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1、书面表达书面表达 中考英语专项复习中考英语专项复习曹树林曹树林书面表达中考考试要求书面表达中考考试要求要求学生能根据所给提示或要求学生能根据所给提示或要求，用英语写一篇言语正要求，用英语写一篇言语正确、内容完好、语句衔接的确、内容完好、语句衔接的短文。情景普通贴近学生的短文。情景普通贴近学生的学习和生活；提供情景的方学习和生活；提供情景的方式包括文字、图画、图表、式包括文字、图画、图表、提纲等；单词数量控制在提纲等；单词数量控制在80个词左右。个词左右。 一一. .评分原那么评分原那么 1.1.此题总分为此题总分为1515分，按五个档次给分。分，按五个档次给分。 2.2.评分时，先根据短文的内

2、容要点初步确定其所评分时，先根据短文的内容要点初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的言语要求来衡量、确定属档次，然后以该档次的言语要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。或调整档次，最后给分。 3.3.短文中假设出现真实的人名、校名或地名，酌短文中假设出现真实的人名、校名或地名，酌情减分。情减分。 二二. .评分规范评分规范 1.1.很好很好13131515分内容完好、涵盖了一切内容分内容完好、涵盖了一切内容要点、层次构造明晰、言语流畅、地道，有新意。要点、层次构造明晰、言语流畅、地道，有新意。言语根本无误。言语根本无误。 2.2.好好10101212分内容完好，涵盖了根本内容要分内容完好，涵盖了根

3、本内容要点，内容根本衔接，较明晰、言语较流畅、地道，点，内容根本衔接，较明晰、言语较流畅、地道，有少量错误。有少量错误。 3.3.普通普通7 79 9分内容较完好，但表达不够充分内容较完好，但表达不够充分，层次构造较不太合理、言语不够流畅、地道，分，层次构造较不太合理、言语不够流畅、地道，有较多言语错误。有较多言语错误。 4.4.较差较差4 46 6分只包含了少数要点，内容过少，分只包含了少数要点，内容过少，句子无条理，行文不衔接，言语表达错误较多，句子无条理，行文不衔接，言语表达错误较多，不能完好表达意思。不能完好表达意思。 5.5.差差0 03 3分只包含一个要点或所写内容与要分只包含一个

4、要点或所写内容与要求无关，内容不完好，言语表达错误很多，仅有求无关，内容不完好，言语表达错误很多，仅有几个单词可读，不能表达出与提示内容相关的意几个单词可读，不能表达出与提示内容相关的意思。思。 . .书面表达的评分细那么书面表达的评分细那么1. Cross-question(1. Cross-question(审题审题) )u Style (体裁体裁u Person人称人称u Tense时态时态安康很重要。在学习和任务的安康很重要。在学习和任务的压力日趋增大的今天，会休憩压力日趋增大的今天，会休憩的人才会有安康的身体。人们的人才会有安康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际安是如何度过假期的呢

5、？国际安康组织对此作了一次调查，右康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根图是他们此次的调查结果。根据他所得的信息，请为国际安据他所得的信息，请为国际安康组织写一篇完好的调查报告康组织写一篇完好的调查报告, ,并提倡大家进展假日休闲。并提倡大家进展假日休闲。Cross-question(Cross-question(审题审题) )visit friends or parentstravelstay at homeworkStyle (体裁：体裁： _Person人称：人称： _Tense时态时态: _调查报告调查报告第一人称第一人称普通如今时普通如今时1. Cross-questi

6、on(1. Cross-question(审题审题) )据实描写：据实描写：适当发扬：适当发扬：度假方式度假方式细节及提倡假日休闲细节及提倡假日休闲2. An outline drawing2. An outline drawingu List key points(列要点列要点)u Arrange and Add (规划加首尾规划加首尾) BeginningBody Ending Concluding sentence 结论句结论句Supporting sentence 支持句支持句细节、例子、数据或引文细节、例子、数据或引文 topic sentence 主题句主题句开门见山，开门见山，紧

7、扣主题紧扣主题总结观念，发表己见，总结观念，发表己见，首尾呼应首尾呼应总总分分总总 List key points1.A lot of people travel. 2.Some people stay at home. 3.Some other people visit friends or parents. 4.A few people work.Enjoy your vacation.visit friends or parentstravelstay at homework列要点时，内容、构造上不能有缺漏，如列要点时，内容、构造上不能有缺漏，如有漏点，扣分最多！有漏点，扣分最多！ Ho

8、w do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report. the beginning A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. (the key points) Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well. the ending加加(add)3

9、. Sentence Making 3. Sentence Making and Beautifying and Beautifying word word phrase phrase sentence sentence Beautifying 美化内容和言语表达内容和言语表达内容全面，表达有新意或亮点内容全面，表达有新意或亮点 How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report.(the beginning) A lot of people travel. Some people stay a

10、t home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.(the ending) most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays.美化美化(beautify)方法一方法一: :好心图义相近的好心图义相近的 高级词汇，防止行文单调高级词汇，防止行文单调 Most people

11、choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest.some people like to stay at home, watching TV or su

12、rfing the Internet to have a good rest.It makes them relaxed to visit friends or parents. A few people have to work. It makes people relaxed to visit friends or parents. A few people have to work. 方法二方法二 : : 活用多种句型活用多种句型, ,防防止反复和呆板止反复和呆板, ,添加文采添加文采尽量运用本人熟习的句型尽量运用本人熟习的句型,以正确、照射为最根本要求以正确、照射为最根本要求 Most

13、 people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. It makes them relaxed to visit friends or parents. A few people have to work. (the key points) Come and enjoy your vacation. People

14、 who relax well work well. the endingAs the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well. the ending只会用功不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻只会用功不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻Proverb谚语谚语方法三方法三: : 妙用引文和例子，旁征博妙用引文和例子，旁征博引，丰富文章内容，添加压服力。引，丰富文章内容，添加压服力。Sentence connectionsen

15、tencespassageLinking words衔接词衔接词连连(connect) How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report.the beginning As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. Come and enjoy your vacation.People whorelax well work well. the ending Most people choose to travel

16、to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. It makes them relaxed to visit friends or parents. A few people have to work. (the body)连连(connect) How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and

17、 here is our report. According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home,watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And it also makes them relaxed to visit friends or parents. However, a few people hav

18、e to work. As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. Come and enjoy your vacation.People Who relax well work well.方法四方法四: :妙用关联词，使行文衔妙用关联词，使行文衔接流畅，使文章富有层次感。接流畅，使文章富有层次感。4. Checking4. CheckinguSpelling(拼写拼写)uTense(时态时态)uGrammar (语法语法)uHandwriting(书写书写)uPunctuation marks(标点符号标点符

19、号)Great changes in my hometown For the past several years, my hometownchanges a lot. Such as in the past, the houses old and small, but now the buildings are tall and beautiful. And at that time, farmers work hardly and made little money. But now people are working in the factoryes and they make muc

20、h more money.Because its relaxing work in the factory, so they lead a happily life.Inworked hardbutfactorieshas changedhappywere5. Copying out 5. Copying out u书写规范，卷面整洁书写规范，卷面整洁书写不规范，卷面不整洁书写不规范，卷面不整洁, 0分。分。第三档普通：第三档普通： 79分分9分，再减去书写、卷面分。分，再减去书写、卷面分。2021,河北书面表达计河北书面表达计10分分假设在英语课上，教师请他们就假设在英语课上，教师请他们就“

21、Lucky Money(压压岁钱岁钱)这个话题分组进展讨论，但他以为同窗们对这个话题分组进展讨论，但他以为同窗们对“Hobbies喜好更感兴趣，建议教师改换话题喜好更感兴趣，建议教师改换话题。请他根据下面的提示和要求，写一份发言稿，谈。请他根据下面的提示和要求，写一份发言稿，谈一谈他的理由。一谈他的理由。提示：提示：(1) Why do you like talking about hobbies? (2) Whats your reason for not talking about lucky money?要求：要求：1发言稿须包括一切提示内容，可适当发言稿须包括一切提示内容，可适当发扬。

22、发扬。 2发言稿中不得涉及真实的人名、校名发言稿中不得涉及真实的人名、校名和地名。开头已给和地名。开头已给 出出 ，不计入总词数。，不计入总词数。 3词数：词数：6080。参考词汇参考词汇: ones own hobby, a proper topic(适宜适宜的话题的话题), personal, unhappy I think talking about hobbies is better than talking about lucky money. It is 提供中英文资料提供中英文资料 提供表格及文字阐明提供表格及文字阐明 2021，河北计，河北计15分分 英语课上，教师要求同窗们引见个人周末方案。英语课上，教师要求同窗们引见个人周末方案。假设下面表格内容是他的方案提纲，请根据表格假设下面表格内容是他的方案提纲，请根据表格提示的活动内容，写一篇发言稿，引见他的周末提示的活动内容，写一篇发言稿，引见他的周末方案，并在班上与同窗交流。方案，并在班上与同窗交流。要求：要求：(1)发