春季19-八年级英语培优版-作文专题-心路历程-教师版

1、第11页教师姓名学生姓名年级初二上课时间学 科英语课题名称作文专题一一心路历程成长经历卜校园生活41业余爱好 主髭词汇H-学习生活 人物偶像 I学习策略育用句型例题分析考纲词汇梳理F近年来，中考作文中关于青少年题材的屡见不鲜。此类话题谈人生、谈理想、谈成功经验，也谈青少年 在成长过程中遇到的种种问题，贴近学生生活实际，解决好这些问题可帮助他们健康成长，平稳度过青 春期，所以此主题也是十分必要的训练主题。I .主题词汇1 .成长经历teenager青少年；graduate from 毕业于；generation gap 代沟； allow sb. to do 允许做 ask for advice

2、 征求意见； best friend 最好的朋友； be curious about sth.对某事好奇； do one ' s bes为； make efforts to do sth.努力做某事； little by little 逐渐2 .校园生活understand理解；get on well with sb./ sth.与他人相处融洽/某事进展不错；raise one ' s hand; take an active part in 积极参加3 .业余爱好be interested in 对感兴趣； be fond of 喜爱； enjoy doing 喜欢做； sp

3、end.doing 花时间做；in one sspare time在空闲时间里4 .学习生活take courses 上课； put one ' s heart inffi于；pass an exam考试及格；fail an exam 考试不及格； cheatin the exam 考试作弊；subject 学科； hand in 上交； pay attention to 注意5 .人物偶像genius天才；respect尊敬；think highly of sb.对某人评价很高；look forward to doing 期望做6 .学习策略express 表达； explain 解

4、释； confidence 信心；make a survey 作调查；collect information收集信息；schedule时间表，进度表U .有用句型1. To improve the situation, I suggest.2. As middle school students, we ought to be responsible for ourselves.3. It's also important to find a way to be involved in social activities.4. Here I have two suggestions.

5、First,. Second,.5. Your life today is the result of your attitudes and choices in the past. Your life tomorrow will be the result of your attitudes and choices today.6. Sometimes your biggest weakness can become your biggest strength.7. Some of the greatest successful stories have followed a word of

6、 encouragement8. From her confidence, we know that .9. We should believe in ourselves.10. Just keep on trying. The process of trying is much more valuable than the result.11. Smile on failure and smile on life.12. Actually, failure is like a naughty boy who plays with us on the way to our goals. On

7、the one hand, he wants to test us. On the other hand, he wants to help us become braver. The more we smile on failure, the braver we shall be.13. Grow older and grow up. Growing up doesn' t need any talent or ability. Growing up is always finding the opportunity for change. Never give up dreams.

8、14. A volunteer ' s work is very great and helpful. I learn responsibility and patience from it. I hope more and more young people will be volunteer.15. When I am free, I often go to the nursing home to do something good, such as reading books, and washing clothes for the old.16. We are not perf

9、ect to do everything well. We often get help from others in our daily life. In return we must help other people as often as possible.m .例题分析请以"is the most important thing in my life 为题等一篇短文。请先将题目补充完整再进行写作。Questions for reference:1. What is the most thing in your life? (health, happiness, friend

10、ship, honesty.)2. Why do you think so? (Give at least two reasons)3. What is your suggestion?要点分析1.审题时，学生要注意我生命中的最重要的东西”，不是单指某一样具体的东西或某件事，而是通过事例来突出某一项品质。如：友谊、自信、助人、诚实、感恩等。2注意：提出的建议要围绕主题来写，不能前后脱节。写作素材围绕友谊”给出建议和保持友谊秘诀的1. Friends share happiness with us. In addition, they keep us from sadness.2. Withou

11、t friends, we feel lonely and bored. Instead, with them our life will be more and more colourful.3. In a word, friends are our most precious wealth and friendship is necessary to everyone.4. Friends are like leaves on the tree. Though they are small and ordinary, without them the tree will be ugly.5

12、. Friendship can make our life more colourful and meaningful.6. Friend plays an important part in our life.7. Nobody can get through life without friendship.8. I'm lucky enough to make many friends around me.9. Whenever I am blue, they comfort me and help me to find solutions to my problems.10.

13、I like my friends because we can trust each other and help each other11. We have parents to turn to for help at home, and we have friends when we are out.12. I regard him as my best friend. We always discuss things together and do many activities in our spare time.原文稿Friendship is the most important

14、 thing in my lifeIf I don ，t have friends, my world may become colourless. So I think friendship is the most important thing in my life. No one can live in the world lonely. When we are in trouble, friends can help us overcome those difficulties in life. When we feel happy, we hope there is someone

15、who can share our happiness.s try our best to treat our friendsMaking friends with people, we should be frank and honest to them so that they can trust us. What's more, a friend never hesitates to give his love and care to his friend. Let and we find that our life become colourful with so many f

16、riends around us.点评与评分作者在整篇文章中，紧紧围绕友谊是生命中最重要的部分来描写，层层深入，步步上升，最后点题。按中考作文20分计算，属于第三档到第二档的作文。可得15分左右。需修改之处：1 . the most important thing应改成 one of the most important things ,表明友谊是生命中最重要的东西之一。2 .要表达 独自生活在这个世界上 “，应用词组live in the world alone。3 .表示目的，句首应用动词不定式To make friends with people o4 . a friend 改为 &qu

17、ot;a real friend更好。”5 .最后句应注意时态，需改为： Let' s try our best to treat our friends sincerely, and we will find that our lifebecome colourful with so many friends around us 。修改稿：If I don ' t have friends, my world may become colorless. So I think friendship is one of the most important things in m

18、y life. No one can live in the world alone. When we are in trouble, friends can help us overcome those difficulties in life. When we feel happy, we hope there is someone who can share our happiness.To make friends with people, we should be frank and honest to them so that they can trust us. What 

19、9; s more, a real friend never hesitates to give his love and care to his friend. Let' s try our best to isincerely, and we will find that our life become colorful with so many friends around us.IV.考纲词汇梳理1. Before my grandpa took the letter out of the envelope, he found that the letter didn'

20、t belong to him because the address was wrong.在我外公从信封中拿出信之前，他发现信不属于他，因为地址错了。【拓展1】take A out of B 把A从B中拿出来take up开始从事；占据take on承担take in吸收；欺骗take off起飞；脱下【拓展2】sth. belong to sb.某物属于某人（没有被动语态）【拓展3】address n地址 v.处理2. If the weather is fine and windy, this couple will fly kite at the hill ; however, if

21、the weather is awful, they will go to the cinema to see the funny movies.如果天气晴朗且有风，这对夫妻就会在小山上放风筝，如果天气恶劣，他们就会去电影院看电影。【拓展1】couple n.夫妻； 对a couple of对，些I spent a couple of days sight -seeing in Guilin.我在桂林盘桓了几天，观光了名胜。【拓展2】at the hill在山脚on the hill在山顶【拓展3】funny adj.滑稽的；搞笑的fun n.乐事 adj.有趣的What great fun!

22、真有趣（的事）!3. Last night, he was caught in a heavy rain and the whole body was completely wet and this morning, he got a bad cold and headache . Now he is resting in the bedroom. 昨天，他被大雨淋得浑身湿透。 于是今早，他感冒了并伴有头疼。现在他正在卧室休息。【拓展1】What a heavy rain! rain前有adj.修饰，抽象名词具体化，可加 abe caught in a heavy rain 被动，被淋雨【拓展

23、2】completeladv.完全地complete v.完成 adj.完整的 incomplete adj.不完整的【拓展3】have a cold/ headache 感冒 /头疼 可加 a【拓展4】rest n.剩余；休息 v.休息the rest of the apples苹果中的剩余部分have a rest= take a break 休息一下三、课堂练习的确，如何合理使用零花钱对我们学生来1 .学生零花钱的合理使用已成为人们讨论的热点话题之一了。说非常重要。请以"The right way of using pocket money为题写一篇短文。2 .我们应该在有空的

24、时候热心做些慈善工作，参加一些工艺活动，成为一名志愿者，这会给你带来什么收获呢？请以“Being a volunteer brings me"为题写一篇短文，先把题目补充完整再进行写作。四、课后作业写作训练1 .请以"Everyone needs help”为题写一篇短文。Use the following points as a guide:a. Have you ever got any help from others?b. Did you give any help to people when they were in need?c. Tell your stor

25、y.2 .请以"Things that make me angry”为题写一篇短文。The following are for reference:a. What makes you angry easily?b. Why do you think so? (Give at least two reasons)c. How do you deal with your anger?3 .请以“The importance of saving money ”为题写一篇短文。Keys:【课堂练习】1. The right way of using pocket moneyIt '

26、s common knowledge that money is one of the most important things in our daily life. It affects our life in many ways such as clothing, food, shelter and so on. To make a long story short, money can make our life more comfortable and convenient. Many parents give their children some pocket money to

27、let them buy some food to eat to keep them from being hungry when they study too late. But there is a problem, some students wasted their pocket money from their parents by buying comics, games, magazines and so on. That 'nos a right and wise way of using money.How can we be clever on using pock

28、et money? Firstly, we must know our pocket money is our parents so we should not waste any money. Secondly, we must save our pocket money as much as possible. Thirdly, we should use the pocket money properly. For example, instead of buying something for pleasure, we can buysome books to widen our kn

29、owledge and vision. Overall, pocket money is good and important for us if we use it properly.2. Being a volunteer brings me confidenceI used to be timid and it was hard for me to talk to people. But I changed a lot because of the experience of being a volunteer.When I went to that orphanage for the

30、first time, I was really shy and could hardly say any words to the children there at first. Then I tried to show them some handicrafts. To my great joy, they were all interested in them. So I had to talk to them to teach them some simple skills, such as paper cutting. I told them how to cut differen

31、t shapes. Gradually I found I could talk with any of them freely. I even made friends with some of them.From then on, I am not shy any more. This experience of being a V olunteer brings me confidence and courage, which enables me to meet different people and make new friends.【课后作业】1. Everyone needs

32、help.As the saying goes that a friend in need is a friend indeed. Nobody can live in the world without friends.So helping friends is necessary and important. My friend Jane helps me a lot and I also help her in return. One day after school, it was raining heavily. I left my umbrella at home.To my su

33、rprise, Jane walked to me and lent her umbrella to me without saying anything; she herself went home in the heavy rain without an umbrella instead. Because of this, she was seriously ill later. After that, I went to her home and helped her with her homework. From this special experience, I'm sur

34、e that everyone needs help. Therefore, let ' start providing help for other people and make our world more beautiful.2. Things that make me angryAs we all know, people often talk with other people in daily life, including me. But when I am communicating with a person, some people will interrupt

35、our talking from time to time which makes me angry easily.In fact, communicating with others is a skill. First, be polite when talking to other people. It is impolite to disturb others when they are communicating with each other. Second, try to let people feel respected and valued. For example, do not interrupt until the speaker finishes his words.helpsIf I feel angry when I am disturbed in a conversation by others, I try to do the following things. I try to calm down and make myse