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1、 英语写作复习课英语写作复习课写作的定义：写作的定义：What is writing? 高考英语作文高考英语作文:1. 提示作文（提示作文（Controlled writing）1. 时间时间2. 字数字数3. 内容内容2. 体裁（体裁（Type of writing）1. 应用文应用文(practical)2. 记叙文记叙文(narrative)3. 议论文（议论文（argumentative)写作步骤：三步，七字作文法写作步骤：三步，七字作文法写作前写作前(Pre-writing)写作中写作中(Writing) 复写复写(Rewriting)抄改美 连列定审步骤步骤七字作文七字作文法法写作

2、前写作前Pre-writing：1 1、审、审仔细阅读写作要求及注仔细阅读写作要求及注 意事项；意事项； 2、定、定确定体裁，人称和时态确定体裁，人称和时态 及篇章结构；及篇章结构；写作中写作中Writing：3、列、列列出列出要点要点，重要词组及句型；，重要词组及句型； 4、连整理成篇，行文连贯；以以“My English Teacher”My English Teacher”为题写一为题写一篇篇8080字左右的英语短文，提示如下：字左右的英语短文，提示如下：1 1 孙老师，孙老师，2525岁，岁，1.651.65米米, , 打扮入时。打扮入时。2 2 关心热爱学生关心热爱学生 。3 3 教

3、学方法生动有趣。教学方法生动有趣。4 4 与学生关系融洽，深受同学欢迎；与学生关系融洽，深受同学欢迎；实战训练实战训练Pre-writing1.审：审：2.定：定：“My English Teacher” 为题为题写一篇写一篇80字作文字作文记叙文，第三人称，一般现在时记叙文，第三人称，一般现在时篇章结构：三段式篇章结构：三段式首段：个人简历首段：个人简历正文：教学特色正文：教学特色尾段：作者的评价尾段：作者的评价 be fashionable love students, and care about the students be lively and interesting get on

4、 well with,be popular withWriting:3.列列1.打扮入时打扮入时2.热爱学生，关心学生热爱学生，关心学生3.生动有趣生动有趣4.相处融洽，深受欢迎相处融洽，深受欢迎My English Teacher Miss Sun is our English teacher. She is 25 years old. She is 1.65 meters tall. She is very fashionable.She loves her students. She cares about us. Her lessons are interesting and live

5、ly; Miss Sun gets on well with us. She is very popular. We all love her and her teaching !Writing4.连：连：连词成句，连句成篇连词成句，连句成篇复写复写Rewriting：5、美润色丰富要点； 6、改、改查错改错查错改错7、抄修改无误后，认真规范地誊写在规定的地方。1. 开头Beginning2. 正文Main body3. 结尾EndingWriting techniques:hooknaturalMain body 正文简洁性简洁性 conciseness连贯性连贯性 coherence整洁性

6、整洁性 tidiness多样性多样性 variety1.避免重复避免重复In my opinion, I think your plan is feasible.The desk is round in shape and red in color.简洁性简洁性2.2.句子结构简洁句子结构简洁 Do you know the man who is speaking at the meeting?Look out for cars while you are crossing the street?Do you know the man speaking at the meeting?Look

7、out for cars while crossing the street? 练习改写下列句子练习改写下列句子, 使其更简洁使其更简洁 1. Do you know the girl who is dressed in red? Do you know the girl _.2. We finally reached home at 10 pm, and we were tired and hungry. We finally reached home at 10 pm, _. in redtired and hungry连贯性连贯性 连贯性的要求是：恰当使用过渡语，句连贯性的要求是：恰当使

8、用过渡语，句子与句子之间的过渡要符合逻辑，不能子与句子之间的过渡要符合逻辑，不能造成歧义或矛盾造成歧义或矛盾过渡词的使用过渡词的使用:1.表联合或选择关系：表联合或选择关系：2.表转折关系：表转折关系：3.表顺序表顺序：4.表因果关系表因果关系：5.表解释说明：表解释说明：6.表递进关系：表递进关系：7.表总结：表总结：8.强调强调: and, bothand, eitheror,not onlybut also等等but, yet, while, however等等for, so, because of, thanks to first, second, later, finally, at

9、 last等等such as, for example，and so on等等whats more，besides等等in short, in brief, in a word, in general等等indeed(确实确实)，above all(尤其尤其), even so等。等。连贯性练习：连贯性练习： 1.适当使用一些主从复合句来代替简单适当使用一些主从复合句来代替简单句或并列句句或并列句. The meal was very nice. We all enjoyed it very much. The meal was nice we all enjoyed it very much

10、.sothat连贯性练习：连贯性练习：2. We had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced. Some told stories. Some played chess. have fun doing sthAfter a short rest, we had great fun singing , dancing, telling stories and playing chess.整洁性整洁性字迹清晰，书写规范。字迹清晰，书写规范。4 4 规范三写规范三写：大大 小小 写写, ,拼拼 写写, ,书书

11、 写 1.避免重复使用某一单词或短语。如避免重复使用某一单词或短语。如:I like reading while my brother likes watching television.I like reading while my brother watching television.多样性多样性enjoys 2.运用高级词汇运用高级词汇或短语或短语 1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable. Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable. 2

12、. She doesnt like sports. She cares nothing for sports3.3.运用复杂结构：运用复杂结构：1. 改变时态改变时态The bell is ringing now. There goes the bell. 2. 适当运用分词或介词结构适当运用分词或介词结构He graduated from Beijing University, he taught politics in a middle school. After graduating from Beijing University, he taught politics in a mid

13、dle school.4. 练习使用练习使用词组词组来代替一些单词，以增来代替一些单词，以增加文采。加文采。1). She likes sports very much.She shows great interest in sports.She is very fond of sports.She is crazy about sports.She goes in for sports.WritingMy English Teacher Miss Sun is our English teacher. She is 25 years old. She is 1.65 meters tall.

14、 She is very fashionable.She loves her students. She cares about us. Her lessons are interesting and lively; Miss Sun gets on well with us. She is very popular. We all love her and her teaching !Rewriting : 5. 美美 6.改改 7.抄抄Beginning Miss Sun is our English teacher. She is 25 years old. She is 1.65 me

15、ters tall. She is very fashionable.She loves her students. She cares about us. Miss Sun，our English teacher, is 25 years old, and 1.65 meters tall. She is very fashionable.Since she loves us and cares about our needs, she is very helpful in our school life. Not only is she helpful in life, but also

16、her teaching methods are unique. For example, she knows how to make her lessons lively and interesting and we are crazy about her lessons; Besides, Miss Sun gets on well with us and she is very popular among students. Main bodyHer lessons are interesting and lively; Miss Sun gets on well with us. Sh

17、e is very popular. EndingWe all love her and her teaching ! In a word, Miss Sun is a unique teacher, and we all love her and her teaching! My English Teacher Miss Sun，our English teacher, is 25 years old, and 1.65 meters tall. She is very fashionable.Since she loves us and cares about our needs and

18、desires, she is very helpful. Not only is she helpful in life, but also her teaching methods are unique. For example, she knows how to make her lessons lively and interesting and we are crazy about her lessons; Besides, Miss Sun gets on well with us and she is very popular among students. In a word,

19、 Miss Sun is a unique teacher, and we all love her and her teaching! Rewriting : 5. 美美6.改改7.抄抄请根据要点提示，用英文写一篇简要介绍四川汶川大地震请根据要点提示，用英文写一篇简要介绍四川汶川大地震中舍己救人英雄谭千秋老师的短文。字数中舍己救人英雄谭千秋老师的短文。字数80词左右。内词左右。内容要点如下：容要点如下：1谭老师个人简况：谭老师个人简况：1957年生于湖南；大学毕业后，年生于湖南；大学毕业后，2在四川德阳一所中学教书；外表严肃，在四川德阳一所中学教书；外表严肃，3对学生要求严格，对学生要求严格

20、，4深爱学生。深爱学生。5谭老师英雄事迹：汶川地震时，他在上课。教学楼谭老师英雄事迹：汶川地震时，他在上课。教学楼坍塌时刻，用身体保护坍塌时刻，用身体保护4名学生英勇献身，名学生英勇献身，4名学生得救。名学生得救。6你的感受及愿望。你的感受及愿望。参考词语：参考词语：1. graduate from a university, 大学毕业大学毕业 2. be strict with,对对严格严格3. the Wenchuan earthquake, 汶川地震汶川地震 4. collapse,坍塌坍塌5. deeds,事迹事迹三段式：三段式：首段：首段：正文：正文：结尾：结尾：谭老师的个人简介谭老

21、师的个人简介谭老师的英雄事迹谭老师的英雄事迹作者的感受和愿望作者的感受和愿望列出列出7个内容要点：个内容要点： 1）外表严肃；）外表严肃； 2）对学生要求严格；）对学生要求严格；3） 深爱学生；深爱学生；4）地震时在上课；）地震时在上课；5）教学楼坍塌时，用身体保护）教学楼坍塌时，用身体保护4名学生英勇献身；名学生英勇献身；6）感受；）感受； 7）愿望。）愿望。He looks serious.Hes strict with his students.He loves his students deeply.He was giving lessons at that moment. When

22、the teaching building callapsed, he protected four students with his body.I feel deeply moved.Ill learn from him.连句成文：连句成文： Tan Qianqiu was born in 1957 in Hunan province. He graduated from Hunan University. He taught politics in a middle school in Deyang city, Sichuan province. He had taught there

23、for 27 years. He looked serious. He was very strict with his students. He loved them deeply. When the Wenchuan earthquake happened, he was giving a lesson. The school building collapsed. he protected his four students with his body. The students were saved. Mr Tan lost his life. I am deeply moved by his deeds. Mr Tan is an ordinary teacher and a great hero. I will le