浙江高三二轮复习高考概要写作指导教学（课堂PPT）

1、1高考概要写作高考概要写作Summary Writing2阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Feeding the worlds population is a big challenge, and it is about to get bigger. Right now, a little more than 7.3 billion people share the planet. By 2050, some scientists estimate, the worlds population may reach 9 billion. However, the changi

2、ng climate will probably make feeding this far greater number a very frightening task. That is the conclusion reached by some scientists.Just three cropswheat, rice and cornprovide more than two-thirds of the calories that people consume. Such crops, and a small number of other important crops, come

3、 from farming regions sometimes referred to as “breadbaskets”. However, these areas often occupy a relatively small portion(部分) of the globe. Worse still, the breadbaskets are easily affected by bad weather. Events such as widespread flooding or extended heat wave can kill crops. Thats especially tr

4、ue if the bad weather occurs when a crop is young, fruiting or approaching harvest.Unfortunately, big crop failures in two or more breadbaskets could lead to what researchers call a “food shock”. That means an overall shortage of food would occur. Extreme food shocks used to happen every century. Or

5、 to put it another way, thats only about once in very four generations of humans. However, according to studies, as the climate warms, high and low temperatures become more extreme, and by 2050, food shocks could occur about once every 30 years. In other words, a person born in the middle of the cur

6、rent century might live through two or three extreme food shocks during their lifetime.So what can people do to help avoid food shocks? Making agriculture efficient is one choice. But one of the most effective ways to fight against food shocks might be to cut down on food waste. “If we could cut foo

7、d waste in half,” said Seth Cook, a British environmental scientist, “we could feed an extra billion people.”33. add some transitional words to make the passage smooth. 1. Find out key information of each para. 2. Rewrite the key information Express the same meaning using your own words , phrases or

8、 structures.Concise ! 60-70 words4Step 1: Careful reading for the key words, phrases or sentences in each paragraph Underline or circle the key informationPara. 1: Feeding the worlds population is a big challenge, and it is about to get bigger. Right now, a little more than 7.3 billion people share

9、the planet. By 2050, some scientists estimate, the worlds population may reach 9 billion. However, the changing climate will probably make feeding this far greater number a very frightening task. That is the conclusion reached by some scientists.5Para. 1: Feeding the worlds population is a big chall

10、enge, and it is about to get bigger. Right now, a little more than 7.3 billion people share the planet. By 2050, some scientists estimate, the worlds population may reach 9 billion. However, the changing climate will probably make feeding this far greater number a very frightening task. That is the

11、conclusion reached by some scientists. 6Para. 1: Feeding the worlds population is a big challenge, and it is about to get bigger. Right now, a little more than 7.3 billion people share the planet. By 2050, some scientists estimate, the worlds population may reach 9 billion. However, the changing cli

12、mate will probably make feeding this far greater number a very frightening task. That is the conclusion reached by some scientists. 7Para. 1: Feeding the worlds population is a big challenge, and it is about to get bigger. Right now, a little more than 7.3 billion people share the planet. By 2050, s

13、ome scientists estimate, the worlds population may reach 9 billion. However, the changing climate will probably make feeding this far greater number a very frightening task. That is the conclusion reached by some scientists. 8Para. 2: Just three cropswheat, rice and cornprovide more than two-thirds

14、of the calories that people consume. Such crops, and a small number of other important crops, come from farming regions sometimes referred to as “breadbaskets”. However, these areas often occupy a relatively small portion(部分) of the globe. Worse still, the breadbaskets are easily affected by bad wea

15、ther. Events such as widespread flooding or extended heat wave can kill crops. Thats especially true if the bad weather occurs when a crop is young, fruiting or approaching harvest.9Para. 2: Just three cropswheat, rice and cornprovide more than two-thirds of the calories that people consume. Such cr

16、ops, and a small number of other important crops, come from farming regions sometimes referred to as “breadbaskets”. However, these areas often occupy a relatively small portion(部分) of the globe. Worse still, the breadbaskets are easily affected by bad weather. Events such as widespread flooding or

17、extended heat wave can kill crops. Thats especially true if the bad weather occurs when a crop is young, fruiting or approaching harvest.10Para. 2: Just three cropswheat, rice and cornprovide more than two-thirds of the calories that people consume. Such crops, and a small number of other important

18、crops, come from farming regions sometimes referred to as “breadbaskets”. However, these areas often occupy a relatively small portion(部分) of the globe. Worse still, the breadbaskets are easily affected by bad weather. Events such as widespread flooding or extended heat wave can kill crops. Thats es

19、pecially true if the bad weather occurs when a crop is young, fruiting or approaching harvest.11Para. 3: Unfortunately, big crop failures in two or more breadbaskets could lead to what researchers call a “food shock”. That means an overall shortage of food would occur. Extreme food shocks used to ha

20、ppen every century. Or to put it another way, thats only about once in very four generations of humans. However, according to studies, as the climate warms, high and low temperatures become more extreme, and by 2050, food shocks could occur about once every 30 years. In other words, a person born in

21、 the middle of the current century might live through two or three extreme food shocks during their lifetime.12Para. 3: Unfortunately, big crop failures in two or more breadbaskets could lead to what researchers call a “food shock”. That means an overall shortage of food would occur. Extreme food sh

22、ocks used to happen every century. Or to put it another way, thats only about once in very four generations of humans. However, according to studies, as the climate warms, high and low temperatures become more extreme, and by 2050, food shocks could occur about once every 30 years. In other words, a

23、 person born in the middle of the current century might live through two or three extreme food shocks during their lifetime.13Para. 3: Unfortunately, big crop failures in two or more breadbaskets could lead to what researchers call a “food shock”. That means an overall shortage of food would occur.

24、Extreme food shocks used to happen every century. Or to put it another way, thats only about once in very four generations of humans. However, according to studies, as the climate warms, high and low temperatures become more extreme, and by 2050, food shocks could occur about once every 30 years. In

25、 other words, a person born in the middle of the current century might live through two or three extreme food shocks during their lifetime.14Para. 4: So what can people do to help avoid food shocks? Making agriculture efficient is one choice. But one of the most effective ways to fight against food

26、shocks might be to cut down on food waste. “If we could cut food waste in half,” said Seth Cook, a British environmental scientist, “we could feed an extra billion people.”15Para. 4: So what can people do to help avoid food shocks? Making agriculture efficient is one choice. But one of the most effe

27、ctive ways to fight against food shocks might be to cut down on food waste. “If we could cut food waste in half,” said Seth Cook, a British environmental scientist, “we could feed an extra billion people.”16Para. 4: So what can people do to help avoid food shocks? Making agriculture efficient is one

28、 choice. But one of the most effective ways to fight against food shocks might be to cut down on food waste. “If we could cut food waste in half,” said Seth Cook, a British environmental scientist, “we could feed an extra billion people.”17Step 2: Rewrite the key information in our own words Tip 1:

29、Rewrite at the sentence level Tip 2: Rewrite at the word level18Para. 1: Feeding the worlds population is a big challenge, and it is about to get bigger._ (change the compound sentence并列句 into one simple sentence简单句 )_ (change the subject) Feeding the worlds population is a _ _ _ challenge._ is a bi

30、gger and bigger challenge to feed the worlds population.bigger andbiggerIt19_ (change the word “worlds”)_ (change the phrase “a bigger and bigger challenge”) Para. 1: It is a bigger and bigger challenge to feed the worlds population.It is a bigger and bigger challenge to feed theglobal population.It

31、 is _ _ _ _ to feed theglobal population.challenging more and more 20Para. 1: It is more and more challenging to feed the _ global population. (add an adjective)Para. 1: Feeding the worlds population is a big challenge, and it is about to get bigger. Right now, a little more than 7.3 billion people

32、share the planet. By 2050, some scientists estimate, the worlds population may reach 9 billion. However, the changing climate will probably make feeding this far greater number a very frightening task. That is the conclusion reached by some scientists.increasinggrowing21Para. 2: crops, breadbaskets,

33、 These areas often occupy a relatively small portion of the globe._ (simplify the sentence)_ (use “many crops” as the subject) Breadbaskets are often _.Many crops _ _ _ on _ breadbaskets.limitedare often grown limited 22Para. 2: The breadbaskets are easily affected by bad weather._ (change the word

34、“affect”) Breadbaskets are easily _ /_by bad weather.Many crops are often grown on limited breadbaskets. (combine the two sentences)Para. 2: Many crops are often grown on limited breadbaskets _ are easily impacted by bad weather.that/ whichinfluenced impacted23Para. 3: big crop failures, could lead

35、to, a “food shock” That means an overall shortage of food would occur._ (put the key phrases into one sentence)_ (combine the two sentences) Big crop failures could lead to a “food shock”.Big crop failures could lead to a “food shock” _ means an overall shortage of food.that/whichBig crop failures c

36、ould lead to an overall shortage of food, _ a “food shock”.called24Para. 3:Big crop failures could lead to an overall shortage of food, called a “food shock”._ (change the phrase “lead to”)Big crop failures could cause an overall shortageof food, called a “food shock”.result in /contribute toaccount

37、 for/25Para. 3: Unfortunately, big crop failures in two or more breadbaskets could lead to what researchers call a “food shock”. That means an overall shortage of food would occur. Extreme food shocks used to happen every century. Or to put it another way, thats only about once in very four generati

38、ons of humans. However, according to studies, as the climate warms, high and low temperatures become more extreme, and by 2050, food shocks could occur about once every 30 years. In other words, a person born in the middle of the current century might live through two or three extreme food shocks du

39、ring their lifetime.Para. 3:Food shocks could occur more _in the future. (use one adverb)frequently/often26Para. 3:Big crop failures could cause an overall shortageof food, called a “food shock”.Food shocks could occur more frequently in the future. (combine the two sentences)Big crop failures could

40、 cause an overall shortage of food, called a “food shock”, _ could occur more frequently in the future.which27Para. 4:Making agriculture efficient is one choice. But one of the most effective ways to fight against food shocks might be to cut down on food waste. _ (change the subject of the second sentence)Cutting down on food waste is one of the most effective ways to fight against food shocks.(change the phrase “cut down on”) Reducing food waste28Para. 4:Making agriculture efficient is one choice.Reducing food waste is one of the most effective ways to fight against food shocks. So