2020福建中考英语作文指导

1、2020 福建省中考英语作文写作满分标准参考很多同学英语作文写得长篇大论， 但是每次分数都很低。 有的老师说作文写简单句就可以了， 但 写的简单又拿不到文采分了，不知道到底该怎么写。 。我们知道， 中考英语分数， 评卷老师绝对不是胡乱按照自己的感觉来给的， 他们都有一个统 一的标准，如果你想要赢得阅卷老师的“芳心”，就得了解中考英语作文的评分标准，从而有目标 性地提高自己的英语写作能力，有计划地得练习。每年根据题目的不同，评分标准都会有所更改，但是其中比较大的几个项目是基本不变的。01 以总分 20 分为例：我们总结一下，书面表达对我们的要求有要点全、句子准、逻辑清、有亮点。老师会根据文章内容

2、的完整性、 语言的标准性及结构的合理性初步确定所属档次， 然后以该 档次的要求来衡量，确定或调档。着重注意文章中所用词汇、语法结构的准确性、上下文的连贯性及相关内容的完整性。这份评分标准是不是很专业？Let's put it in another way （换句话说） ：完全完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖所有内容要点。应用了较多的语法结构和词汇（丰富性） 。语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误， 但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致； 具备较强的 语言运用能力（准确性） 。有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。完全达到了预期的写作目的。这样是不是好理解一些啦？覆盖内容要点，是完成作文最基

3、本的要求。在此之上，影响一篇英语作文是否优秀的是：词汇、语法结构、连接成分。另外，还有一个不是秘密的秘密：书写决定印象分。02 以语言角度为例老师想看到文章是这样的：1. 词使用正确的、多样化的词汇与词组；并不是只有 beautiful 才可以表示“美”，你还可以用“attractive ”。2. 句正确的句子是前提，不用中式英语！适当使用复杂句（各种从句 ）、特殊句型。例：原句： I went to bed at 12:00.倒装句： Not until 12:00 did I go to bed.强调句： It was not until 12:00 that I went to bed.

4、使用特殊句型之后，你在老师的眼里就是一个有水平的小作者了。老师希望看到的是重点突出、 内容清晰的句子。 一个句子只能含一个要点， 也不是越长越好3. 亮点、出彩点谚语、排比、修辞等。亮点是一篇文章能否成为优秀文章的核心标准，例如在结尾总结点题的时候用一句谚语Each coin has two sides. ”来说明事物具有两面性，就能体现出这位同学的语言功底了。03 从结构角度来看英文文章结构特点为总分总的结构，注意分段，详略得当。首段开门见山略写 1-2 句，中间为主详写 5-8 句，结尾总结略写 1-2 句。04 从内容角度来看内容要合理性、连贯性、完整性、逻辑性等等，这些说起来有些抽象的

5、标准，老师会专门在【7 天英语作文训练】系列课程中会为大家具体演示讲解，大家会发现，其实掌握其中的窍门是 很容易哒！中考英语作文写作方法之口头通知常见写作模板口头通知常见写作模板开场白部分：Ladies and gentlemen, may I have your attention， please?I have an announcement to make.正文部分：All the teachers and students are required to attend it.Please take your notebooks and make notes.Please listen c

6、arefully and we 'll have a discussion in groups.Please come on time and don 't be late.结束语部分：Please come and join in it.Everybody is welcome to attend it.I hope you 'll have a nice time here.That 's all. Thank you.中考英语作文写作方法之应用文应用文1）英语书信的常见写作模板开头部分：How nice to hear from you again.Let

7、 me tell you something about the activity.I 'm glad to have received your letter of Apr. 9th.I 'm pleased to hear that you 're coming to China for a visit.I 'm writing to thank you for your help during my stay inAmerica.结尾部分：With best wishes.I 'm looking forward to your reply.I &

8、#39;d appreciate it if you could reply earlier.中考英语作文写作方法之说明原因型说明原因型Currently, XX has been the order of the day .This does demonstrate thetheory nothingis more valuable than XX.It is clear that ). If you , as a result, your dreams willcome true. On the contrary,if you. Failure will be followingwithy

9、ou. It turns out that all your plan falls through. Noone can deny anotherfact that .You don't have to look very far to find out the truth,inrespect that we all know. It will exert a profound influence upon.With reference to my standpoint, I think 中考英语作文写作方法之现象说明文 现象说明文Recently , what amazes us m

10、ost is, it is truethatThere are many reasons explaining.T he main reason is What is more .Thirdly . As a resultConsidering all these, Conclusion, F. or one thing fo, ranother_. In中考英语作文写作方法之图表作文的框架图表作文的框架As is shown/indicated/illustratedby thefigure/percentageinthetable(graph/picture/pie/chart),_ 作文

11、题目的议题 has been on rise/ decrease (goesup/increases/drops/ decreases),significantly/ dramatically/ steadilyrising/ decreasingfrom_in to in . From the sharp/ marked decline/ rise in thechart, it goes without saying that .Thereare at least two good reasons accounting for . On the one hand, .On theother

12、 hand, is due to the fact that . In addition, is responsible for .Maybe there are someother reasons to show . But it is generally believed that the abovementionedreasons are commonly convincing.As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that . I amsuremy opinion is bothsound and well-grounde

13、d.中考英语作文写作方法之议论文的框架议论文的框架1) 不同观点列举型(选择型 )There is a widespread concern over the issue that _作文题目 _. It is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from personto person.A majority of people think that _观点一 . In their views thereare 2 factors contributingto this attitude. In the fi

14、rst place, _ 原因一 .Furthermore, _原因二 . So it goeswithoutsaying that _ 观点However, some people hold the idea that _观点二 . In theirpoint of view, _ 原因一. On the other hand, 原因二 . Therefore, there is no doubt that_ 观点二 .As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that _ 观点一或二 . It is notonly becaus

15、e , butalso because . The more, the more .2）要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。1. 有一些人认为2. 另一些人认为3. 我的看法The topic of （主题） is becoming more and morepopular recently.There are two sides of opinions of it. Some people say A is theirfavorite. They hold their view for the reason （支持 A 的理由一） What is more, 理由二 ）.Moreover

16、, （ 理由三 ）.While others think that B is a better choice for the following threereasons. Firstly,（ 支持 B 的理由一 ）.Secondly （Besides）, （理由二） . Thirdly （Finally）, （ 理由三 ）.From my point of view, I think （我的观点） . The reason is that （原因 ）. As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain mychoice.

17、 For me, the former is surely a wise choice.3）给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点Some people believe that （观点一） . For example,they think （举例说明） And it will bringthem （ 为他们带来的好处 ）.In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing, （ 我不同意该看法的理由一 ）. For another thing, （ 反对的理由之二 ） Form all what Iha

18、ve said, I agree to thethought that （ 我对文章所讨论主题的看法 ）4）利弊型的议论文Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)_作文题目 . In fact, thereare both advantages and disadvantages in _题目议题 .Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspectsas follows. Firstly, _优点一 . And

19、secondly _ 优点二 .Just As a popular saying goes,"every coin has two sides", _讨论议题 is no exception,and inanother word, it still has negative aspects. To begin with, _缺点一 . In addition, 缺点二 .Tosum up, we should try to bring the advantages of _讨论议题 into full play, and reducethe disadvantages to

20、 the minimum at the same time.In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the 讨论议题 _.5 ) 答题性议论文Currently, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)_作文题目 .It is really animportant concern to every one of us. As aresult, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this

21、problem.As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to solve this problem.First of all, _途径一 . In addition, another way contributing tosuccess of the solving problem is _途径二Above all, to solve the problem of _ 作文题目 , we should find a numberof various ways.But as far as I am concerned, I

22、would prefer to solve the problemin this way, that is to say, 方法.6 ) 谚语警句性议论文It is well known to us that the proverb: " _ 谚语 "has a profound significance and valuenot only in our job but also in ourstudy. It means 谚语的含义 .T he saying canbeillustrated through a series of examples as follows.

23、A case in point is _ 例子一 . Therefore, it is goes withoutsaying that it is of great ofimportance to practice the proverb 谚语 .With the rapid development of science and technology in China, anincreasingnumber ofpeople come to realize that it is also of practical use to stick tothe saying: 谚语 . The more

24、we are aware of thesignificance of this famous saying, the more benefits we will get in our dailystudy and job.中考英语作文写作方法之说明利弊题型说明利弊题型要求先说明现状，再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从一个角度（利或弊）出发，最后要 求考生表明自己的态度。1. 说明事物现状2. 事物本身的优缺点（或一方面）3. 你对现状（或前景）的看法Nowadays many people prefer A because it plays a significant role in ourd

25、aily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First （ 的优点之一 ）. Besides （的优点之二） .But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. Oneof the important disadvantages is that （ 的第一个缺点 ） To make matters worse,（ 的第二个缺点 ）Through the above analysis, I believe that the pos

26、itive aspects overweighthe negative ones. Therefore, I would like to （我的看法 ）From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, weshould take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in.Only by this way, -（ 对前景的预测 ）中考英语作文写作方法之解决方法题型解决方法题型要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径1. 问题现状

27、2. 怎样解决 （解决方案的优缺点 ）In recent days, we have to face a problemA, which is becoming moreand more serious.First, （ 说明的现状 ） Second,（ 举例进一步说明现状 ）Faced with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope withthe situation. For one thing, （ 解决方法一 ）. For another（ 解决方法二 ）. Finally, （ 解决方法三 ）.Persona

28、lly, I believe that （ 解决方法 ）. Consequently,I'm confident that a brightfuture is awaiting us because （ 此方法的好处 ）.初中对比观点型作文写作模板 对比观点型作文写作模板1）要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。1. 有一些人认为。 。 2.另一些人认为。 。 3.我的看法。 。The topic of （主题 ）is becoming more and more popular recently. Thereare two sides of opinions of it. Some

29、 people say A is heir favorite. They hold their view for the reason of （ 支 持 A 的 理 由 一 ）What is more, 理 由 二 ）.Moreover, （ 理由三 ）.While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,（ 支持 B 的理由一 ）. Secondly （besides）, （ 理由二 ）. Thirdly （finally）, （ 理由三 ）.From my point of

30、 view, I think （ 我的观点 ）. The reason is that （原因 ）. As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice .2） 给出一个观点 ,要求考生反对这一观点Some people believe that （观点一 ）. For example, they think （ 举例说明 ）.And it will bring them （ 为他们带来的好处 ）. In myopin

31、ion, I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing, ( 我不同意该看法的理由一 ). For another thing, ( 反对的理由之二 ). Form all what I have said,I agree to the thought that ( 我对文章所讨论主题的看法 ).初中英语作文经典开头方式英语作文经典开头方式Type1 引述他人观点 (为提出自己观点铺垫 )1 It is widely(commonly) accepted(hold)+THAT2 A widely accepted(commo

32、nly) hold idea(point of view,viewpoint, opinion,assumption)is +THAT/NP3 A/The dominant(prevalent, prevailing)idea(see 2)is NP/to DO4 It is taken for granted+THAT(or:We often/frequently take it for granted THAT)5 People(The majority) seem to get accustomed to the idea(see 2),without questioning,THAT

33、)6 People are willing to regard NP1 as NP2/ADJ7 People are willing to DO,while reluctant to DOType2 提出异议1 However (But), 2 Such idea(see1-2),if not entirely ADJ1,is somewhat ADJ2 and needs careful consideration.ADJI=unreasonable,unacceptable, inappropriate,improper,undesirable,etc;ADJ2=misleading,do

34、ubtrul, etc3 In fact(As a matter of fact), (follow2)4 However, it is not (quite, necessarily)the case. (fruther5 This (It) is not (quite, necessarily) the case and needs to bo considered/discussed.(or:further consideration/discussion)Type3 论述的展开 :说明原因和理由 ,层进 ,举例 ,转折1 The reason lies in several aspec

35、ts, (2 The reason why+clause+1, underlined (3 There are several remarkable reasons. (4 层进 in addition, besides, fruthermore, what's more, on the other hand, meanwhile, for one thing for another; finally, above all, in short.5 举例 for example, for instance, such (general term) as (specific terms),

36、a typical (striking) example is that, a case in point6 转折 however, but, nevertheless,on the contrary7 条件 if , provided that, unless, as long as,etcType4 就而言 ;关于1 as far as is/are concemed: As far as current situation is concerned2 as t the problem as to NP有关的问题Type5 问题1 Although much effort has been

37、 made, the situation is far from satisfactory (or: the problem remains unsolved, little improvement has been achieved)2 There is a tendency, as recent study (investigation) has pointed out (shown, revealed, indicated),+THAT3 There is growing concern about +NP4 It will inevitably (is likely to )resul

38、t in (lead to ) unwanted (serious) consequence (or NP)5 Unfortunately, 6 We will not be able to afford the risk of overlooking the seriousness of the matter.7 The process, once initiated, is most likely irreversible.8 We are constantly (frequently) faced with NP (TYPE6 重要与必要 ;(应)注意与重视1 NP1 is of gre

39、at importance (necessity, value) in NP2 (or: NP is of enormous significance) (2 The importance (necessity) of NP (to do sth.) lies in (the fact) that3 NP1 plays, as is known, an irreplaceably important role in NP24 The irreplaceably important role NP1 plays in NP2 is significant (obvous)5 NP1 is an

40、indispensable part of NP2)6 It is important (necessary) to DO (or:THAT)7 Special attention should be pay to(or: We should pay special attention to )8 What we should take into consideration is +NPType7 行动 (1(immediate, emergent, effective) Measures are being taken (has been taken, should be taken) to

41、 DO3 We have made much effort, there is still more we need to make (cf. We have learnt a lot,there is much more we need to lea123)初中英语作文的结尾方式英语作文的结尾方式示例文章结尾的作用是概括全文内容,进一步强调或肯定文章的中心思想,使文章意义表达得更加深刻。文章结尾的形式也是多种多样的,常见的有以下几种 :1、首尾呼应 ,画龙点睛在文章的结尾 ,把含义较深的话放在末尾 ,以点明主题 ,深化主题 ,起到画龙点睛的效果。如“ I Cannot Forget Her

42、”（我忘不了她 ）的结尾 :After her death,I felt as if something were missing in my life. I was sad over her passing away,but I knew she would not have had any regrets at having given her life for the benefit of the people.2、重复主题句结尾回到文章开头阐明的中心思想或主题句上,达到强调的效果。如“ I Love My Home Town ”（我爱家乡 ）的结尾 :I love my home to

43、wn,and I love its people. They too have changed. They are going all out to do more for the good of our motherland.3、自然结尾随着文章的结束 ,文章自然而然地结尾。如“ Fishing ”（钓鱼 ）的结尾 :I caught as many as twenty fish in two hours,but my brother caught many more. Tired from fishing,we lay down on the river bank,bathing in t

44、he sun. We returned home very late.4、含蓄性的结尾用比喻或含蓄的手法不直接点明作者的看法,而是让读者自己去领会和思考。如“A Day ofHarvesting ”（收割的日子 ）的结尾 :Evening came before we realized it. We put down our sickles and looked at each other. Our clothes were wet with sweat,but on every face there was a smile.5、用反问结尾虽然形式是问句 ,但意义却是肯定的 ,并具有特别的强调

45、作用 ,引起读者深思。如“ Should We Learn to Do Housework? ”(我们要不要学做家务 ?)的结尾。Everyone should learn to do housework. Don't you agree,boys and girls?6 、指明方向 , 激励读者结尾表示对将来的展望 ,或期待读者投入行动。如“ Let 's Go in for Sports ”(让我们参加体育运 动) 的结尾 :As we have said above,sports can be of great value. They not only make peop

46、le live happily but also help people to learn virtues and do their work bettter. A sound mind is in a sound body. Let 's go in for sports.文章的结尾没有一定的模式 ,可以根据表达主题的需要灵活创造。一般的习惯是,一些记叙文和描写文经常采用自然结尾的方法;但说理性和逻辑性较强的说明文和议论文则往往都有结束语,以便使文章首尾呼应 ,结构完整。英语作文记叙文写作技巧记叙文是记人叙事的文章 ,它主要是用于说明事件的时间、背景、起因、过程及结果,即我们通常所说

47、的五个 " W "( what, who, when, where, why )和一个 " H "( how ) 。记叙文的重点在于 " 述说"和"描写 ",因此一篇好的记叙文要叙述条理清楚,描写生动形象。初中英语写作三大要点确定主题句主题句是对全文的概括，是文章的主旨。它能在文章中起到“画龙点睛”的作用。通常主题句 出现在一篇文章的开头，而后，全文对主题句所提出的内容进行解释，扩展。写主题句应注意以下几点： 归纳出你要写的文章的几个要点 提炼出一句具有概括性的话 主题句应具有可读性，抓住、吸引读者。注意篇章结构合

48、理布局一般为三段式开始部分说出文中的要点、核心问题。正文部分围绕主题开展叙述、讨论。结尾部分对全文的总结和概括。要做到全文中心突出、段落之间必须是有机地联系，内容完整、连贯。前后呼应，去除与主题无关的内容。写作技巧一 如何开篇技巧 1：主旨设问更给力I think it's very important for us to do sports. Why? Because it's good for our health and study.I think it's very important for us to protect environment. Why? Be

49、cause it's good for living.I think it's very important for us to learn English. Why? Because it's the most-widely used language in the world.技巧 2：从我们到我Different people have different , but/and I have/prefer 二 如何写正文句型变化：变化原则 1：表达观点要“自我”In my opinion, we should pay much more attention on t

50、he weak subjects! 变化原则 2 ：两句之间要过渡I left my pen at home. What was worse, the drugstore was closed that day. 变化原则 3：凡是问题阐述用形容词句型 普通级句型The environment is bad. 比较级句型The environment is getting worse and worse.The environment is getting much worse than before. 最高级句型I have never seen the worse environment.

51、 变化原则 4：表达作用多用 it 句式 Reading is a good way to relax myself.Watching movies is a wonderful way to learn English. 变化原则 5：增强情感转感叹How beneficial it is for us to read!How important it is for students to do sports.变化原则 6 ：事情到感情句型I was very happy that I got an A in English last term.It makes me feel happy

52、that I got an A in English last term. 变化原则 7 ：形容词句型升级It was an unusual experience in my life.It was one of the most unusual experience in my life.变化原则 8 ：活用 there be 结合定从Many reasons made me like reading.There are many reasons why I enjoy reading词汇变化：变化原则 1： make 更有 feelI made a progress in English.

53、 I feel proud.It makes me feel proud to make a progress in English.变化原则 2 ：连词不再用 and增补 not only but also , as well as 进阶 what's more/worse , furthermore转折 while, however变化原则 3 ：喜欢不再 like用 be fond of, enjoy, be crazy about变化原则 4：提出措施尽量不用 should用 suppose,had better, have no choice but, it's ou

54、r duty to三 如何结尾1.各种号召事不宜迟Don't put it off.2. 各种越来越多多益善the+ 比较级 + 主谓， the + 比较级 + 主谓 越就越The better we take care of the environment, the more beautiful the world will be.3. 名言警句学习类 Practice makes perfect.运动类 Rome was not built in a day.环保类 Nothing is impossible to a willing mind.爱好类 Interest is th

55、e best teacher.适合初中英语写作的 100 条经典谚语1. Where there is a will, there is a way.有志者，事竟成。2. Well begun is half done.好的开端是成功的一半。3. East, west, home is best.金窝、银窝，不如自己的草窝。4. There is no royal road to learning.学无坦途。5. Look before you leap. First think, then act. 三思而后行。6. It is never too late to mend. 亡羊补牢，犹为

56、未晚。7. Light come, light go. 来得容易，去得快。8. Time is money.时间就是金钱。9. A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真交。10. Great hopes make great man. 远大的希望，造就伟大的人物。11. After a storm comes a calm. 雨过天晴。12. All roads lead to Rome. 条条大路通罗马。13. Art is long, but life is short. 人生有限，学问无涯。14. Stick to it, and you ll succeed.只要人有恒，万事都能成15. Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy, and wise. 早睡早起，富裕、聪明、身体好。16. A good medicine tastes bitter.良药苦口。17. It is good to learn at another mans cost