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1、写作技能步步高：一话题写作：人物简介（一）写作内容1. age, sex, birth-place, background ( 概况 )2. appearance, character(外表，性格 )3. education ( 教育背景 )4.big events in his or her life ( in order of time/ place) (生平 )5. evaluation ( 生平 )（二） 写作技巧1. 介绍概况：同位语结构，分词结构，使文章简洁1) Abraham Lincoln, the son of a poor family (一个贫困家庭的儿子 ), was

2、born in Kentucky on February 12, 1809. ( 同位语 )2)Sun Showier, a world champion in diving (一位跳水的世界冠军) ， is a boy of 14 fromGuangdong.(同位语 )3)Born in Maryland, USA in 1985( 他 1985 年出生于美国马里兰州)，Michael Phelps is a famousswimmer .( 分词短语 )2. 描写外貌：巧用 with 短语My history teacher is a beautiful woman, with long

3、 hair and big eyes.(她长着两只大眼睛，留着长发)3. 生平事迹：尽量用复合句，并列句，非谓语动词短语和倒装等高级短语。如：1)In his life, he got many honours, one of which is the 2005 CCTV Moving China Award (其中包括获得“ 2005 感动中国年度人物”的称号).(定语从句 )2) In 2006, having broken the world record and got the gold medal( 在他打破世界纪录并获得金牌之后 )， he became the idol of t

4、he youth. ( 分词短语 )3)Not only does he show interest in science (他不但对科学有兴趣)，but also he has a gift for music.(倒装句式 )4. 评价：尽量运用短语。如：Lei Feng set a good example to us（为我们树立了一个好的榜样） ，so all the people show great respect to him ( 很尊重他 )。（三）常用词汇1. 外貌特征： beautiful, fat, good-looking, handsome, pretty, short

5、, strong, tall, thin, healthy, near-sighted, with a big nose, black eyes, with a big smile, whit-haired, 1.80 metres tall2. 性格特点： absent-minded, attractive, bad-tempered, be ready to help others, bright, confident, diligent, friendly, generous, have a good temper, humorous, independent, patient, kin

6、d, kind-hearted easygoing, naughty, think of others, smart , wise3. 出生背景： was born in/ into a poor / rich family, a 25-year-old young man, a boy of 15, at the age of 20, be born onFebruary 12 th, 1987, during his childhood, in one sfifties, live a happy life, spend his childhood in the countryside,

7、the son of a poor family, when he was a small boy4. 兴趣爱好： be delighted in doing , be good at singing, be interested in English, be fond of music, be crazy about, do well in his research work, enjoy doing, expect to do, have a strong desire to do, look forward to doing sth, long for(long to do), make

8、 rapid progress in, put one s heart into, take pleasure in doing ; word hard at studies.5. 教育背景： be admitted to Beijing University ，be enrolled in, fail in the test, get a master s degree, get on well with ones lessons, give sb. A passing grade, go abroad to further one s study, graduate from Physic

9、s Department of QinghaiUniversity, his father was very strict with him, lay a good foundation in English, major in history, receive a doctor degree, pass the examination, take an active part in classs6. 经历事迹： become a member of the team, concentrate on doing sth, devote oneself to one s business, do

10、 sth with great determination and perseverance, do research into this field , encourage sb to do sth, give up one s life for sth, have a good way of doing sth, have a talent for language, make up one s mind to do sth, overcome many difficulties, receivethe Nobel Prize for physics, serve a s a nurse,

11、 set a new world record of 110 metre hurdling, try ones best to do sth,win the first prize in the competition, win a gold / silver/ bronze medal7. 评价： an inspiring leader, a model worker, an advanced teacher, be respected by all his students, be honored as, be famous/ known as, be regarded as, his h

12、ard work b brought him great success, make great contributions to our country, one of the most important persons in the past ten years, set a good example to all of us, speak highly of即使练习：假使你是李华，正在美国参加学习，课堂上老师要求你简要介绍我国的名人，你选择了姚明和刘翔，两位体育明星，他们的基本情况如下：姓名姚明刘翔出生1980 年，上海1982 年，上海事迹世界著名篮球运动员，现在美国多次获得世界11

13、0 米栏冠军， 2004NBA 火箭队效力， 球队主力球员之年雅典奥运会冠军，不久以后还打一，多次进入美国全明星队破了世界记录。爱好听流行音乐音乐，唱歌【写作要求】只能使用5 个句子表达全部内容（开头已经为你写好）。参考词汇：火箭队Rocket; 110 米栏110-metre hurdling,雅典奥运会the Athens Olympic GamesHi, everyone. I would like to introduce two famous sport stars, Yao Ming and Liu Xiang.Thats all. Thank you!参考答案：Hi, every

14、one. I would like to introduce two famous sport stars, Yao Ming and Liu Xiang. Yao Ming, born in Shanghai in 1980, is a world famous basketball player. He is now one as the best players in Team Rocket in NBA, and he has been in All-Star Team fro several times. Liu Xiang, who was also born in Shangha

15、i but three years younger than Yao Ming, is a world champion in t6he 110-metre hurdle. He won the first prize in the Athens Olympic Games andbroke the world record soon after that. Both of them love music, but Yao Ming likes listening to pop music while Liu Xiang likes singing.Thats all. Thank you!3

16、即时练习：（一）2010 广东省六校第二次联考如果你有美国朋友来深圳参观，请你简要介绍深圳。内容包括：地理位置：中国南部，南海之滨，毗邻香港；气候：温和，亚热带海洋性，雨量充沛，阳光充足；居民特点：自从南宋就有移民移居深圳，建市以后数量巨增；面积：总面积近两千平方公里，盛产荔枝等；其他：深圳高楼林立，干净整洁，高科技产品世界闻名。参考词汇：亚热带海洋性subtropical maritime荔枝litchiA Brief Introduction to ShenzhenLocated in the south of China, Shenzhen is a coastal city on th

17、e South China Sea, adjacent to Hongkong. It has a mild, subtropical maritime climate with adequate rain and sunshine. There had been migrants flowing into the Shenzhen area since the Southern Song Dynasty and the number has been soaring after it was established as a city. The total area of Shenzhen

18、approximates to 2000 square kilometers and it is rich in fruits like litchi. Shenzhen has quantities of tall buildings and clean streets, famous for its hi-tech products.即时练习：（二）英国由英格兰，苏格兰，威尔士和北爱尔兰组成。请根据下面所给的英国地图和信息，简要介绍英国。【写作内容】 ：1.英国国家的组成。2.面积约 245，000 平方千米3.人口约 6 千万4.首都伦敦气候不冷也不【写作要求】：1.必须使用5 个句子描述所有内容要点。开头和结尾已经给出Possible version:The UnitedKingdomconsists of four countries, England, Scotland, Wales and Northern Ir