英语人教必修5课件：Unit1SectionⅣ—Writing

1、针对训练写作指导写作模板Section IV Writing阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故 事。Jenny was the only child in her home.She had a quanre with her mother that aftemoon and she ran out of the house angrily.She couldn，t help crying sadly when she thought of the scolding （责备） fix）m her mothe匚Having walked aimlessly （漫无目 的土也）

2、in the street for hours,she felt a little hungry and wished for something to eat,but it was not possible for her,since she had nothing with her.She stood beside a stand for a while,watching the middle-aged seller busy doing his business.However，with no money in hand,she sighed （叹气）and had to leaveTh

3、e seller behind the stand noticed the young girl and asked/'Hey,girl,you want to have the noodles?""Oh，yesbut I don，t have money on meshe replied."That，s nothing.r 11 treat you today/5 said the man/cCome in.”The seller brought her a bowl of noodles,whose smell was so attractive.As

4、 she was eatingjenny cried silently."What is it?" asked the man kindly."Nothing,actually I was just touched by your kindness! said Jenny as she wiped （擦去）her tears广Even a stranger on the street will give me a bowl of noodles,while my mother,drove me out of the house.She showed no care

5、 for me.She is so merciless （毫不留情的）compared to a stranger! !,5Hearing the words,the seller smiled/'GirLdo you really think so?I only gave you a bowl of noodles and you thanked me a lot.But it is your mother who has raised you since you were a baby.Can you number the times she cooked for you?Have

6、 you expressed your gratitude（感激）to her?"Jenny sat there,speechless with shock;she remembered her mother，s familiar face and weathered hands "Why didn，11 think of that?A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me grateful,but I have never thanked my mum for what she has done for me."On t

7、he way home jenny made up her mind to make an apology （道 专飮）to her mother for her nideness as soon as she arrived home注意：1所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:Coming to the doorway,Jenny took a deep breath.Paragraph 2:A gentle touch on h

8、er hair called her mind back.针对训练写作指导写作模板1. 理解全文，把握主线。本文为记叙文。文中主要人物为丿劲和the se少，围绕感恩这个话题展开。续写部分的情节相对比较正统, 没有太大的悬念。； ；2. 分析关键词和段首提示,展开想象合理续接。根据续写部分第 一段的提示语我们可以推断丿e初y在少的教导下认识到了自 己的错误，决定回家向妈妈认错。因此第一段对于丿e/wy的愧疚之 心应该有所体现。3. 结合逻辑和常识，确定结局。根据续写部分第二段的提示语我 们可以想象，抚摸儿/wy头发的是妈妈。因此第二段应该阐Jenny 向妈妈表达了自己的愧疚与感激，最终妈妈原谅

9、了丿e初”母女重归 于好,大团圆结局。Paragraph 1:Coming to the doorway .Jenny took a deep breath.When she 1.knocked at the door （敲门）,she found 2 the door was locked （门 是锁着的）and her mother was not in.3. Tired and sad（又累又难过），she 4.sat down in front of the door（在门前坐 了下来）.t4Where could my mother be?" she wondered/&#

10、39;Was she still 5, angry with me（生我的气）?” Again,the scene ofthe quairel appeared in her mind.She remembered her rudeness to her mother.Realizing that all the scolding from her mother was due to the fact that 6. her mother really cared a lot about heT （女也妈妈真的耳£ 常在意她）,she 7. felt rather ashamed（感

11、到很羞愧）,and tears began to 8.roll down her cheeks（从她脸颊滚落）.Paragraph 2:A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back.She 9raised her head（抬起头）anj saw the familiaT face of hermother."Here you come!T ve been 10. looking for you（寻找你）厂 she said,tired and relieved.Jenny 11.couldn' t help throwing herself into heT mother，s anus （禁不 住投进妈妈的怀屮）.44Mum,r m so so