近年来中考英语书面表达分析

1、近年来中考英语书面表达分析 书面表达是一项能充分考查考生综合应用能力的题型，在中考中占有重要的地位，所占的分值在15分左右，它是一种指导下写作，要求考生根据试题提供的文字说明、图画、图表等写一篇紧扣主题、结构完整、文理通顺、用词准确、书写规范、卷面整洁的短文，包括书信、日记、发言稿、通知、仿写、看图作文等。 【典型例题分析】文段表达 （15分）根据中文大意和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文。 所给英文提示词语供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。某英文报纸就家务劳动（housework）话题征文，请你投稿。每个家庭都有许多家务，人人都应该学做一些。谈谈你经常帮父母

2、做那些家务，有什么体会，并打算在暑假为家里做什么。提示词语：every family, lots of housework, learn to do, help, parents, be / feel proud of简析：本文是一篇半开放的作文，根据提示我们明确本文时态可以用一般现在时、一般将来时，全文的人称要用第一人称，要抓住中心，确定重点词语，组织中心句。One possible version:Every family has lots of housework. Everyone should learn to do some of it. I often help my paren

3、ts do housework such as washing clothes, cleaning the room and watering flowers.I think Ive learned how to take good care of myself and my family by doing housework. Sometimes cleaning all the windows is an enjoyable experience. I really feel proud of myself. And doing housework is also a kind of ex

4、ercise.The summer holiday is coming. Im going to learn how to cook some dishes. My parents will be happy to enjoy them. 【分类作文精选】一提示写作类1. 外籍教师Richard想了解一下你所在班级学生的到校方式。假如你是李华，请以 “The way I go to school” 为题，写一篇英语短文，向Richard介绍自己到校的方式。 提示：(1) How do&

5、#160;you go to school? (2) Why do you prefer to go in that way？ 要求：(1) 短文须包括所有提示内容，并围绕你所选择的某种交通方式，写出二至三个理由，可适当发挥。 (2) 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。 (3) 词数：6080个。（短文开头已给出，不计入总词数） The way I go to school Im Li

6、 Hua. I go to school on foot. I have several reasons for that. First, my home is two kilometers away from school. It takes me about 20 minutes to get 

7、there. Second, walking to school is a kind of exercise. Its good for my health. Third, its pretty safe to walk to school because there is a lot of traffic&

8、#160;on the road at this time of day. So I prefer going to school on foot. Its really a good choice.  2.难忘的初中生活就要结束了。假如你是韩梅，即将迎来全新的高中生活。为了尽快适应新的环境，你打算在英语俱乐部的QQ群里留言，谈一谈自己在高中学习、生活和与人相处等方面可能遇到的问题，并向

9、大家寻求帮助。注意：1词数：80词左右；2 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校名称；3 留言开头已经给出，不计入总词数。Hi, everybody. Hows it going? Ill become a senior high school student this September. _One possible version:Hi, everybody. Hows it going? Ill become a senior high school student this September. Im very happy, but Im worried that I may meet w

10、ith some difficulties in the new school. Perhaps I cant keep up with my classmates, especially in math. And Im not sure if I can make friends with others because Im not good at communicating. On the other hand, I dont know how to take good care of myself. Im afraid the food in the new school wont ag

11、ree with me. What can I do with these problems? Could you give me some advice? I really need your help. 3.为了使同学们与人交往时举止更加文雅，你校学生会正在举办以“How to behave well？ ”为主题的英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文。（以上背景内容无需表述）短文要点如下：1.学生应该守时，守信，不撒谎，不说脏话；2.礼貌待人，热心助人；3.遵守交通规则；不在公共场所喧哗，不乱扔垃圾；4.请你就此话题再补充一至两点个人看法。要求：1.不要逐词翻译。2.在文中不要提及真实的

12、校名和姓名。3.词数60-80左右。短文首句已给出，不计入词数。参考词汇：dirty adj. obey v. promise n. Behaving well is a secret of getting on well with others.As a student, I think its very important to do everything on time and keep promises. Never lie to others or say dirty words. We should be polite to others and ready to hel

13、p people in need. Wed better not talk loudly in public. Dont throw litter or spit about. And remember to obey traffic rules.Finally, learn to work with others. We need good team work in our life. 二图表类假设你学校即将开展“读好书，促成长”的活动，请你根据这次活动的主题向全校同学发出倡议。请根据表格中所给信息，用英语写一篇倡议书。读书的意义获取知识，增长见识，使人聪明，使人快乐，有助于学习，

14、有助于成长目前的状况听音乐，看电视，上网等占去了学生大部分的读书时间发出倡议多读书，读好书注意：1、词数：80-100个；2、倡议书的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；3、倡议书须包括所有的内容要点，行文连贯，表达清楚，书写规范。参考词汇：gain knowledge 获取知识 open the mind 增长见识My dear friends, Reading is very important in our life. _One possible version:My dear friends,Reading is very important in our life. We can g

15、ain knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds but also make us cleverer and happier. Our study can be improved if we read more books. Reading also helps us grow as a person.However, its a great pity that many activities such as listening to music, watching TV and going online take up

16、 much of our reading time. So here, I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books and read good books. It will do us good! Lets start reading now! （1）假如昨天你们班级以Shall we keep animals in zoos? 为题开了一次讨论会，请你根据下面的表用英语写一篇60字左右的报道，介绍讨论会的情况，第一句已经给出，不计入词数。结果20人认为应该把动物养在动物园30人认为不该把动物养在动物园里理由1.人们

17、可以在动物园里看到很多不同的动物2.动物在动物园里受到良好的照顾1.动物被关在笼子里无法活动2.动物喜欢生活在自然环境中Yesterday we had a discussion about whether we should keep animals in zoos【参考范文】Yesterday we had a discussion about whether we should keep animals in zoos. Twenty students thought that it was good to keep animals in zoos because people coul

18、d see many different kinds of animals there and animals were taken good care of in the zoos. But thirty students thought it not good for animals. Since the animals were kept in cages, they were not able to travel (walk, run) freely. Animals liked to live in nature.（2）今天你到广州的一家超市购物，遇见一群英国游客，在交谈中，他们谈到

19、他们明天想去广州动物园参观，向你打听该园的门票价格和开放时间。请你根据下面表格中的内容向他们介绍，并顺便提醒他们你认为参观时应注意的事项。词数不少于80个。票价开放时间成人80元人星期一星期五上午9；00到下午4:001.20米以上儿童40元人星期六星期天上午8：00下午5  301.20米以下儿童免费注：成人adult【参考范文】Guangzhou Zoo is the largest one in our city. The ticket for an adult is 80 yuan. The children over 1.20m in height can pay only

20、 half of it, and the ones under 1.20m can enter the zoo for free. The zoo opens from 9:00 a. m. to 4:00 p. m. on weekdays and from 8:00 a. m. to 5:30 p. m. on weekends. By the way, while visiting the zoo, youd better not feed the animals with the food you take. And dont get too close to or even touc

21、h the animals. That would be very dangerous. Please keep the zoo clean as well.Wish you a good time!（3）假设你去参加英语夏令营，外籍老师要求你介绍你的一位好友，请根据下面表格提供的信息写一篇短文。短文开头已经给出。要求：1. 所给的信息必须全部用上；2. 必要时可增加内容，着重描述学习情况和特长爱好；3. 字数一定要在80字左右；4. 表达连贯，书写工整。姓名性别年龄家庭成员学校学习情况及特长爱好李卫男153人三中【参考范文】My friend,My friend is Li Wei. He

22、is a boy. He is fifteen / 15 years old. He studies / is in / at No. 3 Middle School. There are three people in his family, his father, his mother and he. He studies hard at all his subjects. He is good at Chinese and maths. I am a little weak in maths. So he often helps me with it. His favourite spo

23、rts are swimming and playing basketball. He is on the school team. He enjoys reading and listening to music. He is kind and friendly. We all like him三看图作文"看图写作"是近几年来各地中考试题中出现频率较高的试题形式之一，是对学生的观察能力、分析能力、思维能力、表达能力的综合考查，因此答好此类题对考试成绩十分重要。那么同学们在做此类写作试题时要注意什么呢？我们认为下面的三个环节是首先值得注意的：其一，要读懂图的题目。大凡看图，

24、题目往往提示图画内容或意旨，它是打开图画主题的钥匙，因此必须细细咀嚼，且与画面联系起来进行深入思考。其二，要读准图的内容。也就是说不仅要认真观察图画，弄懂每一个细节，全面透彻、准确地了解图画内容，而且要联系自己的实际生活，对图画内容加以分析、综合、归纳，形成观点。其三，揭示图画主旨的文字要简洁；待观察、分析、归纳各步骤完毕，再用简洁的话语将图画的含义清晰地表达出来，以挖掘图画的主旨，这是完成图画读题的最后一步。下面我们通过中考试题来进行分析。1、根据图画内容和所给词语完成一篇短文。要求：1.词数在80个左右。 2.把图中所示内容表达完整，用下面所给词语，写出一篇条理清晰，意思连贯，语句通顺，标

25、点正确的短文。3.短文第一句已给出。 所给词语：suddenly, purse(钱包), lie, ground, pick up, find, money, a name card(名片), telephone number, call, owner, come, at once, happy, get back, thank, nice One day Wei Hua was waiting for a bus at a bus stop._读图注意事项：1. 首先要弄清楚故事发生的地点、时间、内容和故事结尾。2. 根据所给词语及故事的发展顺序做出连贯、正确地表达。3. 结合生活实际，对图

26、画内容加以适当的分析和综合。One possible version: One day Wei Hua was waiting for a bus at a bus stop. Suddenly, she saw a purse lying on the ground. She picked it up and found a lot of money and a name card in it. She saw the telephone number on the name card and called the owner. The owner came at once. She was

27、 very happy when she got her purse back. She said to Wei Hua, "Thank you very much! You are a nice girl. "2、请根据下面四幅图，用英语写一篇Peter帮助母亲做家务的短文。短文开头已给出。要求：1.短文内容符合图片情景； 2.语句通顺，情节连贯；3.篇幅在60词左右。 It was Mother's Day yesterday._读图注意事项：1. 弄懂每一个细节，全面透彻、准确地了解图画内容。注意具体内容的连贯性。2. 将时间和内容有机结合，对图画内容要加以分

28、析、综合、归纳，形成观点。3. 注意语言表达的简洁。One possible version: It was Mother's Day yesterday. Peter thought he should do something for his mother. After school he went shopping and bought some fish (food and fruit). When he got home, he did his best to cook some fish (nice food). After that he cleaned the room

29、. He felt very tired, but he was very happy. When his father and mother came back, they had their supper together. His mother was very happy and said, "Thank you, my child!" 四应用文写作1、日记（1）根据中英文提示，写一篇日记，记叙一次(西塞山)郊游。(短文的开头已经给出。)要求：1.短文应包括汉语和英语提示内容。 2.语句通顺，意思连贯。3.书写工整，卷面整洁，标点符号正确。 4.字数不少于

30、80个英语单词。Sunday, May 1stI got to school very early. Our class took a special bus to Xisai Mount. We got tothe foot of the mount at 8:30.We began climbing the mount soon. On our way the air was so fresh and the scenery was so beautiful. Everybody was talking and laughing.We reached the top at about 10

31、:00. The Yangtze River appeared in the north, and overthe river there was a great bridge. We felt very relaxed. Seeing some birds flying inthe sky, I suddenly remembered a popular poem of Tang dynasty. " Birds are flyingin front of Xisai Mount ,". I kept feeling proud of our city.（2）A Diar

32、yFriday, February 3, 1995                                               

33、60;       FineIn the morning my mother asked me to buy half a kilo of tea and a bag of bread. Then I went to the nearest shop.When I got to the shop, the seller came up to me and asked what I needed. I told him that I wanted to buy half a kilo of tea and a bag of bread.

34、 He said, “Just a minute.” I looked around. The shop wasnt big, but it was nice and clean, and there were a lot of things in it.Very soon, he gave me half a kilo of tea and a bag of bread. I asked him, “Do you have the kind with nuts?” Then he reached the bread with nuts on the top shelf. He said th

35、ese things were all fourteen yuan. I gave fifteen yuan to him, but he gave me six yuan back.I counted the money, and then told him he was wrong. But he talked as if he had known all aboutit. He smiled and said: “Its very nice of you to do so!” The other sellers also laughed. 2、邀请信下星期一是Jenny的生日，

36、她的父母亲要在家里给她办一个晚会。Jenny要邀请些朋友参加，晚会6：30开始。请你帮她写信邀请Jane。日期是5月18日。May18thDear Jane,I'd like to invite you to join my birthday party. Next Monday is my birthday. My parents will hold a party for me at home. It will begin at half past six. I'm looking forward to seeing you soon.Sincerely yours,Jen

37、ny3、感谢信Jenny 邀请Jane在星期一参加生日晚会。但是Jane 那天晚上要参加数学考试，没时间去。请帮Jane写一封信表示感谢，她同时送上一份礼物，以示祝贺。时间是5月20日。May20th,Dear Jenny,I'm glad to hear your good news. Thank you for inviting me to your birthday party. But I'm afraid I can't come. Because I'll have a math exam on Monday evening. Here is a g

38、ift for you. I hope you will love it.Happy birthday!Sincerely yours,Jane4、 书信:（1）根据中文大意，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的短文。假设你叫王明，昨天收到了笔友David的e-mail，得知他不久要到北京来学习中文。他想了解如何学好中文。请你用英文给他回复一封e-mail，介绍学习中文的体会和方法，提出你的建议，以及表达你帮助他学好中文的愿望。Dear David,I'm glad to hear that you will come to Beijing to learn Chinese. Chi

39、nese is very useful, and many foreigners are learning it now. It is difficult for you because it is quite different from English. You have to remember as many Chinese words as possible. It is also important to do some reading and writing. You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practice your lis

40、tening. Do your best to talk with people in Chinese. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you. If you have any questions, please ask me. I'm sure you will learn Chinese well.Hope to see you soon in Beijing.Yours,Wang Ming（2）假如你叫Li Ming, 是个中学生，经常收听音乐节目。请你用英语给节目主持人

41、写一封信。信的要求如下：1. 你很喜欢这个节目，特别(especially) 是英语歌曲；2. 学习很忙，疲劳时，你会打开收音机，听这个节目；3. 从英语歌里你学了很多单词；4. 你最喜欢“My Heart Will Go On”这首歌，希望得到歌词(words of the song)。注意: 1. 信要通顺，连贯；2. 词数70左右，信的开头和结尾已为你写好(见参考答案划线外) ，不计入词数。No. 28 Middle School,SuzhouApril 8, 2001Dear sir,Im a middle school student. _【参考答案】No. 28 Middle Sc

42、hool,SuzhouApril 8, 2004Dear sir,Im a middle school student. I often listen to your music programme. I like the programme very much, especially the English songs. As a student, Im busy with my studies. When I feel tired, Ill turn on the radio and listen to your programme. Ive also learned many Engli

43、sh words from these songs. Of all the English songs, I like “My Heart Will Go On” best. Would you please send me the words of the song? Thank you!Yours,Li Ming5、发言稿假定你班今天下午要开一次以Keep Our School Clean为主题的英语班会，请以班长的身份准备一篇70词左右的发言稿。提示：不随地吐痰，不乱扔垃圾，不在墙壁上乱涂乱画，每天保持教室内外清洁等(不要逐句翻译)Good afternoon, everyone!We&

44、#39;re studying in this school. It's our duty to keep it clean and tidy. It's not polite to spit in public places, such as in the library, in the classroom. We should neither draw pictures on the walls nor throw any litter onto the ground. I think we must make it a rule to do some cleaning e

45、very day. If everyone tries his best to do something useful for our school will be more beautiful.That's all. Thank you!6、通知（1）明天(星期五)全班同学将去参观科学博物馆(the Science Museum)，由你(班长)通知全体同学。(通知的开头和结尾已给出)内容如下：1. 早上8点钟在校门口集合，步行前往。2. 下星期一交一份有关参观的报告。3. 参观时要认真听，仔细看并记下有趣的东西。4. 不可在博物馆内大声喧哗及拍照。5. 带笔和笔记本。要求：不要逐句翻

46、译。 字数6080。Fellow students，We are going to visit the Science Museum tomorrow. We will meet at the school gate at eight in the morning and we will go there on foot. Take your pens and notebooks with you. We should listen and watch carefully and write down something interesting when you visit the museu

47、m. Please don't make any noise in the museum and don't take any pictures. You will have to hand in a report about the visit next Monday.Thank you.（2）请你以校长室的名义拟写一个书面通知，告诉同学们明天去参加植树活动。提示：明天是植树节，天气暖和。你们不上课，去公园植树。早晨八点在学校门口集合，骑自行车去。中午在那里吃饭，请带好水和食物。(词数：50-70words)NOTICETomorrow is Tree Planting Da

48、y.It is warm .You will have no classes.We shall plant trees in the park.We will meet at the school gate at 8:00 in the morning and go there by bike. We will have lunchthere.Please bring some water and food with you.Don't be late.Headmaster OfficeMar.11,20047、启事(寻物和招领)假设你叫高迪，是初三(2)班的学生。你在10月16日晚上

49、把一本故事书丢在阅览室里，用英语写一则寻物启事，贴在餐厅前的留言板上，请捡到者交给你或你班班长。启事时间：10月17日LostOctober 17thOn the evening of October 16th, I left my story book in the reading-room. It is new. Will the finder please send it to me in Class Two, Grade Three or to our monitor? Thank you very much.Gao Di8、广告彼得的服装店开张了。请根据提示写一则广告。Come to

50、, T-shirts ($5, in all colors), sweaters ($17, orange), shoes ($12, green), cheapCome to Peter's Clothing Store. Do you like T-shirts? Do you like them cheap? We have T-shirts in all colors at $5 each. Do you need sweaters and shoes? We have orange sweaters for just $17! And green shoes for just

51、 $12. And that's not all. Can you believe it? Come down to Peter's and see for yourself! 泰安市2007、2008、2009年；中考书面表达2008年中考试题 2008年5月12日14时28分，四川省汶川发生了特大地震。请根据下面的图画，用英语写一篇80-100词的短文，简单描述全国人民抗震救灾的情况，可适当发挥；并谈一谈作为中学生如何帮助地震灾区的人们。 参考词汇：collapse v.倒塌；rescue v.营救One possible versionA strongest e

52、arthquake, 8-magnitude, hit Wenchuan County, Southwest China's Sichuan Province at exactly 2 : 28 p. m. on May 12. Immediately our government sent the PLA soldiers to rescue the injured from under the collapsed buildings.Meanwhile, the whole nation took action sending tents, food, drinking water

53、 and other life necessities to the quake-hit areas. Medical teams arrived in time to treat the villagers and pupils who got hurt.All Chinese are in deep sorrow. As middle school students, we should also do our best to offer the help. I'll donate more money and I want to be a volunteer to help th

54、e students there with their lessons. I'm sure they will get over kinds of difficulties and rebuild their homes soon. (Ways to help the people in Wenchuan can vary. )2009年中考试题六月六日是“全国爱眼日”。为此，某中学生英文报拟组织一次征文活动。请你结合生活实际写一篇题目为如何保护眼睛的征文稿，内容要点包括：1、眼睛的重要性；2、保护眼睛的措施：（1）不要长时间看书报；（2）不要在太强或者太弱的光线下看书；（3）坚持做眼

55、保健操；     注 意：词数：80100；不要逐条翻译，可适当发挥。How to Protect Our Eyes 第三节：写作 (共1题，满分15分)（一）One possible version：How to Protect Our Eyes  Eye is the window of our mind. We use our eyes to see everything around us. Without eyes, nothing is left beside you but darkness.How to protect our eyes? Its not right to keep your eyes working for a lon