四级辅导写作

1、Chapter One 主题句一般位于句首一般是简单句一般是议论句Top + controlling ideas分段式扩展句（主要和次要）一般多为长句能支持主题句的观点，有具体的facts理论论证、事实论证、举例论证、数据论证或解释说明等要直接，单刀直入，任何与主题无关的句子都应删去。正确使用连接词，做好扩展句和主题句及扩展句和扩展句之间的过渡和衔接，句子之间有连贯性和逻辑性。结尾句总结全文首尾呼应两种写法 再次表述主体 （restatement） 摘要总结 (summary)1. Recently, we have often been hearing complaints about di

2、shonesty.2. Because of a lack of experience and self-confidence, I failed the job interview.3. It is well known that the earth is short for many natural resources, such as fresh water.4. In a word, the disadvantages of the car outweigh the advantages.5. Despite the advantages the computer has, some

3、people claim, we shall not lose sight of its adverse effects on young users.6. For example, in older times, Spring Festival was always accompanied by the sound of firecrackers. But now, many cities have banned them.7. When all the factors are examined, we may safely come to the conclusion that stude

4、nts need to know the world outside the campus.8. As we know, fake commodities have posed a severe threat to the healthy development of our socialist market.9. As long as we realize that the first impression is important, we must pay attention to it.10. I hope I may be granted an interview, at which

5、time I can explain my qualifications more fully.1. There are three important steps to follow if you want to enter a university.2. When taking part in sports, we get the chance to train almost all parts of our body. Furthermore, sports can also enrich our lives and maintain our psychological health,

6、which teaches us about consideration, cooperation and optimism, and how to cope with difficulties.3. Reading selectively is the best policy in study.School Uniforms should be mandatory (强制的) for all students for a number of reasons. First, they make everyone equal. In this way, the rich kids are on

7、the same level as the poor ones. In addition, getting ready for school can be much faster and easier. Many kids waste time choosing what to wear to school, and they are often unhappy with their final choices. Most important, some studies show that school uniforms make students perform better. Many p

8、eople might say that uniforms take away from personal freedom, but I believe the benefits are stronger than the drawbacks.Chapter Two一致性内容围绕一个主题展开句子一致性 （时态、人称、数）使用平行结构时，语法结构一致1. Whether one likes the Internet or not, we are actually bombarded by it every day. we like2. One serious problem human bein

9、gs are faced with are overpopulation. is3. There are so many countries using English that it had been regarded as an international language. it is now4. In a word, everyone must take responsibility and air pollution will gradually be eliminated. to eliminate5. It will not only become convenient, but

10、 will also be much cheaper. become more convenient6. Making cities greener has a lot of advantages, such as the improvement of the environment, contributions to industry, and making cities more beautiful. beautification of cities7. Reading extensively is good for our mental health, and through it we

11、 can also train our character. it is also beneficial to the training of our character8. Education problems are currently of great concern to nations, the world, and the human beings individually.9. But other people argue that everyone has the responsibility to protect fresh water and wed better enti

12、tle laws to regulate it. 连贯性连接词转折举例因果递进使用同义词和近义词，避免重复表示起的词语，用于开篇的扩展句At first for one thing(for another)At present currentlyRecently at the beginningIn general first of allGenerally speaking to start withOn the whole in the first placeIt goes without saying that A proverb saysSome people claim that W

13、e all know that As is known to all It has been proven that No one can deny that It is clearly seen thatThe pie graph showsThere is much discussion about/ attention to 有关“承”的常用词句After that /afterwards by this timeAfter a few days certainlyAfter a while consequentlyAt any rate for this purposeBesides

14、for instanceIn addition furthermore in particularIn other words thirdly no doubt what is moreFor another moreover, likewise obviouslyFor one thing, for another despite, meanwhileIn contrast to, but again as far as are/ is concernedlast but not the least first, second, third, finallywhat is more seri

15、ous is In principle it is true that Another key aspect of is But it is a pity that 有关“转”的词语After all fortunately all the same howeverAnyway in spite of but luckily at the same timeNevertheless conversely though/although in/by contrast on the contrary nonetheless otherwise in fact unlike as a matter

16、of fact whereas有关“合”的词语Above all accordingly personally as a consequence as a result in sum as has been noted to speak frankly at length to conclude in brief in short in a word, hence To be frank, I thinkAs far as I am concerned A reasonable conclusion can be drawn from As regards All in all, It fol

17、lows that On account of this An Eye-Witness Account of a Traffic Accident It just so happened that on the morning of last Sunday I was on the way to school. (起) At one point, I saw a car was driving around a street corner. (承) It made an impression on me because the driver drove so fast. What happen

18、ed next was tragedy. (起) At first, I saw a woman riding a bike with her eyes looking up at the sky.(承) Almost at the same time, she was knocked off her bike by the speeding car. (转) Whats more, the car went out of control and ran into a tree on the roadside. (承) As a result, both the woman and the d

19、river were injured severely. (合) As I understand, both the driver and the passerby are responsible for the accident.（起） On one hand, the driver was driving too fast.（承） On the other hand, the woman was so careless. （承）Therefore, had both of them been careful enough, the tragedy could have been avoid

20、ed. (合)1) 2 4 3 12) 3 1 4 23) 5 3 1 6 2 41) As for me, First, so, Secondly, with2) Moreover, such as, also, Besides, also3) Finally, because, and, After all, hence1) In conclusion, I think we should never allow economics to dazzle us so much that we lose sight of our cultural value. On the contrary,

21、 we should make use of economics to reinforce our fine cultural tradition. Only in this way can we develop rapidly2) However, some people are not tolerant to others. They feel they have the right to blame others for making mistakes.3) As a matter of fact, we must practice more when we study English.

22、 There is on denying that more practice will finally lead to a good result. In short, practice makes perfect.4) In my opinion, you should major in English. On the one hand, English is a very popular major at our university. On the other hand, you seem to have a gift for language and you are really g

23、ood at English.Chapter Three统一性跟一致性要求一样，紧紧围绕主题写，不相关的句子一律删去完整性句子的完整性简单句 （主语、谓语和其他辅助成分）复合句 （状语从句、名词从句和定语从句）并列句断句方面 一个句子没有结束，就又开始新的句子连词方面缺少必要的连词，或连词乱用不善于使用连词和连接副词表因果、转折、递进等关系段落的完整性主题句，扩展句和结尾句前后呼应Shall We Be Tolerant? We shall be tolerant to others when tolerance will make them at ease (主题句引起话题). Someti

24、mes we wronged. When the truth is revealed, people will feel uneasy and sorry for us. If we can be tolerant to them, they will feel better (以举第一个例子的方式扩展句子) Sometimes our friends break things in our house. We should be tolerant even if the items are precious to us. (以举第二个例子的方式扩展句子) Sometimes people h

25、urt our feelings unintentionally. We should be tolerant to them even if we are very upset at that time.(以举第三个例子的方式扩展句子) However, some people are not tolerant to others. (对上文而言是“转”，同时也是这段的主题句) They feel they have the right to blame others for making mistakes. (主要扩展句) They never care about others feel

26、ings just because they were once hurt. (次要扩展句) They choose to pour the anger over others even though they know these people will be badly hurt. (次要扩展句) It is very harmful if people cannot be tolerant. (“承”段落) Their anger will hurt others and themselves as well. (扩展句) They will lose a lot of friends

27、because they are easily angered. (扩展句) They will find it hard to get along with other people because people are no longer kind to them. (扩展句) So we should learn to be tolerant. (结论句，也是“合”的部分) 1 The screen of the computer display can also damage peoples eyesight. Everyone has his own problems in life

28、. Logging is a very good kind of morning exercise. The content of a diary should be something meaningful and not just a plain and brief account of daily activities. Their seniors will then be angry with them. Many of their mistakes are big ones. 2. 指出有三种主要庆祝方式，所以后面应该再加一种，例如 The others like to go to

29、work as usual. They think it is a time to make money, such as the taxi driver and the boss of restaurant. 将had 换成 have, 整篇文章是以现在时写的。中making resolutions 要换成 to resolutions.句首加 In short, 并与合并，变成 In short, Spring Festival is a special time that can be spent with family or even alone since it depends on

30、 ones own preference. 3. 1. necessary necessarily2. or and 3. without with4. own owning 5. could can6. it love (因为it 指代不明)7. play plays 8. happily happy9. and but10. Because so, 前面的 “.”改为 “，”11. consist consist Chapter FourA Most Unlucky Day I had a streak of tough luck yesterday. Everything, it see

31、med to me, went wrong. And I simply couldnt understand why all the bad things happened to me in one single day. In the morning, as luck would have it, my alarm clock didnt ring, and with an aching head I woke up half an hour later than usual. I was in such a hurry that, when making an omelet, I got

32、my fingers burnt, and splashed the omelet all over the floor of the kitchen. Having no time for my breakfast at that point, I rushed out of my house with an empty stomach and hurting fingers. I had intended to catch the 7:30 subway, but somehow I couldnt make it. I became very nervous at the mere th

33、ought of being late for my English class, because my English teacher is very strict and demanding, and he gets angry whenever any student is late for his class. After getting off the 7:40 subway, I raced all the way from the station to my school, thinking it would be impossible for me to flag a taxi

34、 at this hour of the day. At the corner of the street near my school, I abruptly bumped into a man and, worse luck, broke the glasses I had bought for 500 yuan just last week. With scarcely any time to receive or offer an apology, I just kept on running and running. At long last, I arrived at the sc

35、hool only to find, with great sadness mixed with some relief, that the school was empty and the classrooms were all locked. It was Saturday. My ill luck showed no sign of coming to an end. When I returned home greatly frustrated, I found myself locked out. In my hurry I had forgotten to bring the ke

36、y with me. Just my luck! Last night I was driving home from work. I had an accident. I was following behind a truck, driving at about 30 kilometers an hour. I was watching the traffic carefully because it was getting dark. Suddenly a small girl ran into the road from the left. She was chasing a dog

37、and she wasnt paying any attention to the traffic. I immediately applied the brakes and turned the steering wheel quickly to the right. The girl jumped towards the side of the road as soon as she saw my car. Fortunately I did not hit her, but I hit a car coming in the other direction. Luckily I was not driving very fast so the damage so not serious. It is better to damage a car than to injure a young child, I thought to myself. Go on a