山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练 短文改错 写作（19）

1、山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（19）短文改错 下面短文中有10处语法错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。 增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。 2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起）不记分。高考资源网 Tom,I'd like to tell you something more about our school sports meet. It was holding on Oct. 6,

2、 which was a fine day. There were over 1,000 students and teachers attend it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the 100-meters race. He finish the race in 12.6 seconds and broke in the school record. The sports meet was really success. That was because we were all trying to do my best. Although

3、I was not one of the winner, I was proud of that we had cone. Im looking forward to receiving your letter.书面表达假如你是太原某所中学的学生李华。暑假将至，你校外籍教师Mr. Smith打算利用暑假外出旅游，请你根据图片和中文提示用英语写一封信，为Mr. Smith提供旅游建议。1.需要说明旅游线路。2.告知旅行日程安排、就餐及住宿等情况注意：1短文必须包括所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 2词数：100-120之间； 3信的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 太原 高考资源网 Mr. S

4、mith,Here is my suggestion about your journey during the Summer holiday._ Yours Sincerely Lihua 改错：第1句：划掉more 第2句：holdingheld 第3句：attendattending 第4句：100-meters100-meter第5句: finishfinished 第5句：划掉第二个in 第6句：success前加a或successsuccessful第7句：myour 第8句：winnerwinners第8句：thatwhat或that前加all书面表达：Dear Mr Smith

5、, Here is my suggestion about your journey during the Summer holiday. On July 20, you are to take a train to Tai'an City to climb Mount Tai, on the top of which, if lucky, you'll have the chance to see the sunrise early in the morning. On July 23, you may take the train to Beijing. You can v

6、isit Tian'anmen Square in the afternoon. After it you can live in Beijing Hotel, Which will offer you various Chinese traditional food. Next day, I suggest you visit the Great Wall, the longest wall in the world. For the next four days, you can go to the Summer Palace, walk around and do some shopping. In the afternoon