2018年广州市中考英语作文专题复习(三)体育与校园活动(共9页)

1、精选优质文档-倾情为你奉上2018年广州市中考英语作文专题复习（三）体育与校园活动一、与专题相关的话题项目学校(school),文娱与体育(Entertainment and sports)二、与专题相关的知识准备1、相关单元7A Unit 1 Making friends 7A Unit 2 Daily life7A Unit 7 School clubs 8A Unit 5 Educational exchanges 8A Unit 7 Memory 8A Unit 8 English Week 9A Unit 4 Problems and advice2、相关词汇*高频词(n.) hob

2、by, country, age, dream, flat, world, mountain, engineer, sound, table tennis, break, band, guitar, market, practice, fair, rocket, power, skill, information, headline, ant, butterfly, bee, culture, host, weekday, success, guest, corner, trouble, step, cycle, note, wallet, basket, manager, list, mil

3、e, letter, speech, notice, competition, text, chance, topic, winner, opinion, model, diet, situation, advantage, mess, exam, comment(v.) complete, ride, ring, end, attend, teach, tour, introduce, respect, lose, improve, mention, spell, advise, communicate, hide, choose, regret, hate, suggest, fail,

4、(adj.) daily, friendly, elder, surprised, amazing, boring, recent, glad, fantastic, local, silly, worth, whole, rich, poor, shy, awful, ashamed, embarrassed, mad, annoying, careless, polite, (adv.) never, seldom, usually, together, already, yet, confidently, else,(pron.)everyone, yourself, (conj.) t

5、hough*高频短语be good at, go to school, make friends with, take part in, have a good time, d like to, all over, on foot, go to bed, get up, learn about, all the way, look up, so far, introduceto, take out, pour out, treasure hunt, in public, put on, in my opinion, look out, be on a diet, laugh at, feel

6、ashamed of, drive sb, mad. Make a mess, out of place, none of ones business, hear from*拓展词汇experience, disappear, attack, exchange, tai chi, chopstick, reference, application, treasure, several, suggestion, unless, whenever, request, keep in touch with, apply for, make sth. A big success, advise sb.

7、 to do, give sb. a chance to do sth, be worried about, regret doing, have a habit of, make up ones mind, pay attention to,*句式句型1. My favourite subjects are.2. I am good at .3. I like/ enjoy.4. I always have a good time at school.5. be so adj. that +从句6. Im glad to do.7. Spend.(in) doing.8. Its been

8、a fantastic experience so far.9. Weve tried to .10. I cant wait!11. I havent had much success, but Ill keep trying. 12. If you., you will.13.It is adj. to do sth.14.Some students. Other students.15.What should I do in this situation?16.Its none of my business.三、经典例题v体育（1）2007年天津市书面表达考题日前,由教育部,国家体育总局

9、,共青团中央联合举办“全国亿万少年阳光体育运动”启动仪式,其影响巨大,意义深远.你在本校参加了此项活动,请根据表格中所给信息写一篇英语短文.内容感想1.学校师生收看了启动仪式(launching ceremony);2.开展了一个小时的集体体育活动,如;跑步,做操,打篮球等;1.锻炼有利于强健身体;2.运动使大脑休息,学习效率更高.3.每天锻炼一小时,幸福生活一辈子.注意：1.词数80个左右.2.短文的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数.3.短文须包括所有内容要点,但不要逐句翻译,可适当加入细节,可适度发挥,使短文通顺,连贯.4.文中不得使用真实姓名,校名.“Millions of young st

10、udents nationwide sports sunshine” launched on April29, 2007.The teachers and students in our school were organized to_（2）、解题思路示范1、审题：本文共有5 个要点时态主要采用一般过去时和一般现在时人称是_第一人称_段落第一段落写活动情况；第二段落写感想;2、可能用到的短语和句型词汇the launching ceremony启动仪式；build up ones body strength强身健体；more effective 效果更好;take partin;differ

11、ent kinds of;enjoy oneself;be good for;have a rest; anhour a day; in ones opinion;have ahappylife连接词after that; besides; also; whats more;句型somesomeothers; sothat; I think; Doing sth. is adj.; Why not do?; If you; Im sure内容感想1.学校师生收看了启动仪式(launching ceremony);2.开展了一个小时的集体体育活动,如;跑步,做操,打篮球等;（短语：do diff

12、erent kinds of sports for an hour）1.锻炼有利于强健身体;(短语：build up our body strength.)2.运动使大脑休息,学习效率更高.(短语：have a rest; more effective)3.每天锻炼一小时,幸福生活一辈子.(短语：do sports an hour a day; have a happy life)3、学生成文：“Millions of young students nationwide sports sunshine” launched on April29, 2007.The teachers and st

13、udents in our school were organized toseea launching ceremony. After that, we did different kinds of sports for an hour.For example,running, taking exercise, playing basketball and so on.In my opinion,dosports can helpbuild up our body strength. Whats more, it also canlet our brains have a rest,then

14、 our studywill more effective. Iam enjoyrunning every day. I think running can make me relax. So why nottake part insome exercise with me every day? As the saying goes, do sports an hour a day, have a happy face every day!点评：整篇文章对要点的把握基本到位，没有什么单词拼写错误，而且文章最后一句写得相当漂亮，但是全文还是存在不少语法小错误和用词不当，部分句子的表达过于中式。分

15、项分档评分表项目要素给分表内容6分切合题意，体现要点6-55654.54-3.53-2.521.510有所发挥准确性6分语 法6-5.554.54-3.53.53-2.521.510词 汇机械性：大小写，拼写和格式等错误流畅性3分结构3-2.52-1.5210.50000自评总分：11.54、检查思路：完成作文自查表：1)如果没有问题的，请在项目后打。2)如果有问题，请在项目中圈出来，并在文中做出修改。项目第一次自查第二次自查布局与内容要点人称 时态、主谓一致动词搭配、介词搭配拼写错误好词好句5、参考例文：“Millions of young students nationwide sport

16、s sunshine” launched on April 29, 2007.The teachers and students in our school were organized towatch the launching ceremony. After that, all of us went to the playground. We had different kinds of sports for an hour. Some took part in running, some played basketball and football, andothersdid somee

17、xercise. We enjoyed doing sports so much that we all forgot the time.Whata good timewe had!I think doing sports is very good for us. It helps to build up our body strength.Besides, our brains can have a good rest after doing sportsso thatour study can be more effective.So why not join us?If you can

18、do sports an hour a day, Im sureyou can have ahealthierand better life.v校园生活（1）2007年广州市初中毕业生学业考试真题通 知活动：学生音乐会时间：星期五下午2:30地点：玫瑰音乐厅集合时间及地点：下午1:30；学校门口出发时间：下午1:45；过时不候注意事项：1.厅内不准喝饮料、不准吃食物；2.看表演过程中不得拍照、不得喧哗；3.看完表演后一起坐校车回校。注意：1、词数80左右，电子邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计人总词数；2、不能透露个人的任何信息（例如：具体的学校和姓名等），否则答案作废。Hi BenOur c

19、lass is planning to go to a student concert. As you werent at school today, Im sending you the information.Cheers,Li Ping（2）解题思路：1.审题：a.本文共有6 个要点(1)时间：星期五下午2:30 (at half past two on Friday afternoon)(2)地点：玫瑰音乐厅(Rose Music Hal)(3)集合时间及地点：下午1:30；学校门口 (school gate at half past one)出发时间：下午1:45；过时不候(4-6)

20、注意事项：1.厅内不准喝饮料、不准吃食物；(No drinks or foods, be allowed )2.看表演过程中不得拍照、不得喧哗；(take photos, during )3.看完表演后一起坐校车回校。(return to school, by bus)b.时态主要采用一般将来时c.人称是_2.可能用到的短语和句型1).主要连接词If，so, also,2).主要句型We are going toWe willYou canI thinkYou should/shouldntRemember to3.成文：InFriday afternoon, we havea student

21、s musicconcert .This music concert is starthalf past two p.m.And the concert will be held in The RoseConcert Hall.We will meet at the gate of school at half past one p.m. and the go offat a quarter to two.In the concert we must in attention: First dont drinking and eatingin the hall. Second we needn

22、ttake photos and make noise in the show. Last, we will come back to school by school bus when we will be watchedthe concert.点评：整篇文章对要点的把握基本到位，但是拼写和简单的语法错误较多。部分句子的表达过于中式分项分档评分表项目要素给分表内容6分切合题意，体现要点6-5554.544-3.53-2.521.510有所发挥准确性6分语 法6-5.554.54-3.53-2.5221.510词 汇机械性：大小写，拼写和格式等错误流畅性3分结构3-2.52-1.5210.50

23、000自评总分：84.检查思路：完成作文自查表：如果没有问题的，请在项目后打。如果有问题，请在项目中圈出来，并在文中做出修改。项目第一次自查第二次自查布局与内容要点人称 时态、主谓一致动词搭配、介词搭配拼写错误好词好句5.参考例文：Hi Ben,Our class is planning to go to a student concert. As you werent at school today, Im sending you the information.The concert will be held in theRose Music Hallat half past two on

24、 Friday afternoon. You must be at theschool gate at half past one. We will leave at a quarter to two. Dont be late. If you are late, we wont wait for you.No drinks or foodsareallowed inside the hall. Photos may not be taken during the concert. Also, we are not allowed to talk loudly during the show. Wellreturnto the school by bus after the concert.Cheers,Li Ping四、练习你校正在举行英语艺术节，请你根据下面的海报，写一个通知，告诉你班同学关于艺术节读书活动的情况。注意：1、词数80左右（文章的开头已给出，不计入词数）；Attention everybody:T