【大学】关于《全国广播电视大学英语专业学生优秀项目设计（商务方向）评选》的几个问题ppt课件

1、关于关于的几个问题的几个问题关于关于的几个问题的几个问题评选的总体情况回想课程的性质和目的要求回想对商务工程设计书的要求引荐设计书的优点存在的问题几点建议评选的总体情况评选的总体情况一等奖一名，二等奖三名，三等奖六名，优秀奖十六名。比上次抽查的情况有明显提高。各有所长，综合评选，相对平衡。重点看最后的定稿，由于教师修正的度有所不同，因此排在前面的学生实践程度不一定比后面的高。回想课程的性质和目的要求回想课程的性质和目的要求电大英语专业 商务方向专科起点本科的实际和论文环节对商务工程设计有较全面的认识学会进展调查研讨和资料汇总了解工程设计书的格式用流畅正确的英语撰写设计书最后文稿回想成果评定规范

2、回想成果评定规范中心小组座谈：5%顾客情况分析： 5%SWOT分析：10%工程实施流程图：5%工程框架图：10%风险分析：5%工程方案书：60%回想对最后文本的要求回想对最后文本的要求l 它大体应包括：附信、封面、摘要、引见、正文、预算、恳求人资历与阅历、附录等部分。正文是其中的重点。但附信和摘要也很重要。 附录可包括工程涉及过程中的阶段成果和素材，如调查会记录等。引荐设计书的优点引荐设计书的优点选题新颖与本职任务相关摘要明晰图表设计吸引人言语得当、正确教师辅导和修正仔细档案资料齐全选题选题Shrimp feed production lineTraining center (4)Railwa

3、y department expansionRenting centerService promotionTranslation servicesShop expansion10 out of the other 16 on shops and training centers与本职任务相关与本职任务相关虾饲料水产饲料公司单证制造培训中心银行港口铁路扩展集装箱码头汉语培训中心培训中心南方电大普遍在商务方向的工程设计比较好。摘要明晰摘要明晰Example One：Duck feed：high cost and low selling price Shrimp feed: low cost and

4、 high selling priceWhen the production line is completed, it can produce 3 tons of shrimp feed per hour. The annual production capacity is 12,000 tons.The investment is 4 million RMB yuan, All the funds will be borrowed from C&B Group Co. Ltd., taking the shrimp feed equipment as the collateral. Rep

5、ayment of capital and interest will be 272,000 yuan per year. The repayment period will be fifteen years.摘要明晰摘要明晰Example Two:On We Go English Training Center will be set up in Chenghai District and Chaoyang District, Shantou, to offer flexible styles of teaching by a team of native-speaking and non-

6、native speaking English language teaching professionals.It will occupy 1,000 square meters in downtown Chenghai District and Chaoyang District respectively.The project will allow us to gain a revenue of 1,440,000 yuan and a profit of 180,000 yuan in the first year after the plan is accomplished. The

7、se figures will be raised by 15% in the next two years.The total investment of the project is 600,000 yuan. 图表设计吸引人图表设计吸引人进程图明晰；彩色线形图表示价钱、收益走向；彩色条形图表示市场需求与消费才干对比；彩色饼形图表示市场份额、顾客构成等；利润预测表包括：销售量；销售收入；销售折扣；净销售收入；消费本钱原料，包装，制造费用；毛利；销售费用管理本钱，借贷支出；税前利润。有的还附了地图。 言语得当正确言语得当正确Example：We plan to set up On We Go

8、 English Training Center in Chenghai District and Chaoyang District, Shantou within three months, offering flexible styles of teaching by English language teaching professionals, both Chinese and English native speakers. The business goal of the center is to provide training in communicative English

9、. There are four reasons to launch this training center. First, as the world is becoming a global village, English, as an international language, is increasingly important. In addition, Chinas accession to the WTO and Beijings success in bidding for the 2021 Olympics have also boosted the enthusiasm

10、 of leaning English in the country. 言语得当正确言语得当正确Example (contd)Second, there are so many industrial companies and household workshops exporting their products to foreign countries in Chenghai District and Chaoyang District. According to the Shantou Human Resources Website, the demand for foreign tra

11、de professionals with good English proficiency in these two districts is over 20,000, much more than the supply. Third, there is only one language training center in Chenghai District, while in Chaoyang District, there is none. Last but not the least, vocational English training is a newly emerging

12、market offering the potential for a good return of the capital.教师辅导和修正仔细教师辅导和修正仔细内容，文字，建议。Your outline looks great! You have already done a lot of work. It is important to be very clear as to what your project is. I know from your “Discussion sheet that you are expanding the feed line, but in your s

13、ummary you will have to make it clear whether you are adding another line in this old building or you are shutting down and doing a renovation. If you are using an old building and equipment, did you have to buy it or did it belong to your company? If you have to shut down to renovate the existing p

14、lant, this is also a financial cost that must be considered.档案资料齐全档案资料齐全毕业设计册的运用各阶段的原始资料调查表的设计和反响电子文本有的还附了调查会的照片和录音有的还附上参考文献目录存在问题存在问题程序不够规范“借用较多言语质量问题内容方面的问题教师指点力度程序不够规范程序不够规范Covering letter 不齐全；教师评语和辅导记录有的有后补的迹象；报送资料的工程不一致；各校正争辩要求不一致，普通都很简单；有的争辩记录只记录了问题，没有记录学生的回答。“借用较多借用较多不少选题与教材比较接近；因此文字也与教材比较接近；SMART specific, measurable, agreed, realistic, time-bound)分析“借用课文。言语质量问题言语质量问题文体问题 hereinafter, 省略方式等This project will seemingly qualify .Therefore 的用法不完好句主谓语不一致非谓语动词时态语态介词词性名词单复数内容方面的问题内容方面的问题 缺covering l