202X版高考英语大二轮复习专题五书面表达第二节提升作文档次的技法——让文章靓丽起来课件新人教版

1、第二节提升作文档次的技法让文章靓丽起来专题五书面表达技法技法(一一)词汇高级，词汇高级，“语语”众不同众不同在英语书面表达阅卷过程中，老师会对一些在英语书面表达阅卷过程中，老师会对一些“高级高级”词汇偏爱有加。但是，词汇偏爱有加。但是，大多数同学可能没有高级词汇的意识，提到大多数同学可能没有高级词汇的意识，提到“好好”，就只会想到，就只会想到“good”，提，提到到“坏坏”，就只会想到，就只会想到“bad”。那么，什么样的词汇最能够吸引阅卷老师的眼球？什么样的词汇才算是高那么，什么样的词汇最能够吸引阅卷老师的眼球？什么样的词汇才算是高级词汇呢？我们可以采用以下原则：级词汇呢？我们可以采用以下原

2、则：技法点拨什么样的词汇什么样的词汇1.标新立异，晚词优先标新立异，晚词优先老师偏爱学得比较晚的单词，新学的单词，可以体现学生具备老师偏爱学得比较晚的单词，新学的单词，可以体现学生具备“学以致学以致用用”的意识。如果某个单词既可以用初中的词汇来表达，又可以用高中的词汇的意识。如果某个单词既可以用初中的词汇来表达，又可以用高中的词汇来表达，那么要尽量选择用高中的，如：来表达，那么要尽量选择用高中的，如：01adj.美丽的美丽的索然无味低分词：索然无味低分词：beautiful吸人眼球高分词：吸人眼球高分词：appealing有吸引力的；有吸引力的；attractive 吸引人的；吸引人的；cha

3、rming迷人迷人的；的；fascinating 迷人的迷人的高考范文例句：高考范文例句：First，nothing is more attractive than a proper and realistic picture.(2015上海，书面表达上海，书面表达)In addition，it is a fabulous choice to visit some famous scenic spots such as Mount Tai during the vacation，in order to enjoy appealing scenery and make more friends.

4、(2013山东，书面表达山东，书面表达)02adj.困难的困难的索然无味低分词：索然无味低分词：difficult吸人眼球高分词：吸人眼球高分词：challenging 有挑战性的有挑战性的高考范文例句：高考范文例句：In the coming three years，our school life will be challenging.(2014江西，书面表达江西，书面表达)03adj.重要的重要的索然无味低分词：索然无味低分词：important吸人眼球高分词：吸人眼球高分词：vital 至关重要的；至关重要的；essential 必不可少的；必不可少的；significant 有重要有

5、重要意义的意义的高考范文例句：高考范文例句：Whats worse，some drivers，cyclists and pedestrians do not think it vital to obey traffic rules.(2015江苏，书面表达江苏，书面表达)To avoid such conflicts，we should be kind to one another，which is essential to enjoying a harmonious life.(2012江苏，书面表达江苏，书面表达)2.短语短语/词块优先词块优先在阅卷老师看来，活用短语能够体现一个考生的语言

6、运用能力。因此，在阅卷老师看来，活用短语能够体现一个考生的语言运用能力。因此，我们可以将某些常见单词转化为短语我们可以将某些常见单词转化为短语/词块，如：词块，如：01v.参加参加索然无味低分词：索然无味低分词：join吸人眼球高分词：吸人眼球高分词：take part in；participate in高考范文例句：高考范文例句：Finally，we should take part in sports and outdoor activities frequently.(2014安徽，书面表达安徽，书面表达)I know that you welcome students from dif

7、ferent countries and Id like to take part in it.(2012全国全国，书面表达，书面表达)It returned to the Games in 1932，and women were first allowed to participate in the competition in 1968.(2008广东，书面表达广东，书面表达)02v.使用使用索然无味低分词：索然无味低分词：use吸人眼球高分词：吸人眼球高分词：make good use of高考范文例句：高考范文例句：My experience tells me that it is n

8、ot what you are given but how you make use of it that determines who you are.(2012湖北，书面表达湖北，书面表达)Last but not least，its everyones responsibility to make good use of water，such as recycling and saving water in our daily life.(2010福建，书面表达福建，书面表达)03v.拜访拜访索然无味低分词：索然无味低分词：visit吸人眼球高分词：吸人眼球高分词：pay a visit

9、 to高考范文例句：高考范文例句：Your students visiting group coming from the US will pay a visit to our school on June 26.(2011天津，书面表达天津，书面表达)04某些形容词某些形容词of同根名词同根名词索然无味低分词：索然无味低分词：very important 重要的；重要的；very difficult 困难的；困难的；very beautiful 美丽的；美丽的；very useful 有用的；有用的；very helpful 有帮助的；有帮助的；very harmful 有害的；有害的；ve

10、ry valuable 有价值的；有价值的；very significant至关重要的；至关重要的；very necessary 必要的必要的吸人眼球高分词吸人眼球高分词(对应对应)：of great importance；of great difficulty；of great beauty；of great use；of great help；of great harm；of great value；of great significance；of great necessity高考范文例句：高考范文例句：Undoubtedly，it will be of great value to e

11、very student in our class.(2015广东，书面表达广东，书面表达)Firstly，a sponsorship will be of great help.(2013重庆，书面表达重庆，书面表达)I think the chance is of great importance for me.(2011山东，书面表达山东，书面表达)技法技法(二二)句式丰富，彰显能力句式丰富，彰显能力高考时，一篇书面表达中的句子如果都采用简单句，肯定不能得高分，高考时，一篇书面表达中的句子如果都采用简单句，肯定不能得高分，精彩句式的合理使用会使文章读起来抑扬顿挫。因此应多使用一些高级句式

12、和精彩句式的合理使用会使文章读起来抑扬顿挫。因此应多使用一些高级句式和复合句，让句子复合句，让句子“高人一筹高人一筹”，亮点纷呈，彰显考生的写作能力。，亮点纷呈，彰显考生的写作能力。1.精彩的复合句精彩的复合句a.增加亮点的定语从句增加亮点的定语从句For example，there are huge amounts of reference books.I am often confused to choose from them.For example，there are huge amounts of reference books from which I am often confu

13、sed to choose.Paper-cutting is a traditional art form in China.It has a history of more than 1,500 years.Paper-cutting is a traditional art form in China，which has a history of more than 1,500 years.b.吸引眼球的状语从句吸引眼球的状语从句Since you have long been interested in Chinese culture(原因状语从句原因状语从句)，I think Beij

14、ing Language and Culture University is an ideal place for you.If youre interested in the Chinese folk art(条件状语从句条件状语从句)，please e-mail me.We can set out early so that we will have more time to read and select books(目目的状语从句的状语从句).c.提升档次的名词性从句提升档次的名词性从句It is worth mentioning that our volleyball team wo

15、n the championship twice in the national middle school volleyball match(主语从句主语从句).I hope these suggestions would be helpful to you(宾语从句宾语从句).Thats why I think the trip along the Yangtze River is a better choice(表语从句表语从句).2.亮眼的倒装句亮眼的倒装句So diligent are you that Im more than delighted to teach you.3.新颖

16、的强调句和省略句新颖的强调句和省略句It is the spirit that the story conveys that really matters.As scheduled，an art exhibition will be held next Sunday in the local museum.4.传神的被动结构传神的被动结构Your timely help will be very much appreciated by me.5.言简意赅的非谓语动词结构言简意赅的非谓语动词结构To get admitted，I have made good preparations，tryin

17、g to know as much as I could about my city.6.委婉的虚拟语气委婉的虚拟语气Without your kindness and generosity，I would not have enjoyed myself so much when visiting England.技法技法(三三)连贯衔接，巧妙过渡连贯衔接，巧妙过渡 连接连接(过渡过渡)性词语的使用是语言连贯性得以实现的最常用手段。在句与句性词语的使用是语言连贯性得以实现的最常用手段。在句与句之间，段与段之间恰当地使用一些承上启下的连接之间，段与段之间恰当地使用一些承上启下的连接(过渡过渡)性

18、词语是非常必要的。性词语是非常必要的。过渡词语就像纽带一样把文章紧密地连接起来，更像润滑剂，使文章衔接流畅。过渡词语就像纽带一样把文章紧密地连接起来，更像润滑剂，使文章衔接流畅。1.表示起始关系的过渡性词语表示起始关系的过渡性词语above all，first of all，to begin with，according to，as you know/as is known，as is shown.，when it comes to等。等。First of all，I think it important to make more friends abroad.As is shown in t

19、he picture，a tree is knocked down by the strong wind，while the grass stays as it is.2.表示时间顺序的过渡性词语表示时间顺序的过渡性词语first(ly)，second(ly)，third(ly)，then，later，in the end，finally，at last，after that，afterwards，since then，meanwhile等。等。Secondly，we should get up early to memorize idioms and useful expressions.M

20、eanwhile，we all enjoyed the beauty of nature.I had a bad cold last week.First，I had a running nose，but I did not take it seriously.Then I began to cough.After that，I had a fever and felt weak.Finally，I was sent to hospital and had to lie in bed for three days.3.表示并列关系的过渡性词语表示并列关系的过渡性词语and，or，also，as

21、 well as，neither.nor.，not only.but also.，either.or.，not.but.等。等。Work hard，and you will be admitted to a key university.Swimming not only benefits our health，but also helps us have a strong will.4.表示转折表示转折/对比关系的过渡性词语对比关系的过渡性词语but，yet，however，while，otherwise，on the contrary等。等。However，not until the ma

22、tch was over did we realize that we became the loser.On the contrary，smart phones not only take up our valuable time，but also do great harm to our health.5.表示因果关系的过渡性词语表示因果关系的过渡性词语because，as，since，for，thanks to，due to，as a result of，so，therefore，as a result/consequence等。等。Thanks to the doctors timel

23、y treatment，he was saved.Therefore，I suggest we should be given more time for sports and sleep.6.表示条件关系的过渡性词语表示条件关系的过渡性词语if，unless，in case (of)，as/so long as，on condition that等。等。I would be very grateful if you can meet him at the airport.As long as you dont lose heart，youre sure to succeed.7.表示递进关系

24、的过渡性词语表示递进关系的过渡性词语besides，in addition，whats more，furthermore，more-over，whats worse，still less(更不用说更不用说)，to make matters worse，worse still，on (the) one hand.，on the other (hand).，for one thing.for another.等。等。In addition，we shouldnt neglect that everyone wants a friendly and peaceful society.On the o

25、ther hand，online shopping also has many disadvantages.8.表示列举事实的过渡性词语表示列举事实的过渡性词语such as，for example/instance，take.for example，that is to say，as follows，in other words等。等。Take Beijing for example，it is one of the oldest cities in the world.That is to say，if you want to succeed，you have to believe in

26、yourself.9.表示观点的过渡性词语表示观点的过渡性词语in my opinion，in my view，in my point of view，as far as I am concerned，as for me，personally (speaking)，I think.等。等。In my opinion，people shall not smoke in public places.10.表示总结的过渡性词语表示总结的过渡性词语in short，in brief，in conclusion，in a/one word，to sum up，all in all，on the whol

27、e，in general，generally speaking等。等。In a word，success is important，and so is failure，because its the mother of success.All in all，travelling is the best choice to recharge ourselves and get ready for the new challenges.按要求对下列句子进行扩充按要求对下列句子进行扩充1.每天要努力学习，为每一次考试做出仔细的计划。每天要努力学习，为每一次考试做出仔细的计划。(增加条件状语增加条件状

28、语)_2.复旦大学位于上海。复旦大学位于上海。(增加增加which引导的非限制性定语从句引导的非限制性定语从句)_专项训练Study hard every day and make careful plans for every exam.If we are prepared，we will not feel worried.Fudan University is located in Shanghai，which is an international city where I can get a lot of knowledge and experience.3.不管我将面对什么样的困难，

29、我都不会屈服。不管我将面对什么样的困难，我都不会屈服。(增加目的状语增加目的状语)_4.我们应该学会如何与他人相处。我们应该学会如何与他人相处。(增加具体信息说明增加具体信息说明)_5.一些学生非常担心考试以至于晚上无法入睡。一些学生非常担心考试以至于晚上无法入睡。(增加结果状语增加结果状语)_To realize my dream，whatever challenge I will face，I will never give in.We should learn how to get along well with others.For example，we should respect

30、our teachers and be friendly to our classmates.Some students are so worried about exams that they cant fall asleep at night.As a result，they feel sleepy in the daytime and cant concentrate in class.按要求完成下列句子按要求完成下列句子6.It shows that hard work and determination play a vital role in shaping a great mind.(改为强调句式改为强调句式)_7.My teacher thinks I am excellent and that I can do well in my study.It makes me more confident.(合并为一个句子合并为一个句子)_It shows that its hard work and determination that play a vital role in shaping a great mind.My teacher thinks I am excellent and that I can do well in my study，which