层级一靓化词汇——学会运用高级表达

1、第三部笳班嬲1早题一写作基础夯实篇层级一靓化词汇一一学会运用高级表达英语书面表达第五档作文中提到：语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致。换句话说，如果考生使用高级词汇或句型，即使犯了少量或轻微的语言错误，也可不扣分，文章还是属于最高档次。因此，为了让文章档次高，首先要学会使用高级词汇。高级词汇的使用能够给文章增添色彩和画面感。它会大大提升文章的档次，从而帮助考生获得高分。要做到准确使用高级词汇，应该注意以下几个方面：一、使用亮点词汇的4种方法1 .标新立异语”众不同在写作时，恰当地使用一些别人可能想不到的词汇或表达，会体现出自己的高水平。(1)Greatchan

2、geshavetakenplaceinourschoolinthelastfewyears.Andthenewscamethatashortfilmwillbeshowninourschool.(2018全国卷R书面表达)fOurschoolhaswitnessedgreatchangesinthelastfewyears.Andwordcamethatashortfilmwillbeshowninourschool.(2018全国卷H书面表达)(2)I'busywithmylessonsnow,fortheCollegeEntranceExamination,whichisveryi

3、mportanttome,isnear.fI'occupiedwithmylessonsnowfortheCollegeEntranceExamination,whichisofgreatimportancetome,isaroundthecorner.(2017天津高考书面表达)(3)Ourteam,besidesregulartraining,willjoininavarietyofactivities.一Ourteam,apart/asidefromregulartraining,willjoininavarietyofactivities.(2017全国卷m书面表达)(4)Se

4、veraldayslaterwhenthevideowasplayedonthegraduationceremonyitwasverypopular.fSeveraldayslaterwhenthevideowasplayedonthegraduationceremonyitwaswellreceived.(2017北京高考书面表达)2 .多样表达避免重复在写作时，应尽量避免重复使用相同的单词或短语，要尽量用贴切多样的词语来展示自己的水平。用词不同、表达方式迥异，也是高级用法。(1)Moreover,wewillbuildanewstadiumandwiththestadiumbuilt,aw

5、iderangeofsportseventsareabletobeheld.fMoreover,wewillbuildanewstadiumandwiththestadiumsetup,awiderangeofsportseventsareabletobeheld.(201金国卷m书面表达)(2)Theteamwillholdmanyactivities,someofwhichwillappealtoyou,includingmanymatches.fTheteamwillholdarangeofactivities,someofwhichwillappealtoyou,includingma

6、nymatches.(2017全国卷m书面表达)(3)Wemayhavedifferentopinionsinorganizingclassactivities.Wemayhavedifferentwaystodealwithsuchasituation.fWemayhavedifferentopinionsinorganizingclassactivities.Wemayhavvariouswaystodealwithsuchasituation.浙江高考书面表达)3 .短语优先语言生动当单词和短语表示同一个意思时，优先使用短语。恰当使用短语，一方面能使文章更加生动，另一方面也能展示出学生扎

7、实的语言功底。(1)Hopefully,thesesuggestionswouldbeielpful/beneficialtoyou.fHopefully,thesesuggestionswouldbeofgreathelp/benefittoyou.(2018全国卷I书面表达)(2)TolearnmoreaboutthedevelopmentofourschoolallthestudentsarewelcometowatchtheshortfilmGrowingTogetherfWiththeaimoflearningmoreaboutthedevelopmentofourschool,al

8、lthestudentsarewelcometowatchtheshortfilmGrowingTogether(2018全国卷H书面表达)(3)ThereisnodoubtthatyoushouldknowaboutthehistoryoftheTangDynastyinadvance.fThereisnodoubtthatyouaresupposedtoknowaboutthehistoryoftheTangDynastyinadvance.（2017全国卷I书面表达）（4）Firstly,thefinalexamofthistermiscomingsoIambusypreparingfo

9、rit.fTobeginwith,thefinalexamofthistermisaroundthecornersoIambusypreparingfo门t.（2017天津高考书面表达）4 .高级词汇凸显水平为了表现自己的语言功底，显示出自己的写作水平，应避免反复使用低年级学过的简单词汇，尽量使用高中阶段学到的词汇来代替。（1）IfyoutakemyadviceyouaresuretohavethemostunforgettableexperienceduringyourcollegeinBeijing.fSolongasyoutakemyadviceyouareboundtohavethem

10、ostunforgettableexperienceduringyourcollegeinBeijing.（2018北京高考书面表达第一节）（2）Second,Iamtryingmybesttoacquiretheessentialknowledgeandskillsconcerningmyposition.fSecondIamsparingnoefforttoacquiretheessentialknowledgeandskillsconcerningmyposition.（2017天津高考书面表达）（3）Ishouldsaysorryforbeingunabletogotothebooks

11、torewithyouonFridayafternoon.fIshouldmakeanapologyforbeingunabletogotothebookstorewithyouonFridayafternoon.（2016全国卷in书面表达）二、使用亮点词汇的2点注意1 .注意增加亮词的出镜率”，变消极词汇为积极词汇阅读中能认识但写作中不会用的词汇属于消极词汇，写作中能运用自如的词汇为积极词汇，也就是平常所说的第一反应词”。积极词汇量的多少直接决定着英语作文表达水平的高低。现在很多考生的困难是，头脑中的很多词汇介于积极词汇与消极词汇之间；另外，很多背过的消极词汇如果较长时间不接触就会变成陌生

12、词汇。因此在备考过程中，考生要做的事情就是迅速扩大消极词汇量并且保持接触的频度，力争使其变成积极词汇。很多考生作文驻足不前的一个重要原因是反复使用初中学过的简单词汇，背了大量的亮词妙语而不用。建议大家在想到一个表达时，务必要想一想还有没有更好的表达方式，这就是我们平时常讲的头脑风暴法”。例如想表达美丽的”这个含义，大家首先想到的是“beautiful,那么在下笔时，要想一想还有没有更出彩的表达，如“attractive胸charmin舜。再如表达困难的”时，大家常用“difficult,那是不是用“toughs“challenging®与众不同呢？2 .注意亮点词汇使用的场合写作时，

13、在用词上不可随心所欲，决不能为追求高级”而使用复杂但毫无把握的词语，也不能满篇堆积所谓的高级”词汇，否则给人过分炫耀之嫌，得不偿失。一般来说，一篇文章能用好三至五个高级词汇就可以了。另外，为能更好地完成规定的写作任务”，减少错误，特别提醒考生在使用高级词汇”时，一定要注意遵循准确、恰当”的原则，并且要注意使用的场合，难词和生僻词汇并不一定就是高级词汇，例如：一大早我们买了一些圣诞礼物。EarlyinthemorningwepurchasedsomeChristmaspresents.（purchase水过于书面化，改为bought更地道）三、写作的秘密武器一一24个高级词汇名词普通词汇高级词汇

14、普通词汇高级词汇chanceopportunitychoicealternativeideaopinionpeopleindividualresultconsequenceeffectinfluence动词havepossessreplacesubstitutebearputupwithunderstandmakesenseofdeveloppromoteconsidertakeintoaccount形容词enoughadequaterichabundantproperappropriateimportantvital/significantinterestingabsorbing/appea

15、lingdifficultchallenging副词finallyeventuallyhardlybarelyimmediatelyinaflashnowadayscurrently连词sothereforeandaswellas(1)Itisofimportanceforyoutounderstandthecontent,Tangpoetry.fItisofimportanceforyoutomakesenseofthecontent,Tangpoetry.fItisofimportanceforyoutobeawareofthecontent,Tangpoetry.(2017全国卷I书面表

16、达)(2)That'swhyIthinkthetripalongtheYangtzeRiverwillbeabedhuice.fThat'svhyIthinkthetripalongtheYangtzeRiverwillbeabetteralternative.(2017北京高考书面表达)(3)Inthecomingthreeyearsourschoollifewillbedifficult.fInthecomingthreeyearsourschoollifewillbechallenging.四、写作的顶级装备一一27个加分词汇表达关注的名词attention,focus,

17、concern表达争论的名词discussion,debateargument表达现象的名词phenomenon表达优缺点的名词advantagedisadvantagestrength,weakness表达增长或下降的动词increaseaccumulate,decreasedecline表达导致后果的动词短语resultin,leadto,bringabout,contributeto,giveriseto表达支持、反对的动词短语approveof,beinfavorof,objectto表达可能性的形容词likely表达有好处的形容词beneficial表达强调的副词particular

18、ly,especially(1)Thepictureshowsacommonphenomenonthesedays.这幅图显示了这些日子的一个常见现象。(2)TheInternethasbroughtaboutmanychangesintheworkplace.网络给工作场所带来了很多变化。(3)Ourteacherislikelytogetangrywhensheseesthedirtyfloor.我们的老师看到地面这么脏时，可能会发火。II综合演练III.请用高级词汇替换下列句子中的加黑部分1. Weweresointerestedinthecompetitionthatweformeda

19、grouptotakepartinit.（2018天津高考书面表达）keenon2. I'iverygladtolearnthatyouarecominginSeptember.（2018全国卷I书面表达）more_than3. Wearedesperatelyinneedofyourhel|Asaresult,Isincerelyinviteyoutojoinus.（2018天津高考书面表达）Asaconsequence4. So,pleasespendsometimetakingabrieflookatthehistoryoftheTangDynastywhichwillhelpy

20、ouprepareforyourclass.（2017全国卷I书面表达）Therefore；makepreparations_for5. Thecraftsmenwillshowvisitorshowtocutpaperintodifferentshapesonthespot.（2017全国卷n书面表达）various/arange_of6. InordertogetabetterunderstandingofTangpoetryIadviseyoutolearnsomebriefhistoryoftheTangDynastyinadvance.（2017全国卷I书面表达）acquire7.

21、Ourclassthoughtoftheideatomakebetteruseofusedmaterials.（2016京高考书面表达）cameupwith8. Thereasonsarehefollowing.（2016四川高考书面表达）as_follows9. Atthesametime,Idecidedtostudyharderratherthanwasteprecioustimeonthoseuselessthings.（湖南高考书面表达）made卫p_mymind10. .Ashighschoolstudents,weshouldbeneatlydressedwhenatschool

22、.aresupposed。11. .There'snoharminyourstayinguplatesometimes.occasionally/once_in_awhile12. .Theteacherdirectedthegiftedstudentstowardsthemoredifficultcourses.challengingII句型转换1. Shedidn'tlistentowhatherteachersaidintheclass.fSheturnedadeafeartowhatherteachersaidintheclass.(ear)2. Atthattime,

23、Irealizedthatshedidn'ttellthetruth.fAtthattime,itoccurredtomethatshedidn'ttellthetruth.(occur)3. Youshouldfinishyourhomeworkbeforeyouplayfootball.fYouaresupposedtofinishyourhomeworkbeforeyouplayfootball.(suppose)4. Inmyopinion,neitheryounorshehasmetthestandard.fAsfarasJnconcerned,neitheryoun

24、orshehasmetthestandard.(concern)5. Ican'tbearthewayshetreatsherparentsanylonger.fIcannolongerput_upwiththewayshetreatsherparents.(put)6. Duringthemountainclimbing,pleasehelpeachotherandpayspecialattentiontoyoursafety.fInthecourseofthemountain-climbing,pleasehelpeachotherandpayspecialattentiontoy

25、oursafety.(course)7. Afterfivehoursstopwork,wewerealltired.fAfterfivehours8nonwork,wewereallwornout.(wear)8. Jackisveryclever,whooftenthinksofnewideas.fJackisveryclever;whooftencomesupwithnewideas.(come)田.请用高级词汇对下文黑体部分进行提升考生作文DearPeter;Itisagreathonorformetoinviteyoutol.takepartintheactivity«BuildaCivilizedCampu§thismonth.We2.plantogohandinhandto3.buildourcivilizedcampuswherebeautyandharmonymeet.Toachievethegoqlwe'l