【专题训练】专题02人与社会(书面表达：全国I+全国II+全国III+北京卷)(解析点评版)

1、专题02人与社会（书面表达：全国I+全国II+全国III+北京卷）设计导航试题分析内容分析范义点评语言赏析（2019全国I，书面表达）第二节书面表达（满分25分）假定你是李华，暑期在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：1 .写信目的；2 .个人优势；3 .能做的事情。注意：1 .词数100左右；2 .可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3 .结束语已为你写好。【试题趋势】：今年全国卷一的书面表达要求考生写一封申请信，仍然属于书信应用文。试题要求考生给伦敦的一家将举办中国画展览的美术馆写信，申请当一名志愿者。本篇书面表达体现了传播中国传统文化与中外文化交流。与

2、2018年及2017年高考书面表达所考查的内容比较类似。2018年是新西兰人来中国人家做客，2017年是给外国人上汉语课讲唐诗，都融入了对中国传统文化的宣传，树立文化自信和民族自豪感。同时，今年的考题还融入了美育知识，引导学生关注和提高审美情趣。正如我们去年对2019年试题趋势的分析和预测一样，掌握一些传统文化方面的英语知识势在必行。在备考时，要集中看一些与日常生活和传统文化相关的话题，如文学艺术、风土人情、社交礼仪、饮食、体育运动、语言学习等，按照话题网络化复习，效果会更佳。【试题分析】：书面表达旨在考查考生的英语写作能力，评价其能否运用相关常识和语言知识进行有效的文字表达，完成特定的交际任

3、务。今年的书面表达要求考生写一封申请信。题目的内容要点设计比较灵活，难度与往年大致相当。写作的基本要求是切题、完整、准确、连贯。作文要切题，考生要认真审题，精准把握主旨，确保内容围绕主题展开；内容要完整，短文要覆盖各内容要点，无遗漏地完成交际任务；表达要准确，语言运用应贴切、得体，能有力支撑交际目的的顺利实现；行文要连贯，各要点间应关系紧密，脉络清晰。今年的书面表达要求从写信目的、个人优势和能做的事情这三个方面展开写作。考生在写作时要做到层次分明，应着重掌握个人优势的常用表达，如Imgoodat;-Ihavetheabilityto;卜mexperiencedin等等。从语言风格来讲，短文应该

4、是正式的形式，应运用得体的语气及礼貌用语或结构等。【内容分析】文体书/体申请彳巨制职位志愿者写信目的Iamwritingtoapplyfor/expressmyinterestin/recommendmyselfas.个人优势Iamgoodat;Ihavetheabilityto;Iamexperiencedin；TworkhardandIcangetalongwellwithothers.能做的事Icanhelpwith/Illdevotemyselfto/Illtrymybestto个人发挥适当增加相关细节话题词汇激活艺术：artwork,drawing,gallery,painting,

5、artcollection,museumofart,ondisplay/exhibition工作职业：applyfor,position,manager,post,artist,musician,painter,volunteer任职资格/工作能力：ability,potential,professional,certificate,profession,qualified,skill,skillful,competence,competent,qualification,qualify工作职责：handle,responsibility,duty,task,undertake,take/in

6、chargeof（在平时的学习中要注意话题词汇的积累）运用高级词块和句式词块：可胜任bequalifiedfor;同样重要的是equallyimportant;做某事没有国难havenodifficultyindoingsth句式：which引导的定语从句，if引导的条件状语从句【语言分析】【参考范文1DearSirorMadam,IamwritingtoapplytobeavolunteerfortheChinesePaintingExhibitionwhichwillbeheldinyourartgallery.IthinkIamqualifiedforthisjob,becauseIha

7、velearnedChinesepaintingsincechildhood.Equallyimportant,IamfluentinbothChineseandEnglish,soIhavenodifficultyincommunicatingwithothers.IfIamluckyenoughtobechosenasavolunteer,Icanshowvisitorsaroundthegalleryandanswertheirquestionsaboutthepaintings,aftersomepropertraining.Iwouldbeverygratefulifyoucould

8、offermetheopportunity.Imlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【点评】1 .文章运用了比较高级的表达词汇。比如applytobeavolunteer；amqualifiedfor；amfluentin；havenodifficultyin2 .文章运用了高级句式。比如：IamwritingtoapplytobeavolunteerfortheChinesePaintingExhibitionwhichwillbeheldinyourartgallery.（which弓I导的定语从句。）Iwouldbeverygratefulifyou

9、couldoffermetheopportunity.（虚拟语气）【参考范文2SodelightedamItoknowthatyouarescheduledtoholdaChinesepaintingdisplaythatIhavemuchdesiretobeyourvolunteer.MynameisLiHua,aged18,thereasonswhyIapplyforthisjobareasfollows:First,asaChinesewhohaslearnedChineseartforthreeyears,IamfamiliarwithChinesepainting.Inadditio

10、n,IcanspeakEnglishfluently,andIamkeenonhelpingothersinneed.Itakethisopportunityasapreciousexperiencetodevelopmysocialskils.Icandosomeintroductionstovisitors,anddosomecleanjobs.SincerelyhopethatIcanbeacceptedasamemberofyou!【点评】3 .文章运用了比较高级的表达词汇。比如：bescheduledtodosth;havemuchdesiretodo;aged18;asfollow

11、s;befamiliarwith;fluently,bekeenon;takethisopportunityas;sincerely4 .文章运用了高级句式。比如：SodelightedamItoknowthatyouarescheduledtoholdaChinesepaintingdisplaythatIhavemuchdesiretobeyourvolunteer.（sothat.引导的倒装句型）Iwouldbeverygratefulifyoucouldoffermetheopportunity.（虚拟语气）5 .文章运用了适当的过渡词：inaddition【参考范文3IamLihua

12、,aChinesestudent.KnowingthattherewillbeanartexhibitionofChineseart,Iammorethandelightedtoapplytobeavolunteerandreasonsareasfollows.Tobeginwith,IhaveafancyforChineseartsoIbelievethatIcansparktheinterestofthevisitors.Inaddition,IamoutgoingandmasteroforalEnglish,whichmakeitmucheasierformetocommunicatew

13、iththevisitorswhohavedoubts.Besides,Icannotonlygivethemthecorrectexplanations,butIcanalsohelpthemunderstandthehistoryofChineseart.Eventually,Iliveclosetotheexhibitionanditisconvenientformetodothisjob.Aboveall,Isincerelyhopetohavethisopportunity.IbelievethatImusttrymybestandassumetheresponsibilityfor

14、thisjob.【点评】1 .文章运用了比较高级的表达词汇。KnowingthattherewillbeanartexhibitionofChineseart,Iammorethandelightedtoapplytobeavolunteerandreasonsareasfollows.现在分词短语作状语。Inaddition,IamoutgoingandmasteroforalEnglish,whichmakeitmucheasierformetocommunicatewiththevisitorswhohavedoubts.（定语从句的表达）2 .文章运用了高级词7匚：sparkthein

15、terest;Eventually;sincerely;assumetheresponsibilityfor【参考范文4SothrilledamItoknowanexhibitionofChinesepaintingistobeheldatthelocalartmuseum,thatIcannotholdbackmyexcitementtoapplytobeavolunteerthere.SinceIamobsessedwithChinesepainting,Iameagerlyanxioustobeavolunteerattheexhibition.IhavelearnedChinesepa

16、intingforsixyears.Consequently,IhaveagoodcommandofitandIluxuriateinpaintingwhatIamkeenon.Additionally,lcancommunicatewithvisitorsinEnglishfluently.Withallthisadvantages,Iholdthefirmbeliefthatlwillbeequaltothisposition.Iamcapableoftellingamazingstoriesbehindthosefabulouspaintings.Furthermore,Icanteac

17、hvisitorssomemethodstodrawingChinesepaintings,whichwillneverfailtoleavethemadeepimpression,wouldappreciateifyoucouldtakemyapplicationintoaccount.【点评】1 .文章运用了比较高级的表达词汇。Withallthisadvantages,Iholdthefirmbeliefthatlwillbeequaltothisposition.（同位于从句的表达）Furthermore,IcanteachvisitorssomemethodstodrawingChi

18、nesepaintings,whichwillneverfailtoleavethemadeepimpression,wouldappreciateifyoucouldtakemyapplicationintoaccount.（定语从句的表达）2 .文章运用了高级词7匚：becapableof;leavesbadeepimpression,beequalto;fabulous;amazing（2019全国II,书面表达）3 二节书面表达（满分25分）假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛，内容包括:1 .比赛信息；2 .赛前准备；3 .表达期待。注意：1

19、.词数100左右；2 .可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【试题趋势】今年的书面表达沿袭近几年的体裁，仍旧是应用文。本次书面表达要求考生写一封邮件告知队友有关比赛的信息。在短文的内容要求和要点设计上，难度与往年大致相当。另外，话题的选择体现了一个命题趋势：围绕人与社会的主题，加强德智体美劳的全面考查。通过排球比赛设定的体育情境体现了关注体育锻炼、倡导健康意识的理念。今年的书面表达属于告知信，是考生比较熟悉的文体范畴。考生应紧扣所给各项要求展开写作。作为应用文写作的一个类型，告知信最为鲜明的特征是：简洁、准确。考生在写作时应根据自己对题目的理解，准确无误地表达重点信息，把告知信所涉及的事由、时间、

20、地点以及事项交代清楚。本文需要简明扼要地告知排球比赛的时间、地点以及赛前的准备事项。在结尾处还需对队友表示期待和鼓励。近年书面表达试题的开放性越来越强，只为考生提供一个笼统的写作提纲，要求考生围绕写作提纲进行适当的发挥，自主确定写作内容，体现出高考对考生创新能力的考查。总体来看，今年的书面表达充分体现了应用性的考查要求。另外，高考再次提醒我们，平时一定要重视对素材、词汇和句型等的积累，训练学生运用相关词汇和语法进行书面表达的能力。【内容分析】文体告知,告知人排球队队长告知对象排球队队友告知主题校排球队比赛告知内容比赛信息；赛前准备；表达期待。问候语及开头语Imwritingtoyouabout

21、./Imwritingtotellyougcarbethtin.事件信息事件信息的二要素：时间、地点、人物（以本篇短文为例）时间：onJuly8th地点：intheschoolgym人物：ourvolleyballteamandateamfromLingnanHighSchool事件的时间和地点的常用表达：TherewillbeamatchtobeheldinTheexhibitionwillbeheldin/takeplaceinThecontestisorganizedbyourschoolonOurschoolwillholdamusicfestivalon个人发挥适当增加相关细节【语言

22、分析】话题词汇激活体育：volleyball,football,baseball,badminton,cycling,athlete,coach,competitor,gym,stadium,beat,defeat,compete,break/holdtherecord,goal,match,race,score,victory,win,player,teammember学校生活：after-schoolactivities,takepartin,attend,activity,participation,thestudents（在平时的学习中要注意话题词汇的积累）运用高级词块如：takepl

23、ace,playagainst,getfullyprepared,inaddition,keepfit等运用局级句式如：宾语从句，现在分词作状语等【参考范文】DearChris,Imwritingtoletyouknowthatwewillhaveavolleyballmatchnextmonth.ThematchwilltakeplaceinourschoolgymonthemorningofJuly8th.WewillplayagainstateamfromLingnanHighSchool.Forgoodperformanceinthematch,wemustgetfullyprepar

24、edandpracticehard.Sostartingtomorrow,weallneedtotrainfortwohoursafterschooleveryday.Inaddition,weshouldavoidgettinghurtduringthetrainingandhaveahealthydiettokeepfit.Youreanexcellentplayer.Withyouontheteam,wehaveeveryhopeofbeatingLingnan.Lethardtogether!Cheers,LiHua【范文点评】文章用了比较好的词汇，如：getfullyprepared

25、;avoiddoingsthexcellent运用了适当的过渡词，如inaddition.使用了高级表达如startingtomorrow.缺点：在语言上略显普通。（2019年全国III）第二节书面表达（满分25分）假定你是李华，你校将举办音乐节。t#写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加，内容包括：1 .时间；2 .活动安排；3 .欢迎他表演节目。注意：1 .词数100左右；2 .可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【试题趋势】：跟去年类似，今年的书面表达要求考生写邮件，告知英国朋友音乐节的情况（属音乐活动范畴）。近年来，书面表达的考查越来越贴近中学生的日常生活，更加重视语言的应用，回归了英语作

26、为语言功能的本质。因此，在备考时，要集中看一些与日常生活和学习息息相关的话题，如学校生活、体育运动、语言学习、节假日及活动等，并密切关注社会时事，按照话题网络化复习，效果会更佳。【内容分析】文体书信体，一种常见的告知相对简单。人物关系朋友问候语及开头语Howareyou?/Howareyoudoing?/Howseverythinggoing?/Howarethingswithyou?/Imwritingtoyouabout./Imwritingtotellyousomethingabout.写信目的告知音乐节时间，活动安排并欢迎他表演节目。结束语Lookingforwardtoyourear

27、lyreply./Hopetohearfromyousoon./Lookingforwardtoseeingyou!/Bestwishes!个人发挥适当增加相关细节【语言分析】话题词汇激活amusicfestival,after-schoolactivities,pop,rock,jazz,folk,classical,blues,R&B,ballet,countrymusic,rockandroll,soulmusic,instrument,piano,drum,guitar,violin,musician,conductor,band,perform,audience,stage,conc

28、ert,musical,performance,talentshow,talkshow在平时的学习中，要注意话题词汇的积累。丰富用词hold,enrich,deliveraspeech,various,fantastic,showup,add.to高级句式which引导的非限定性定语从句，过去分词作定语，不定式短语作目的状语，动名词作主语DearAllen,Howiseverythinggoing?OurschoolwillholdamusicfestivalnextSaturdaymorningintheschoolhalltoenrichstudents-schooafifer.,Imwr

29、itingtoinviteyoutojoinus.Theopeningceremonywillstartat9:00am,andtheschoolmasterwilldeliveraspeech.Followingthespeechisaone-hourlecturewiththetitleof“ABriefHistoryofChineseMusicbyProfessorGuowhichtherewillbevariousfantasticperformancesplayedbytalentedstudents.Youareparticularlywelcometoshowuponstage,

30、whichwilldefinitelyaddcolorandfuntoourfestival.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Bestwishes,-schftellife;LiHua1 .文章运用了比较高级的表达词汇。比如：holdamusicfestival;enrichstudentsAsanorganizer；deliveraspeech；talented;fantastic2 .文章运用了高级句式。比如：Followingthespeechisaone-hourlecturewiththetitleofABriefHistoryofChineseMusi

31、cbyProfessorGuo,afterwhichtherewillbevariousfantasticperformancesplayedbytalentedstudents.（现在分词短语作状语，which引导的定语从句。Playedby过去分词短语作后置定语。）（2019年北京卷）第二节（20分）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们班上周组织了一次以劳动最光荣”为主题的社会实践活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述整个过程。注意:词数不少于60。提示词：西瓜watermelon【试题分析】本文属于图画作文，要求根据图画内容写一篇英文周记。假如你是红星中学高三学生李华，你们班上周组织了一次以劳动最光荣”为主题的社会实践活动。要求根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述整个过程。图画作文内容要点比较清晰，其中包括：老师宣布活动内容和意义，我为活动准备，在农场的劳动过程，介绍活动感受。这样有利于学生写作时发挥与扩展。全文可分成三部分，开头段概括活动，中间段描述图画，结尾段总结收获和意义。文章用第一人称来写，使用一般过去时。【参考范文1LastweekItookpartinafarmworkprogrammeinthesuburbs.Attheclassmeeting,ourteachertoldusaboutthepr