中考英语书面表达试题和答案

1、一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）1 亲爱的同学们，初中生活即将结束，你们一定有很多的感触.假如你是Tony,名城中学九（ 1）班的学生。请以My junior high school life 为题,写一篇80 词左右的短文。提示：1 . 个人基本情况介绍2 .校园（校园干净而美丽，活动非富多彩）；老师（传授知识，教会做人,经常鼓励）；同学（和睦相处，互相学习，共同进步）。3 .对学校、老师、同学表达感谢和祝福。要求：1 . 文章包含以上提示内容，适当发挥。2 .文中不能出现真实的校名和人名。【答案】My junior high school lifeMy name is Tony. I

2、 am studying in Grade 9.As time goes by, my colorful junior middle school life is coming to an end. I m glad to tell you something about my school life.Our campus is clean and beautiful, and there are all kinds of activities. Our teachers teach us rich knowledge and how to behave ourselves. They als

3、o encourage us to work hard. We all get on well with our classmates. Besides, we learn from each other and make progress together.I thanks for my school, my teachers and my classmates. Wish them better.【解析】【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我的初中生活。【详解】结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些

4、常见句式的应用，比如：My name is ， I m glad to ， Our campus is ， Our teachers teach us 等句式的应用。 写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我的个人情况，接下来介绍我们的校园，老师和同学，最后对学校、老师、同学表达感谢和祝福。此处go by, come to an end, tell sb about sth,all kinds of, behave oneself, encourage sb to do sth, get on with, lear

5、n from, make progress 等这 些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。2 安全对每个人都很重要。请根据以下信息内容提示，写一篇关于校园安全的英语小短文。提示： 1. 体育锻炼2. 上下楼梯3. 交朋结友4. 食品卫生要求： 1. 语句通顺，表达准确，内容连贯；2短文可以适当发挥；但要包含以上要点。3词数：80 100 词。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。Safety has become the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to us students.【答案】Safety has

6、become the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially importantto us students. First, we should take care not to get ourselves injured while we are having sports. Second, There are too many students at school, and our hallways are too narr ow. So don t crowd with each other especially w

7、hen we go upstairs or downstairs. Or there may be an accident.Besides, we should be friendly and get on well with others, don t quarrel or even fight. Last butnot least , We should be careful to eat healthy food and keep away from junk food, which is harmful to our health.In a word, it's importa

8、nt to remember these for us all.【解析】这是一篇给材料作文。结合要点提示，可知本文主要从三个方面进行叙述，注意围绕要点组织材料，适当发挥。根据材料内容确定主要句子的时态，及句式等重要内容。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。3 书面表达你即将升入高中，面临寄宿(a boarding school)和走读(a day school)两类学校的选择。请你以 “ A boarding school or a day school为题。写一篇短文，内容须包括：读寄宿学校的利”和弊；读走读学校的利和弊；你的选择和理由(不得与上述两点内容重复)。

9、注意： 1. 词数 ;100 词左右(文章开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；2 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息；3 文章必须包含提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥。A hoarding school or a day schoolWe are going to graduate from our middle school, 【答案】We are going to graduate from our middle schools, and we will make a choice to enter a boarding school or a day school. Both kinds o

10、f school have their advantages and disadvantages.If we choose a boarding school, we will save time to study. However, we may have less time to stay with our family. If we choose a day school, parents can know more about our studies. At thesame time computer games and TV plays may make a bad influenc

11、e on us.As for me, I prefer a boarding school. We should pay attention to our studies to get good grades in the high school.【解析】【分析】整体分析：这是一篇给材料作文。可以分三段写。第一段要写总体交代你即将升入高中，面临寄宿(a boarding school)和走读(a day school)两类学校的选择。第二段要写详细叙述读寄宿学校的利弊；读走读学校的利弊。第三段要表述作者自己的选择和理由。【详解】写作之前要1.审清题目，看看有哪些要求？哪些时态？人称？2.确定文

12、章类型，记叙文？说明文？议论文？看图？还是应用文？3.确定时态，单一还是混合。4.写下关键词、短语、句型。 5.列出提纲和段落，并运用适当的句型和过渡词衔接。6.根据提纲和段落结构句型及关键词句完成文章。写完后反复阅读修改推敲润色，人称、时态、单复数一致等。运用自然过渡法和自然衔接法来是文章更为地道、通顺、纯正。用的短语、句型：both kinds of、If we choose a boarding school 、 At the same time 、 As for me, I prefer a boarding school 、 pay attention to 、来增加了文章的亮点。【

13、点睛】这类作文的写作方法要注意认真审题，注意过渡性语言的使用。做到：要点要全，表达要清晰明确，使用短语，句型要准确，注意避免拼写和语法错误。4 Life is just like a mirror, you smile at it, and it smiles at you, too. 请你以 “ Learn to Smile为题，根据下表所列的要点写一篇100 词左右的文章(文章开头已给出)。学会对自己微笑1 、面对困难与烦恼学会微笑(考试失利、被别 人误解等)。2、使你自信，击败你的人有时就是你自己。3、有益于身心健康。学会对他人微笑1 、便于与他人之间的交流。2、给别人带来快乐,自己也快

14、乐。微笑是一种语言人人都能懂，传递友谊，拉近距离。1 、参考词汇：对某人微笑smile at sb. 误解 misunderstand2、短文必须包括所有内容要点，不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺。Learn to SmileI remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence of it is“ Just a smile and the rain is gone.you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile .【答案】Learn to SmileI remember a song

15、by Westlife, the first sentence of it is“ Just a smile and the rain is gone.Do you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile .First, learn to smile at yourself when something unpleasant happens in your life. If you fail anexam or you are misunderstood by your friends, don t be sad. Just smile

16、at yourself . Smiling atyourself brings back your confidence . Sometimes the one who beats you is not others, but yourself. And smile can also keep you healthy.Second, learn to smile at others. It will make you communicate better with people. Smiling at others makes yourself happy as well.In a word,

17、 smile is a kind of language belonging to everyone. It passes love and friendship and helps shorten the distance between you and other people. Living with a smile ,every day will be shiny.【解析】 这是一篇表格式的作文，要点是一表格的形式出现，首先要研究表格，找出需要表达的要 点，然后加以整合，也可以适当增加使意思更连贯，但要点一定要全，不能漏掉。写作时要注意遣词造句，不能受汉语的影响，要用地道的英语表达，注

18、意时态，语态，单词拼 写，语法等问题，用好简单句，适当用复杂句。可以用一些高级词汇。还要注意句子的关联。5 书面表达 难忘的初中三年学习生活已经接近尾声，你一定既有收获又有不足，也有许多对自己未来的期待。请以My Unforgettable Middle School Life 为题，根据下面的思维导图，写一篇短文介绍自己难忘的校园生活并描述对未来的期盼。注意:1.词数90 左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数;2 .短文须包括所有要点，并补充相关信息，可适当发挥。语言连贯、通顺;3 .短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。How time flies! My colourful mi

19、ddle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself.【答案】How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I thinkabout myself.In the past, I learnt a lot of knowledge not only from books but also from the teachers. So, I am very grateful to them. They he

20、lped me a lot! I also got on well with my classmates. We shared happiness and sadness together. We were like a big family. However, I still have a lot to improve. I didn t do well in Maths because I gave up easily when meeting difficult Maths problems. Besides, I didn t havgeo oad sense of time. I u

21、sed to go to school late and that made my teachers angry. Therefore, in the future, I will try my best to become better. I will work harder and organize my life and my time better. I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me!【解析】试题分析：本篇书面表达以“ My Unforgettable Middle School Life 为题，结合本

22、题 ”所给的写作信息，阐述自己难忘的中学生活。根据内容提示可知本文会用一般过去时态和一般将来时态，注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，最后最好要表达 出自己的感想和看法。写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，要点齐全，语言简练。文中not only but also， help a lot，share happiness and sadness， do well in ， give up, besides， so, and, a good sense of time, used to, make sb.+adj.，

23、therefore, be proud of 等词（组）恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；文章的最后 I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me! 表达了自己愿望与想法，使文章增色不少，值得学习。6 自信赋予人力量，带给人快乐。拥有自信，人生处处是舞台，生活越来越精彩。假如你是李华，请你为校刊英语园地“自信助我成长”专栏写一篇短文，谈谈自信的重要性，分享一次使你更加自信的经历，并说说我们如何更加自信。提示词语：powerful ， happy， believe in ， keep doing提示问题：Why is it im

24、portant to be confident?What experience made you more confident?How can we become more confident?It's very important to be confident【答案】It s very important to be confident. Se-lfconfidence can bring us courage to stick towhat we do. So it s valuable to us.When I was in Grade 7, once my teacher a

25、sked me to make a speech in class. Although I practiced it for many times at home, I still felt nervous and forgot thewords at the beginning of it. Then I breathed deeply and relaxed myself. You can t believe how happy I was when I recalled thespeech and finished it successfully.My teacher thought h

26、ighly of my performance and I got much encouragement from my classmates. From then on, I have become more and more confident.To build confidence, firstly we need to clearly know about our own advantages and try to develop them. It is the most important that we should put in enough effort to what we

27、do. Then we can finally make it and gain more confidence.【解析】本文内容应包含表格中所提供的所有信息。灵活运用各种句式，采用不同的表达方式将各个要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确，简洁。最后必须认真 查验是否有漏写，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。点睛：这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如at the beginning of ；know about ； make a speech 等； When ； Although ； Then ； From then on, 等的运用，使文 章的表达更有逻辑性，更

28、富有条理；同时语言流畅，内容完整，是一篇不错的范文。7 随着网络的发展、人们消费观念的转变，购物方式也在悄然的发生变化。“网购 ”已成为一种时尚，越来越多的学生也加入到网购群体中。请你根据以下表格的提示，写一篇网上购物的文章。优点( advantage)1. 不需要出门；节约时间；避免拥挤、劳累2.价格通常比较便宜3.可供选择的范围广，品种多缺点( disadvantage)1. 只看到图片，看不到商品本身2.容易购买大量不太需要的东西，造成浪费你的观点提示词汇：网购shopping online; 商品 goods; 导致 cause注意：1.所表述的内容必须包含表格中的所有方面，可适当发挥

29、；2 .文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称；3 .词数：100 词左右，文章开头已给出，但不计入总数。With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online.【答案】With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It hasbecome fashionable. Some of us students also join the group.Shopping online has

30、many advantages. Just with the click of a mouse, you can buy what yo u re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowds and save a lot of time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.Ever

31、y coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On one hand, it s very easy for youto buy goods that aren t like the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That s a waste of money.All in all, I love shop

32、ping online.【解析】本文属于材料作文，主要讲述网购的优点和缺点。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如convenient ， disadvantage， ingood quality ， figure out ， have the chance to do ， be attacked by， of course， take care of 等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。点睛：

33、写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符 合要求。构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的

34、语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词 数是否符合要求等。8 根据要求完成大作文，词数：80-100 词丰富的校本课程可以让你的生活更精彩请根据下列图示中所提供的特色课程，按内容及要求，用英文完成写作内容包括：1 Which course（ s） do you like？2 Why do you like it/them ？3 What can you learn from it/them ？ 写作要求：1 依据你的兴趣选择课程（数量不限）；2短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；【答案】例文Of all the courses, I like sports best because I am int

35、erested in playing basketball. I can make a lotof friends when I play basketball. And I will learn the spirit of teamwork. So I want to choose sports.I also like paper cutting because it is very interesting and I can learn more about traditionalChinese culture. That why Is want to choose paper cutti

36、ng.I often help my parents with housework when I am free. So I want to learn how to cook deliciousfood. I think it is very useful course because I d like to cook something different for my parents.I believe these courses will make my life more colorful.【解析】【详解】1 . 题干解读。本题属于材料作文，主要讲述你喜欢的学科、原因以及你从你选择的

37、学科中学到了什么。注意时态的运用，灵活运用所学单词、短语和句型。切记不要遗漏要点。2 .例文点评：这是一篇优秀的文章，很好地完成了试题中所规定的内容。条理清晰。前三段分别讲述他所喜欢的学科（体育、剪纸和厨艺），并解释愿意以及收获，最后一段讲述这些学科对他的生活的意义。3 .高分亮点：单词短语：like.best, be interested in, make friends, the spirit of teamwork, want to do, help sbdo, be free, would like to do, make sth adj 以及形容词修饰复合不定代词时，形容词放后面。高

38、分句型：That s why I want to choose paper cutting中why 引导的表语从句。【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如like.best, be interested in, make friends, the spirit of teamwork,want to do, help sb do, be free, would like to do, make sth adj 以及形容词修饰复合不定代词时，形容词放后面等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡

39、，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。9 书面表达初中就要毕业了，校报“英语角 ”栏目向同学们征集毕业晚会的计划。假定你是李华，请根据要点 写一封信，说说你的计划。活动毕业晚会时间6 月 28 日晚上七点地点学校礼堂school hall参与者全体初三学生和老师活动内容1. 邀请校长作演讲；2. 互赠礼物送祝福；3. 各班表演精彩节目4.要求：1.要点完整，可适当发挥，使句子通顺，连贯; 2.正确使用语态，语法正确，

40、书写整洁。 3.80 词左右，开头结尾己给出，不计入总词数; 4.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名。Dear editor,I am very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation party.Best wishes,Yours Lihua【答案】Dear editor,I'm very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation ceremony. The ceremonywill be held in our school hall

41、 at 7 o clock on June 28th.I have planned three activities for it. Firstof all, we would like to invite our headmaster to make a speech and give us his best wishes for a bright future. After that, every one give each other gifts and blessings. And then each class will give a wonderful performance. I

42、n the end, some pictures will be shown to share the happy time we have had together.This is what we will do. I hope you will choose my plan. Best wishes,Yours,Li hua【解析】【分析】这篇书面表达主要是推荐自己的毕业晚会计划。【详解】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍毕业典礼活动计划。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写 作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。10 书面表达为感受母爱情深，弘扬知恩图报，某英语网站正在举办以"My Mother" 为主题的征文活动，提示：1 ）短文内容须包括所给内容，含母亲曾为你所做的事和你将为母亲所做的事各一件，并阐述原因；2