高考英语写作之一如何写好并列句与复合句

1、v1.0可编辑可修改写作步步高之一如何写好并列句与复合句在高考英语写作中应避免使用过多结构单一，长度相当的简单句，因为这样会使句子间缺乏逻辑性，文章自然而然地会平淡无奇，缺乏生气，读来使人索然无味。为了增强句子之间的逻辑关联，提高文章表达的流畅性，应合理地使用并列句或复合句。由两个或两个以上不分主次、相互独立的简单句构成的句子叫并列句。并列句通过并列连词、并列副词或分号三种方式连接起来。依据并列句前后分句的逻辑关系，并列句可表示添加关系、转折关系、选择关系、因果关系、时间关系、对比关系，以下为各类并列句的常见并列连词。连词添加关系and,bothandnor，when,notonlybutal

2、so，neither转折关系but,yet,whereas选择关系or,otherwise;orelse,eitheror，notbut因果关系for,so,therefore,thus对比关系while复合句由一个主句和若干个从句构成，主句和从句都具有完整的主谓结构，主句是主体，从句是一个成分，不能独立存在。复合句包括名词性从句（主语从句、表语从句、宾语从句、同位语从句），定语从句和状语从句。恰当地使用从句可以使句子问逻辑关系紧密，使文章富有变化。11v1.0可编辑可修改及时巩固1 .以下是在写作中常用的由并列连词构成的句式，请根据汉语提示完成这些句子。Studyhard,（否则你就考不及格

3、）.（H试一次）,andyou，llmakeasuccess.Wewereabouttosetoff这时突然下起雨来了）.You'dbetterputonyoursweater,（因为外边相当冷）.Shecouldneitherspeakthelanguage（也不会写）.2 .以下是在写作中使用并列句时易出现的错误，请改正它们。NotonlyhespeaksEnglishcorrectly,butalsohespeakitfluently.AlthoughIwasverytiredthenbutIfeltveryhappy.Neithercouldtheorydowithoutpra

4、ctice,norpracticecoulddowithouttheory.®Because/Ashewasillsohedidn'tgotoschoolthatday.Ifinishedsweepingthefloorwhenthetelephonerang.3 .请把以下简单句变为并列句或复合句。 Wearebusyallday.Everyoneknowsthat.并列句：22v1.0可编辑可修改复合句：. Heenjoysplayingfootball.Healsolikesplayingbasketball.一般并列句：.倒装并列句：. Hewaslate.Itmad

5、emeangry.主语从句：.定语从句：.简洁简单句：. Thechildknewsomuch.Weallaresurprised.主语从句：.简洁简单句：. The2008OlympicGameswasquiteasuccess.Weallknowit.主语从句：.定语从句：.宾语从句:.4.根据写作要求和内容，用适合的连词填入空格处(每空一词)，并背诵该范文。请根据以下提示，结合你与同学交往中的一个事例，就容忍(tolerance)这一话题，用英语写一篇短文。Tolerancemeansrespectingothersandvaluingdifferences.Itmatterswheny

6、outrytogainfriendshipfromothers.Toleranceisavirtueforeveryone.Beingtolerantmeanskeepinganopenmindtreatingotherswithaheartfullofmercy.Infact,Ididn'trealizethesignificanceofbeingtolerantI34v1.0可编辑可修改hadafiercequarrelwithmybestfriendLily.Wehadbeengettingalongwellwitheachother,twoweeksago,Lilymisund

7、erstoodmeforsomethingIdidn'tknowavoidedtalkingwithme.IwasangrythatIquarrelledwithher.Thus,weseparated.Ithoughtshewastoblameforthat.Havinglearnedthewholething,mymotheradvisedmetotalktoherfirst,neitherofuswouldfeelatease.Ifollowedheradvice,nowweareascloseasbefore.Ithinkitsbeingtolerantthathashelpe

8、dmeregainourfriendship44v1.0可编辑可修改答案：1. oryou'llfail(in)theexamAnothertry/Tryitanothertimewhenitsuddenlybegantorain®forit'srathercoldoutsidenorwriteit2. NotonlydoeshespeakEnglishcorrectly,AlthoughIwasverytiredthen,Ifelthappy.或IwasverytiredthenbutIfeltveryhappy.©Neithercouldtheorydo

9、withoutpractice,norcouldpracticedowithouttheory.®Because/Ashewasill,hedidn'tgotoschoolthatday.或Hewas川sohedidn'tgotoschoolthatday.Ihadjustfinishedsweepingthefloorwhenthetelephonerang.3. 并歹U旬：Wearebusyalldayandeveryoneknowsthat.复合旬：Wearebusyallday,whicheveryoneknows.或Aseveryoneknows,weare

10、busyallday.一般并歹!J旬：Heenjoysnotonlyplayingfootball,butalsoplayingbasketball.倒装并列句：Notonlydoesheenjoyplayingfootball,butalsohelikesplaying56v1.0可编辑可修改basketball.主语从旬：Itmademeangrythathewaslate./Thathecamelatemademeangry.定语从旬：Hecamelate,whichmademeangry.简洁简单句：Hiscominglatemademeangry./Iwasangryathisbeinglate.主语从旬：Itmadeussurprisedthatthechildshouldhaveknownsomuch.或Itcameasasurprisetousthatthechildknewsomuch.简洁简单句：Mu