《公四的图表作文》ppt课件

1、图表作文的写作图表作文的写作Income Sources of College StudentsSurvey of Income Sources of American and Chinese StudentsExamineesIncome sourcesAmerican studentsChinese studentsparents50%90%90%part-time job35%5%scholarship15%5%1 1、描绘图表、描绘图表2 2、说明中美大学生收入来源的原因和理由、说明中美大学生收入来源的原因和理由3 3、说明将来中美大学生收入的开展趋势、说明将来中美大学生收入的开展趋势

2、1 1写作过程写作过程审题分析图表审题分析图表- - 转换将数字、图表变转换将数字、图表变为为信息信息- - 概括根据信息进展分析总结概括根据信息进展分析总结- - 动笔落实到文字上动笔落实到文字上-定稿通读全篇，定稿通读全篇，修改语法、拼写和标点等修改语法、拼写和标点等2 2写作框架写作框架 引言段引言段: : 主要通过对图表中所给出的数据进展分主要通过对图表中所给出的数据进展分析和说明，引出本文的主题思想；析和说明，引出本文的主题思想； 正文段正文段: : 通过对以上数据的分析与解释，阐述引通过对以上数据的分析与解释，阐述引起这种变化的原因；起这种变化的原因； 结尾段结尾段: : 通过分析

3、、解释与说明数据变化的规律通过分析、解释与说明数据变化的规律性联络实际客观地展望其开展前景或走向，或是数据性联络实际客观地展望其开展前景或走向，或是数据变化带来的影响。变化带来的影响。3 3时态的选择时态的选择 要留意图表中有无参照时间。一般而言，没要留意图表中有无参照时间。一般而言，没有参照时间的图表通常采用一般如今时进展写作；有参照时间的图表通常采用一般如今时进展写作；有参照时间的图表，参照时间用过去时，假如说有参照时间的图表，参照时间用过去时，假如说明的是如今的情况，那么必须采用一般如今时进明的是如今的情况，那么必须采用一般如今时进展写作。展写作。4 4对数据的处理对数据的处理 抓住关键

4、数据作文章：曲线的突然变化；百分比抓住关键数据作文章：曲线的突然变化；百分比的大幅度增加或减少；柱线的大幅度升高或降低；一的大幅度增加或减少；柱线的大幅度升高或降低；一样类目的数字的比照。样类目的数字的比照。5 5标题标题 在没有另给标题的情况下，表格名称也就是文在没有另给标题的情况下，表格名称也就是文章的标题。章的标题。 According to the table, we can see that though American and Chinese students get income from same channels, the percentage of each is qui

5、te different. Half the American students income is provided by their parents and the remainder is from their part-time job and the scholarship. Chinese students, on the other hand, get the absolute majority of their income from their parents, while income from other two channels accounts for a small

6、 percentage. In my opinion, there are some main reasons for the phenomenon. To begin with, American students are taught to be independent right from childhood while Chinese parents care so much for their children that it is almost unthinkable for college students to live on their own. In addition, C

7、hinese students have fewer opportunities to find part-time job. Whats more, scholarship provided by universities and governments in China is much less than that in America. Nevertheless, more and more Chinese students are seeking part-time jobs nowadays. They are eager to acquire some social skills

8、and earn extra money which will make them less dependent on their parents. And when it comes to the sources of American students income, I think they will remain in the same. 图表的种类繁多，大致可以分为表格图表的种类繁多，大致可以分为表格table和和标绘图标绘图graph两大类，其中标绘图又包括线形图两大类，其中标绘图又包括线形图line graph，柱形图，柱形图bar graph和圆形图和圆形图pie graph。

9、第一季度第二季度第三季度第四季度02 04 06 08 01 0 0第 一 季 度第 三 季 度东 部西 部北 部020406080100第一季度第二季度第三季度第四季度东 部西 部北 部图表作文的常用句型图表作文的常用句型1. It can be seen from the chart / diagram / data / figures / graph / picture / statistics that 2. According to/ As shown in/ As indicated by/ As can be seen in the chart/ figures/ graph,

10、3. All these statistics data, findings clearly show strongly prove, point to the fact, seem to suggest that. 4. There is/ We notice/ People find a minimal/ slight/ small/ slow/ significant/ sharp/ rapid/ dramatic increase/ rise/ decrease/ decline/ drop/ reduction/ fall in5. On the contrary, remain l

11、evel/ steady/ unchanged over the time.6. go up and down/ wave/ fluctuate/ be unstable/ be in flexible from to7. The number is times as much as that of8. The percentage/ figure has nearly doubled/ tripled/ quadrupled /increased X times compared with as against that of the previous year. 9. By compari

12、son with ., it decreased/increased/ add up to/ soar/fell/descend/ shrink/sink/drop from.to.10. .rose increased, jumped, decreased, dropped by X percent at average of X percent, from X percent to Y percent.11. form/comprise/make up/constitute/ account for percent of 12. As a result/ On this basis/ Gi

13、ven this/ consequently, it can be concluded/ deduced/ inferred/ estimated that With the development of the society, a serious problem, air pollution, arises. A survey done shows that there are many causes that account for the problem. As illustrated in the pie chart, the major contributing factor wa

14、s vehicles 45%. Factories and plants were also responsible for the current problem 35%. Another factor that couldnt be neglected was cigarette smoking 15%. Causes of Air-pollution From the graph, we can be informed that the number of car accidents fluctuated in the year of 1990. The number was ascen

15、ding from 22 in January to 32 in February, but falling gradually to 26 in May, and after June, the rate was rising sharply and reached the peak of 39 at August. But afterwards, the rate was declining gradually and finally to the 16 at the end of the year.1991.6 Changes in Peoples Diet Study the foll

16、owing table carefully and your composition must be based on the information in the table. Write three paragraphs to:1 state the changes in peoples diet饮食in the past five years;2 give possible reasons for the changes; 3 draw your own conclusions. You should quote as few figures as possible. YearFood1

17、9861987198819891990Grain49%47%46.5%45%45%Milk10%11%11%12%13%Meat17%20%22.5%23%21%Fruit and Vegetables24%22%20%20%21%Total100%100%100%100%100% From the chart we can see that in the past five years, great changes have been taking place in peoples diet. There is a general trend of decrease in the consu

18、mption of grain, while the consumption of some high-energy food, such as milk and meat, is increasing steadily. Why do people have these changes in their diet? In my opinion, there are two major reasons. On one hand, nowadays people have more money spent on food with better nutrition, which is gener

19、ally much more expensive than grain or vegetables. On the other hand, they now pay attention not only to the quantity but also to the quality of their food. They have more knowledge in improving the structure of their diet. From the above, we can draw a conclusion that our society is progressing and

20、 people are living a better life than ever before. We are now able to purchase more delicious and nutritious food, resulting in an improvement in our health. From the chart we can see that during the past five years there have been great changes in peoples diet. The greatest change occurs in grain c

21、onsumption, which has dropped 4% from 49% in 1986 to 45% in 1990 in total food consumption. The second greatest change is in milk consumption, which increased from 10% in 1986 to 13% in 1990. But on the other hand, two trends can be observed in the consumption of meat and fruit and vegetables. From

22、1986 to 1989, meat consumption increased from 17% to 23% while that of fruit and vegetables dropped from 24% to 20%. From 1989 to 1990, meat consumption dropped a little to 21%, while that of fruit and vegetables increased a little to 21%.失分原因失分原因1 1图表描绘欠妥图表描绘欠妥- - 冗长，过细冗长，过细 Through the chart, we e

23、asy to see difference in survey of income of American and Chinese students. The American students get 50% of sources from parents, they get the part-time job 35% and the scholarship 15%. By contrast, the Chinese students from parents get 90% of sources, part-time job 5%, scholarship 5%. - - 不全面不全面-

24、- 未能点明要点未能点明要点2 2段落、句子逻辑段落、句子逻辑 / / 关联词的使用关联词的使用 The chart shows that income sources of college students from parents is a large percentage and by contrast Chinese students percentage is lager than Americans. American students hope that they havent increase troubles for parents as more as possible.

25、Also, the Chinese students think that their parents should pay moneys for them. First, America is a developed country. China is a developing country.3 3句子构造句子构造 Chinese students survey for 90% in parents. American students survey for 50% in parents. With the result that Chinese childrens ability dro

26、p it. Why such difference between American and Chinese students? It is what that causes the difference? It is lots of reasons that Chinese and American students have differents proportion of income. also about the policy for education. American is richer than our country.4 4状语的地位状语的地位 状语只是起修饰作用，修饰句子

27、或动词，不能单独状语只是起修饰作用，修饰句子或动词，不能单独成句。成句。 First of all. / Firstly. / In the first place. / There are not alike ideas in their country. For example. Many people realize that education is very important. In fact. It is good for people. 5 5词性词性 We can know the different between American students and Chinese

28、 students. American students half income source are from them parents and others are from themself. Income sources of American students are vary. I think the spoil from the parents is the key.6 6书写问题书写问题- - 题目、要求当中某些单词大写，但在正文中需小写。题目、要求当中某些单词大写，但在正文中需小写。 from the table, we can see the Survey of Incom

29、e Sources of American and Chinese students.- - 每句首字母必须大写每句首字母必须大写; ; 专有名词的首字母要大写专有名词的首字母要大写 Chinese, thinking about this table- - 分句开头不用大写逗号后面不要随意大写分句开头不用大写逗号后面不要随意大写 Studying the table carefully. We can see that When the basic requirement has been satisfied. So they could spend more money on other

30、things.7 7单词单词/ /短语短语/ /句型的使用句型的使用time 时间times 时代 money 不可数 phenomenon: phenomena pl. American & America; Chinese & Chinaalthough = though + 从句; despite = in spite of + 名词构造 develop v. development developingaccount for alike, asleep, aloneYearFood & ClothingRecreation Education Health CareOthers198468%3%6%6%17%199445%5%16%10%24%200420%8%22%16%35%1根据上图描绘中国家庭支出的变化；根据上图描绘中国家庭支出的变化；2分析产生这些变化的原因；分析产生这些变化的原因；3说明这些变化对个人和社会产生的影响。说明这些变化对个人和社会产生的影响。Statistics of Family Expenses In ChinaAssign