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1、 Taizhou Foreign Language School He Guihuan 高三英语书面表达高三英语书面表达How to compose a good composition ?Dear Miss He, How is it going? I havent seen you since graduation. As you know, the idea of becoming a star always _me. C_, I made every _to improve myself, hoping to become a star. However, luck seemed to

2、 go against me. I was never offered a part in any film. Its not a c_that I cant get a chance. Sometimes I wonder if it is because I am an ordinary person without any background that makes it difficult for me to succeed. whats worse, I even cant afford the rent of the house. To be honest, I _ myself

3、gradually. I doubt whether I can realize this dream. What should I do? I will appreciate it if you could offer me some suggestions? Your ideas _to me. Yours _ Wang Peiappeals tolose faith inattemptConsequentlycoincidencemake a differencefaithfully 书面表达：书面表达： 近段时间大家都在议论近段时间大家都在议论“草根明星一夜走红草根明星一夜走红”这一这

4、一话题，很多人觉得他们的成功很偶然话题，很多人觉得他们的成功很偶然, , 是因为运气是因为运气好好假如你是高中生李明，有感于这一社会假如你是高中生李明，有感于这一社会, ,写一篇写一篇短文短文. . 内容包括内容包括: :1 1反映情况；反映情况； 2 2讲述他们成功的原因讲述他们成功的原因( (至少两点）；至少两点）； 3 3谈谈对自己的启示。谈谈对自己的启示。The structure of the passagePart 1Part 2Part 3体裁：体裁： 时态：时态： 内容内容: 人称人称: Before-writingargumentative composition (议论文）

5、议论文）The present tensephenomenonreasonslessonsPart 1: phenomenonPart 1: phenomenonKey words: grassroots stars, become famous overnightTip 1: be brief and to the pointTip2: recite some fixed patternsPart 2: reasons:Part 2: reasons:Tip 2: add some effective linking wordsPart 3: lessonsPart 3: lessonsWh

6、at I have learned is thatAccording to the above-mentioned factors, Currently, people have been talking about a phenomenon that a great many grassroots stars become famous overnight. some people think they are just lucky dogs. According to the above-mentioned factors, I believe good luck just plays a

7、 little role, on the way to success, hard work makes a great difference. Consequently, make every attempt to pursue our dream from now on, whatever difficulties you meet, never lose faith in yourselves. As a saying goes, perseverance is victory.One possible version Currently, people have been talkin

8、g about a phenomenon that a great many grassroots stars become famous overnight. some people think they are just lucky dogs. According to the above-mentioned factors, I believe good luck just plays a little role, on the way to success, hard work makes a great difference. Consequently, make every att

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