高考英语写作-新闻报道（课堂PPT）

1、11. _ vt.1. _ vt.通知，告知通知，告知2. _ adj.2. _ adj.职业的职业的, , 专业的专业的3._ n.3._ n.最后期限最后期限4. _ v.4. _ v.赞成赞成, , 称许称许, , 批准批准5. _ n.5. _ n.部分，节部分，节话题话题1 1 词汇易错词复习检测词汇易错词复习检测6. _ n.6. _ n.版本版本7. _ adj.7. _ adj.详尽的详尽的8._ adj. 8._ adj. 令人钦佩的，值得赞扬的令人钦佩的，值得赞扬的9. _ v.9. _ v.辞职；辞去辞职；辞去10. _ n10. _ n . . 调整，调节调整，调节in

2、formprofessionaldeadlineapprovesectioneditionthoroughadmirableresignadjust211. _ vt.11. _ vt.主持主持12. _ adj.12. _ adj.有益的；受益的有益的；受益的13._ n.13._ n.理想，雄心壮志理想，雄心壮志14. _ v.14. _ v.请求请求15. _ n.15. _ n.伤残；无力；无能伤残；无力；无能话题话题1 1 词汇易错词复习检测词汇易错词复习检测16. _ n.16. _ n.尊严；高贵的品质尊严；高贵的品质17. _ adj. 17. _ adj. 方便的方便的18.

3、_ n. 18._ n. 文学；著作文学；著作19. _ v.19. _ v.指责；谴责；控告指责；谴责；控告20. _ vi. 20. _ vi. 毕业毕业hostbeneficialambitionrequiredisabilitydignityhandyliteratureaccusegraduate321. _ 21. _ 集中；全神贯注于集中；全神贯注于22. _ 22. _ 调节，适应调节，适应23._ 23._ 为了做为了做24. _ 24. _ 通知某人某事通知某人某事25. _ 25. _ 闲坐着闲坐着concentrate onadjust toso as to doinf

4、orm sb. of sth.sit around426. amateur _27.motivitation _28.deliberately _29.polish _30.conduct _31.representative _32.adequate _33.architect _panion _35.psychology _业余的业余的动机动机故意地故意地润色，擦亮，磨光润色，擦亮，磨光指挥，管理指挥，管理代表；有代表性的代表；有代表性的足够的足够的建筑师建筑师同伴；伙伴同伴；伙伴心理学心理学5 671. 1. 新闻通讯的第一句往往为全文的中心句新闻通讯的第一句往往为全文的中心句(topi

5、c (topic sentence), sentence), 因此这个句子中常包含四大元素因此这个句子中常包含四大元素what(what(事件事件), ), when(when(时间时间), where(), where(地点地点) )和和who(who(人物人物), ), 而在下文则要补而在下文则要补充事件的过程和细节充事件的过程和细节, , 往往包括往往包括why(why(目的或原因目的或原因) )和和how(how(具体过程具体过程) )等。等。82. 2. 注意新闻类型题材的一些常用语注意新闻类型题材的一些常用语, , 如如It is reported It is reported t

6、hat., As is reported., According to the report.that., As is reported., According to the report.等。等。3. 3. 新闻通讯报道在于平实客观的语言新闻通讯报道在于平实客观的语言, , 考生不必追考生不必追求过分花哨的词汇和过于复杂的句型。求过分花哨的词汇和过于复杂的句型。9时间时间上周上周地点地点华文中学华文中学事件事件一批英国学生到访一批英国学生到访行程行程了解中国学生的校园生活、参观佛山的著名了解中国学生的校园生活、参观佛山的著名景点，体验当地文化景点，体验当地文化佛山印象佛山印象洁净的市容、友善

7、的学生、美味的食品洁净的市容、友善的学生、美味的食品回访计划回访计划华文中学华文中学38名学生应邀明年三月访问英国名学生应邀明年三月访问英国上周上周, , 一批英国学生到达佛山华文中学进行访问交流。假一批英国学生到达佛山华文中学进行访问交流。假设你是该校通讯员设你是该校通讯员, , 请根据以下内容给当地一家报社写一请根据以下内容给当地一家报社写一篇英文报道。篇英文报道。 写作内容写作内容 10 例题导写例题导写 认真审题。新闻报道也是记叙文的一种认真审题。新闻报道也是记叙文的一种, , 但是但是与日记类型的经历感受又不完全一样。与日记类型的经历感受又不完全一样。 日记类型日记类型的文章考生不但

8、把自己的所见所闻描绘出来的文章考生不但把自己的所见所闻描绘出来, , 还要还要注意情感的表达注意情感的表达, , 而新闻报道类型的文章需要客观而新闻报道类型的文章需要客观的报道的报道, , 因此语言方面可以相对平实一点。因此语言方面可以相对平实一点。11词汇整理词汇整理 翻译或完成下列短语翻译或完成下列短语句句1 1：上周，一批英国学生到访华文中学。：上周，一批英国学生到访华文中学。As it is reported, a group students coming from Britain visited HuaWen Middle School last week.12句句2 2：(1)

9、(1) 感受校园生活：感受校园生活：_句句3 3：(2) (2) 参观著名景点：参观著名景点：_ _ (3) (3) 体验当地文化：体验当地文化：_ _ learn/know about the local culturelearn/know about the local cultureexperience the campus lifeexperience the campus lifeof Chinese studentsof Chinese studentsvisit / pay a visit to somevisit / pay a visit to someplaces of i

10、nterest / tourist attractionsplaces of interest / tourist attractions13句句4 4：(4) (4) 洁净的市容洁净的市容, , 友善的学生友善的学生, , 美味的食品：美味的食品： _句句5 5：(5) (5) 回访：回访：_ _ the clean city, friendly students and delicious food / the cleanness of the city, kindness of the students and niceness of food(注意并列词组的词性一致注意并列词组的词性一

11、致)an exchange visitan exchange visit14难句翻译难句翻译 请用高级结构或优美的句式翻译下列句请用高级结构或优美的句式翻译下列句子。子。句句4 4：洁净的市容、友善的学生、美味的食品给学生留洁净的市容、友善的学生、美味的食品给学生留下了深刻的印象。下了深刻的印象。 The British students The British students were deeply impressed bywere deeply impressed by the clean city, friendly students and delicious food. the c

12、lean city, friendly students and delicious food. / / What expressed the British students deeply wasWhat expressed the British students deeply was the clean city, friendly students and delicious food. the clean city, friendly students and delicious food. / The clean city, friendly students and delici

13、ous / The clean city, friendly students and delicious food food left a deep impression onleft a deep impression on the British the British students. students. 15句句5 5：华文中学华文中学3838名学生应邀明年三月访问英国。名学生应邀明年三月访问英国。In returnIn return, 38 students in Huawen Middle School are invited , 38 students in Huawen M

14、iddle School are invited to visit Britain next March. / to visit Britain next March. / At the invitation ofAt the invitation of a British a British school, 38 students in Huawen Middle School school, 38 students in Huawen Middle School are to set forare to set for Britain for Britain for an exchange

15、 visitan exchange visit next March. next March.16连句成篇连句成篇参考范文参考范文 Huawen Middle School in Foshan City received a group of students from Britain last week. During their one-week stay in Foshan, the students experienced the campus life of Chinese students. They also visited some places of interest in

16、Foshan and learned about the local culture. The British students were impressed by the kindness of Chinese students, cleanness of the city and niceness of food. At the invitation of a British school, 38 students in Huawen Middle School are to set for Britain for an exchange visit next March.17 5月月1日

17、，高二（日，高二（3）班的学生志愿者）班的学生志愿者Li Yue和和Zhang Hua去阳光敬去阳光敬老院（老院（Sunshine Nursing Home）开展志愿者活动（送水果、打扫、）开展志愿者活动（送水果、打扫、聊天等）。假如你是校英语报的记者，请按下列要点用英语写一则聊天等）。假如你是校英语报的记者，请按下列要点用英语写一则100120个词的新闻报道。个词的新闻报道。1. 时间、地点、任务、活动；时间、地点、任务、活动；2. 老人们的反应；老人们的反应；3. 简短评论。简短评论。参考词汇：志愿者活动参考词汇：志愿者活动 voluntary work注意：报道的标题和记者姓名已给出（不

18、计词数）。注意：报道的标题和记者姓名已给出（不计词数）。Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly_ By Chen Jie, School Newspaper181. 1. 文体信息：文体信息：文体：应用文；文体：应用文；语体：正式语体；语体：正式语体；人称：第三人称；人称：第三人称；中心大意：报道两位志愿者去阳光敬老院开展志愿者活动。中心大意：报道两位志愿者去阳光敬老院开展志愿者活动。2. 2. 主导时态：一般过去时。主导时态：一般过去时。3. 3. 内容要点：内容要点：简要陈述事情发生的时间、地点、任务和内容概要；简要陈述事情发生

19、的时间、地点、任务和内容概要；陈述老人们的反应；陈述老人们的反应；对此次志愿者活动做出评价对此次志愿者活动做出评价. .4. 4. 温馨提示：注意人称，除评论部分用第一人称外其他段落均应温馨提示：注意人称，除评论部分用第一人称外其他段落均应该用第三人称。新闻报道的必要要素不可缺少。该用第三人称。新闻报道的必要要素不可缺少。19Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly Li Yue and Zhang Hua, coming from Class Three, Grade Two, attended a voluntary activi

20、ty. On May Day, they went to The Sunshine Nursing Home and visited the elderly with some flowers and fruits. Firstly, they helped the elderly clean the rooms and sweep the floor. After that, they had a chat with the elderly. The elderly warmed up at the view of the sight. They said their gratitude w

21、as beyond their power of expression. They wouldnt forget this day forever. As the result of the efforts of the two volunteers, the elderly felt the warm sun shining on them. At the same time, Li Yue and Zhang Hua got a kick out of it(感到非常高兴). They said they would do it like this more in the near fut

22、ure. We should learn from them. If so, our world will become more beautiful. By Chen Jie, School Newspaper20写作写作新闻报导类新闻报导类 新闻报道是典型的应用文体裁。掌握新闻的六要素，即：新闻报道是典型的应用文体裁。掌握新闻的六要素，即：人物人物（who）/事件（事件（what）/时间（时间（when）/地点（地点（where）/原因（原因（why）/方式（方式（how）。它的结构一般分为四个部分：标题、导语、主体、。它的结构一般分为四个部分：标题、导语、主体、结语。标题是新闻的题目，是

23、对最有新闻价值内容的浓缩、概括、结语。标题是新闻的题目，是对最有新闻价值内容的浓缩、概括、提炼和再创造。导语是消息开头的第一段或第一句话，它扼要地揭提炼和再创造。导语是消息开头的第一段或第一句话，它扼要地揭示出消息的核心内容。主体是消息的主要部分，它用充足的事实表示出消息的核心内容。主体是消息的主要部分，它用充足的事实表现主题。新闻报道的结语一般是最后一句话或者一段话，通常对全现主题。新闻报道的结语一般是最后一句话或者一段话，通常对全文内容作概括性的总结，或对新闻事件的发展趋势作出预测。有时，文内容作概括性的总结，或对新闻事件的发展趋势作出预测。有时，作者根据报道的事实在结语中提出令人深思的问

24、题。作者根据报道的事实在结语中提出令人深思的问题。 在写新闻报道时，首先注意新闻的标题要具有语言幽默风趣的特点，在写新闻报道时，首先注意新闻的标题要具有语言幽默风趣的特点，有较强的吸引力。同时，写作依据的材料要充分，要用事实来说话，有较强的吸引力。同时，写作依据的材料要充分，要用事实来说话，语言力求简洁。最后，报道中要有亮点，能引人深思或能让人产生语言力求简洁。最后，报道中要有亮点，能引人深思或能让人产生强烈的兴趣。强烈的兴趣。 21常用句式：常用句式：In the past few years， there has been a boom/sharp growth/decline in.在过

25、去的几年里，在在过去的几年里，在方面锐增方面锐增/减。减。Nowadays， more/most important/dangerous for our society is.目前，我们社会更目前，我们社会更/最重要最重要/危险的是危险的是Now there is a growing awareness that. 现在，人们日趋意识到现在，人们日趋意识到It is time that we explored the truth of . 到了我们该揭露到了我们该揭露事实的时候了。事实的时候了。Only in this way can you solve this problem.只有用这样的

26、方法我们才能解决问题。只有用这样的方法我们才能解决问题。22 该文符合新闻写作格式，思路清晰，要点齐全。用了大量的高级该文符合新闻写作格式，思路清晰，要点齐全。用了大量的高级词汇和高级句式，如：词汇和高级句式，如：warm up 温暖起来；温暖起来；at the view of 一看到；一看到；beyond their power of expression 无法言表；无法言表；as the result of 由于；由于；get a kick out of 获得乐趣；分词作定语（获得乐趣；分词作定语（Li Yue and Zhang Hua, coming from Class Three,

27、 Grade Two, attended a voluntary activity.），省略句（），省略句（If so, our world will become more beautiful.），），状语从句等的运用，彰显了作者深厚的语言功底。状语从句等的运用，彰显了作者深厚的语言功底。如能把下列句子加以优化则文章能更上一个档次：如能把下列句子加以优化则文章能更上一个档次：1. On May Day, they went to The Sunshine Nursing Home and visited the elderly.改为改为It was on May Day that they

28、went to The Sunshine Nursing Home with some flowers and fruits where their voluntary work left people a deep impression.2. They helped the elderly clean the rooms and sweep the floor. 改改为为 The moment they arrived, they made use of every minute to do what they can, such as cleaning the rooms and swee

29、ping the floor.23Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly Li Yue and Zhang Hua are student volunteers coming from Class 3, Grade 2 at the senior middle school. One May Day, they went to The Sunshine Nursing Home to attend the elderly. They bought lots of fruits and beautiful flowers for th

30、e elderly. As soon as they got to The Sunshine Nursing Home, they began to clean the floor and tidy the rooms. At the same time, they had a chat with the elderly, laughing filled with the room. The elderly were so happy that their words couldnt convey their gratitude to them. Thanks to the two volun

31、teers, they cant feel lonely any longer. Dear friends, no one can keep young forever, we will get old one day, so lets take more attention to the elderly. Never let them feel lonely and then our society will be full of happiness！ By Chen Jie, School Newspaper24报道问题及提出解决办法报道问题及提出解决办法1. 问题现状问题现状 2. 怎样

32、解决怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点解决方案的优缺点)In recent days, we have to face the problem.A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, .(说明的现状说明的现状)Second, .(举例进举例进一步说明现状一步说明现状)Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, .(解决方法一解决方法一). For another.(解决方法二解决方法二). Finally, .(解决方法三解决方法三).Personally, I believe that.(我的解决方法我的解决方法). Consequently, Im confident that a bright future is awaiting us because.(带来的好处带来的好处).25请根据下面所提示的信息