考英语一轮复习《》写作技能步步高写作层级特训：要诀4.5.满分作文登场.询问信(新人教版含答案)

1、第三部分要诀四记写ft层级時iW真题链接(2019全国新课标n卷)假定你是李华，你班同学决定为小明举办生日聚会。请你写信邀请外教Susan参加，要点包括：1 时间：周五晚8点至9点2 地点：学生俱乐部3 内容：生日歌、蛋糕、游戏等4 .要求：备小礼物1 .词数100左右；2 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3 结语已为你写好。DearSusan,Yours,LiHuac阅卷现场HiSusan,We'rethrowingasurprisepartyforXiaoming'sbirthday.We'dliketoinviteyoutotheparty.(1)Wewantto

2、givehimasurprise.butpleasekeepquietaboutit.We'llgatherattheStudents'Clubat8:00p.m.theFriday.aftertheeveningclasses.Anditwilllastaboutanhour.Weeachwillpreparealittlepresent.Whenhecome.we'lllightthecandlesandsing“Happ£irthdaytogetherforhim.(2)Thenthecakewillbecutandwe'llsingsongsa

3、ndplaygames.It'llbenicetoseehowexcitedhewillbe.I'msureyou'llhaveagoodtimeattheparty.too.Yours,LiHua1 错误聚焦but改为(1)but前后两句话的意思没有转折关系，只是一种承接关系，故要将表达“在星期几”时，“星期”不用加任何冠词或指示词，故the要改为O(3)在时间状语从句中，从句用一般现在时，主句用一般将来时，故come要改为【答案】and(2)this(3)comes2.高分靓句(1)将画线句子改为含有非谓语动词的句子：Pleasekeepquietaboutit将画

4、线句子(2)改成主语是we,多个并列谓语动词的句子：We'llcutthecake,【答案】(1) inorderto/togivehimsurprise(2) singsongsandplaygames参考范文HiSusan,We'rethrowingasurprisepartyforXiaoming'sbirthday.AndIamwritingtoinviteyoutoourparty.Wouldyouliketocomeandjoinus?Wewillbeverygladifyoucancome.Thepartywillstartat8o'clockon

5、Friday,andwilllastforanhour.WewillmeetintheStudents'Club.Thenwewillhaveabirthdaysong,cakeforXiaoming.Wewillplaysomegames,too.TheonlyrequirementispreparingasmallgiftforXiaoming.Itwillbeverycoldatnight.Pleasewearmoreclothes.Iamwaitingforyourreply.YoursSincerely,LiHua(高端训练假定你是学生会主席李华，学生会将举办迎新生联欢晚会，

6、你希望外籍教师Tom能参加，于是你给他写一封邀请信。要点如下：1晚会开始、结束时间以及举办地点。2 .表演内容。3 .邀请对方参加的原因以及询问对方的意向。3.开头语和结束语已为你注意：1.词数100左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。写好。答案】Onepossibleversion：DearTom，Howareyoudoing?Currently,inordertowelcomethenewstudents,aneveningpartywillbeheldinourschool.AsthechairmanoftheStudents'Union,I'mwritingtoi

7、nviteyoutojoinus.Hereisabriefschedule.First,itwillbeheldintheschoolmeetinghallfrom7：00to9：00p.m.nextSunday.Additionally,therewillbemanywonderfulperformancespresentedbytheteachersandstudents,suchassinging,dancing,performingplaysandsoon.Everyoneislongingforyourcoming,anditwouldbemorecheerfulifyoucouldgiveaperformance.IsincerelyhopethatyoucanacceptourinvitationandIhavetheconfidencethatwestudentswouldbeex