为了培养高三学生能在所学语言范围内口笔头造句

1、为了培养高三学生能在所学语言范围内口笔头造句:能在有提示词语的条件下, 写出100个左右短文, 我采用英语作文训练三步法,即一例一练、一课一练、一题一练。1、一例一练 先提供一篇范文作为示例,让学生进行仿写练习,与高中英语课本第三册同时进行,约 三个月,每周一课时。在四种常见的文体(说明文、记叙文、议论文、应用文中重点是应用文体。如书 信、 便条、日记、海报、请假条、通知、广告等。我将89年高考试卷上的书面表达题的答案作为范文 并编了这么 一道模仿练习题:假如你是班长,要向全班同学作一个口头通知。请根据下列内容提示用英文拟一个口头通知。1.活动内容:去旅游。2.地点.长江边上孤山,3、时间:下

2、星期日(9月20日4、注意事项:(1参加者请放学后到讲台登记并交车费10元; (2上午七时半在校门前集合, 八 时乘校车出发; (3午餐在小孤山附近的一家餐馆吃,下午4:30返回。在练习 “ 对话 ” 写作时,我选了这样一篇语言规范的作文:Dont Ride Too FastDick: Whats the matter, Bill ? Why are you sitting on the ground?Bill: I fell off my bike and hurt my leg.Dick: Im sorry to hear it .Is there anything I can do fo

3、r you?Bill; Would you please phone my father and tell him to come at once?Dick: Is he in his office or at home?Bill: In his office and his telephone number is 553246.Dick: 553246, Ive got it down .Now Ill run to the nearest publicphone.Wait for mehere.Bill: OK. You can ride my bike. Itll save time.D

4、ick: Thats a good idea.Itll be back soon.Bill: please dont ride too fast.Dick: Dont worry .I wont说明:杰克和他的弟弟随父母来到中国。在上海某中学上学。丽丽是杰克的同班同学。请根据下面的 情景 介绍,写出某日杰克与丽丽的一段话。杰克匆匆忙忙走过来。丽丽问他怎么啦。是不是出了问题。他告诉丽丽,他爸爸妈妈今晚乘火车到北 京去 。他们到站时,发现有一张车票忘在书桌上。丽丽把车钥匙给了他。杰克连声道谢。丽丽问他还需 要她帮什么 忙。杰克请她告诉他弟弟,他不到10点不会回家。于是他们说了声再见就分手了。仿写能

5、减轻畏难情绪,能从范文中找到类似的表达语言材料和方法,容易入门。2.一课一练 第三册课本学完了。进入第一轮总复习四个月,与课文复习同步,进行一课一练。一般 每 周可安排写两篇作文。这能巩固和加深课内所学的知识,提高学习的效果。在编题时要注意各课文章 的特点, 选编不同文体的作文。除了练习上述常见的几种文体外,还应练习改写、扩写、缩写、看图说 话等不同形式的 作文。如复习高中第一册第10课时、选编一道与 “ 长城 ” 有关的题目,写讲话稿。假定你是一名导游,陪同某国际旅游团游览长城。车抵长城,下车前你准备对大家作必要的介绍和交 代。 请拟一份讲话稿,说明以下几点:1、简单介绍长城(世界上最长的城

6、墙,2000多年历史,世界奇观之一 。2、讲话时间是八点半,在长城逗留两个半小时,十一点离开。3、游览车在入口处等候,记住车号,准时返回。4、贵重物口随身携带,下车前关上车窗。5、祝大家玩得愉快。在复习高中第二册第2课 The Tallest Grass时, 我要求学生根据课文内容写一段对话。 题目是这样编的:某一学生对竹子不甚了解,于是去问生物老师。他就竹子的种属、种类、特征(指生长情况以及高度 和 用途等提了几个问题。老师一一给予回答并请他写一段师生之间关于竹子的对话。如有一学生编写出 这样一段 文字通顺的对话:(S -A Student T-The Teachers:What kind

7、of plant is bamboo?T:Bamboo is a kind of grass though it looks niore like a tree.S:How many kinds of bamboo are there in the world?T:Altogether there are more than 500 different kinds of bamboo.s:Where does bamboo grow best ? Do all of them grow tall?T:They grow best where it is warm and where it ra

8、ins often.Not allkinds of bamboo grow tall. Some grow no higher than your ankles.S:Is bamboo very useful?T:Yes, it is widely used .We can make a lot of things out of bamboo, such as flower vases, b askets, water-pipes.It is also a good buildingmaterial.It can be made into fine paper.It can als o be

9、used as food whenyoung.又如在复习高中第二册第14课和第15课时,提示是将礼物这篇短篇小说缩写成一篇简短的故 事。3.一题一练 一题一练即命题作文,安排在高考前两个月。题目应接近中学生的生活实际,使学生看 到 题目就有话可写。这样才能激发学生的兴趣,使他们对写好作文充满信心。这样的题目有:记叙文:(1 My First English Teacher (2 My Study of English(3 My Childhood (4 An Unforgettable Day描写:(1 Four Seasons (2 My Good Friend(3 The Teacher

10、I Respect Most说明文:(1 My Family (2 Our School(3 How I Improved My English议论文:(1 On the Importance of Learning A Foreign Language(2 Early Rising (3 Lets Go in for Sports(例文略英语作文训练三步法,由仿写到改写,再到自由表达,由易到难,循序渐进,确定了作文要求和具体 形式 ,是一种有效方法。89年我所教的一个班级高考人均成绩为82.2分。90年和91年高考英 语成绩也较 为理想,均在全市重点中学中名列前茅。92年一个班级80%的学生

11、书面表达(15分 题获12分以上的 好成绩,其中满分1人,有相当一部分只扣了12分。全班89人人均成绩为71分。93年两个班学生参 加 MET 考试,一个班人均76.88分,另一个班人均73.5分,在全市 重点中学中名列第一。新编高中教材 (以下简称新教材 编写的体系帮助我们摆脱了以往的困境, 大大有利于全面培养学生听、 说、读、写英语的四种技能。 新教材从第一册开始就编排了大量的书面表达训练,这些训练由浅入深分三 个层 次推进,形成了一种 “ 由易到难、由简到繁、循序渐进 ” 的训练模式。一、对于第一层次的训练,除了教科书里的大量的填空练习以外,还可采用:(一句型训练。写作训练从词法、句法知

12、识入手,结合课本里的重点单词、短语,进行五种基本句 型的 造句练习。例如:1.S+V The First World War broke out in 1914.2.S+V+O We're leading a happy life.3.S+V+P The mixture tastes terrible.4.S+V+O(I+O(D Mr Brown will give us a talk this aftern-oon.5.S+V+O+C We should make our classroom clean and tidy.(二改写对话。以第一人称或第三人称的口气讲述并写下每单元第一课

13、的对话内容。例如: Unit 4 L esson 13(选自学生作业Jane and Betty are going on holidays in a few days'time.Betty is going off to Guangzhou by p lane next Thursday evening.She is staying with her friend Kate Klarke.Jane is going to Xi'an.She 's leaving of Friday.She's going with her parents.She's

14、going by plane,too.在这篇改写的短文里,只要在理解原对话的基础上,给主要句子换上一个主语即可。随着学习知识内 容的 增加和循序渐进的写作训练,理解主题、抓住要点的阅读能力会逐渐增强,词语、句型的运用能力 也会大大的 提高。再如在 Unit 23 Lesson 89里,同样是关于 holidays 的改写,就能运用学过的知识写出 如下的句子:1.Mr White Suggests visiting the town of Aswan.2.Bob Suggests that they visit the High Dam.3.But Mrs White prefers shopp

15、ing to visiting places.二、第二层次的训练通常包括:(一缩写课文。新教材所选的课文题材广泛,体裁丰富。我们要好好利用这些有利的因素与条件, 进行 写作训练。具体做法:先对课文做好充分预习并根据内容找出关键句,从中划出关键词,然后根据 关键词来复 述课文,最后把复述的内容写下来。例如: Unit 21 Lesson82,要求:谈谈马克思如何学外 语(选自学生作 业。Karl Marx was born in Germany.German was his native langu-age.When he was young,he had to mo ve on from pl

16、ace to place.In 1849,he went to England and lived there.Then he started working har d to improve his English Before long,he could write artic-les in English for an American newspap er.Later,he was able to write the book The Civil Warin France in English.Marx began to learn Rus sian in his fifties.At

17、 the end of six months he had learned enough Russian to read articles and reports.Marx set us a good example in learning foreign languages. (画线部分是关键词(二回答问题、联句成文。课本每单元的第二课及 Exercise 1是这种训练的最好的素材。(三仿写与编写。仿写,就是利用已知信息 “ 改头换面 ” 地写一段话。编写,就是根据所阅读的课文, 编写出一段对话。三、第三层次的写作训练难度较大,通常可采用:(一机械写作。常用的应用文如通知、书信等都有其特定的

18、格式。我们要初步了解、掌握这些特定 的格 式及写作技巧, 读懂具体内容, 然后把内容套进特定的格式中去, 就是一篇条理清楚的书面表达了。 如写通知 ,要掌握:1. 通知的对象、地点、时间及要做的事情; 2. 要注意的事项; 3. 写上 "Don't be late"或 "Be on ti me."等一类句子。例如:Class 2 and Class 3 are going to plant trees on Western Hills tomorrow.We'll take a bus to go there.Please bring l

19、unc-h and water with you.Remember to wear old clothes as we'll do a lot o f hard work.We will meet infront of the school gate at nine o'clock.Don't be late.(二小组作文。这种方法尤其适用于看图写作。做法是同学间按照好、中、差兼顾的原则分成几人 一小 组进行讨论并列出英文要点,接着个人分头准备(如每人讲述一、二个要点或一、二幅图;再经 过小组讨论 纠正并加上 “ 启承转合 ” 词、句以联段成文;然后小组之间交换并进行评

20、议,有条件的可进行 集体评改。这种训练方法的优点是:1.“ 团结作战 ” 能消除畏惧心理; 2. 开展讨论可促使大家积极参与; 3. 交换评议 或 集体评改有利于互相学习、共同提高。(三独立写作。经过一系列的循序渐进的写作练习后,就能对难度适中的材料进行独立审题并限时 完成 了。例如:下面是一篇 “ 一件小事 ” 的记叙作文。笔者所教的高一学生根据自己去一家电影院看电影 的途中所 经历的一件小事用英语写的一篇作文,词数 100左右。It was Saturday evening.After supper,I decided to go to s-ee a film,so I went to t

21、he bus sto p to take a bus.Soon the buscame and I got on it.I had a very good seat.Just then,an old woman g ot on the bus.Seeing that there were no spare seats in the bus,I stood up at once and gave my se at to her.She was v-ery pleased.She sat down and thanked me again and again.Soon the bus stoppe

22、dbefore the Guangming Cinema.I got off the bus and said good-bye to the old woman.高一学生能写出这样的书面表达, 是令人欣慰的。 这是遵循语言学习规律, 遵循 “ 由易到难、 由简到繁、 循序渐进 ” 这一科学的训练模式的结果,也是新教材编排合理性与科学性的又一证明。上学途中所见所闻 I live in Taipei and I go to school by bicycle every day. It is convenient to me but I have to put up with the pollu

23、ted air. Like many others, every morning I hurry along with a mask over my mouth to protect myself from th.高一英语作文叙述你日常生活中最喜欢的嗜好 My Favorite Hobby八十字,叙述你日常生活中最喜欢的嗜好 二篇 My Favorite Hobby (1 My favorite hobby is listening to music. When I am tired of studying, I usually listen to music either over the

24、radio or by playing records. But the music I prefer is classica.叙述野生动物遭滥杀及如何保护野生动物(叙述台湾野生动物遭滥杀及如何保护野生动物 (1It is known to everyone that the unrestrained slaughter of wild animals has diminished the number of some endangered species. More and more species are being driven to extinction every year.遗憾 想

25、做却没有做的休闲活动日期:2009-09-16 12:05:36 点击:36 好评:0(叙述一件在高中时, 想做却没有做的休闲活动 Even as a child I had a musical bent, and enjoyed playing the piano. In high school I dreamed of playing the guitar in a rock band, but because of the pressure of schoolwork, I never had enough.我如何度过昨夜 How I Spent Yesterday Evening我如何

26、度过昨夜 How I Spent Yesterday Evening Knowing that I was to take the Joint College Entrance Examination today, I got the jitters last night. Noticing my anxiety, my parents told me some jokes in the hope of calming me down. After di.以 ICRT 为语言学习工具 I.C.R.T As A Language ToolI.C.R.T As A Language Tool(以

27、ICRT 为语言学习工具 Nowadays English in Taiwan has become an indispensable skill, whether one wants to find a satisfying job or to travel around the world. Of course, there are many ways to learn English in T.城市生活或乡村生活 City Life or Country LifeCity Life or Country Life(城市生活或乡村生活 I am living in the suburbs

28、of Taipei. So many people moved from southern Taiwan and settled there that this boom town has been very crowded. My family lies at the intersection of two main stree.The best way to help me through my emotional crises is to share my feelings with a few good friends of mine. Through talking with the

29、m, I have a chance to vent my feelings and find a proper way to solve my problem as well. Exchange of idea.叙述你身为中国人对中国的认识 chinese taiwan叙述你身为中国人对中国的认识 (第一段说明你对中国文化和领土的基本认识, 第二段叙述中国目前的 处境及问题,并说明解决之道 No one can deny that China is a country with five thousand years' history and long-standing cultur

30、e. According to the l.我和我的自行车 The Bicycle and I我和我的自行车 The Bicycle and I 英语作文比赛获奖作品 第一名 我和我的自行车 The Bicycle and I Whenever I see people riding bicycles on the streets in Taipei, a chill always runs up my spine. It reminds me of my own experience. And I would mu.我的父亲教会了我 What I Have Learned From My F

31、ather我的父亲教会了我 What I Have Learned From My Father作文比赛 获奖作品 我的父亲教会了我 What I Have Learned From My Father(第一名 Have you seen Appolo driving his golden chariot across the blue expanse of the universe, radiating his glory o.快乐的结局 (A Happy Ending快乐的结局 (A Happy Ending (请以快乐的结局 (A Happy Ending为题,写一篇 120个单字的英文

32、作 文。你可以从你所读过的故事、看过的电影或亲身的经验中去找题材。描述完快乐的结局以后,并写几句 你的感想。 我学习英语时的困难 (The Difficulties I Ha.(回忆我的中学生活 Remembering My Grade School DaysRemembering My Grade School Days(回忆我的中学生活 六篇 1I began school at seven in accordance with the law in a remote village. Short of funds, the school had only a few classrooms

33、, all poorly constructed. Needless to say, our teacher.(我的邻居 My NeighborhoodMy Neighborhood(我的邻居 八篇 1Having long been living in this alley, I know almost everyone here. It is, however, the housewives that I usually see in the daytime, the rest being either out working as family providers or away in

34、scho.My Pen Pal(我的笔友题目:My Pen Pal(我的笔友 文华高中 202, 李佳纹 Since last summer, I have written to my pen pal, Seda, who lives in Turkey. I became acquainted with her when I went to England for a study tour. We stayed with the same family, and she was.Math 数学题目:Math (数学 清水高中 1年 9班 赵书雨 Many students think tha

35、t learning math is very difficult, but I don't think so. Three years ago, I became interested in math. I didn't consider math a difficult subject, and many of my classmates w.题目:Happiness (幸福 道明中学 2年 13班谢孟桦 Happiness exists everywhere. Everyone has a different definition to the true meaning

36、of happiness. Some people think possessing a great deal of money is the secret to happiness, while others fe.题目:Money (金钱 省凤高中 2年 1班杨艾如 Money is indeed important, but money cannot buy everything. A miser may think that money talks, but if you only give your attention to making money, you may lose ma

37、ny things, such as health, friends.题目:Inner Beauty(内在美 中和高中 212杨宇晴 Recently, many beautiful, sender actresses have been posing for sexy pictures to earn money. It is an easy way to become famous. However, their beauty goes no deeper than their lovely skin. If.my favorite movie(喜欢的电影题目:my favorite mo

38、vie(喜欢的电影 台中文华高中 1年 14班吴佩萱 I love watching movies. They can make me happy or sad. One of my favorite movies is The Lion King. Even though it is a cartoon, it still teaches me a lot of things, like love.题目:Nature (自然 高雄女中 324廖勖君 Living in the concrete jungle, we have to admit that our busy. extravaga

39、nt lives are corroding our souls little by little. Only by being close to nature can we recover our vitality and go back our tru.题目:My TV Set(我的电视机 三民高中 105张立勋 I receive knowledge, news and recreation from TV. It is very convent. When I will watch TV programs. I can understand what is happening in o

40、ur country. I like to watch entertainment news and.题目:My Interest(我的兴趣 瑞祥高中高一六班阮文宣 I have a lot interests, and one of my interests is writing calligraphy. I've been writing it for eight years. Although I rally enjoyed it when I was studying it during Junior high school.题目:Gifts and Books(礼物与书 凤山

41、高中 2年 1班王瑞君 With the exception of Christmas, at no time in the year does the chore of selecting gifts beset us as extensively as it does during June. June is a month when students graduate and whe.题目:Gym Class(体育课 Out of all my classes, I particularly like gym class. Why? Because in gym class you ca

42、n have fun and get out in the fresh air. We play baseball, basketball, football and practice running. It's fun. When you are de.题目：Weight Loss（减肥） Many people go on a diet because they are overweight. In order to look good, they rack their brains on how to lose weight. They take special drugs or

43、 starve themselves, but these ways do harm to their bodies. Ther. Becoming a Good Student（成为一个好学生） 题目：Becoming a Good Student（成为一个好学生） Three attributes can help people in their studies. First, a sense of responsibility is important for building a sound character. If you aren't responsible, you&#

44、39;ll postpone your assignments or. A World Without Trees （没有树木的世界） 题目： World Without Trees （没有树木的世界） Have you ever imagined a world without trees? Try it, and A you will see the whole world dry up and look like a broken tortoise shell. At night, the temperature would drop sharply. Living creatu. My

45、 Class(我的班级 题目：My Class(我的班级 嘉义县朴子国中三年八班，潘慧如 There are thirty-three students in my class. They are all my classmates and friends. Five of them are my good friends. They are Gloria, Lucy, Lilian, Rone, and Dana. We usually study. My First Field Trip in Junior High（我的国中首次校外旅游） 题目：My First Field Trip i

46、n Junior High（我的国中首次校外旅游） 桃园县新明国中一年十四班、郭佳艳 December 6th was a sunny day and we took our first field trip to Taipei. We first visited the National Palace Museum and saw many tourists fr. The Best Holiday I Have Ever Had（我曾度过最好的假日） 题目：The Best Holiday I Have Ever Had（我曾度过最好的假日） 台中市黎明国中二年一班、廖婉婷 The bes

47、t holiday I have ever had was in America. I went there with my family last year during my summer vacation. We stayed in San Francisco and La. Flight with the Night（与夜同逝）诗题目：Flight with the Night（与夜同逝）诗 台北市北投国中二年十 四班、 郭纯伶 Day after day. Fight with the silence, In every moment. When times go through, I turned my head, And looked back the way I walked, The footsteps that stayed behind,. Helping Others Is the Source of Happiness（助人为快乐之本） 题目：Helping Others Is the Source of Happiness（助人为快乐之本） 小胖 If someone asks me, What is happiness? I will answer, Helping others is the source of happin