大学英语四级作文谚语名言类PPT学习教案

1、会计学1大学英语四级作文谚语名言类大学英语四级作文谚语名言类（一般二至三句）（一般二至三句）conclusion:阐明其现实或更深远意阐明其现实或更深远意义义第1页/共19页One of the great men once remarked, “Health is above wealth”. (没有必要用一对引没有必要用一对引号）号）改为：改为：As the saying goes, health is above wealth. 第2页/共19页第3页/共19页life.n2. It indicates that making money at the cost of health is

2、 not worthwhile.n2. it means only people who are in good health are able to lead a meaningful life.n3. I cannot agree with it more. n3. Though the proverb convey some sense, I could not fully agree with it.第4页/共19页n businessman who work so hard that he collapse eventually/a rich man with severe heal

3、th problemsnMy friends/my father/myself第5页/共19页of 56. 第6页/共19页Take Stevie Hawking for example. An intellectual giant as he is, the great man undoubtedly misses opportunities to experience the physical world for his paralysis. What a pity! 说理 Without a good health, we can not travel or study, thus op

4、ening our mind and enriching our life. 第7页/共19页第8页/共19页achieve success without nAll evidence points to / justifies/ lends support to the fact 第9页/共19页第10页/共19页第11页/共19页translator and a university graduate eventually. Can you say that her life is lifeless or meaningless? Definitely no. (论点2) Furtherm

5、ore, poor health sometimes is a blessing in disguise. Stephen Hawking once remarked, not until he was diagnosed with AIS, an incurable disease, did he begin to really focus his attention on his real interest-space cosmology. The realization that his days are numbered helped him think really serious about his research.n第三段 To sum up, I think the meaning of life lies not in health but in many others. 第12页/共19页n11分切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。n11-14 句子意思清楚，没有或者几乎没有语法错误，逻辑连贯。说理重点突出，紧凑清楚，能够灵活且正确运用多种句式。n14分切题