全国高考英语满分作文赏析(本人最新整理)

1、精选优质文档-倾情为你奉上高考满分作文一. 用词准确;表达地道1.【北京卷】【试题回放】第一节情景作文(20分)美国中学生Jeff将要来你所在的红星中学学习中文，经协商安排住在你家。假设你是李华，请给Jeff写一封信，按照下图顺序介绍他来中国后的生活安排。注意：1.信的开头已写2.词数不少于60。Dear Jeff,Im Hua from Beijing Hongxing Middle School. Im very happy to learn that youre going to stay with my family while youre in Beijing.While you a

2、re here, well provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk, a couple of chairs and a TV. Youll also have your own bathroom. Our school is quite close to our home, so we could go to school together by bike. At noon well eat at the school dining hall. Im sure youll like the delicious Chinese

3、 food there, and enjoy talking with friends over lunch. Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon. You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming. Itll be a lot of fun.If you have any questions or requests, please let me know. Well try our best to make your stay

4、here in Beijing a pleasant experience.Best wishes, 名师点评这篇文章的特点还是比较清晰的，第一，作者根据图画将文章的要点概括完整，内容充实而丰富，结构紧凑，有层次感;第二，本文没有采用华丽的辞藻，但用词十分恰当，段落过渡自然，令人耳目一新。 2.【安徽卷】【试题回放】假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信，假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信，主要内容如下：l 表示赞成。l 提出你喜欢

5、的栏目。 l 简要说明理由。注意：1. 词数100左右。2.参考：栏目columnDear Mr. Green,I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. That sounds great! And I definitely agree with you on that.Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea. Say, “culture express” gives u

6、s a better understanding of the world. Since people from different parts of the world have different values, its necessary to learn from each other. This will offer a wonderful chance. Apart from that, “blurt out” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English.

7、Last but not least, “entertainment” is so cool! The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely cant miss it! Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things.Well, I cant list more. I really cant wait to read that magazine! Yours faithfully【名师点评】这是一篇满分作文。由于这

8、篇作文的出现，导致了安徽省该年的英语作文分数普遍偏低。仔细分析了这篇文章，写的的确是好，很地道的美式英语，一些词语的大胆使用，让人不得不猜测此人或者是家人可能有过国外生活的经历，否则这么地道标准的英语，可不是一朝一夕所能写出来的。比如说：my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大胆运用，list, cant wait to 简直是perfect! 况且文章中没有一个错误，不管是书写还是语法。英语能够学到这种程度，不可谓不让人佩服。二. 非谓语动词为作

9、文添彩3.【北京卷】【试题回放】情景作文假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为响应绿化祖国的号召，你班四月十二日去郊区植树，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍植树活动的全过程，给某英文杂志的“绿色行动”专栏写一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”为题的英文稿件。注意：词数不少于60 提示词：郊区 suburbsApril 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day. In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant t

10、rees, talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering . After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees. Before leaving we took some photos to

11、 record our green action. Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel its our duty to protect and beautify our environment.【名师点评】本文是设计巧妙的提纲要点式作文，与环保结合，立意较好。文章思路清晰，要点连贯，在语言的表达上选词新颖，同时运用了分词短语作状语等较好的句式表达。三. 复合句为写作增色4.【全国卷】假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫(panda),一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生

12、的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信1、自我介绍;2、祝贺苏琳生日;3、感谢工作人员;4、索取苏琳三岁生日照。注意：1、词数100左右;2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3、开头语已为你写好。Dear Sir/Madam,Greetings from China!Im Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. Ive been a panda lover since I was a child. About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gav

13、e birth to her daughter Sulin and Ive been watching her grow on your website,. Now shes going to be three. Id like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.By the way, could I

14、 have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance. Yours truly,【名师点评】这封信格式正确，行文规范，描述有条不紊，称呼、正文中的开头及结尾、结束语均表达到位。文章行文活泼，感情真挚，语言表述准确，洋溢着作者因大熊猫得到精心照顾而对美方人员的感激之情，以及希望自己愿望成真，得到照片的希冀之情。长短句运用合理，结合了简单句和复合句，流畅自然，不露痕迹，的确是一篇佳作。5.【全国卷II】一家宾馆新开业，为吸引外国宾客，希望在互联网上进行宣传。请你用英语为其 写一篇文字介绍

15、。主要内容包括：1.地点：距白山入口处500米; 2.房间及价格：单人间(共20间)，100元/天;双人间(共15间)，150元/天;热水淋浴; 3.餐饮：餐厅(中、西餐)，咖啡厅(茶、咖啡); 4.游泳池：全天免费开放; 5.欢迎预定。注意1. 100词左右，开头已写好;2.可适当增加细节。 Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel!Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business. 500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides sin

16、gle person room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double person rooms, with a price of RMB 150 yuan per day. It also provides hot water bath service. You can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe. The swimming

17、 pool is open for free the whole day. All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable. So come to enjoy yourself!Welcome to book rooms in Baishan Mountain.【名师点评】本文开门见山，首先点明了主旨。本文最大的特点是应用了很多比较复杂的句式，使文章比较出彩。开头使用了独立结构交代宾馆位置。which引导的非限制性定语从句的使用也很正确。总地来说，文章句式精炼，是篇不错的满分作文。6.【重

18、庆卷】据报道，7岁的美国女孩Amy Bruce得知自己身患肺癌(lung cancer)后处于极度的痛苦之中，美国抗癌协会(ACS)决定，每当Amy收到一封慰问信，就给她增加3美分的治疗款。假如你是新华中学的学生李华，请你用英文给Amy写一封慰问信，主要内容包括：自我介绍; 得知的情况,表示鼓励,打算为她做什么; 祝她早日康复注意：1. 信的格式已为你写好2. 信中不得出现你的真实情况。3. 词数100左右。Dear Amy,Im Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School of China. Im sorry to hear that you got the lung

19、cancer which brought you great pain. But you should realize that you are young and have a promising great future. So, stand up and fight against the disease! Im sure you will win. It is reported that the America anti-cancer association will donate three cents upon every comfort letter you receive. S

20、o I will tell your situation to all my friends and ask them to write to you. In that way, you will get enough money for you to be cured. Hope you can be well soon. 名师点评本文依照要求，涵盖了所有要点。文章使用了高中常见的句式，如Im sorry to hear that., It is reported that.等，都比较好。作者对定语从句的使用恰到好处地修饰了文章，行文自然而通顺，值得学习。 四. 结构清晰,句式准确7.【江苏

21、卷】【试题回放】2007年4月29日上午10点到11点，全国亿万学生阳光体育活动在各地大中小学校同时进行，江苏省1100万学生积极参与了这项活动。(教育部倡导学生：每天锻炼一小时,健康工作五十年,幸福生活一辈子). 请你根据以上提示，用英语准备一份发言稿，向同学们讲述一下阳光体育活动的有关情况，并就高三学生是否需要每天花一小时锻炼，谈谈你的看法及理由。注意：1、 发言稿应包括以上所有信息，要有适当发挥。2、 词数：120左右。发言稿的开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。3、 参考词汇：阳光体育活动a national student sports program; 教育部the Ministry

22、 of EducationGood afternoon, everyone,The national student sports program, waged by the Ministry of Education and aimed at improving students health, was held from 10：00a.m.11:00a.m.on April 29，2007 in many primary and middle schools all over China. Almost 11 million students in Jiangsu province par

23、ticipated in this program.The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years. Our whole life will be very enjoyable.In my opinion, we senior high school students should do exercises for one hour a day even though our spare time is limited.

24、 Health is a basic condition for our study. If we did not do exercises, we wouldnt be able to get good study records. So every one of you, join the program now!Thank you!【名师点评】本文的结构十分明晰，同时句式使用得熟练而准确。本文分为三段，前两段叙述，后一段发表观点，典型的作文结构。在句式使用上，作者用法多样，使用了独立结构和虚拟语气，十分出彩。复杂的句式是本文的特点之一。8. 假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob 将于九月到你

25、所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房面积为25 平方米，月租500 元。注意：1词数：100 左右：2参考词汇：房租rent(n.).Im very happy to receive your letter, and Im glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a flat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Ji

26、anxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the

27、 rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but Ill try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.Hope you will come here soon!All the best!满分理由: 本文格式正确，意思表述完整，行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用，还使用了以which，引导的非限定性

28、定语从句，从而使文章层次分明，富于变化，不愧为考场佳作。9. 假如你是李华,你的澳大利亚朋友Dick听说中国的中小学正在减轻学生的学习负担，来信询问有关情况。请你根据下表提供的信息，写一封回信，谈一谈减负给你的学习和生活带来的变化。Dear *，How nice to hear from you again! You want to know what is going on in schools in China. OK, I will explain it to you. A lot of changes have taken place in our schools because of

29、 the reduced learning load. In the past we used to be very busy even at weekends since we had lots of home work to do. We didnt go to bed until 11:30. Now everything is improved. We can do all kinds of things that we like. In the daytime, we can read books and visit museums, take computer lessons. I

30、n the evenings we can watch news on TV and we sleep earlier than we used to. Best wishes!10. 最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票?请你根据下表所提供信息，给报社写一封信客观地介绍讨论情况。开头已写好，词数100，参考词汇：门票-entrancefee 60的同学认为 40的同学认为1不应该收门票2公园是公众休闲的地方3如收门票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象1应收门票，但票价不要太高2支付园林工人工资3购新花木Deareditor, Imwritingtotel

31、lyouaboutthediscussionwehavehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks.Thoseagainstchargingentrancefeeforparkstakeup60%.Theyareofonemindthatparksarea placeforthepublicsenjoyment.Ifticketsaredemandedonthevisitorsofapark,agatehastobesetupandsohavethewallsonthefoursides.Ifso,citywillnotlookasb

32、eautifulasitwould.Otherwise,thoseinfavorofchargingentrancefeeforparkstakeup40%.Theyallthinkthatticketpriceshouldbecontrolledproperly,andthatentrancefeecanbeusedtopaythegardenersandbuynewsortsofflowersandtrees. Thetruthliesinthehandsofthemajority.Doesmyargumentstandtoreason,deareditor? 11.假设你是李华，你在报上

33、看到北京电视台今年七月将举办外国人“学中文，唱中文歌”才艺大赛。你的美国朋友Peter正在北京一所大学学中文，你觉得他应去试一试。请按以下要点给他写信告知此事，并表示可以提供帮助。比赛时间：7月18，报名时间：截止到6月30日。报名地点：北京电视台。注意：1.词数100左右 2.可适当增加细节，3.参考词汇：才艺大赛talent showDear Peter,I read in a newspaper today that a “Learn Chinese, Sing Chinese Songs” Foreigners Talent Show will be held in Beijing T

34、elevision Station on July 18. I know you like singing, and you are in Beijing during that period. I think this is a good chance for you to show your singing talent, and how well youve learned Chinese. If you would like to try, you U have to go to the TV station to sign up before the end of June. If

35、there is anything I can do for you, I would be more than glad to help.12.【试题回放】假设你是李华，最近国内一家英文报纸正在讨论北京动物园是否应迁出市区。以下是你所在班级讨论的情况。请你给该报写一封信，反映讨论结果。赞成迁出：1.游客多，交通堵塞2.郊区环境好反对迁出：1.建于1906年，中外闻名2.搬迁易造成动物死亡注意：1. 100字左右，信的开头已为你写好。2.可适当增加细节，3.参考词汇： 郊区suburbDear Editor ,Recently ,in our class there has been a he

36、ated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city . Some of my classmates are in favor of the move .They say large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic jams .They also say that once moved ,animals will have more space and better living conditions in the su

37、burbs .However ,other students are against the idea ,saying that the Beijing Zoo, built in 1906 ,has a history of 100 years ,and is well known at home and abroad .So it should remain where it is .Whats more ,moving may cause the death of some animals .To move or not ,this is a big decision which has

38、 to be made by people in Beijing.13.假定你是李华，亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办，现正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封信。内容应包括：1.个人情况：年龄，性别，学历 2.个人条件：英语好，爱好体育，善于交际，乐于助人，熟悉本地情况 3.承诺：提供最佳服务. 注意：词数100左右，开头语已为你写好;可适当增加细节，提示词：申请apply (v. ), application (n.)，志愿者volunteerDear Sir / Madam:I was quite excited when I heard the Asian

39、Winter Games will be held in the city I live. My name is Li Hua. I am an 18-year-old boy student in a senior middle school. And I want to be a volunteer for the games. I like English and sports very much. I like making friends and I am ready to help others. I can be a good interpreter in every sport

40、s during the time. Hope the games will be a great success. Hope I will be chosen to be one.名师点评这篇文章写得非常流畅，把握了所有要点，同时以“我”为中心，详细说明了自己对志愿者工作的结合，以此来表达自己的决心。由于用词恰当，这种表现就比较充分，具备一定的说服力。词汇和语句的运用也不错。14全国卷II假定你是李华。应英国朋友Bob的要求， 写一封短信介绍你校图书馆的基本情况。内容须包括下面两幅图中的相关信息。注意：1、字数100左右2、可以适当增减细节，以使行文连贯3、开头语已为你写好Dear Bob,

41、Thank you for your last letter asking about our library. Our library locates between the teaching building and our garden. The shape of it seems to be a book to welcome our students. its open from Monday to Friday ,and we can borrow the books from 9:00a.m. to 7:00p.m.There are many books available i

42、n our library , dealing with almost every subject. Not only the books, but also the magazines can be read here. You may borrow up to five books at a time, and keep them for at most ten days.Due to the library , we are offered a place to gain as much knowledge as we can. If you are interested in it,

43、welcome to our school, and Ill show you around.15. 2009高考英语满分作文【全国卷I海南、宁夏】【试题回放】假定你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训，住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东Mrs. Wilson 不在家，你准备外出，请给Mrs. Wilson 写一留言条，内容包括：1.外出购物2.替房东还书3.Tracy 来电话留言：1)咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)见面取消2)此事已告知Susan 3) 尽快回电注意：1. 词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Mrs. Wilson,Im going out shopping, a

44、nd wont be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 oclock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldnt meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry abou

45、t that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change.16. 2010高考英语满分作文假如你是育才中学学生会主席李华。你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛（speech contest），希望附近某大学的外籍教师Smith女士来做评委。请参照以下比赛通知给她写一封信。注意：词数100左右。英语演讲比赛主题：人与自然时间：

46、6月15日下午2：005：00地点：501教室参赛选手：10名学生联系人：李华（电话）欢迎大家光临Dear Mrs. Smith,Im Li Hua, Chair of the Student Union of YuCai Middle School, which is close to your university. Im writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest to be held in our school on June 15. It will start at 2；00 pm and las

47、t for about three hours. Ten students will deliver their speeches on the given topic “Man and Nature”. We hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you. Please call me at if you have any questions.I am looking forward to your reply.With best wishes 图表作文写作指导图表作文是近年来高考常考的题型之一。图表

48、作文的体裁多为议论文、应用文和说明文，内容多涉及前后变化对比、正反观点对比或产品介绍等。要求考生通过数据、文字内容分析，系统准确地表达出图表含义，并得出令人信服的结论。一、图表作文的命题形式1表格式将统计的数据或被说明的对象直接用表格形式体现出来，即统计表。这类题型一般以说明文和议论文居多，往往是介绍、说明某种情况或辩论某种观点、看法，但有时也可能是记叙文。2图像式可分为以曲线形式表示数据变化的线形图、以条形形式表示数据大小或数量之间差异的条形图，以圆内扇形面积的大小表示总体中部分结构变化的圆形图等。这类题型一般以说明文居多，是一些关于生产、销售、发展进程等各种项目统计的示意图。二、图表作文的

49、应试策略1审读图表前的文字说明，弄清图表的性质，做到“四确定”。首先，确定文章的体裁；其次，确定文章的结构；再次，确定文章的时态；最后，确定文章的人称。2审读图表后的要求，寻找做题规律，要注意以下几个方面：(1)词数：100左右。(2)开头或结尾已给出，这就要求考生首先不能另行开头或结尾；其次，要细读所给语句的人称、时态和语言的表达风格，力求前后一致。(3)内容完整，即要点齐全，写作时要注意详略得当和准确全面。(4)行文连贯。行文必须做到形连和意连。形连要力求自我特色词汇的使用，以增加得分“亮点”。意连要求能涵盖高考书面表达中各种文体常用的一些特色词汇，如however；besides；ins

50、tead；in the meanwhile；for instance；on the contrary；worse still；in conclusion；all of a sudden；as a matter of fact等，这样才能写出好文章。(5)注意句式的变化，力求在语言表达正确的基础上追求句式变换，确保语言表达的高级性。常见写作技巧主要包括：简单句与复合句的交替使用；主动语态为主，适度穿插被动语态；大胆使用平行结构；适当调整句中定语、状语的位置，使句子表达多样化；三大从句与三种非谓语动词灵活使用；特殊句式(如强调句、感叹句、疑问句、省略句)点缀其间等。假设你是李华，正在英国牛津参加短

51、期的语言培训，计划星期天去伦敦旅游。互联网上的一则广告引起了你的注意，但一些具体信息不明确(箭头所指内容)。请给该旅行社发一封电子邮件，询问有关情况。注意：1.词数100左右，信的格式已为你写好；2可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3参考词汇：牛津Oxford；费用fee。案例分析这是一篇典型的图表式作文，要求写一封电子邮件，询问旅行社有关一则广告的情况。细读图表和文字提示可知本文是一篇应用文，时态以一般现在时为主，人称为第一人称。本文内容要点包括：开头语；学生票价；费用是否包含景点门票、午餐；牛津的时间；是否有购物时间等，并稍加评论。Dear Sir/Madam，Im writin

52、g for more information about the day tour to London.As a student at Oxford University，Id like to know if you have any special price for students. As for the money you charge，does it cover the entrance fees for visiting the places listed？What about lunch？Is it included？Or do I need to bring along my

53、own food？How long will the tour last？Since I need to prepare my lessons for the next day，Id like to know the time to return. Besides，is there any time for shopping? I really want to have a look at the big stores in London.请根据图表所示，就某城市空气污染的状况写一篇英文报道，并提出一两条改进建议。注意：1.词数100左右。首句已给出，不计入总词数；2参考词汇：车辆vehicl

54、e。【参考答案】With the development of industry，air pollution is getting more and more serious. In this city，many people suffer from different kinds of illness because of air pollution.Air pollution is caused by the following reasons. About half of the problem is caused by vehicles. There are more and more

55、 cars and buses on the road，which give off poisonous gases.35% of air pollution is caused by factories. Another factor is smoking. Smoking does harm to othershealth as well as to that of the smokers. Besides，about 10% of air pollution is caused by other reasons.We should take some measures to fight

56、against pollution. New fuel can be used to take the place of gas. We can plant more trees，grass and flowers. All in all，if everybody realizes the importance of environment and does something to stop pollution，the problem will be solved.议论文写作指导 1议论文是以议论为主要表达方式的一种文体，它通过摆事实、讲道理的方式来辨明是非曲直，从而表达出作者的观点。它常由论点、论据和论证三部分构成。2它要求语言必须简练、准确，要尽可能避免使用口语，多用书面语，可适当使用名言警句；以议论为主，辅之以叙述、说明和描写等手法。3写作时要围绕中心论点展开议论，即论据和论证要围绕论点展开。根据题目要求，有时需要从正反两方面来论述，可增强论证的力度。最后，可得出结论，照应开头，形成一个有机的整体。4写作时常以三段式的形式展开议论。 优点缺点呆在家中花费少、舒适方便不能亲身了解外界外出旅游增长知识、开阔眼界花费多、旅途不便暑假即将来临，你班同学就假期计划进行讨论，提出了不同看法，请根据提示写一篇英语短文，并谈谈你的看法。注意：1.词数：80120(不含已写好部