like we cant focus or that were focused on the wrong things, and so we take less action, make less progress, and stay the same when we c

9、ould be improving.72021/7/23 It doesnt have to be that way. Anytime you find the world waving a chair in your face, remember this: All you need to do is focus on one thing. You just need to get started .Starting before you feel ready is one of the habits of successful people. If you have somewhere y

10、ou want to go, something you want to accomplish, someone you want to become .take immediate action. If youre clear about where you want to go, the rest of the world will either help you get there or get out of the way .82021/7/23 It doesnt have to be that way. Anytime you find the world waving a cha

11、ir in your face, remember this: All you need to do is focus on one thing. You just need to get started .Starting before you feel ready is one of the habits of successful people. If you have somewhere you want to go, something you want to accomplish, someone you want to become .take immediate action.

12、 If youre clear about where you want to go, the rest of the world will either help you get there or get out of the way . People need to focus on one thing and get started immediately.92021/7/23 B. 妙用技巧，整理成文。妙用技巧，整理成文。 评分标准：评分标准： 理解准确，涵盖全部要点理解准确，涵盖全部要点 能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇 有效地使用语句建的连接成分，是所完

13、成的概要有效地使用语句建的连接成分，是所完成的概要结构紧凑；结构紧凑； 完全使用自己的语法。完全使用自己的语法。 1、确保要点不遗漏、确保要点不遗漏 2、注重行文表达，处理信息整合。、注重行文表达，处理信息整合。 a. 对原来的语言进行语态转换或同义替换。对原来的语言进行语态转换或同义替换。 b. 适当添加衔接词、过渡句适当添加衔接词、过渡句 c. 尽量使用贴切的高级词汇、句型。尽量使用贴切的高级词汇、句型。102021/7/23A possible version In face of the four legs of a waving chair, a lion stays still,

14、unable to decide which one to concentrate on, which is often the case with humans. When confronted with numerous choices, people tend to shrink back, making no advances. Actually, to seek a way out of the dilemma, what people are supposed to do is make a choice anyway and act upon it instantly. 1120

15、21/7/23A possible version In face of the four legs of a waving chair, a lion stays still, unable to decide which one to concentrate on, which is often the case with humans. When confronted with numerous choices, people tent to shrink back, making no advances. Actually, to seek a way out of the dilem

16、ma, what people are supposed to do is make a choice anyway and act upon it instantly. 67 words122021/7/23A possible version In face of the four legs of a waving chair, a lion stays still, unable to decide which one to concentrate on, which is often the case with humans. When confronted with numerous

17、 choices, people tent to shrink back, making no advances. Actually, to seek a way out of the dilemma, what people are supposed to do is make a choice anyway and act upon it instantly. 67 wordsfreezes承上启下过渡句承上启下过渡句faced with many optionsIt doesnt have to be that way.132021/7/23A possible version In f

18、ace of the four legs of a waving chair, a lion stays still, unable to decide which one to concentrate on, which is often the case with humans. When confronted with numerous choices, people tend to shrink back, making no advances. Actually, to seek a way out of the dilemma, what people are supposed to do is make a choice anyway and act upon it instantly