广州市中考英语作文专题复习(七)饮食健康

1、学习好资料更多精品文档2018年广州市中考英语作文专题复习(七)饮食健康一、相关话题饮食(Food and drinkS)、卫生与健康(Hygiene and health二、与专题相关的知识准备：1.相关单元：九年级上 Unit 6 Healthy diet；2. 相关词汇：高频词：menu, bread, milk, noodles, rice, potatoes, beef, vegetables, fruit, grains, restaurant, hamburger, cola,healthy, unhealthy, waiter, traditional, service, kn

2、ife, fork, contain, dish,高频短语： restaurant review, order food, have dinner, fried food, stay away from, a glass of lemontea, soft drin ks, lose weight, medical exam in ati on, ple nty of, treat on eself to，coffee with milk and sugar,chicken wings, different kinds of,change one s diet, fast food, be g

3、ood for, be bad f(拓展词及词语： prote in, dairy products, eat ing habits, servefood, recomme nd, regular3. 经典句型：I have bread and eggs for breakfast.Itnsecessary to have a balanced diet.You should/ ought to/ dYobuetter / Why not We should in stead of Some people thi nk that If you , you will can help you I

4、t s +adi.+for sb+to doHere is some advice.Try to order dishes with vegetables and low-fat meats.学习-好资料更多精品文档4.参考谚语1） An apple a day keeps the doctor away.天一苹果，医生远离我。2） Health is better than wealth 健康胜于财富。3） Health is happ in ess 健康就是幸福。4） He who has health has hop 留得青山在，不怕没柴烧。三、经典例题（2012 年广州中考题）你是学校

5、英文报的小记者李华。请给你校初三学生写一封公开信，就如何保持考前健康提出建 议。主要内容如下：（1）早睡早起，保持充足睡眠；（2）饮食均衡，少吃垃圾食品；（3）多做体育运动；（4）你的其他建议。1. 词数 80 左右（信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数）；2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。Dear stude nts.As we all know, good health is important for success in the exams, so I m writing to_ Best wishes and stay healthy.Yours,Lihua1、 审题

6、:本文共有 J_个要点时态涉及一般现在时人称是 第一人称_2、 抓要点（我们）早睡早起和保持充足的睡眠 （We should sleep early and get up early; have nough sleep）（我们）饮食均衡（balaneed diet）;学习-好资料更多精品文档(我们)少吃垃圾食品(have less junk food)(我们)多做体育运动(do more exercise)3、连词成句主要使用句型 1,2,5,8,9 12,使用谚语 2, 34、连句成文与修改评分学生作文：Dear stude nts.As we all know, good health i

7、s important for success in the exams, so I mriting to students who is study ing ingrade nine. Firstly, we should sleep and get up early, and importa nt to have eno ugh sleep. Sec on dly, weshould bala nee our diet, don eat too many dim-sum. Thirdly, ding much exercise is very importa nt .we canplay

8、basketball and badm in ton after school. Lastly, we can liste n to music whe n we feel tired. It can relaxourselves.Best wish and stay healthy.点评：整篇文章行文流畅，调理清晰，并且对要点的描述到位，但是有拼写和简单的语法错误。要点 拓展也可适当补充例子，尝试运用不同句子的表达。5.检查思路：完成作文自查表：1. 如果没有问题的，请在项目后打 七2. 如果有问题，请在项目中圈出来，并在文中做出修改项目第一次自查第二次自查布局与内容要点人称时态、主谓一致动

9、词搭配、介词搭配拼写错误学习-好资料更多精品文档好词好句学习-好资料更多精品文档分项分档评分表项目要素给分表内容：6 分切合题意，体现要点6-5. 5654.54-3.53-2.521.510有所发挥准确性:6分语法6-5.554.54.54-3.53-2.521.510词汇机械性：大小写，拼写和格式等错误流畅性:3分结构3-2.52-1.51.510.50000自评总分：12（满分=6+6+3=15）6.参考例文:Dear stude nts.As we all know, good health is important for success in the exams, so I nwr

10、iting to tell you that duri ngthis period of time you n eed to get up early and go to bed early to en sure eno ugh sleep. As a sayinggoes “ you are what you eat I sug”est you have a balaneed diet and avoid eating junk food these days.Although your will be very busy, I still suggest you make some tim

11、e to play some sports to helpyourselfer relax. Also, you can do other things to reduce stress, like listening to music and read ing somein teresti ng books.Best wishes and stay healthy.Yours,Li Hua、练习:适当的饮食习惯是健康成长的保证。 请你以 Good Eating Habits, Good Health 为题，并根据下表提示（可适当补充内容），用英语写一篇不少于 80 个词的作文谈谈你的看法（开

12、通已经给出， 字数不计算在内）学习-好资料更多精品文档Good Eati ng Habits, Good Health不良习惯不吃早餐；爱吃零食；偏食，饮食过量良好习惯饮食多样化；饮食定时定量个人看法良好发热饮食习惯有助于身体健康.注意：1词数 80-100 个2. 文中不得出现真实的地址和姓名3. 可适当发挥。解题思路：1、审题:a 本文共有个要点b. 时态主要采用_c. 人称是_2、可能用到的词语（写在要点旁边）3、可能用到的句型4、成文:学习-好资料更多精品文档检查思路：完成作文自查表：1. 如果没有问题的，请在项目后打 七2. 如果有问题，请在项目中圈出来，并在文中做出修改项目第一次自

13、查第二次自查内容要点人称时态、主谓一致动词搭配、介词搭配拼写错误好词好句参考例文：“ GoocEating Habits lead to Good Health. So it very important for us to form healthy eating habits.However, many students still have bad eating habits. Some goto school without breakfast; some like toeat snacks all the time; some always like to the same food; and still some eat or drink too much. All thesehabits are bad for our health.To keep fit, we