高中英语写作

1、WelcomeWriting tipsBeautify your Composition遇难心不慌，遇难心不慌，遇易心更细。遇易心更细。 1.所选题材及体裁都非常贴近考生生活所选题材及体裁都非常贴近考生生活 实际实际，具有时代特点具有时代特点，紧扣与学生相关的，紧扣与学生相关的 社会热点及学生的生活与学习。社会热点及学生的生活与学习。 2.词数要求从词数要求从100左右，既要求表左右，既要求表 达事实信息，又要陈述个人观点，对考达事实信息，又要陈述个人观点，对考 生生思维和表达能力思维和表达能力的要求提高了。的要求提高了。 3.开头或结尾都已经给出，无文体要开头或结尾都已经给出，无文体要 求，

2、求，主要考查考生的表达能力。主要考查考生的表达能力。现在正是春暖花开的春游时节。你校学生以现在正是春暖花开的春游时节。你校学生以“高高三学生要不要参加春游活动三学生要不要参加春游活动”展开了讨论。请客展开了讨论。请客观的介绍以下讨论结果。观的介绍以下讨论结果。的学生认为的学生认为的学生认为的学生认为应该春游应该春游不应该春游不应该春游接触大自然，呼吸新接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空气，有利健康鲜空气，有利健康高考临近，没有心情高考临近，没有心情玩玩活动是精神放松，大活动是精神放松，大脑休息，有利于学习脑休息，有利于学习春游耽误学习春游耽误学习 Key words:1.introduction(topi

3、c):高三学生（senior 3 students）春游(go spring outing）讨论（discussion）2.body(supporting ideas): 接触自然（be close to nature） 呼吸新鲜空气（ breathe some fresh air ）精神放松（relax themselves ）大脑休息（rest their brains ）3.高考临近（ with college entrance examination drawing near ）没心情玩（dont feel like going ）耽误学习(waste the time) Whethe

4、r or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion. Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing. They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air and whats more, they can relax themselv

5、es for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic. They think it will do good to their students. On the other hand, about 35% students are against the idea. They say that with college entrance examination drawing near, they dont feel like going anywhere. Besides, they think go

6、ing spring outing will take at least a day off. They cant afford the time. They think they should fix their attention on their studies. Now in the country areas, there are many children out of school. The reasons can be listed as follow. _, most families are too poor to send their children to school

7、. _, they have no choice but to stay at home and make money. as a result; In addition ; To begin with ; HoweverTo begin withAs a result使用恰当的连接词使用恰当的连接词 Use proper linking words _, some parents think there is no need for their daughters to go to school. Therefore, they dont let them go to school. _,

8、some children are not interested in their studies. _, some wouldnt like to go to school. In my opinion; Finally ; To make matters worse ; In additionIn additionFinallyTo make matters worse As far as Im concerned, all the children including girls should be educated. _, the whole society should put gr

9、eat emphasis on childrens education _ theyll play an important part in the future of our country one day. besides; However ; because ; Therefore Besidesbecause词汇使用的原则词汇使用的原则人靠衣装，文靠词装人靠衣装，文靠词装 1、词组优先原则、词组优先原则2、地道原则。、地道原则。3、避免重复原则、避免重复原则4、后、后、高高、长原则长原则 后学到、较高级、较长词汇。后学到、较高级、较长词汇。四项原则四项原则1、词组优先原则、词组优先原则

10、原文A new railway is being built in my hometown.修正A new railway is under construction in my hometown.2、地道原则、地道原则原文Through traveling, I learned a lot of knowledge.修正Through traveling, I gainedobtained a lot of knowledge.4、后高长原则后学到、较高级、较长词汇。原 词 替换词important be of importancevery rather extremelypay atten

11、tion to attach importance tohappy delighted enjoyablemore and more the increasing number of3、避免重复原则、避免重复原则原文I like reading while my brother likes watching television.修正I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.Adopt a variety of sentence patterns 使用较丰富的句式使用较丰富的句式1. When he arrived,

12、he gave me an e-mail immediately. (使用使用V-ing形式形式)2. Once it is seen, it can never be forgotten. (省略主语和省略主语和 be动词动词) _, he gave me an e-mail immediately.When arriving/On his arrival,_,it can never be forgotten.Once seen3. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things. (使用名词性从句使用名词性从句)4. Peopl

13、e suggest that the conference be put off. (改为改为it作形式主语作形式主语that做真正主语做真正主语)_the little girl knows so many things.What surprises him is that_the conference be put off.It is suggested that5. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper. (使用使用notuntil的强调的强调句型句型)6. I pass

14、ed the physics exam because of your help. (用虚拟语气）用虚拟语气）_he had read the news in the newspaper _ he knew what had happened. _the physics exam _your help. It was not until thatI couldnt have passed but for without 7. I wont believe what he says. (使用状语使用状语 从句从句)8. The girl is spoken highly of. Her comp

15、osition was well written. (用定语从句用定语从句)_he says, I wont believe. The girl_is spoken highly of. No matter whatwhose composition was well writtenWhatever9. If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （用并列句）（用并列句）10. He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒装句使用倒装句)_he c

16、ome back from Beijing _he was sent abroad._make rapid progress.Study hard, and youllNo sooner had than Hardly . when.走近高考范文走近高考范文Fill in the blanks（2010 山东）山东）1._(众所周知）众所周知）that China is a country with a long history.2._ (随着春随着春节的临近），节的临近），people will hold all varieties of activities.3._(自从自从我见过史密斯先

17、生已经好久了）我见过史密斯先生已经好久了）and I miss him a lot.It is well knownWith the Spring Festival drawing nearIt has been a long time since I saw Mr. Smith（2011 北京北京）1.We bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees,_ (一路上有说有笑）一路上有说有笑）.2._(一到达），一到达）， we began to work immediately.3._ (看到一排排的看到一排排的树），树），we all have a sens

18、e of achievement.talking and laughing all the wayUpon arrivalSeeing the lines of trees书写潦草、字数不够书写潦草、字数不够或未能传达读者任何信息，得或未能传达读者任何信息，得 分分 0 卷面不整洁卷面不整洁; ; 涂改较多涂改较多; ;语言语言 错误多错误多; ;层次不清层次不清; ;得得 分分5Not good!Worse!Neat! Practice 目前，许多学校对学生采取封闭式管理，学生对此看法不一。目前，许多学校对学生采取封闭式管理，学生对此看法不一。请根据下表所提供的信息，写一篇英语短文，谈谈自己的看法。请根据下表所提供的信息，写一篇英语短文，谈谈自己的看法。 有的同学认为有的同学认为 有的同学认为有的同学认为 学校限制我们的自由；学学校限制我们的自由；学生和社会接触少；学生的生和社会接触少；学生的兴趣和爱好不能得到充分兴趣和爱好不