2019秋外研版八上(温州版)：Module6模块话题写作

1、Module 6 模块话题写作见学生用书B24in动物是我们人类的好朋友，但是越来越多的动物正濒临灭绝。请以Danger ”为题写一篇短文，介绍一种濒危动物，呼吁人们热爱动物、保护动物。 80 词左右。提示： 1.Where do they live?2 What do they feed on?3 Why are they in danger?4 What can we do to save them?in Danger【话题分析】本模块的话题是“保护濒危动物”，其书面表达的命题形式主要有以下几种：1.谈论动物园保护动物的利与弊；2.介绍一种或几种濒危动物的现状，鼓励人们保护动物；3.争做保

2、护动物的志愿者。【佳作欣赏】Pandas in DangerGiant pandas are Chinas national treasure.They live in Sichuan， Shaanxi， Gansu Provinces and so on.They have black and white fur , big eyes and round ears. They like eating bamboo best.Each panda needs to eat a lot of bamboo every day.A panda can live about twenty to tw

3、enty-five years.There are only about 1, 500 pandas in the world.Their number is getting smaller and smaller, because their living areas are becoming farmlands. We must try our best E protect them.【精彩点评】文中的一些短语，如：and so on, a lot of, try ones best to do sthi的运用给文章增添 了亮点。该句介绍了大熊猫的体貌特征，描绘出了大熊猫大眼睛、圆耳朵的可

4、爱形象。like doing sth. “喜欢做某事”，作者通过运用这一短语介绍了大熊猫喜欢吃竹子的生 活习性。该句是本文的亮点之一：“比较级+ and +比较级”结构以及现在进行时的运用突 出了大熊猫的危险处境，为后文发起呼吁作铺垫。此句呼吁人们保护大熊猫，起到了深化主题的作用；同时， must的使用，加强了句子 的语气，表达了作者对濒危动物的关爱。【学以致用】I .根据短文意思用适当的连接词完成短文What can we do to protect tigers? _1_, we should raise money to set up nature parks._2_, the gove

5、rnment is making plans to look after them._3_, we cant cut down trees or kill tigers any more.We are going to hand out notice to ask people not to do it._4 , there are scientists doing research to help tigers produce babies. _5_ we need to protect them better.1. First 2. Second_ 3. Besides_4. Whats

6、more_5. _AlL_in_all（答案不唯一，符合逻辑即可）_H .写作微技能：1 + n（n 3）写作拓展策略请欣赏下面的片段： Nowadays tigers are becoming fewer andfewe r Theyfeed on small animals which are getting fewer and fewer.Peopleare killing them to get their meat and fur.To protect them, we should create more nature parks for them and let them li

7、ve in peace划线部分就是“1：相当于主题句，斜体部分就是“n物对濒危动物一一老虎进行拓展：生活习性（吃小动物）+濒危原因（人类的捕杀）+保护措施（建立自然保护区）。请 对下面句子进行1 + n（n 3）拓展：The panda is one of the animals in danger.They eat bamboo shoots and leaves.However , the area_of_bamboo _is becoming smaller 、 so pandas have less land to ljve_on and less food to eat.We nee

8、d to offer them enough food to eat and e nough place_to live in._m .书面表达选做一近日，国家有关机构成功摧毁了一个跨越海南、广东和广西等省的野生动物销售 网络。这是全国鲜有的以互联网为平台，跨省非法贩卖珍贵濒危野生动物的新型案件。 假如你是李华，请为校刊英语园地写一篇题为“My Favourite Animal的文章介绍你所喜 欢的动物，并呼吁人们行动起来保护濒危动物。提示：1.最喜欢的动物及原因；2 .该动物面临的状况和导致这种状况的原因；3 .可能的解决方法；4 .呼吁人们保护动物要求：1.语句通顺，语意连贯，语法正确；

9、2包含所给提示，可适当发挥；3 80 词左右（题目已给出，不计入总词数）。My Favourite AnimalOf all the animals， I like pandas best.I like them because they are so cute and friendly.But they are in danger now.People destroy their living places.Whats mor，ethey dont have enough food to eat.We must think of ways to protect them.I think we

10、 should build more panda zoos and plant more bamboo for them.Many animals are in danger now.I hope everyone can care about the animals in danger now.I hope everyone can do something for them， so that we can keep our world full of interesting animals.选做二假如你是中国野生动物保护协会（CWCA） 的成员。请你根据以下内容提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍

11、生活在我国的某些动物的生存状况（ 以狼为例），并适当加以评论。提示：1.上世纪，有许多野生动物，如狼；2但是现在越来越少；3狼已处于濒危状态（没有食物，掠杀，失去家园）；4你的建议：建立更多的自然公园；阻止掠杀，不吃野生动物。要求： 1.80 词左右；2短文标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数；3要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。提示词：狼 wolf（复数wolves）;蓟县北部山区forests in the north of Jixian；种庄稼plant crops；盖房子 build housesWild Animals in DangerHello ， Im a member of CWCA

12、.Last century, there were many wild animals like wolves in the forests in the north of Jixian.But nobody sees them now because they are in great danger.Why？ The number of the wolves is getting smaller and smaller.Three things areto blame.First， wolves have no food to eat.Secon，dpeople are killing them.Third ， people plant crops and build houses in wolves home，s which makes them have no home now.Therefore，