2021届高考英语一轮复习题型集训之话题写作集训09计划与愿望(解析版)

1、2021年高考英语题型集训之话题写作09廿划与愿望1假泄你是李华，你的美国朋友TOny在你校做交换生，希望你教他包饺子，你写邮件告诉 他你的安排。内容包括：I-确定时间和地点一起买原材料：2回你家包饺子；3看网络视频预先学习：4吃饺子。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Tony,Yours,LI HUa【答案】Dear Tony,HOW are you getting along WItll your ChineSe StUdy these days?Iii yor IaSt e-mail you asked me to teach you to make

2、JIaOZi and IlOW ll tell you my plan. At tlree o'ClOCk this Sanlrday afternoon, meet you at the SChOOl gate, and tlen We ll de bicycles to a SUPermarket near my IlOme to buy the IlIaterIaIS for Jiaozi. After that, ll take you to my home to make Jiaozi. At &Imer time We ll COOk and eat JIaOZI

3、together. In Order to Ieanl faster and better, you Can WatCh a VIdeo about JlaOZi making m advance, WhICh you Can find a IOt On the Inteniet.m IOOkIng fbvard to Seemg you this SanIrday afternoon.YOurs.LI HUa【解析】【分析】本篇书而表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Tony在你校做交换生，希望你教他 包饺子，你写邮件告诉他你的安排。内容包括

4、：1确定时间和地点一起买原材料；2-回你家 包饺子；3一看网络视频预先学习：4吃饺子。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）:get along wt（取得进展）：oSkSbtodoSth（让某 人做某事）:Plan（计划）;tle SChOOl gate（校门口）： ride bicycles（骑自行车）：materals（材料）： m Order to（为 了）： m advance（提前）：On the Intenlet（ii 网上）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要 应用一般将来时。第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接

5、与过渡，书写一立要规范淸晰， 保持整洁美观的卷而是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多髙级表达方 式，如 In Order to Ieanl faster and better, you Can WatCll a ideo about jaoz InakIllg in advance, WhICll you Can find a IOt on the internet.运用非限制性宦语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式, 显示了很髙的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路淸晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增 色添彩。2.12月3日是世界助残日(the

6、World Disability Day),请你以学校英语俱乐部的名义向同学们 写一封倡议信，内容包括：L倡议的主题：我为残疾人做点什么？2活动安排：世界助残日当天，访问残疾人。3. 今后的打算。注意：L写作词数应为80左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位巻作答。Dear Classmates,The SnIdentS EngliSh CIUb【答案】Dear classmates,DeCember 3, the World DISabIlIty Day, is around the corner. TO ShOw Olir great ConCem about die disabled,

7、 We SnIdentS UnIOn Will OrgallIZe an activity With the theme 'fcWhat Can We do for die disabled AllyOne WhO VOIUnteerS IS welcome. OlI that day, We WIIl ViSit Solile disabled PeOPle near OUr school, doing SOme work for them, SuCh as Cleamng their houses and washing clothes. TO make this kind Of

8、activity a rule, every One Of US is WeICOme to get a disabled PerSOn as a partner, and WiIl do What We Can to help them.Tlle SUldentS EnglISh ClUb【解析】【分析】本篇书而表达属于应用文。要求考生学校英语俱乐部的轻义向同学们写一封倡议信。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：一般现在时和一般将来时结构：总分法要求：1倡议的主题：我为残疾人做点什么？2活动安排：世界助残日当天，访问残疾人。3. 今后的打算。第二步：列提纲（重点词组）die WOrld D

9、iSabIlity Day： around the comer： concern： disabled： organize： volunteer： Cleallingtle house； washing clothes：第三步：连词成句1. DeCember 3. the WOrld DISabIlIty Day, is around the comer.2. We StUdentS UnIOn Will OrgaiIlZe an activity with the tlierne Wat Can We do for the disabled''3. AlIyOne who VO

10、hmteerS is welcome.4. On that day, We Will -isit Some disabled PeOPle near OUr SChOOL doing SOme WOrk for them.SUCh as CleallIng their houses and WaShlng clothes.5. EVery One Of ILS is WelCOme to get a disabled PerSOn as a partner, and WiIl do What We Call to help them.第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1 表文章结构顺序：FirSt O

11、f all. FIrStIy/First, SeCOndIy/Second. Finally, Iii die end. At IaSt2. 表并列补充关糸: What is more. Besides, MOreOVer FUrthermore. Iii addition ;including,3表转折对比关系：Howevec On the COIlttay but, AlthOUgh+clause（从句）.On the One hand.4. 表因果 关系：COnSeqUently , Because. As, So. Thus, Tllerefore, AS a IeSlIlt连句成文，

12、注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范淸晰第五步：润色修改。【点睛】范文内容符合题目要求，格式正确，运用的语言和句式介乎英语的表达规范并且运用了髙级 句式如：AnyOIle who volunteers is W 亡 ICOme.这句话使用 WhO r 导左语从句：E*very one of us is WelCome to get a disabled PerSOn as a PartneE and WIll do What VXre CalI to help them.这句 话使用 What引导宾语从句;此外还使用了较多的高级词汇:around the corner：

13、concern； disabled： OrganIZe: olunteer 等。3你校正在组织英语作文比赛，请你以所向往的职业为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：L职业简介：2向往这一职业的原因。注意：1词数100左右：2. 短文题目已为你写好。My dream jobI have dreamed Of being a teacher SinCe I WaS a child, because I think teaching is a SaCred PrOfeSSion. AS We all know, CIlina has respected teachers and Vaiued educat

14、ion SInCe ancient times. BeSIdes, I Want to be a teacher because Of the POWer Of an example. MISS Li, the head teacher Of my JlmlOr high school, is a kind and PatIent PerSon WhO is Very POPUIar with US students. I hae always followed Iler as an example and IlIade UP my mmd to be a good teacher IIke

15、her When I grow up. AlthOUgll I know it is not easy to be a teacher. I Wlll IedOUble my efforts to reaze my dream.【解析】【分析】本篇书而表达是提纲类作文，要求以所向往的职业为题写一篇文章。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求介绍自己向往的职业：你校正在组织英语作文比赛，请你 以所向往的职业为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：1职业简介：2向往这一职业的原因。 时态应为一般现在时。第2步:根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）,如：ProfeSSlOn （职业）,SaCred （神圣的），r

16、espect teachers and alue education （尊师重教），example （榜样），IedOUble （加倍）及 reaze （实 现）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一立要规范淸晰， 保持卷而的整洁美观。【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贾，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，奇级词汇 有 dream Of domg（梦想做某事），because Of （由于）» make UP one's nimd to do （下左决心做某 事） g

17、row UP （长大），be POPUIar With （受欢迎）以及 redouble one's efforts to do （力Il倍努力做某事），而且还使用了非限定性定语从句"As We all know, Chma has respected teachers and VaIued education SilICe ancient times.", 宦语从句"Miss Li. the head teacher Of my juor high SChOOL is a kind and PatIent PerSOn WhO is Very POPUI

18、ar with US students.、', 状语从句"Although I know it is not easy to be a teacher. I Will redouble my efforts to reaze Iny dream."及T have dreamed Of being a teacher SinCe I vas a child, because I think teaclmg is a SaCred PrOfeSSiOn., 全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。4假如你是李明，刚刚髙中毕业，你的美国好友Jml给你写信祝贺并想了解你大学的

19、专业 学习计划。请你根据自己的情况用英语写封回信，主要内容包括：1. 你的专业选择；2. 你选择该专业的理由：3. 为此你打算怎么做。注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 文中不得出现人名、校名等真实个人信息；3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数：4. 可适当发挥，使行文连贯；5. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear Jmi.ThankS for your best wishes!BeSt WiShes. m IOOking fbrward to your reply.YbUrs,Ll Mmg【答案】Dear Jini.TllankS for your best wishes!m Wr

20、itIng to tell you about the major I WiIl CllOOSe in the university. I have decided to major i COmPUter SCienCe. Tllere are Some reasons Why I IlIade such a decision. Firstly, WitIl the development Of society. COmPUterS are Playlng an UlIPOrtant IOle In Inany aspects Of OUr life. SeCondIy browsing th

21、e IlIteIllet is One Of my hobbies, SO I Can StUdy COmPUter SCienCe better. LaSt but not least, bemg good at ComPUter SCIenCe nay help me find a good JOb after graduating from COnegeI know there is a IOng Way to go. SO now I must devote myself to StUdy and try my best to get good grades Ul all subjec

22、ts. If I CalI Ieanl COmPUter SCienCe as I wish, I WiIl focus On It and StUdy hard to develop SOme SOfhVare.BeSt wishes. m IOOkUlg fbard to your reply.Yours,LI Mmg【解析】【分析】本篇书而表达属于应用文.要求考生写一封回信，向朋友讲述自己大学的专业学习计划。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。结构：四段式结构。第一段表示感谢（已给出）：第二段讲述大学专业学习和理由；第三段讲述为此打算如何做：第

23、四段寒暄结束并表达期待（已给出九要求：1表达感谢（已给出）2讲述大学专业选择及理由1）号业选择:I卜算机科学专业（major in ComPUter SCIenCe）2）理由 （PIay an mportant role; One Of my hobbies; find a good JOb）3 .打算如何做 © （focus on; StUdy Ilard）4. 寒暄结束并表达期待（已给出）第二步:列提纲（重点词组）decide to do; InaJOr in: PIay an ImPOrtalIt role; graduate &oin COIlege; demote

24、OileSelf to; try one's best to; focus On第三步：连词成句1.1 have decided to major In COmPUter science.2. Firstly, with the development Of society, COmPUterS are Playmg an UlIPOrtant IOle m many aspects Of OUr fe.3. LaSt but IIOt least, bemg good at COmPUter SCienCe Inay IleIP me find a good job after gr

25、aduatmg from college.4. SO now I must devote myself to StlIdy and try my best to get good grades In all subjects.5. If I Can Ieanl ComPUter SCIenCe as I wish. I will focus on It and StUdy hard to develop SOme SOftWare.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）表文'7：结构顺序：first Of all: firstly/fir

26、st; SeCOndIy/second.; and then; finally; In tle ed; at IaSt连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一泄要规范淸晰。第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全而，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关 系。L作者在范文中使用了主从复合句，如：m vritmg to tell you about tle major I WIIl ChOOSe in the um-ersty.（我写信是想告诉你我将在 大学选择的&业。）这句话中"I WIll ChOOSe In the IInlVer

27、Sity 7jii语从句，修饰先行词the major, 从句中作宾语，关系代词可省略。TIlere are SOme reasons Why I made SUCll a decison.（我做出这样的决怎是有原因的C）这句话中 Why引导宦语从句。If I Can Ieanl COmPUter SCIenCe as I wish, I WiIl focus On It and SnIdy Ilard to develop SOme SofhVare.（如果我可以如我所愿学习汁算机科学，我会专注于它，努力学习，开发一些软件。） 这句话中If引导条件状语从句。2.使用 了 一些尚左词组，如 d

28、ecide to do: IllaJOr m; PIay an IiilPOrtant role: graduate from COIlege; devote OneSeIf to; try one's best to: focus On 等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很髙的驾驭英语的能力。列外，文章思路淸晰、层次 分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。5假泄你是李华，是重点中学的一名髙三学生。请你用英语给你的美国笔友JOIm写一封邮 件，向他描述你的高三生活。内容包括：L你的高三学习生活：2你理想的大学。注意：1词数100左右；2可以适当增加细肖，以使行文连贯；3邮件的开头和

29、结尾已经给出，但是不计入总词数。Dear JOIHLI am glad to hear &om you.YOurS sincerely,LI HUa【答案】Dear JOhlLm Very glad to receive your e-mail. I am Writlng to tell you SOmetlUng about my Iife Of SenIOr 3.AS you know, I am a SnIdent In a key CIaSS Of a key IlIgh SChOOl m OUr city. All the SnIdentS In my ClaSS WOrk

30、ery Ilard to get high SCoreS in the COnUng COllege EntralICe EXamllIation. Thus, most Of US are SUfferlng &om heay PreSSUre. BUt We Stnke a balance between WOrk and rest and help each Otller. Tlred as I am. I Wlil do my best to IInPrOe my grades. BeCaUSe I Want to enter my dream ImlVerSity Pekin

31、g UnrVerSity WhlCh is famous In ChIna- I would IIke to realize mydream by working Ilard-IS your IIfe Of SenIOr 3 busy and stressful?Yours sincerely,LI HUa【解析】【分析】本文是一篇应用文。给美国笔友Johil封邮件，向他介绍你的高三生活以及理想的大学。【详解】第一步：根据提示可知，本文需用第一人称。第步：根据写作要求,确定关键词（组）,如：a key IHgh school, COllege EntranCe EXamlnation. SUf

32、ier from, a balance between.and., realize OneS dream 等0第三步：确立文章结构，本文可以采取三段的写法，第一段主要说明收到对方来信很高兴， 并乐意介绍自己的高三生活：第二段介绍髙三的生活和理想的大学：第三段提出自己的疑问 表达自己想要了解对方的愿望。第四步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要 用一般现在时。第五步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一立要规范淸晰， 保持整洁美观的卷而是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻

33、借关系。作者在范文中使用了较多高级句型，如：BeCaUSe I Want to enter my d eam university Peklllg University, WhICh is famous in Chma.这句话运用了 WhiCh rJ 导的非限制性定语从 句：文章也使用了 一些固宦词组，如write to ; SUfFer from: do my best to等。全文中没有中国 式英语的句式，显示了很髙的驾驭英语的能力。列外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转 换自然，为文章增色添彩。6. 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友JIin在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感 兴趣

34、，计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件，内容包括：L表示欢迎：2. 推荐他上哪所大学：3建议他做哪些准备工作。注意：1词数IOO左右：2. 开头和结尾已给岀，不计人总词数。Dear JinLYburs,LI Hua【答案】Dear JinI,m SO glad to hear your fture education PIan In BelJing In your IaSt letter. FirSt I WOUld IIke to express my WarmeSt WeICOme to you and 1 am Sllre you Will have the most

35、Unfbrgettable experience during your COnege In BeiJmg-Leammg your keen mterest In ChineSe CUInIre, 1 SUggeSt you apply for Pekmg University, One Of the best un'ersites m China. ItS CllIneSe Llteranlre major is PerfeCt for you where you Call be COmPletely SOaked m PrOfblmd ChmeSe history and rich

36、 culture. AS for PreParatIOm SOme rea&ng In adace is Ileeded Ilke The Story Ofthe StOne Whlle SOme Onlme COllrSeS Of SPOken ChlneSe Can be helpful for you to adapt to the ChllleSe IallgUage environment.I SinCereIy hope your dream WlIl COme true and it's my PleaSlire to ShOw you around InBelJ

37、ing When that day comes. If you have Eirther questions, PleaSe feel free to Iet me know.YOUrS ,LI HUa【解析】【分析】本篇书而表达属于应用文，要求写一则书信。【详解】根据提示可知，本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一则书信，时态应为一般现在时。关键要 点如下：二对中国文化感兴趣，计划明年来北京上大学：二表示欢迎；二推荐他上哪所大学； 二建议他做哪些准备工作。第二步：根据关键要点，确怎关键词，如：express my vrarmest WelCOme （热烈欢迎），Pekmg Unnersity （北

38、京大学），SPOken ChmeSe （汉语口语），ChmeSe LIteratUre major （汉语言文学 专业）等。第三步：根据提示及关键词进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题以及句子结构完整C第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使之自然流畅，书写 一定要规范淸晰，保持整洁美观的卷而。【点睛】 本篇范文结构淸晰，内容完整，过渡衔接严谨自然，符合书信的要求，英中不乏亮点句型。非谓语动词的狡用 Leanling your keen mterest Hl ChlileSe culture, 1 SUggeSt you apply forPeking UiInerst

39、y, One Of the best Univrsities m ChiiIa.地点耳犬语从句的使用 ItS ChineSe LlteranIre major is PerfeCt for you Where you CaIl be ComPletelySOaked m PrOfbUnd ChIneSe history and rich culture.7刚上髙三的你，准备参加学校组织的英语演讲比赛。请以“我的梦想”为题，写一篇演讲稿 参赛，内容包括：1. 梦想的具体内容；2. 实现梦想的计划。注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。My DIeam【答案】

40、My DreamGOOd aften, my dear friends,EVeryOne has a dream. SOme hope to be a doctor to IleIP OtherS relieve Paln While OtherS dream about travelling. My dream IS to be a lawyer for m an OUtgOmg boy WhO CareS about IIght and xong. I WlIl have a great SenSe Of achievement If I IlelP others.TO reaze my

41、dream. m going to take SeleCtiVe COUrSeS to get familiar with basic laws, IeadIng more books On IaW as well. After graduation from college, I Wlll Set UP my own IaW firm to help more PeOPle In need.I know It is tough, but 1 do believe If the dream is big enough, the facts don't count.ThaIlk you.

42、【解析】【分析】本篇书而表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇演讲稿，谈谈自己的梦想。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根拯提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1.梦想的具体内容；2. 实现梦想的讣划。第二步:列提纲（重点词组）relee pam： dream about travelling： Care about： glt and xong; a great SenSe of： to IealIZe my dream； get familiar with： Set up： help PeOPle In n

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47、ctive COurSeS to get familiar With basic IaWs, Ieadlilg more books On Iaw as well.这句话运用 了动词不宦式 to IealIZe 和 to get familiar Wlth做目的状语，同时也使用了现在分词Ieadmg做状语。作者还使用了一些固宦词组，如 a great SellSe of： get familiar Wlth等。全文中没有中国式英if1；的句式，显示了很髙的驾驭英 语的能力。另外，文章思路活晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。&假泄你是李华，你与美国笔友JaCk约是在高考之后去

48、美国拜访他，但现在因为新冠疫情你 不能遵守约泄，请你给他写封邮件,内容包括：L诚挚的歉意：2因疫情触发学习中医的想法。注意：L词数IOO左右；2可以适当增加细丹，以使行文连贯；3. 信的开头与结尾已经给出。提加词:the novel Coronais新冠病毒Dear Jack.YbUrS,LI HUa【答案】Dear Jack.HOW is everything gomg With you? It is a IOng time SmCe We met IaSt time. MUCll to Iny regret, I m writing to extend my deepest apolog&

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52、美国拜访他，但现在因为新冠疫情你 不能遵守约定，请你给他写封邮件。【详解】这是一篇提纲类作文。审题：假定你是李华，你与美国笔友JaCk约泄在髙考之后去美国拜 访他，但现在因为新冠疫情你不能遵守约圧，请你给他写封邮件,内容包括：L诚挚的歉总： 2因疫情触发学习中医的想法。我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一 定要认真分析要点，不能遗漏要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑 关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更 有档次。根据写作要点我们可以初步确立文章可能使用到的词汇和短语有：to one's regret： ke

53、ep one's word： undoubtedly： Uidispensable： COmPare to； as a COnSeqUeIlCe of： Ilihent the CUlnIral treasure: accept my apology 等可以使用的衔接词：1 表文 i 结构顺序：FIrSt Of all, Firstly1Tirst, SeCondIy/Second. And then. FinalIy Iii the end. At last. AbOVe all0 2.表并列补充关系：What is more. Besides, Moreover FUrthermO

54、re. In addition, as VveII as. not only. but (also) o 通过词 j铺 垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全而，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关 系U作者在范文中使用了较务主从复合句和I占I定句型:MUCh to my regret, m wntmg to extend my deepest apology for not being able to keep my Word to Pay a isit to you tlis summer.和 Undoubt

55、edly, Stayiilg at home IS the best pocy for everybody.使用了 非谓语动词：With the IIOVeI COroiIa-rus Strikmg the WhOIe world, all the COUIltrieS are experiencing a IOCkdOwii.j吏用了 Wlth 的复介结构:COmPared to western medicine, It also ejoys a more reasonable PrICe and has fewer SIde effects, as a COnSeqUenCe Of WIH

56、Ch m determined to Iearn It after tle IlatiOIlal entrance examaton. hoping to inlent this CUltUral treasure and Carry forward it to the WhOle WOrId m the future,这句话运用了 WhICh引导的非限制性定语从句和非谓语动词。全文中没有中国式英语 的句式，显示了很髙的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路淸晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然， 为文章增色添彩。9假设你是李明，你打算和几位朋友在暑假进行一次探险旅行。请根据所给信息，给住在另 一座城市的外籍

57、朋友Peter发一封电子邮件介绍这次旅行汁划，并邀请他一起旅行。地点：海南岛时间：7月15 B-21日主要活动：远足、爬山、游泳、篝火晚会等注意事项：请带好游泳衣和护照注意：1词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3 篝火晚会 CamPfire party:护照 PaSSPOrt【答案】Dear Peter.HOW is everything going? My friends and I have decided to go On an adventure trip to Halnan ISIand during the SlImmer IlOlIday. I am UTltmg to tell you about OUr travel plan.We WilI be traveling around Haman ISIand from JUly 15tl to 21st. Wllile there We WIIl go hiking. CllnIb die IlIOlIntains, swim near die beach and hav亡 a CamPfire party. We also PIan