第5课时　七年级下册 Modules 9～12 高频话题写作

1、.高频话题写作描绘过去的经历【命题探究】本学段的高频话题写作的重点是运用过去式描绘某人过去的生活或者人生中的某次经历。【写作积累】话题词汇积累1根底词汇： worldfamous, wonderful, on the first day, on the second day, visitors.2重点句型： It takes sb.时间to do sth., sb.spends时间/金钱in doing sth., not at all.重点句型仿写1在昆西有很多事情可以做，那里有很多商店、两家电影院、足球俱乐部以及篮球队。There were lots of things to do in

2、Quincy, with many stores, two movie theatres, football clubs and basketball teams too. 句式仿写： 在我的家乡有很多事情可以做，这里有很多商店、电影院和体育馆。There are lots of things to do in my hometown, many stores, cinemas and sports halls. 2威廉莎士比亚在他52岁时去世。William Shakespeare died at the age of fiftytwo. William Shakespeare died w

3、hen he was fiftytwo years old. 句式仿写： 我八岁时去上小学。I went to primary school . I went to primary school when I was . 3我们花了两个小时坐飞机到达那里。It took us two hours to fly there. We spent two hours in flying there. 句式仿写： 我们坐火车去上海，路上花了两个小时。We took the train to Shanghai, and it took us two hours to get there. We took

4、 the train to Shanghai, and we spent two hours in getting there. 【典例剖析】 鲁迅是中国有名的文坛巨匠，可以说他是中国的“莎士比亚，如今请你根据以下表格中所提供的的信息，以“The Life of Lu Xun为题，写一篇短文介绍这位伟人。YearThings1881was born1892began to study in Sanwei Shuwu1898studied in Nanjing1902moved to Japan1906married and started writing1936died审题谋篇1时态： 使用一

5、般过去时2人称： 使用第三人称3模板：The Life of.BeginningIntroduction概况BodyExperiences经历EndingThe writers opinion about him作者观点要练说，先练胆。说话胆小是幼儿语言开展的障碍。不少幼儿当众说话时显得害怕：有的结巴重复，面红耳赤；有的声音极低，自讲自听；有的低头不语，扯衣服，扭身子。总之，说话时外部表现不自然。我抓住练胆这个关键，面向全体，偏向差生。一是和幼儿建立和谐的语言交流关系。每当和幼儿讲话时，我总是笑脸相迎，声音亲切，动作亲昵，消除幼儿畏惧心理，让他能主动的、无拘无束地和我交谈。二是注重培养幼儿敢于

6、当众说话的习惯。或在课堂教学中，改变过去老师讲学生听的传统的教学形式，取消了先举手后发言的约束，多采取自由讨论和谈话的形式，给每个幼儿较多的当众说话的时机，培养幼儿爱说话敢说话的兴趣，对一些说话有困难的幼儿，我总是认真地耐心地听，热情地帮助和鼓励他把话说完、说好，增强其说话的勇气和把话说好的信心。三是要提明确的说话要求，在说话训练中不断进步，我要求每个幼儿在说话时要仪态大方，口齿清楚，声音响亮，学会用眼神。对说得好的幼儿，即使是某一方面，我都抓住教育，提出表扬，并要其他幼儿模拟。长期坚持，不断训练，幼儿说话胆量也在不断进步。高分范文The Life of Lu XunLu Xun was a

7、great Chinese writer of novels and essays. He wrote hundreds of famous works, and one of them is Zhaohua Xishi. Lu Xun was born in Shaoxing, Zhejiang Province in 1881. His real name was Zhou Shuren. At the age of 11, he began to study in Sanwei Shuwu. As a student, he studied very hard and he was fr

8、iendly to others, so he got on well with everyone. And then he went to Nanjing to study at 17. He did a good job at school, so he went to Japan for further study four years later. After that, his father died. He was so sad that he decided to be a doctor to save more sick people. But later he changed

9、 his mind. When he was 25 years old, he returned to China and got married. At that time, Chinese people lived a hard life, so he made up his mind to write because he wanted to cheer up Chinese people by writing. And he took the name Lu Xun as his pen name. He wrote many great novels in his life, and

10、 his works were so meaningful that they were well worth reading again and again. But unluckily, he died when he was only 55 years old. Although he died, he is still in my heart. In my eyes, he is the hero of China and we are proud of him forever! 【写作练兵】2019浙江宁波中考今年5月11日，你校组织了一次社会理论活动，部分学生选择去了红星农场见导图

11、一，其余学生选择去了科技博物馆见导图二。请根据你所选择的理论活动写一篇英语日记，记录当天的经历和感受。注意：1日记必须包括你所选择导图的所有要点，并适当发挥；2文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；3词数：80100。日记格式及首句己给出，不计入总词数。参考答案写作积累1with2.at the age of eight；eight years old3to get; in getting写作练兵【参考范文1】Friday, May 11thToday I had a school trip. The weather was fine. My classmates and I set off to H

12、ongxing Farm by bus early in the morning.The minute we arrived, we took a walk around the farm. Then we fed the chickens. When I threw some food to them, they ran over to me with excitement and some of them even walked into their friends. The most exciting thing was that we picked strawberries after

13、 lunch. While we were picking, we ate a lot. How sweet they were!I had a wonderful time today! I do hope to go there again in the near future!【参考范文2】Friday, May 11thToday I had a school trip. The weather was fine. My classmates and I set off to the Science Museum by subway at 7：00.As soon as we reached the museum, we were amazed to see lots of pictures about science. Then we watched a video about different inventions and their inventors. Its unbelievable that technology has progressed in such a rapid way. In the after