2021年GRE写作常见易错扣分问题

1、2021年GRE!作常见易错扣分问题GRE写作常见易错扣分问题盘点分析GRE写作常见扣分问题:逻辑不清大体上来说,同学们的逻辑问题是最多的.逻辑问题有三种,通篇逻辑,段落之间,段落之中.其实这可能和我们高中初中的英语教育有关系,大家都很喜欢一条一条摆原因.Firstly,secondly.然后后面至于这个ly后面是什么就不管了,一顿胡扯.也不管这段落与段落之间的衔接是否自然,反正都有什么ly给打头阵.事实上,中西方的思维总是存在差异,很多时候看管老师们都不懂考生在说什么.考官很困惑,这个例子和这个有关系吗?为什么前面在说A,后面突然B了?GRE写作常见扣分问题:结构混乱和结论什么关系？要记住一

2、点，GRE作文文章是一个整体，你的开篇结尾和中部内容都是应该有关联的.也就是说,在开头提到的,文中应该有展开,同时在结尾有总结.中文里不也要求行文流畅么,这至少得要求逻辑是通顺的.GRE写作常见扣分问题:观点模糊很多同学都很喜欢写中立观点A不错,但不够好,这虽然看起来很客观,但实际上这种GRE乍文对逻辑的要求非常高，要怎样去组织语言，组织相应的论据论点,非常考验人.有同学想说A事件要瑕疵互见,但是写着写着就乱七八糟,东一块西一块,不知道在讲点什么了.更有厉害的索性冗长的2000来词,讲了个空话.所以建议刚上手的同学,还是选择一边倒,站定脚跟不放松.即便是真的要写中立观点,实际上也都在A和B之间

3、有所偏好.GRE写作常见扣分问题:内容空泛此外,现在很多人会要求练writing的时候先写提纲.于是同学们们就只写一个观点,然后后面的例子乱用,或者根本没有弄清楚什么是例子.事实上,这种展开,可以是实例,也可以是虚拟的假设.实例中往往分自己的经验和他人的经验.那么怎样的例子有说服力呢?一般来说是:名人名事（知名度大）众人众事（样本大）自己经历（体会深）他人经历.假设往往不够有说服力,因为很难涉及到每一个变量.但是假设在有的时候可以行得通,就是在很难说清楚步骤和因果关系的时候,用一个假设场景来推导会让文章变得浅显易懂.所以建议，在刚开始上手写GRE乍文的时候，先不要给自己30分钟的压力，先列出提

4、纲（10分钟）,再用30分钟去写,看能写多少.GRE写作常见扣分问题:论证不实记住你的举例一定要死死扣住你的GRE乍文观点,不要是和观点打擦边球的.例子一定要从论点出发,再回到论点.不要将你的论点发散,后果很可能就是越写越跑题.所以每次写好一篇文章,都看看,论据里的keywords是不是和论点里的keywords一样,论点里的keywords又是不是和题目里的keywords一样.你的keywords可以比大题里的keywords更加narrow,但是千万不要更加广泛.GRE写作高分范文:批判性思维GRE写作范文:Toomuchtime,money,andenergyarespentdevel

5、opingnewandmoreelaboratetechnology.Societyshouldinsteadfocusonma_imizingtheuseofe_istingtechnologyfortheimmediatebenefitofitscitizens.ImustsaythatIrejectthisstatement.Whileitistruethatweneedtosupportsocietyasmuchaspossiblewithcurrenttechnology,thatdoesnotinanywaymeanthatweshouldstopprogressingsimply

6、becauseourcurrenttechnologycannothandlealltheproblemswehavebroughttoit.Doesthatmeanthatweshouldsimplyacceptthestatusquoandmakedo?No,Idontthinkso.Todosowouldbetantamounttoadoptingafatalisticapproach;Ithinkmostpeoplewouldrejectthat.Technologyhashelped,andithashurt.Withoutit,wewouldneverhaveourstandard

7、ofliving,norqualityofnutrition,e_pectationofalongandproductivelifespan,andtheunshakablebeliefthatourlivescanbemadeevenbetter.Butithasalsobroughtusuniversalpollution,weaponssopowerfulastobecapableofrenderinguse_tinct,andtheconsequentfearforoursurvivalasspeciesandasaplanet.Technologyisindeedadouble-ed

8、gedsword.Andyet,Istillhavetoargueinitsfavor,becausewithoutit,wehavenohope.Somemightarguethatwewouldbebetteroffwithouttechnology.Theymightsaythatareturntoalesstechnologicallydrivenapproachtolifewouldhavethebenefitsofreducingstressandallowingustolivesimpler,happierlives,likethoseofourforebears.Suchani

9、deaisseductive,somuchsothatmuchofkindsartandallofnostalgiaaredevotedtoit.Butuponcloserinspection,onerealizesthatsuchamovewouldonlyreturnustoalifeofdifferentofstress,oneoffalsesimplicity,onefraughtwithdanger.Itwouldbealifewithoutantibioticswhereaminorcutcouldprovedeadly.Itwouldbealifewherechildbirthi

10、sthemainkillerofwomen,andwhereanemergencyisdealtwithintermsofhoursanddaysinsteadofminutesandhours;alifewheretherearenophonesorcarsorplanesorcentralheating,noprovendrugtherapiestotreatmentalillness,nocomputers.Wouldthisworldreallymakepeoplehappy?Whatwealreadyhave,wehave.Andsincetheonlywaytomoveisforw

11、ard,insteadofallowingourselvestobeparalyzedbyfearandworry,weneedtolearnhowtocleanupthepollutionwehavecaused,andhowtodealwithaworldthatfeedsonweaponsandmassdestruction.Doingthesethingsmeanshavingtomoveawayfromtechnologyintoamoredifficultrealm,thatofdiplomacyandcompromise:tomovefromthebullystanceofIam

12、biggerandbetterandIhavemoretoysandsoIwintoaplacewhereeveryonewins.Technologyisthethingthatwillallowpeopletodothat.But,advancedasitis,itisstillinitsinfancy.Wehavetoallowittogrowupandmatureinordertoreaptherealrewardsthatitcanbring.Andthereareevengreaterrewardsaheadofusthanwhattheworldhasalreadye_perie

13、nced.Whentechnologyispushedtotheouteredge,thatiswhereserendipitousdiscoveriescanoccur.Thishasbeenseenthroughouttechnologicaladvancement,buttheeasieste_ampleisprobablythespaceprogramwhichmadeusthink,reallyhard,abouthowtodothingsinadifferentenvironment.Itgaveustelecommunications,newfabricsandinternati

14、onalcooperation.Paramedicaldevices,sothatpeoplecanbetreatedevenastheyarebeingtransportedtothehosptal,areadirectdevelopmentofthattechnology.Noneofthiswouldhavehappenedinthetimeframethatitdidifwehadnotpushedfortechnologicaladvancement.Ifwehaddecidedto第二段:（概述科技的两面性）Technologyhashelped,andithashurt.（具体讨

15、论科技的贡献）Withoutit,wewouldneverhaveourstandardofliving,norqualityofnutrition,e_pectationofalongandproductivelifespan,andtheunshakablebeliefthatourlivescanbemadeevenbetter.（具体讨论科技的危害）Butithasalsobroughtusuniversalpollution,weaponssopowerfulastobecapableofrenderinguse_tinct,andtheconsequentfearforoursur

16、vivalasspeciesandasaplanet.Technologyisindeedadouble-edgedsword.（表明已考虑到科技的危害,但是依然坚持自己立场）Andyet,Istillhavetoargueinitsfavor,becausewithoutit,wehavenohope.第三段:（提出反方的立场）Somemightarguethatwewouldbebetteroffwithouttechnology.Theymightsaythatareturntoalesstechnologicallydrivenapproachtolifewouldhavetheben

17、efitsofreducingstressandallowingustolivesimpler,happierlives,likethoseofourforebears.Suchanideaisseductive,somuchsothatmuchofartandallofnostalgiaaredevotedtoit.（通过具体论据反驳反方的观点）Butuponcloserinspection,onerealizesthatsuchamovewouldonlyreturnustoalifeofdifferentkindsofstress,oneoffalsesimplicity,onefrau

18、ghtwithdanger.Itwouldbealifewithoutantibioticswhereaminorcutcouldprovedeadly.Itwouldbealifewherechildbirthisthemainkillerofwomen,andwhereanemergencyisdealtwithintermsofhoursanddaysinsteadofminutesandhours;alifewheretherearenophonesorcarsorplanesorcentralheating,noprovendrugtherapiestotreatmentalilln

19、ess,nocomputers.Wouldthisworldreallymakepeoplehappy?第四段:（在第三段驳论的基础上进一步立论）Whatwealreadyhave,wehave.Andsincetheonlywaytomoveisforward,insteadofallowingourselvestobeparalyzedbyfearandworry,weneedtolearnhowtocleanupthepollutionwehavecaused,andhowtodealwithaworldthatfeedsonweaponsandmassdestruction.Doing

20、thesethingsmeanshavingtomoveawayfromtechnologyintoamoredifficultrealm,thatofdiplomacyandcompromise:tomovefromthebullystanceofIambiggerandbetterandIhavemoretoysandsoIwintoaplacewhereeveryonewins.第五段:Technologyisthethingthatwillallowpeopletodothat.（指出支持观点存在的一点不足）But,advancedasitis,itisstillinitsinfanc

21、y.（解决方案）Wehavetoallowittogrowupandmatureinordertoreaptherealrewardsthatitcanbring.Andthereareevengreaterrewardsaheadofusthanwhattheworldhasalreadye_perienced.Whentechnologyispushedtotheouteredge,thatiswhereserendipitousdiscoveriescanoccur.Thishasbeenseenthroughouttechnologicaladvancement,buttheeasie

22、ste_ampleisprobablythespaceprogramwhichmadeusthink,reallyhard,abouthowtodothingsinadifferentenvironment.Itgaveustelecommunications,newfabricsandinternationalcooperation.Paramedicaldevices,sothatpeoplecanbetreatedevenastheyarebeingtransportedtothehospital,areadirectdevelopmentofthattechnology.Noneoft

23、hiswouldhavehappenedinthetimeframethatitdidifwehadnotpushedfortechnologicaladvancement.Ifwehaddecidedtofocusonma_imizingtheuseofe_istingtechnologyinsteadoffoolishlyreachingforthestars,wewouldnothavemadethosediscoverieswhichnowarethebedrockofthe_stcentury.gre满分作文重点:CriticalThinking.当然,提高criticalthink

24、ing能力的同时,也很有必要包装语言.GRE写作:短期内怎样提高Argument句型开头Inthisanalysis,thearguerclaimsthatshouldTosubstantiatetheconclusion,thearguercitesthee_ampleofwhereInaddition,thearguerassumesthatThisargumentisunconvincingforseveralcriticalflaws.正文:Forinstancesincewhatsmoreetc.andhowwellitrepresentedthepublicopinions.Thesampleofthesurveyisnotrepresentative.（样本太小）thesampleistoosmallto.（光数字没比例）theratiooffourtosi_thereisonly