写作专题-句子的练习

1、 书面表达书面表达之句子的练习之句子的练习 琼山中学琼山中学 林玉丽林玉丽Learning goalsv1.Use grammatical structure to form a sentencev2. Learn to beautify the writingComparison 假设你将要参加全校高中英语演讲比赛，请你针对不少假设你将要参加全校高中英语演讲比赛，请你针对不少中学生都有自己的网上博客这一现象，写一篇演讲稿，中学生都有自己的网上博客这一现象，写一篇演讲稿，陈述你的观点。陈述你的观点。要点：要点：1.人们的看法：提供了一个展示自己才华的平台人们的看法：提供了一个展示自己才华的平台

2、 浪费时间，影响学习浪费时间，影响学习 2. 你的看法你的看法注意：注意：1.词数词数100左右；左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯； 3.开头和结尾以为你写好，但不计入总词数。开头和结尾以为你写好，但不计入总词数。Writing Good morning, ladies and gentlemen， Now high school students have their blogs on the Internet. Some says it has bad and good points. On the one hand，it can provide ro

3、om to show themselves and to cut their pressure. But on the other hand，it will take them a lot of time to do their blogs. It is a waste of time . It will effect their schoolwork. I think it is a good thing. Nowadays Internet is important in our life, so we can see its effect. Also ，open a blog needs

4、 abilities like writing，drawing， using computer so on. Blog is not harm. Your attitude harms . We should have the advantages and avoid disadvantages. Thank you!Writing 1Comparison Good morning, ladies and gentlemen， Nowadays，it is regarded common that many high school students have their own blogs o

5、n the Internet. Someone holds the view that its a doubleedged sword (双刃剑双刃剑). On the one hand，it can not only provide a colorful platform to show their talents but also a way to release their pressure. But on the other hand，it will take up a lot of time and use up energy to manage their blogs so it

6、is a waste of time and will greatly affect their schoolwork. As far as I am concerned, this is a trend. There is no denying that the Internet is playing a more and more important role in our life. More importantly，opening and running an eyecatching blog inspires their various abilities such as writi

7、ng，drawing, designing, being skillful at computer and so on. Blog itself is of little harm. It is your attitude towards it that matters. We should take the advantages and avoid some bad effects. Thank you!Writing 2I am glad to hear from you. (一般一般)So glad am I to hear from you.(高级，倒装，情感更加强烈高级，倒装，情感更

8、加强烈)Comparison When he arrives, please give me an email. On his arriving/arrival, please give me an email. Comparison (一般一般)(高级高级, 简练，节奏紧凑简练，节奏紧凑) 在书面表达中，在书面表达中， 灵活多变的句式可使行文灵活多变的句式可使行文丰富多彩，生动、自然、流畅。感叹句、倒装丰富多彩，生动、自然、流畅。感叹句、倒装句、复合结构、强调句、定语从句、非谓语句、复合结构、强调句、定语从句、非谓语动词短语等丰富的语法结构的正确使用，可动词短语等丰富的语法结构的正确使用，可

9、以使文章的语言充满层次感以使文章的语言充满层次感,句型丰富不单一。句型丰富不单一。Conclusion丰富的语法结构丰富的语法结构1 1、长短句变换、长短句变换：简单句简单句、并列句并列句和和复合句复合句的交替使用。在写作时应根的交替使用。在写作时应根据实际需要，交替使用简单句、并据实际需要，交替使用简单句、并列句和复合句，以达到列句和复合句，以达到“长短错落有长短错落有致，句式丰富多样致，句式丰富多样”的效果。的效果。If you study hard, youll make great progress.Study hard and youll make great progress.I

10、have to study harder, or I shall not catch up with my classmates.I have to study harder I can catch up with my classmates.If I study harder, I shall catch up with1）、复合句与并列句之间的转换）、复合句与并列句之间的转换in order thatShe wanted to meet her parents at the station, so she got up early.She got up early .The footbal

11、l match had to be delayed, for it was raining heavily.The football match had to be delayed because of the heavy rain.2)、并列句与简单句之间的转换、并列句与简单句之间的转换to meet her parents at the stationThat he had won the game delighted his parents. .His delighted his parents.The man who is standing at the gate is my Engl

12、ish teacher.The man standing at the gate is my English teacher.非谓语动词短语可以变复合句为简单句，产生非谓语动词短语可以变复合句为简单句，产生简洁明快，节奏紧凑的效果。简洁明快，节奏紧凑的效果。3)、名词性从句与非谓语动词结构的转换、名词性从句与非谓语动词结构的转换4）定语从句与非谓语动词结构的转换）定语从句与非谓语动词结构的转换winning the gameAfter he had done his homework, he began to play computer games.Having done his homewo

13、rk, he began to play computer games.Because I do not know what to do next, I want to ask for your advice.Not knowing what to do next, I want to ask for your advice.5)、状语从句与非谓语动词结构的转换、状语从句与非谓语动词结构的转换2、使用表达感情的句式如：、使用表达感情的句式如：强调句、感叹句、倒装句、强调句、感叹句、倒装句、独立主格结构等，可以增独立主格结构等，可以增强语句的表现力，使整篇强语句的表现力，使整篇文章句型丰富。文章

14、句型丰富。丰富的语法结构丰富的语法结构Our library lies in the center of our school.In the center of our school lies our library.(地点状语开头，完全倒装语序）地点状语开头，完全倒装语序）We didnt realize the importance of environmental protection until the 1980s.Not until the 1980s did we realize the importance of environmental protection.（以否定词开头，

15、部分倒装语序）（以否定词开头，部分倒装语序）1）、）、陈述陈述不如不如倒装倒装妙，倒装是一种简单妙，倒装是一种简单易行，使句子呈现亮点的方法。易行，使句子呈现亮点的方法。1）、）、陈述陈述不如不如倒装倒装妙，是一种简单易行，妙，是一种简单易行，使句子呈现亮点的方法。使句子呈现亮点的方法。只有通过这种方式，我们才能提高英语。只有通过这种方式，我们才能提高英语。Only in this way can we improve our English.The scenery was so attractive that we wanted to enjoy it a second time.So at

16、tractive was the scenery that we wanted to enjoy it a second time.(so+形容词形容词/副词放于句首，主句部分倒装）副词放于句首，主句部分倒装）是我的老师教会我怎样做个真正的男子汉。是我的老师教会我怎样做个真正的男子汉。It was my teacher who/ that taught me how to be a real man.Because leaves fell here and there , I noticed autumn was drawing upon.Leaves falling here and the

17、re, I noticed autumn was drawing upon.2）、强调句型的合理运用）、强调句型的合理运用3）、独立主格结构）、独立主格结构4）、感叹句）、感叹句We were glad to see everything going well.How glad we were to see everything going well!5）、肯定不如）、肯定不如双否双否好，起强调作用好，起强调作用I made great progress in English with his help.（肯定）（肯定）I couldnt have made great progress in

18、 English without his help.(双重否定，虚拟语气）双重否定，虚拟语气）We can borrow five books at most at a time, and we can keep them for ten days.At most five books can be borrowed at a time, andthey can be kept for ten days.6）、）、主动主动不如不如被动被动巧，有时使用被动巧，有时使用被动语态更符合英语的习惯。语态更符合英语的习惯。1.To my great surprise, he didnt know me

19、at all.(用名词性从句改写）用名词性从句改写）2. If you dont start off early, youll be late for school.（并列句）（并列句）3.I have not decided whether I should accept it or not.（不定式）（不定式）4.When we heard the news, we jumped with joy. （非谓语动词）（非谓语动词） 5. We can work well with a plan. （双重否定）（双重否定）Practice8.I did not realize my mista

20、kes until you told me. (强调句）强调句）9.If the weather permits, Ill come morrow.（独立主格结构）（独立主格结构）10.My brother was riding the bike and I sat on the seat behind him.（with 复合结构）复合结构）6. The girl is spoken highly of. Her composition was well written. （定语从句）（定语从句）Practice:Practice1.To my great surprise, he didn

21、t know me at all.(名词性从句）名词性从句）Practice:What surprised me most was that he didnt know me at all . It surprised me that he didnt know me at all. I was surprised that he didnt know me at all . 2. If you dont start off early, youll be late for school.（并列句）（并列句）Start off early or youll be late for school

22、.3.I have not decided whether I should accept it or not.（不定式）（不定式）I have not decided whether or not to accept it.Practice:4. When we heard the news, we jumped with joy. （非（非谓语动词）谓语动词） Hearing the news, we jumped with joy. 5.We can work well with a plan. （双重否定）（双重否定） We can not work well without a pl

23、an.Practice:8.I did not realize my mistakes until you told me.(强调句）强调句）It was not until you told me that I realized my mistakes.6. The girl is spoken highly of. Her composition was well written. （定语从句）（定语从句）The girl whose composition was well written is spoken highly of.asPractice:9.If the weather p

24、ermits, Ill come tomorrow.（独立主格结构）（独立主格结构）Weather permitting, Ill come tomorrow.10.My brother was riding the bike and I sat on the seat behind him.（with 复合结构）复合结构）My brother was riding the bike with me sitting on the seat behind.Practice:Beautifying your writingDear Headmaster, The moment I heard th

25、at you are looking for host families for the British students. Im writing to recommend myself.(用介用介词词+动名词短语改写）动名词短语改写） My house lies in a quiet place. Its big and comfortable. It has everything you need(用分词和定语从句改写）用分词和定语从句改写）. Besides public transportation, our car can take them to some interesting

26、places. I speak English so fluently that Im sure I have no difficulty talking with them(用倒装句改写）用倒装句改写）. Besides , we hosted two British students last year. We gained experience(用定语从句改用定语从句改写）写）. And my mothers cooking is wonderful. They can have good Chinese food (用状语从句改写）用状语从句改写）. I will be happy i

27、f I have the chance to host them again(用感叹句和被动语态改写）用感叹句和被动语态改写）. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua1. On hearing you looking for host family for the British students, I am writing to recommend myself.2. My house, which lies in a quiet place, is big and comfortable, providing everything you

28、 need. Lying in a quiet place, my house which is big and comfortable has everything you need.3. So fluently do I speak English that definitely I will have no difficulty communicating with them.4. Furthermore , we hosted two British students last year, through which we gained lots of experience.5. Mo

29、reover, my mothers cooking is so wonderful that they can have good Chinese food.6. How happy I will be if I am given the chance to host them again.Possible answersDear Sir, Im writing sincerely to request a valuable chance to be one of the host families for the British students. Lying in a beautiful

30、 and quiet neighbor-hood, our spacious, fully-equipped apartment answers all their needs. Apart from the convenient public transportation, our private car will be available to take them to the nearby places of interest if needed. So fluently do I speak English that definitely I will have no difficul

31、ty communicating with them.Furthermore, we hosted two British students last year, through which weve gained lots of experience. Moreover, no one can equal my motherin cooking, which can guarantee them a wonderful chance of tasting delicious Chinese food. I would greatly appreciate it if I could have

32、 the chance to host them and make friends with them. Looking forward to your reply. Yours Li HuaWhat have we learned ?Summary 假设你是李华，下面是你的美国笔友假设你是李华，下面是你的美国笔友Alice发给你的一封电子邮件。发给你的一封电子邮件。Dear Chen Wei, How are you getting along recently? I miss you very much, especially when Ive met some difficulties

33、in my studying of Chinese. As you know, Ive taught myself Chinese for more than a year, but I cant even read Chinese newspaper or magazines. Im almost giving it up. Would you please give me some advice on how to study Chinese well? Thank you. Yours ever Alice 请你用英语给请你用英语给Alice 写一封回信，回答她的问题。写一封回信，回答她

34、的问题。词数：词数：100左右。左右。Writing 书面表达书面表达 (One possible version)Dear Alice, Im glad to receive your email. Everything is going well with me. Thank you for asking. As for how to study Chinese well, Id like to give you some suggestions based on my experience. Chinese is an ancient language and it is rich in

35、 words and cultural contents, so you should first try to learn some useful words and phrases and their cultural backgrounds. Second, it is a hard job to learn a foreign language well, so learn Chinese step by step and never be too anxious. Third, you must have confidence and never give it up. Last,

36、practice is the best way to learn Chinese. I think we can talk in Chinese on the phone, or you can write letters in Chinese as often as you can. May you succeed! Yours sincerely, Li HuaDear Bob, Im very glad to hear from you and Im very happy to see you in September. I know you will study in Jian Xi

37、n Chinese school, so I have already found a comfortable house near this school for you. In front of the house, there is a bus station and the No. 11 bus will take you to the school where you will study. In the house, you will feel very comfortable. In the biggest room, there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and so on. The house also has a toilet and a kitchen. I think you will have a good time in it. At last, the ho