作文学案 (2)

1、健坤外国语学校高二英语作文学案 (No.1)假设你是校园网站“交流”栏目的版主，Jack 发来电子邮件叙述因分班离开院办最好的朋友，他担心距离会使友谊消失。请你根据以下提示发一封不少于120词的邮件给Jack, 提出合理的建议。1. Jack 的看法不完全正确；2. 应珍惜友谊，和朋友约时间谈一谈自己的感受，并希望能继续保持友谊。对方会因此而感动，也会珍惜友谊。3. 如果对方时间允许，可约在课余时间或周末见面交流。I. Analysis._II. Typical mistakes 1. 这是一篇以供材作文，学生自由选择的空间不大，跑题的可能性很小。但部分学生也出现如下问题：时态错用或混用；表达

2、汉式，无词法，句法。2. 词汇贫乏，词性概念不清，缺乏高级词汇；未有效地使用过渡词（尤其是陈述理由时），语句生硬；句子结构缺乏多样性，篇章连接手段单调；3. 错误较多，如：单词拼写及大小写，名词的数，代词的格，动词的时态和语态，主谓一致等；4. 不规则动词变化表过关不严，希望再次过关；5. 卷面不整，乱涂乱改，标点不明，字迹难辩；6. 写不完或干脆不写；he/she/him 根本不分。7. 文章链接不自然，过渡生硬, 建议不具体，引用不自然。8. 老师整理的“加油站”和“再看一眼”是同学们的粮食，很重要的。作文中一定要体现这些句型，运用意识很重要，切记切记！III. Key Phrases1.

3、谢谢你的邮件_2.担心_3.如下_4.相信_5.谈心_6.维持_7.真实的_8.交流_9.不同意你的看法_10.如果方便_11.时间允许_12.课余时间_13.感动_14珍惜友谊_IV. Excellent sentences1A friend is just the one who offers you a shoulder when you need it; the one who cries when you are sad; the one who laughs when you are happy. So I wish you get along with your friend w

4、ell. (贺章蓉)2. Thanks for your letter and I will give some useful advice to you. It is important for you to build a strong relation with your friend.(黄红艳)3. In my opinion, true friendship will not disappear just because of distance. So there is no need for you to worry. (彭稀)4. The second thing, I thin

5、k, you should do is that you should always have talks with her face to face after school.(朱凯玲)6. Friendship is a kind of treasure in life, which is like a bottle of wine.(周倩)7. If I were you, I would treasure the friendship which is playing an important role in my life.Looking forward to your next e

6、-mail. （肖美）8. It is clear that friendship is important to you. And then I will give you some advice on how to rescue your friendship. (李青霞)V. Suggested sentence structures to be used in this passage.1. It is difficult / impossible / interesting/important for sb to do sth_2. There is no doubt / denyi

7、ng that_3. Only in this way / by doing so， can we_4. My views/suggestions/plans are as follows_5. What surprises/ impresses / excites me most is that_6. I think the reason why is that_VI. One possible versionI think what you are worrying about is not a big problem. When students move between classes

8、, ole friendship often suffer as new ones seems to take place. But it isnt always the case.If you truly value the friendship, you should be able to make an effort to promote. Find him or her during the breaks between lessons or at some other time. Explain that you feel as if the two of you are growi

9、ng apart and that you dont want this to happen. He or she will most probably be touched by this and try to promote the relationship. If he or she feels the same way, you can arrange more time together after class or at weekend. Try talking some action! Good luck! Yours, Tom VII. Huang Wumeis excelle

10、nt essay健坤外国语学校高二英语作文学案(第一月考) (No.2)SECTION C （25 marks）Directions：Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese请根据所给提示，以“Making friends”为题，用英语写一篇120字左右的短文。1.人需要朋友，有许多工作需要合作。人们在生活中有许多方面需要帮助；2.社会越来越复杂（complicated），无论我们走到哪里，都离不开朋友。我们既需要互相帮助，更需要友好；3.朋友不但给你帮助，而且给你生活的乐

11、趣；4.和朋友一起外出、游览，增强协作能力。注意：1.字数120左右；2.不要逐句翻译提示；可适当增加情节，使短文连贯I. Analysis._II. Typical mistakes 1. 这是一篇以供材作文，学生自由选择的空间不大，跑题的可能性很小。但部分学生也出现如下问题：时态错用或混用；表达汉式，无词法，句法；自由发挥过多，有跑题偏题之嫌。2. 词汇贫乏，词性概念不清，缺乏高级词汇；未有效地使用过渡词（尤其是陈述理由时），语句生硬；句子结构缺乏多样性，篇章连接手段单调；有的甚至是逐句翻译。3. 错误较多，如：单词拼写及大小写，名词的数，代词的格，动词的时态和语态，主谓一致等；4. 不规

12、则动词变化表过关不严，希望再次过关；5. 卷面不整，乱涂乱改，标点不明，字迹难辩；6. 写不完或干脆不写；he/she/him/her 根本不分。7. 文章链接不自然，过渡生硬, 引用不自然。8. 老师整理的“加油站”和“再看一眼”是同学们的粮食，很重要的。作文中一定要体现这些句型，运用意识很重要，切记切记！III. Key Phrases1.合作_2.许多工作_3.社会_4.像_5.变得_6.有必要的_7.有许多工作要合作_IV. Excellent sentences1. Friendship is just like sunshine that can warm your heart;

13、friendship is just like a glass of water that can be good for your health; friendship is just like fire that can light your way. (志嘉)2. It is also important for us to find one best friend that you can rely on and share feelings with, whom you can go outing and traveling with. What fun it is to have

14、such a best friend.(素琼)3. Friendship is important for us since we came to this world. It is just like sunshine which can cheer us up.(书桓)4. What fun it is to go shopping or fishing with friends when it is sunny, which leads to an improvement in our ability to cooperate with others.(建福)5. No, the wor

15、ld is getting more and more complicated, wherever we go, there is no denying that we all need friends. (符丹)6. Wherever we go, whatever we do, friends will always be standing beside me. (章蓉)7. As famous saying goes, “A friend in need is a friend indeed. So it is necessary that we should help each oth

16、er and be friendly to friends.(朝霞)8. Having friends means you will not be alone; means having someone you can rely on. And what I want to tell you is that it is really very important for us to make friends.(粟郴)V. Suggested sentence structures to be used in this passage.1. It is difficult / impossibl

17、e / interesting/important for sb to do sth_2. There is no doubt / denying that_3. Only in this way / by doing so can we_7. My views/suggestions/plans are as follows_8. What surprises/ impresses / excites me most is that_9. I think the reason why is that_VI. One possible versionMaking FriendsA person

18、 cannot live alone in society because there are many different kinds of work to do, which requires cooperation. Mens life depends upon each other in many ways.Our society has become more and more complicated. No matter where we go, live and work, we cannot work or live without friends around us. Som

19、etimes we might need their help. Of course, we will also lend them a hand whenever one is needed.When you have many friends, you will find that they can not only give you the aid you need but also make you feel the pleasure of living. They may be your good teachers who teach you many things about li

20、fe and the world. They may help you solve many problems. You may also enjoy going out with them and doing things with them. You will find life worth living. VII. An excellent essay from Liu Xiaoting in Class 43健坤外国语学校高二英语作文学案(M5U3单元考试) (No.3)SECTION C （25 marks）Directions：Write an English compositio

21、n according to the instructions given below in Chinese 假定你家李华，现就读与黄河中学。你校门前有一条路叫友爱路，路两旁全是各种小商店和饭店。上下班时，路边有经常摆满小摊，这严重影响了学校周围的交通秩序和环境整洁。请你给某报社写一封信，反映一下这情况，并发表你自己的看法。注意： 1. 词数不少于120个： 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇： 小摊: stallI. Analysis._II. Typical mistakes 1. 这是一篇以供材作文，学生自由选择的空间不大，跑题的可能性很小。但部分学生也出现如下问题：表达汉式，

22、无词法，句法；信息不全，遗漏重要信息点；自由发挥过多，有跑题偏题之嫌。2. 词汇贫乏，词性概念不清，缺乏高级词汇；未有效地使用过渡词（尤其是陈述理由时），语句生硬；句子结构缺乏多样性，篇章连接手段单调；有的甚至是逐句翻译。3. 错误较多，如：单词拼写及大小写, 标点符号，名词的数，代词的格，动词的时态和语态，主谓一致等；4. 不规则动词变化表过关不严，希望再次过关；5. 卷面不整，乱涂乱改，标点不明，字迹难辩；6. 写不完或干脆不写；he/she/him/her 根本不分。7. 文章链接不自然，过渡生硬, 引用不自然。8. 老师整理的“加油站”和“再看一眼”是同学们的粮食，很重要的。作文中一定

23、要体现这些句型，运用意识很重要，切记切记！III. Key Phrases1. 环境_2. 校门前 _3. 路两旁_4. 各种_5. 上下班时_6. 摆满_7. 影响_8. 交通_IV. Sentence translation1. 你校门前有一条路叫友爱路。2. 路两旁全是各种小商店和饭店。3. 上下班时，路边有经常摆满小摊。4. 这严重影响了学校周围的交通秩序和环境整洁。V. Suggested sentence structures to be used in this passage.1. It is difficult / impossible / interesting/impor

24、tant for sb to do sth_2. Only in this way / by doing so， can we_3What surprises/ impresses / excites me most is that_4. I think the reason why is that_V. One possible versionDear Editor,Im a student at Huanghe Middle school. Im writing to inform you of some problems near our school. I think these pr

25、oblems must be solved as soon as possible.In front of our school gate lies a road called Youai Road, on both side of which are many small shops and restaurants. Besides, during the rush hour every day, especially at noon, there are some food stalls along the road, which makes it difficult for studen

26、ts and vehicles to get through. Whats worse, the road becomes very dirty with so many plastic bags and so much garbage thrown everywhere.In my opinion, we students should be in a clean and quiet environment, where we feel comfortable and happy to study and live. So I hope some measures can be taken

27、to improve the condition.I look forward to receiving your reply. Yours sincerely Li HuaVI. Appreciation健坤外国语学校高二英语作文学案(M5U2单元考试) (No.4)SECTION C （25 marks）Directions：Write an English composition according to the instructions given below inChinese我们在一些公共场所可以看到“中式英语”（Chinglish）的标识，那是否应该彻底去除这些中式英语呢？请根据

28、此表，以“Should we get rid of Chinglish?”为题写一篇短文。注意：1.词数不少于120个； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯赞同者1.外国人很难理解。 2.对我们的英语学习产生不利影响。反对者1.中式英语让我们交流更方便。 2.有些中式英语很幽默你的观点。I. Analysis._II. Typical mistakes 1. 这是一篇以供材作文，学生自由选择的空间不大，跑题的可能性很小。但部分学生也出现如下问题：文章结构混乱；时态乱用；表达汉式，无词法，句法；信息不全，遗漏重要信息点。2. 词汇贫乏，词性概念不清，缺乏高级词汇；未有效地使用过渡词（尤其是陈述理由

29、时），语句生硬；句子结构缺乏多样性，篇章连接手段单调；有的甚至是逐句翻译。3. 错误较多，如：单词拼写及大小写, 标点符号，名词的数，代词的格，动词的时态和语态，主谓一致等；4. 卷面不整，乱涂乱改，标点不明，字迹难辩；5. 写不完或干脆不写；he/she/him/her 根本不分。6. 文章链接不自然，过渡生硬, 引用不自然。7. 老师整理的“加油站”和“再看一眼”是同学们的粮食，很重要的。作文中一定要体现这些句型，运用意识很重要，切记切记！在平常的学习中要注重所学知识的落实。III. Key Phrases1. 公共场所_2. 标识_2. 赞同者_4. 反对者_5. 产生影响_6. 交流_

30、7. 方便_8. 幽默_ 9. 外国人_IV. Sentence translation1. 我们在一些公共场所可以看到“中式英语”（Chinglish）的标识.2. 外国人很难理解。3. 对我们的英语学习产生不利影响4. .中式英语让我们交流更方便。 5. 有些中式英语很幽默V. Suggested sentence structures to be used in this passage.1. It is difficult / impossible / interesting/important for sb to do sth2. Only in this way / by doin

31、g so， can we3, which makes it possible for sb to do sth /, which makes sb. annoyed./, making sb. annoyed.4.I think the reason why is thatVI. Excellent sentences for appreciation1. With the development of China, more and more people study English who want to have a chance to go abroad. (宾水龙)2. Englis

32、h is a very important language in the world and as is known to us, we should learn English well. But there is much Chinglish around us.(贺晓波)3. The reason why Chinglish becomes more and more popular, I think is that Chinglish can make people happy. So, in my opinion, we should not get rid of it. (贺晓波

33、)4. With regard to the problem of whether we should get rid of Chinglish, there are different views as follows.(陈蓉)5. Wherever we go, we can see some Chinglish in our daily life. Should we get rid of it? When it comes to this question, different people have different opinions.and there is no doubt t

34、hat Chinglish has a harmful effect on our English study. However, every coin has two sides, some people are in favor of it. They think.(夏震)6. Some people think the reason why we should get rid of Chinglish is that it is hard for foreigners to understand. Besides, it will have a bad effect on our Eng

35、lish study. However, others dont think the same.(李青霞)VII. One possible version Should we get rid of Chinlish?It is true that nowadays Chinglish in public sighs can be seen, especially in big cities. Opinions vary from person to person on whether we should get rid of Chinglish.Some are in favor of th

36、e idea of getting rid of it. They believe that foreigners can hardly understand Chinglish and Chinglish may cause misunderstanding. More importantly, Chinglish will have a bad effect on our English learning. However, some say no to the suggestion. In their opinion, for one thing, Chinglish makes it

37、convenient for us to communicate with each other; for another thing, some Chinglish in public sign is humorous and adds some pleasure to our life in a sense.As far as Im concerned, we should learn standard English instead of Chinglish because only in this way can we better communicate with foreigner

38、s. (132字)健坤外国语学校高二英语作文学案(期中考试) (No.5)Class43SECTION C （25 marks）Directions：Write an English composition according to the instructions given below inChinese假如你校要举办一次主题为“How to communicate with our parents”的英语演讲比赛，请你用英语写一篇演讲稿。要点如下：1尊重并信任父母； 2常与父母聊天； 3换位思考问题。注意：1词数不少于120个；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3参考词汇：换位思考 pu

39、t oneself in anothers shoesI. Analysis._II. Typical mistakes 2. 这是一篇以供材作文，学生自由选择的空间不大，跑题的可能性很小。但部分学生也出现如下问题：文章结构混乱；时态乱用；表达汉式，无词法，句法。2. 词汇贫乏，词性概念不清，缺乏高级词汇；未有效地使用过渡词（尤其是陈述理由时），语句生硬；句子结构缺乏多样性，篇章连接手段单调；有的甚至是逐句翻译。3. 错误较多，如：单词拼写及大小写, 标点符号，名词的数，代词的格，动词的时态和语态，主谓一致等；4. 卷面不整，乱涂乱改，标点不明，字迹难辩；写不完；5文章链接不自然，过渡生硬, 引用不自然。6. 结尾是用 as follows; 简单的罗列要点，无拓展；谚语运用很突兀或是运用不恰当；接着开头写：Parents 后用复数；没有结尾； 7. 老师整理的“加油站”和“再看一眼”是同学们的粮食，很重要的。作文中一定要体现这些句型，运用意识很重要，切记切记！在平常的学习中要注重所学知识的落实。III. Key Phrases1.像_2.越来越紧密_3.尊重_4.必要的_5.信任_6.聊天_IV. Suggested senten