Unit 1 Friendship writing （课堂PPT）

1、1Unit 1 Friendship writing2写作步骤1. Creating a motivation to write2. Brainstorming3. Mapping4. Outlining5. Drafting6. Editing7. Revising33/101. Creating a motivation to writehaving a clear purpose or reason to writeThe letter on page 71. What problem does Xiao Dong have? 2. What is Xiao Dong asking fo

2、r?1. He is not good at communicating with people and cant make good friends with them. 2. He is asking for some advice to change the situation.44/102. Brainstorminglisting all the ideas related to the topicIdeasWhy1. to ask people their likes and dislikes1. to find classmates with the same interests

3、2. to join in discussions and show interest in other peoples ideas2. to get to know different people and let them see you are friendly55/103. Mapping3. Mappingorganising useful ideas1. change yoursefl be confidentl always smilel say hello to everyone2. improve yourself u learn more communicating ski

4、llsu help people 64. Outlining首段：开门见山，表明写作意图。在本段中，写信人应该先简单介绍自己，然后陈述事由，表明写信的目的及原因。Dear Xiao Dong ,Im glad to receive your e-mail. You ask me something about _ (建议的主题） The following is my advice.7正文：委婉地提出建议及改进措施，或提出忠告。正文：委婉地提出建议及改进措施，或提出忠告。First, why not.?If you do this, . Secondly, you should/can.The

5、n/That way, .Thirdly, it would be a good idea if .By doing this, .8末段：礼貌地总结并期盼对方的回复。 I hope you will find these ideas _, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to _.Yours Sincerely, .95. Draftingwriting according to your mapping In my opinion, you should .My opinion is . I believe we s

6、hould I dont think its necessary to . I advise you to . We must decide .Im afraid that . I think you should .Dont worry .106. Editingpeer editing: offering praise and suggestions picking out mistakes self-editing: correcting mistakes improving the letter7. Revisingrewriting your letters11Dear Xiao D

7、ong,Im glad to receive your e-mail. You ask me something about how to make friends. The following is my advice.12Everyone needs friends, so how to make friends is very important. First, you must be friendly to others if you want to make friends with them. Then, look after others more than yourself. In my opinion, try to make the stranger feel easy. If you have different opinions, you can discuss with others. I dont think its necessary to quarrel with them. 13 Finally, I dont trust those people who leave you when you are in trouble, because a friend in need is a frie